{"sf1_id":403447,"sf2_id":"Xnr3KW01","title":"When I saw you past the breeze.","author":"Xinnova","words":315,"posted_at":"2012-07-16T14:35:00.000Z","tags":["Love","M/F","Poetry","haiku"],"url":"https://fse.anthro.fr/stories/403447-when-i-saw-you-past-the-breeze","original_url":"https://sofurry.com/s/Xnr3KW01","image_url":"https://cdn.sofurryfiles.com/submissions/thumbnails/26/bb/26bb78d5-3c3f-4fa3-a7bc-a85ce8cd814c","description":"","content":"I came to the realization that I've been doing things that everyone else wants for far too long now.  \n  \n So I decided that today was me time, here I'm attempting my paw at a bit of a Haiku. Though this is honestly my first time trying such things, I just felt compelled to try it.  \n  \n Done while listing to My December by Linkin park  \n  \n Poetry @ [![xinnova2](https://a.furaffinity.net/xinnova2.gif \"xinnova2\")\u0026nbsp;\u0026nbsp;xinnova2](http://www.furaffinity.net/user/xinnova2)  \n  \n Though I have to give credit to [![may825](https://a.furaffinity.net/may825.gif \"may825\")\u0026nbsp;\u0026nbsp;may825](http://www.furaffinity.net/user/may825) for giving me the idea a long time ago to try this. Thank you for helping inspire me to do something creative! \\\u003c3  \n  \n Comments are very welcome and appreciated, after all I need feedback! \\\u003c3  \n  \n Hope you enjoy!\n\n* * *\n\nWhen I saw you past the breeze- Written by Xinnova2  \n  \n A cool breeze blew past the shores.  \n A land of sea and beauty, one you loved so much.  \n Love was found, when I met you.  \n  \n A calm, warm breeze settled.  \n The sounds of bells came out, echoing through the cove.  \n Crying, the sound of a babe born.  \n  \n Leaves fell, winters cold breeze.  \n New beauty, a snows fall covered the land.  \n Bitterness settled, a cold man's heart.  \n  \n Moisture rose, a fog thickened.  \n Everlasting love changed, turning into hate.  \n A blind man's greed, never fulfilled.\n\n\u0026nbsp; A sound of crashing wave, no breeze came.  \n Longing to escape, an old man wants out.  \n A young child torn, a family broken.  \n  \n Thickening fog, moisture still rising.  \n Wife's freedom, escape from the pain.  \n Death, the end of the beauty.  \n  \n A gentle storm, darkness falling.  \n Tears of a broken man, desire to end the pain.  \n A young child's cries, a mother mourned.   \n  \n Skies clearing, the fog remains.  \n A child's escape, a father no more.  \n The act of drinking, the husband's regret.  \n  \n Sun filled sky, the breeze returns.  \n A man's realization, the child of his wife still lives.  \n A love renewed, a family reborn.  \n  \n\n"}