Con Artist Comaraderie
#2 of Short Story Commissions
This was a request written for Kelbalrai1990 over on FurAffinity and Fennec
This story came out to 10 page long (2461 words), and under normal commission prices would have been $30. Kelb was one of several friends I asked to help me get some samples of what I can do on a commission basis, and here we are!
As with all of my stories, comments and constructive criticism are always welcome. Enjoy!
Characters and setting are Disney's. Idea is Kelb and Fennec's. Story is mine. Please do not repost without proper credit and a link to the original work. Thanks!
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Con Artist Comaraderie
Commission for Kelbalrai1990 and Fennec
It was five in the afternoon in the city of Zootopia and rush hour was at its peak. The highway where Finnick and Nick were stuck in the fennec's van was at a complete standstill.
"Move it!" Finnick yelled as he stuck his head out the driver window and laid on the horn.
"Relax," Nick said, the fox nudging Finnick's shoulder. "We've still got plenty of time." Finnick responded by grumbling and rolling up the window. "Look," Nick added, "it's simple. We go in, we get the candy, we get out. No big deal. And," Nick reached around behind his seat, "you get to try out your new costume!" he added in a sing-song tone.
"Can't believe you talked me into that thing."
Nick grinned and waved the elephant suit in front of him. "You're gonna look so cute! You'll be the son I never had."
Finnick thumped his head on the steering wheel making the horn beep.
"Oh, c'mon. You know it's a good idea." Nick tossed the costume into the back of the van as traffic started moving again. "You get pulled over all the time 'cause they think you're a kid. May as well take advantage of it, right?"
An hour passed before Nick and Finnick arrived at the candy store. They drove passed it and down an alleyway a couple blocks down.
"Let's get this over with." Finnick climbed out of the driver's seat and removed his shirt and pants and snatched the costume off the floor.
Nick Twisted around in his seat. He hadn't ever seen the fennec nude before. His eyes fell upon the smaller fox's chest, and Finnick then turned around before bending down to pull the costume on. Nick gulped, staring at the fennec's backside as his tail lifted before he straightened up, then zipped the front of the costume up to his neck.
"Didn't know you had them make a fly for this thing," Finnick said as he faced Nick again. He paused when he saw Nick staring at him. "What?" He then zipped up the fly.
"Oh, n-nothing." Nick gulped again and straightened his blue tie and turned his head away, looking at him over his snout.
Finnick rolled his eyes and then pulled the elephant hood over his ears. With a little hop, he faced Nick and spread out his arms, then blew. The elephant trunk stretched out in front of his nose and gave a squeak.
Nick grinned and nodded. "Perfect. Let's go get you some candy, son!"
Finnick's arms drooped to his sides as he sulked to the back of the van and flung the door open.
"This is gonna be fun," Nick said as he followed him out and then locked the van door.
The dingle bells hanging above the door jingled as Nick entered the candy store and held the door open for Finnick. Inside the store were rows upon rows of prepackaged candy of all shapes and sizes. Along the walls were bins where anyone could get candy by the pound, and from the ceiling hung larger candies for larger species of Zootpian citizens.
"Well buddy," Nick said, kneeling down in front of Finnick, "happy birthday. Why don't you go pick out some candy?"
Finnick's feet slapped on the floor as he padded his way around, Nick following behind him. Toward the far back end of the store was a jawbreaker almost twice Nick's height. Finnick walked right to it and pointed. Nick leaned down and whispered. "Don't you think that's a little big."
"This was your idea," Finnick growled back.
"Is everything okay?" Finnick and Nick both spun around to see an otter standing behind them. "Hi," he said, "I'm Sebastian."
Aside from the apron that was embroidered with the candy store's logo, the otter wore a tight yellow shirt with the sleeves rolled up passed his elbows and bracelets around his wrists with rainbow colors all over them. Both of his ears were pierced and his nails were filed into perfectly rounded tips and painted a pastel blue.
"Awww, look'it you!" Sebastian pulled the sucker out of his mouth slower than Nick thought was natural as he knelt down in front of Finnick. "You are so cute I could just eat you up!"
Finnick closed his eyes as the otter ruffled his head and then blew him a toot when the paw pulled away.
The otter straightened back up. "Did I hear it was your birthday?" he asked. Finnick nodded and the fabric around his mouth stretched as he smiled. Smiling back, the otter looked around the store for a moment, then back to him. "I tell you what. For your birthday, you can go pick out any sucker you like."
