# Rain x Hailey Pt. 01 Writting Commission + Pic repost

Author: JtDrake
Tags: Alien, Human, Hypnosis, Mind Control

Artwork by Zadora on Telegram: duartezadora  
  
Commission for Anonymous  
  
CW: alien x human, hypnosis, mind control, futa  
  
Hailey is a young woman meeting her first alien and the pair begin to build a life together. Rain soon proves she is more than the news ever claimed.

Artwork by Zadora on Telegram: duartezadora

  

Commission for Anonymous

  

CW: alien x human, hypnosis, mind control, futa

  

Hailey is a young woman meeting her first alien and the pair begin to build a life together. Rain soon proves she is more than the news ever claimed.

  

Story: "June 10th, 8:30 p.m.," Hailey speaks into her phone, every word is transcribed into text. "Today, I met my first originite, the alien species that lives with us on Earth. I can't put into words how quickly my fear turned into curiosity when I saw her and how she has this power that feels common to her but would blow my mind if I developed an ability too. A quick conversation with her revealed however that it is impossible to give humans powers. Not unless we perform a task first. I declined to know what that task was for my safety. Though," The woman smiles, biting her lip and glancing at the mirror. She pokes her chest out with a strange new confidence in her appearance. "She can change my body type with my permission and it's completely safe! I spoke to my doctor and he agreed that multiple tests have proven intercourse is fine but does have its detractors." With a sigh, she stands up, places her phone on the desk, and pulls her shirt off.

  

  

  

"I also agreed to do something for her in return for her putting in the effort. She demonstrated that her power will work but I have to remember I can't try to influence the outcome. I'm obligated to follow her lead. Then there's the last condition I need to learn about when she arrives. I will update my experiences to share online to share my views with everyone. Stay well, and be safe." She saves the rough draft of her script and dresses up in a tiny black dress, lab coat, and red heels. Black lipstick to give off her plump lips and glasses to complete the look. "Alright, let's have some fun." She giggles and waits in the living room for Rain to arrive.

  

Time passes, and Hailey looks into Rain's presence online, learning all she can about the women. A key detail is her looks. Her physical form. Fins hanging from her arms and fin remind people of a goldfish. They look more like translucent fabric. Gaze through them and you can see the shadow of a person on the other side. Fiona blinks scrolling through the videos of her using those same fins as whips and restraints. Her figure stands out compared to other women, taller and more robust on the hips. She walks with a gentle but opposing aura. Fiona smiles, thinking if there's more to this amazing creature than meets the eye.

  

Finally, she hears the knock on the front door. The speed of her racing to answer could have earned her a college tuition in track. She opens the door and glances up at the brunette giantess standing on her doorstep. The woman smiles and shows off her eyes. Her iris glows a deep purple, it sends chills through Hailey’s soul. "Holy fuck," Vertigo hit like a truck. Rain rushes in to grab her and Fiona lands square between her boobs. Her mind is firing off mixed signals and Rain's succulent scent reminds her of the warning. She giggles and holds on with a tender hug. "When you said it was a heavy effect, I didn't think you'd have me turned on so quickly." She kisses both her boobs.

  

"I told you, dear." She takes them inside and closes the door before letting her true alien form out. Her tail shoves the table near the door, scraping the wall. "My power has no bearing unless you have any interest in what I have to offer." She leans down and kisses her deeply. Hailey shivers at the power she can feel from Rain, but it's not enforced. Refusing the offer is easy, but does she desire to walk away, and make her own choices? Rain can easily make her a puppet. The strings are hanging in front of her, she doesn't have to put them on. With a deep breath, Hailey's true intentions can be safely realized.

  

"Miss Rain, if I ask you to confirm if certain rumors are true..." The gentle alien stops her and stares into her eyes.

  

"It is possible, but I would need time to make it happen."

  

"If I offer to sponsor you in my home?" Rain raises a brow.

  

"Are you sure?" Hailey smiles and nods, holding her hands.

  

"I'm choosing to enjoy some time to myself. Just let me not think about life for a while and enjoy this little nerd fantasy." She moves in closer, smelling the woman's chest again. Her body shivers again. "Go on, make me your sex slave. Let me take a share of the costs and you can use me any way you want." Some lines appear on Hailey's skin, she feels the strings pulling. Rain grabs the doorknob. Offering one last chance. The offer was too good. "I said, fucking make me." Her face turns red when the words leap out of her. She doesn't want to push Rain away, though she doesn't seem bothered by the reaction.

