# The great escape ( well more like attempt) pt1

Author: Rougehoundz1
Tags: Bear, Friendship, Prison, Sad, Wolf

#1 of the great escape

This is my first attempt at a story and I would appreciate your feedback and if I should carry on.

 **The present **                      The noise was loud and sudden. I knew what it was. Anyone of us trapped in this cruel excuse of a home knew what that sound was. I fell to the ground with a thud just like a falling stone. I turned over onto my back and yelped in pain. I had been shot. The bullet had pierced my lower body. The figures approached me. As I started to fall into the unconsciousness they started talking but there words were inaudible. One of them bent down and picked me up. I winced at this and tried to struggle out of his grip. My attemps were unnoticed by the figure carrying me and my body soon grew week. The last thing I remember Is feeling cold before blacking out.         **3 days earlier ...**

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