Finnick stared at the otter for a moment, then looked up at Nick.
"Well, go ahead and pick one, son," Nick said, smiling.
Again Finnick began padding around the store and Nick and the otter both watched him disappear around the corner at the end of the isle.
Sebastian clasped his paws together and shook his hips. "He is so cute!"
"Yeah, he has a way of getting what he wants," Nick replied as he put his paws into his pants pockets. "Well, thank you. We'll let you know when he finds one."
The otter smiled at Nick and then turned to head back to the counter. Nick watched as the otter's tail dragged along the floor and followed it up to the base with his eyes where the otter's hips swayed. The blue jeans he wore seemed to barely contain the otter's legs and bubbly backside. A shiver ran up Nick's spine and he wondered just how interested the otter might be in him. Calm down, Nick. You have a job to do, he reminded himself and caught up with Finnick. "You find somethin' buddy?"
Finnick pointed at the top of shelf where a sucker the size of Nick's head hung over the isle. Nick whistled. "That's a big one. You sure you can handle it?"
Pausing a moment, Finnick sniffed at the air, then glared at Nick. With just his eyes, he motioned toward the otter.
Nick shrugged. "He's got a cute butt, what can I say?"
The fennec narrowed his eyes at Nick then went back into character and pointed at the sucker hanging from the ceiling. "Sebastian?" Nick called and waited for the otter to join them, then pointed up at the ceiling. "I think he wants that one."
"That's...a little more than I was intending." Sebastian knelt down in front of Finnick again and took a sucker off the shelf. "You sure you don't want something...smaller?"
Nick shook his head. "It's the elephant thing. They always eat big food, he wants to be an elephant when he grows up..." He shrugged. "Kids, eh?"
Finnick again pointed at the large sucker hanging from the ceiling, and Sebastian sighed. "Well, all right."
"Don't worry, I'll pay the difference," Nick said with a smile.
Nodding, the otter left and then returned with a ladder a few moments later. Finnick stood right under him as the otter climbed the ladder, and his eyes went wide when the swaying tail lifted enough that he could see the perfectly rounded rump beneath it.
"Told you," Nick sneered.
After untying the sucker from the rope, Sebastian climbed down and was about to hand it to Finnick when he looked down. "That's, umm...Ahem..." He glanced at Nick momentarily. "He's a little young to be getting a stiffy, isn't he?"
Nick's ears flattened against his head as he shot his gaze toward Finnick. The fennec looked down at himself and he and Nick both understood. Right between the hiss legs was a steadily growing tent.
"How old is he?" the otter asked, stepping away and holding the sucker like a parent protecting their child from a stranger.
"Boys," Nick replied with a forced chuckle, "they grow up so fast."
The otter shook his head. "Not THAT fast! Is he even a kid? That thing's huge! Get out of my store you sickos!"
"Wouldn't you know it?" Nick glanced at his wrist. "We're gonna be late for a doctor's appointment. C'mon buddy, let's go!"
Nick scooped up the fennec and quickly walked out of the store. Finnick pulled back the hood to his costume and blew the otter a kiss through the window just as Nick started running toward the van. Once at the van, Nick unlocked the back door and threw Finnick inside, then climbed in.
"What was that?" Nick asked in a cracked voice. "You said you're used to playing a kid?"
Finnick shrugged. "He had a cute ass, what can I say?"
Nick smirked and raised an eyebrow at him. "Seriously...?"
"Hey, you're the one that smells like pheromones right now," Finnick growled back.
"Well, let's get out of here before he calls the police or something."
Nodding, the fennec scrambled his way into the driver's seat and drove off. They arrived at Finnick's usual hiding spot a while later-- an alleyway just outside of the downtown area of Zootopia. Both he and Nick sat in their seats staring out the windshield.
Finnick was the first to break the silence. "Damn I could use a piece of ass right now."
"We could take turns?" Nick said with a laugh and looked over at Finnick in a mocking grin.
Finnick slowly turned his head toward him, causing Nick's ears to fold back.
"Uhh...I wasn't serious but..." Nick tilted his head and shrugged. He paused a moment. "Stop looking at me like that."