  

"It's alright, dear. But remember, we have one more detail to discuss."

  

“Oh, right. Please, make yourself comfortable and I’ll make us some coffee.”

  

“Oh, thank you.” Hailey shows her to the living room and leaves to make the coffee. A short while later, she sits across from Rain and she’s sitting there in shock when she tells her the truth. “Yes, Miss Hailey. Our species is a living weapon. We are designed to breed and assimilate the native species of any planet. It’s only fair I warn you before we move forward. This is a good time to consider your stance.” Hailey crosses her arms and looks away from her.

  

“I thought you’d only need to say yes.” She smiles at Rain, who stares back with a curious glance.

  

“So you understand what this means?”

  

“I understand that you’re asking me to listen to what you say. I think it’d be fair to say we both know what we want and both sides to say yes.” Rain smirks and the lines on Hailey’s skin come alight and make Hailey put her coffee down so she can remove her top. She gasps and watches her body move against her will. It almost feels comfortable to let herself go. Her breasts fall out of her bra and a sense of bliss comes over her. She smiles and gently cups her breasts. “Yes, Ma’am. I’d love to be your breeding slave.” Amazing, she is fed information through the piece of Rain’s fin that is controlling her body. She braces herself to see what Rain is planning. She’s seeing it as watching some online porn.

  

Rain stands up, letting her clothes melt away. Hailey’s eyes widen seeing them fade away, learning her clothes are part of her body which makes sense. Some fabrics are organic. Rain reaches out and takes her hand, pulling them close together, and smiles as she slowly takes control of the woman’s body. Hailey gasps when she involuntarily grabs Rain’s thick cock but she remains locked on her eyes. To see this kind of control from someone and her being enamored with it. Good God, Hailey is falling in love. Soon, they kiss again and time begins to slip away while Rain begins to have her way with the brilliant scientist.

  

Three months pass and Hailey wakes up to another beautiful morning. She sits up on the bed, still aching from the changes but seeing her large voluptuous breasts. Their softness and shape are exactly what she desired. She smiles, playing with them and turning to the mirror. Beauty and brains, the very body she wanted since her teens. She stands up to gaze at her ass which seems to wiggle as she turns. “Mhmmm, yes. I should be a model.”

  

“I wouldn’t recommend it,” Hailey squeaks and spins around to Rain in the doorway with some breakfast for them both. “I’ve met a few ladies who work in the field and heard some not-so-glamourous stories.” Hailey pouts, sitting on the bed before Rain joins her, placing the food tray in front of them. They enjoy a tender kiss before they dig in. Hailey moans, enjoying the meal and thinking of how the last few months were so filled with bliss. “How is it?”

  

“It’s great!” She turns to Rain and wipes her lip. “I also have a question; you and I have been together for a while but I haven’t seen the full extent of your power.”

  

“I’ve been holding back.” She eats a bite and sighs, crossing her legs to keep her plate on her lap. “I don’t think it would be a good idea.” She looks Hailey in the eye. There’s a small hint of fear in her eyes. “It’s like a drug for us. Having that much control of a person. Moving your body is enough for me.”

  

“Oh, come on, Rain! You’ve been nice so far and you promised I’d be free to ask to go further if I wanted to.” She pouts and brushes her breasts on Rain’s arm, attempting to flirt the alien into submitting to her urges. Hailey wants to see it personally. Rain groans, scratching her scalp and staring at her with an annoyed grimace.

  

“I hope you understand what I will be doing. There is no if here Hailey. Informed consent or not, I am not human. I will take a mile instead of an inch.” Hailey gets on her knees and stands over Rain with her hands on her hips.

  

“Rain, I would very much like it if you take full control for once. Make me see how you’re so superior to us human bitches.” She slowly removes her shirt and smiles. “Come on, I’m saying yes.” She looks at Rain’s hand when she gets ready to snap.

  

“If you’re sure.” She kisses her deeply and snaps. Hailey gladly lets herself slide into oblivion. Even if she doesn’t come back, Rain will be caring for her. She’s pretty set for a good while. Her mind goes to sleep, letting a new life be written. She’s accepting a new identity to see if she can handle seeing Rain’s inhumanity firsthand.

Source: https://sofurry.com/s/J1OjgD2n


