{"sf1_id":2153846,"sf2_id":"ynZ8Rrqe","title":"//storm on the wing//","author":"VintageTheBat","words":206,"posted_at":"2024-07-14T13:56:51.000Z","tags":["Death","Poem","Poetry"],"url":"https://fse.anthro.fr/stories/2153846-storm-on-the-wing","original_url":"https://sofurry.com/s/ynZ8Rrqe","image_url":"https://cdn.sofurryfiles.com/submissions/thumbnails/5f/1a/5f1ae9c6-995c-4c3e-a2ae-1b332382455f","description":"something ive been working on, feedback appreciated. plan to make accompanying artwork eventually","content":"revision #1 Jan 24 2026\n\nquiet falls in feather down  \nthe earth holds its breath  \nthe crow storms up thunderclouds  \nin its beak was death\n\nwings beating to death march drum  \nrippling humid air  \nsimmered with cicada's hum  \nchorus to our prayer\n\nanswered thus by howling wind  \ncondemn ye your fate  \nwhat befalls ye is what sin  \nhath precipitate\n\nas lightning tears false night's shroud  \ndarkness fell on us  \nthough thunder roars judgment loud  \nall we heard was hush\n\nall we heard was hush\n\nwings beating to death march drum  \nrippling humid air  \nsimmered with cicada's hum  \nchorus to our prayer\n\nanswered thus by howling wind  \ncondemn ye your fate  \nwhat befalls ye is what sin  \nhath precipitate\n\nas lightning tears false night's shroud  \ndarkness fell on us  \nthough thunder roars judgment loud  \nall we heard was hush\n\nall we heard was hush\n\n\u0026nbsp;\n\nold version:\n\nquiet falls in feather down  \nthe earth holds its breath  \nthe crow storms up thunderclouds  \nin its beak was death  \n  \neach wing beat timed to deaths drum  \na pulse sent through air  \nsimmered with cicada's hum  \nsoothesong to our prayers  \n  \nas lightning tears darkest shroud  \nfalse night fell on us  \nthough thunder boomed threatening loud  \nall we heard was hush","series":{"name":"thoughts (poems)","previous":"https://fse.anthro.fr/stories/2153798-still-life-wip.json","next":"https://fse.anthro.fr/stories/2162942-idle-life-wip.json"}}