The fennec was staring at him, his eyes darting back and forth between Nick's eyes and his lap. Nick met his gaze and they both froze. Nick swallowed, but Finnick was the first to speak.
"I'm goin' first."
There was another moment of silence between them. Then suddenly they both flew out of their seats into the back of the van. Their lips met in a hormone fueled kiss, and Nick began to fondle the smaller fox's backside through the costume. Finnick's paws began working on Nick's belt. Nick managed to get the zipper open to the fennec's suit so he could reach inside while their lips were still pressed together. Finnick broke the kiss and began to focus on removing Nick's clothing.
"That's it, get daddy's pants off for him," Nick chuckled.
"This ain't a job, stop playing daddy." Finnick snapped the belt loose, then the button to Nicks pants, and finally the zipper. He pushed Nick onto his back and yanked his pants and boxers off him in one motion, throwing them back over his shoulder.
Nick reached into Finnick's costume and manipulated the smaller fox's sheath and sac out through the opening. He was already partially erect, and yipped, followed by a growl when the tip caught the zipper momentarily.
"Sorry..." Nick whimpered before letting go to admire him. "Wow...you've uhh, quite the equipment there for such a little guy."
"Yeah, and it gets bigger." Finnick then scoot forward, letting his growing shaft rest on Nick's naked groin. They were almost identical size.
As Nick reached toward the back corner of the van for a bottle of lube, he felt the fennec's member press against him under his tail. "Wait, aren't you gonna-MMPH!"
The fennec thrust himself inside causing a yelp to escape from Nick. "Gotta be gentle with daddy. He doesn't do this very much."
Finnick kept going without a word. He grabbed Nick's footpaws and held onto them while beginning to thrust himself deep inside the larger fox. Nick let out a series of whimpers as waves shifted between twinges of pain and a tingling pleasure. Finnick's knot swelled inside and finally locked the pair together.
With his own member pulsing, Nick couldn't hold back any longer. He took himself into his paw and began stroking himself. The knot buried inside him pressed against his inner gland and all sense of pain subsided. Nick barely managed to force his sheath back enough for his knot to slip out before it grew too large. "Gah..! Finnick..Jus..just like that...Make daddy happy..."
"Shut up with that!" Finnick growled between gritted teeth as he increased in speed. He let go of Nick's footpaws and flattened himself against Nick's stomach.
The fur of the costume rubbing against Nick's exposed knot sent Nick into a pawing frenzy, stroking his length in time with Finnick's wild thrusts.
"Nick..I'm...I'm almost...Nng...!" Finnick started to thrust in shorter, but more powerful bursts as Nick's hips began taking on a mind of their own.
The combination of Finnick's knot tugging at his ring from the inside and then pressing against his gland along with the little growling squeaks sent Nick over the edge. "GAH!! HNNG!!" Nick's shaft pulsed in his palm, his sac sucked up against his body. "Fin-AHH!" Nick yelped as his orgasm took command of his speech centers. His member throbbed as it released shot after shot of his seed between them.
Finnick lifted himself up and took a hit in the chin as he arched his back and gave a final thrust powerful enough to lift Nick's rump off the floor of the van. His shaft pulsed and began to fill the larger fox with his juices, his sac tucked firmly against the underside of Nick's tail at the root. Nick could feel them twitching against him as his climax passed, his own shaft still throbbing and spurting fresh loads of seed all over his shirt and Finnick's chin. Before long, Finnick collapsed on top of Nick and the fuzzy elephant costume quickly absorbed what seed Nick's fur failed to soak in. They both laid there panting with Finnick resting his head on Nick's stomach, the larger fox's meat still pulsing between them.
Several minutes passed before either of them could speak and Finnick's knot deflated enough for him to slip out and he could roll over onto his side. Nick scooted around so their ears touched. "Well, that was...messy..." Nick said with a huff. His shaft had since slipped back into his home and Nick began blindly groping about the van in search of a towel.
"One word to anyone," Finnick grumbled, "And I'll bite your dick off."
Nick's paw didn't find a towel, but found a small sucker instead. "Daddy's little secret," he replied as he unwrapped the sucker and stuck it into Finnick's mouth. He then rolled over onto his side and rustled the fennec's ears. "You are just so cute!" he added and kissed Finnick's forehead.
Finnick said nothing and simply folded his arms in front of him while sucking on the candy with the stick poking out of the front of his mouth.