# When I saw you past the breeze. Author: Xinnova Tags: Love, M/F, Poetry, haiku I came to the realization that I've been doing things that everyone else wants for far too long now. So I decided that today was me time, here I'm attempting my paw at a bit of a Haiku. Though this is honestly my first time trying such things, I just felt compelled to try it. Done while listing to My December by Linkin park Poetry @ [![xinnova2](https://a.furaffinity.net/xinnova2.gif "xinnova2")  xinnova2](http://www.furaffinity.net/user/xinnova2) Though I have to give credit to [![may825](https://a.furaffinity.net/may825.gif "may825")  may825](http://www.furaffinity.net/user/may825) for giving me the idea a long time ago to try this. Thank you for helping inspire me to do something creative! \<3 Comments are very welcome and appreciated, after all I need feedback! \<3 Hope you enjoy! * * * When I saw you past the breeze- Written by Xinnova2 A cool breeze blew past the shores. A land of sea and beauty, one you loved so much. Love was found, when I met you. A calm, warm breeze settled. The sounds of bells came out, echoing through the cove. Crying, the sound of a babe born. Leaves fell, winters cold breeze. New beauty, a snows fall covered the land. Bitterness settled, a cold man's heart. Moisture rose, a fog thickened. Everlasting love changed, turning into hate. A blind man's greed, never fulfilled.   A sound of crashing wave, no breeze came. Longing to escape, an old man wants out. A young child torn, a family broken. Thickening fog, moisture still rising. Wife's freedom, escape from the pain. Death, the end of the beauty. A gentle storm, darkness falling. Tears of a broken man, desire to end the pain. A young child's cries, a mother mourned. Skies clearing, the fog remains. A child's escape, a father no more. The act of drinking, the husband's regret. Sun filled sky, the breeze returns. A man's realization, the child of his wife still lives. A love renewed, a family reborn. Source: https://sofurry.com/s/Xnr3KW01