{"sf1_id":186639,"sf2_id":null,"title":"Dan and Jane--Finish her! (script)","author":"Kino Jaggernov","words":1260,"posted_at":"2010-10-16T07:06:00.000Z","tags":["Comic","Cunningulus","Hyena","M/F","Missionary","Rat","Vaginal"],"url":"https://fse.anthro.fr/stories/186639-dan-and-jane-finish-her-script","original_url":"https://sofurry.com/view/186639","image_url":"https://www.sofurryfiles.com/std/thumb?page=186639\u0026ext=.jpg","description":"","content":"\nHey! Did you every want to see how Finish Her would have looked like? Well, here's the script (in case any of you are curious as to how I write my comics. Keep in mind, minor edits tend to happen when it's actually drawn out.)\n\nhttp://www.sofurry.com/page/186635 page 1 here\n\n \n\nPage 1:\nA rat named Daniel in raver gear is playing video games against a heavy-set\nhyena named Janette who wears geek clothes; Batman shirt and everything. Janette\nhas just lost. They're playing games on a 'Sumo' beanbag lounge chair.\nJanette: \"Fuck fuck FUCK!!\"\nDaniel: \"Too late, Janey-girl.\"\nTV: \"Player one wins!\"\nJanette throws her controlled down in disgust. Daniel is grinning.\nJanette: \"Renna is SUCH a cheapass.\"\nDaniel leans over, teasingly smiling at her in victory.\nDaniel: \"Boobs are POWER!\"\nDaniel then looks up, rubbing his chin and looking innocently thoughtful.\nDaniel: \"Now GOSH... what were we playing for again? Oh yeah...\"\nDaniel gestures behind him, Janette already walking towards the kitchen, her\nposture looking exaggeratedly grumpy.\nDaniel: \"GET IN THAT KITCHEN AND MAKE US SOME SANDWICHES, WOMAN!\"\nJanette, in the kitchen, is smiling through clenched teeth. She can't see what\nDaniel is doing.\nJanette: \"Keep it up, ratboy... and you'll be WEARING yours!\"\nDaniel undresses quickly while Janette is in the kitchen and unable to see what\nhe's up to.\nDaniel: \"And make sure you use extra meat!\"\nJanette comes back into the doorway holding a paper plate with two sandwiches on\nit.\nJanette: \"You know I always like extra---\"\nJanette looks shocked, her eyes wide. Daniel is standing in front of her almost\nnaked, his hands behind his head. He's still got on his arm stockings and\ngoggles and collar, though the collar now has a leash dangling down to his\npenis. Daniel is ripped.\nDaniel: \"Yeah... I know.\"\nJanette drops the paper plate and sandwiches with a splat. The pair just look at\neachother for a moment.\nJanette finally says, her hands still in the position they were when she dropped\nthe plate,\nJanette: \"... I think I just got a hard-on.\"\nDaniel approaches Janette who has drawn her hands up to her chest. She looks\nproperly embarrassed but can't take her eyes off him. Daniel puts his arms\naround her, and Janette gives a dreamy smile.\n \nPage 2\nDaniel: \"You really should think of a more imaginative blog password.\"\nJanette: \"HEY!!! You... weren't supposed to know...\"\nDaniel puts his face closer to hers.\nDaniel: \"That you were fantasizing about me?\"\nDaniel kisses Janette, who grabs a hold of his back, digging her claws in a bit.\nShe really gives into the kiss, her hands wander to his butt.\nDaniel smiles at her, and takes off her glasses.\nDaniel: \"We've only been best friends for 3 years. How come you didn't tell me?\"\nJanette: \"I kind of thought you'd be grossed out... being a living Adonis and\nall.\"\nDaniel leads Janette to her bed, the two sit down on it.\nDaniel: \"You didn't think that maybe I was trying to impress you?\"\nJanette smirks, and then grabs a hold of the leash, and pulls Daniel down onto\nhis back. Janette mounts him, though she's fully clothed still.\nJanette: \"That was STILL a dirty trick, you rat bastard.\"\nJanette and Daniel kiss again, and then Daniel puts his hands on her butt.\nDaniel: \"So, are you going to join me here, or just watch?\"\n \nPage 3\nA bit of time has passed. Janette is naked, and under Daniel, who is sucking on\nher breasts. Janette's hands are on his head, holding him down on her. Her eyes\nare looking down at him dreamily.