# So it is Rewritten Episode 16

Author: MasterYubelMarik
Tags: Mlp g3, Pinkie Pie, Rainbow Dash, So_it_is_rewritten, Sunny_daze, Twinkle_twirl, fanfic, minty

Will the ponies be able to track down a fast-moving machine after it flies over their heads?

Noise Maker

\*Outside Celebration Castle...\*

&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; "Your turn, Sunny," said Minty. \*Sunny Daze throws the rock and hops on the squares.\*

&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; "Good throw, Sunny Daze," remarked Pinkie Pie.

&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; "She' really good at hopscotch," said Minty.

&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; "Balance has something to do with it," giggled Sunny Daze.

&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; "It just takes practice, Minty," assured Pinkie Pie.

&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; "Yeah. Here, you take a turn, Minty," agreed Desert Rose.

&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; "Okay. Here I go," announced Minty nervously before tossing the rock.

&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; "Wow! You landed on 10, Minty! Way to go!," shouted Pinkie Pie excitedly.

&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; "I did? Whoa. I didn't see that coming. Must've been beginner's luck," giggled Minty before finishing her turn.

&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; "Maybe a little. We all have to start somewhere, Mint," said Sunny Daze.

&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; "I guess you're right," stated Minty. \*A jet flies overhead and makes a loud nose.\*

&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; "What was that noise?" asked Desert Rose.

&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; "And that thing making the noise," added Minty.

&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; "It's going awfully fast," remarked Pinkie Pie.

&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; "Let's see if we can follow it," suggested Skywishes.

&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; "I don't know. I don't think we can catch it," concluded Minty.

&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; "We won't know until we try. Let's go," replied Pinkie Pie before all race off. \*Later that day...\*

&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; "Have we caught up to it yet?" panted Minty.

&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; "Not yet but I think we're making progress," replied Pinkie Pie.

&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; "It looks like it's getting bigger," said Desert Rose.

&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; "I don't think it's getting bigger. We're just getting closer to it," corrected Pinkie Pie.

&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; "It's heading for that place," noted Twinkle Twirl.

&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; "It's got wheels underneath," stated Desert Rose.

&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; "And it makes wind too," agreed Pinkie Pie as she and the others are blown over.

&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; "What is this place?" asked Twinkle Twirl.

&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; "I guess it helps whatever that thing is. We'd better go. It doesn't look safe," figured Pinkie Pie. \*Back in Ponyville...\*

&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; "We still don't know what that thing is," said Skywishes.

&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; "We can just call it a metal bird. It looked like a bird made of metal. I don't know if we'll ever get to see how it all works or even ride in one but it was pretty loud either way," explained Pinkie Pie.

&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; "That's for sure. I'm not sure I want to hear it again anyway," agreed Minty.

&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; "I don't think I'd enjoy being in one," said Coconut Cream.

&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; "It might be fun," said Desert Rose.

&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; "It didn't look very pretty though," remarked Sparkleworks.

&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; "It needed a rainbow at least," agreed Rainbow Dash.

&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; "Now a rainbow bird I might fly in," realized Minty.

&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; "Might be something to think about for the future," replied Pinkie Pie.

&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; "I like our hot air balloons more," said Twinkle Twirl.

&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; "Me too, even though I can't fly them very well," agreed Minty.

&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp;&nbsp; "One thing's for sure. These metal birds sure have something special," thought Pinkie Pie.

Source: https://sofurry.com/s/rnaNQOX1

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