# Quickie Freestyle Two: Use the Senses

Author: okariblackblood
Tags: Cute, Little pip, MLP, My Little Pony, My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic, Poem, Poetry, Pony, Small, Velvet remedy, freestyle, sense, senses

#2 of poems and written work

i just came up with this like a few minutes ago, and i decided to share it. This time i drew inspiration on Velvet Remedy and Little Pip from the original Fallout: Equestria Series, by KKat.

i wish you could see

  

how much you mean to me

  

i know you can feel it

  

but can you hear it? can you see it?

  

how much it pains me

  

how much i insanely try to do differently for you

  

you'd think im a nice guy, but im not

  

you'd think its simple but i rot

  

inside 

  

im crushed, oh my. how could i?

  

how could we? could you please?

  

you seem to be, my only remedy

  

soft to the touch, my velvet remedy

  

i guess ill try, ill shoot from the hip

  

what you need is a little pip

  

to move you along, to the end of the song, 

  

from the sky to the moon, i guess ill be ending soon,

  

but before i do, ill say, i love you.

Source: https://sofurry.com/s/ynZkjGw1
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