{"sf1_id":319950,"sf2_id":"r17aAlRm","title":"The Hanging Academy -- Part 1","author":"APDamien","words":295,"posted_at":"2011-12-24T22:01:00.000Z","tags":["Breathplay","Consensual","Horse","M/M","Snuff","Squirrel","hanging"],"url":"https://fse.anthro.fr/stories/319950-the-hanging-academy-part-1","original_url":"https://sofurry.com/s/r17aAlRm","image_url":"https://www.sofurryfiles.com/std/thumb?page=319950\u0026ext=.jpg","description":"","content":"This is the start of a long story, and I need somebody to look it over for errors. I started with a story somebody else wrote, with human, mostly female characters. I rewrote it as a furry story, with mostly male characters.\n\nAlso, when you write a story where all the characters are the same sex you sometimes get into some awkward grammar. With opposite-sex characters you can use \"he\" and \"she\" to distinguish. the original tells only what the main character sees/does (except for the epilogue), so I also changed it to be first-person. Then a lot of scenes can be \"I\" and \"he\". So the main character's name, Wynn, should not occur outside of quotation marks, never in descriptive text.\n\nStory codes: M/M, furry, cons, hanging, snuff, slow  \nWarning, it's 400,000 words long (in 7 sections).  \n  \nIf anybody is willing to either detail-edit or read it and comment on whether the overall story works (and especially whether my alternate ending is believable), please write me, [[email\u0026nbsp;protected]](/cdn-cgi/l/email-protection)\n\n## THE HANGING ACADEMY - Part 1: Marshall\n\n### by Cardaniel and Damien\n\n#### Pledge recited by school students each morning\n\u003e We pledge, as individuals and as a society,  \n\u003e to allow each person, predator or prey,  \n\u003e to make their own choice between freedom and slavery  \n\u003e and to allow prey to choose the time and manner  \n\u003e of their conversion to fur.\n\n**Sigh.** I just noticed that my formatting is way too complex for sofurry to handle.\n\nI've moved parts 1 and 2 of this story to\u0026nbsp;[http://www.nyx.net/~anon3a9c/nfair/damien/hgacad/](http://www.nyx.net/~anon3a9c/nfair/damien/hgacad/)\n\nThe \"biology textbook excerpt\" is now at\u0026nbsp;[http://www.nyx.net/~anon3a9c/nfair/damien/hgacad/bio.htm](http://www.nyx.net/~anon3a9c/nfair/damien/hgacad/bio.htm)\n\nSorry for the inconvenience, but this story really needs the full power of html, not just the limited formatting provided by this BBS.\n\nAs always, comments are requested. \u0026nbsp;Pretty please?\n\n  \n  \n\n"}