\nJanette: \"Oh... Dan...\"\nDaniel's hand moves down between her legs. Janette responds by arching her back\nand holding on tighter.\nJanette: \"Oh yes! Touch me... you don't know how much I've wanted this...\"\nDaniel looks down at Janette, holding himself over her, his hand is still down\nbetween her legs. Janette looks like he's pleasuring her as he talks to her.\nDaniel: \"I've been waiting for this a long time too. You're just as sexy as I\nthought you'd be.\"\nJanette stuffs Daniel's head down between her breasts in response. She's smiling\ndown at him, looking flustered.\nJanette: \"Merf... shuddup, you.\"\nDaniel pops his head down from her breasts, Janette is left holding his goggles.\nJanette: \"Hey!\"\nDaniel's face is right in front of her vagina. Her enlarged clit is unhooded and\npresented to him. Daniel begins to lick her clit, which makes Janette push up\nher hips and grab at his head.\nJanette: \"AAAH!\"\nDaniel starts to stroke at himself while he licks Janette. Janette has wrapped\nher legs around his head and is holding on for dear life.\nJanette: \"Oh Dan! Yes! Harder! Don't stop!\"\n \nPage 4\nDaniel is now fully erect as he strokes himself and Janette is thrashing around,\nholding his head in place on her.\nJanette: \"Ahhh! AAAH!! I-I can't-take... much more!\"\nDaniel sucks on Janette's clit, and Janette throws her head back, screaming.\nJanette: \"OHH!! Y-you're... m-making me cum!! AHHH!\"\nJanette goes limp then, looking exhausted while Daniel crawls up her body again,\ngrinning down at her. He's at her breast level, cupping one of them.\nDaniel leans down and licks one of her breasts again.\nDaniel: \"Now to FINISH you.\"\nJanette: \"H-huh?\"\nDaniel jerks his penis into her. Janette clenches her eyes and clings to\nDaniel's shoulders.\nJanette: \"Aaaahh!\"\nDaniel: \"Ungh! Oh God, Janey... you're so tight...\"\nDaniel starts to fuck Janette missionary style, her legs are wrapped around his\nwaist, and he's sucking on her breasts while he's inside her.\nDaniel then switches positions so that he's behind her, her hands are on the\nheadboard of her bed, while Daniel rubs her clit while he's fucking her. His\nother hand is on her breast, and he's biting her neck. Janette then mounts him\nagain, her head thrown back and sitting upright.\nJanette: \"Ahh! Ahh! Dan! I'm gonna...\"\nDaniel grabs her hips and thrusts up harder into her. Janette then falls forward\nand clutches him to her chest, falling onto him. She lifts her head and screams\nout as she does so.\nJanette: \"Aaaaaaaaaaaaahh!!!\"\n \nPage 5\nDaniel is once again on top of her, and is holding her wrists down as he bites\nher neck. She has her legs wrapped around him again, and both look like they're\ncovered in sweat.\nJanette: \"Ahh! AAH! I ... I can't...\"\nDaniel: \"Say it...\"\nJanette looks into Daniel's eyes, still gasping and rubbing her breasts up\nagainst his chest.\nJanette: \"Wh-what?\"\nDaniel: \"Say you want me to cum in you...\"\nJanette throws back her head, gritting her teeth and writhing under him, her\nlegs holding him tight.\nJanette: \"Please God yes! Oh cum in me, baby! I want to feel it!\"\nDaniel: \"Oh yes, Janey... been holding it in so long...\"\nDaniel and Janette lock bodies, Daniel throws his head back, eyes clenched in\npleasure. Janette has a hold of his butt and is pulling at him, her own head\nthrown back.\nDaniel slumps over Janette who kisses his neck, holding him tight. He pulls his\nsoaked penis out of her and rolls beside her, looking at her. She looks spent.\nHe's smiling adoringly at her.\nDaniel: \"Flawless victory.\"\nJanette's eyes snap open, and she smirks at him. She pulls on his leash, to a\nsitting position, where she's now sitting in his lap, looking him in the face.\nBoth are smiling at eachother.\nJanette: \"ROUND... 2\"\nDaniel grins as Janette pushes him back down.\n \n"}