{"sf1_id":755738,"sf2_id":"pnGQOxXe","title":"Our Paradise, hidden in plain sight.","author":"Ranyaws","words":284,"posted_at":"2014-09-11T23:11:00.000Z","tags":["Family","Friendship","Poetry"],"url":"https://fse.anthro.fr/stories/755738-our-paradise-hidden-in-plain-sight","original_url":"https://sofurry.com/s/pnGQOxXe","image_url":"https://cdn.sofurryfiles.com/submissions/thumbnails/04/78/04783eb0-98cc-4ae5-a7d6-86afd602e725","description":"My first(official) poem, I will probably cringe when I come back looking at this in a few years.","content":"I never thought i would maybe end up writing a poem, or have the urge to write more. Well, here I am, a German writing english poems, because german is an annoying language. \u0026nbsp; \u0026nbsp; Please, if there are any things that make no sense, no matter how you look at it, it might just be me trying to be graceful in a language which isn't native to me. ;)\n\nThis was coming to me as I lay in my room at night while I thought about something Uncle Kage said (and some things that were posted over at /r/furry, but that doesn't really play any role).\n\n**Paradise**\n\nLaying down here, faced with darkness\n\nBelow me lies Earth, our great goddess\n\nGiving birth to daemons which haunt our history\n\nWho's allowance to faithfuls will forever be mystery.\n\n\u0026nbsp;\n\nAnd no! We don't learn.\n\nBut yes! We yearn,\n\nFor a better world to come.\n\n\u0026nbsp;\n\nGo on looking for this worlds beauty\n\nWhich in misled search you cannot reach\n\nYour life and living can always be fruity\n\nBut our paradise is easy to breach.\n\n\u0026nbsp;\n\nTake care of it with us\n\nUs; gryphons and cubs\n\nUs; mares, drakes and tigers,\n\nLovers and peaceful fighters.\n\n\u0026nbsp;\n\nWe will give you heaven\n\nWith sisters and brethren\n\nA big family for all those\n\nWho will have us with faults.\n\n-R. Bluefire\n\n\u003e Looking at it now, I kind of like it as much as I hate it, I think its silly. But that does not keep me from sharing it with you guys.  \n\u003e Please leave a comment and say what you think of it. Did I do well for my first? Do you want to see more?  \n  \n\n"}