Red Commissar

Story by creepfrombehind on SoFurry

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Based off a picture done by the talented MaxBlackRabbit, I decided to try and write a story behind it. Not sure if this give the picture justice but was fun when I dabbled the idea and wrote something out.

Might return to this and try something else or make a series about it...who knows!

Note: The words in < > are spoken in Russian, due to SoFur not knowing Crylic, I had to adjust it.


Zigzag woke with a start as she looked at her surroundings. She hadn't remembered what had happened before, but she certainly wasn't where she had been. The room surrounding her was rather warm, but the floor smooth and stone, finding herself hung by her hands, wearing a leather great coat. She recognized this as her own, she had wore it before...quite a few times actually as she looked around.

"Wonderful, if this is going the way I think, I'd hate myself for not having a camera." the white skunk and tiger hybrid said, finding no windows and devoid of any other person as she sniffed the air, catching a whiff of something burning before a brilliant red light caught attention. She stared at it, making out a figure in the doorway towards a back room, dimly lit from behind with a deep red glow.

"<What you're in for, I plan to keep this off the record.>" spoke a powerful...feminine... voice came from the figure. Something in her hand glowed as each talon on the end of black digit burned crimson bright, each digit held around a cherry-looking object as a large figure walked out. She was tall, indeed almost as tall as the entire doorway with her body cloaked in a massive greatcoat. Zigzag looked back at the creature, still unsure of her business, getting a look thanks to her cat's eyes.

"You put a lot of effort into leashing me up, I hope you plan to tell me what do you want?" "<Relax pretty one, I don't plan to do anything of malice.>." Came the response as Zig understood what she was saying.

"You're speaking Russian, don't know English, you'd be a pretty bad spy if you were here on business."

"<Watch your tongue, I don't want to make it easy for you to find me, I know English perfectly well.>"

Zig looked surprise, perhaps she knew what the woman said, giving her a slight glare for a time.

"Got quite a mouth on you if you're insulting me, just because you tied me up doesn't mean you can beat me." "I don't plan on dat comrade, I plan you to make commend you for antics I have witnessed."

The figure spoke well, her English was rough, bounded by the thick Russian accent. She smirked, walking towards the feline female as she reached into her pocket, and pulled out a large smartphone to show the other woman the screen. Images scrolled up of Zigzag herself, donning a rather revealing commissar attire, with only the hat and her coat, and her body showed off in pleasant and intimidating forms. Zig's eyes were hidden from view, forcing some rather fun intimidation other apprehended females. Zig knew of these shoots, it was for their spy themes and interrogating the enemy, and of course, she played her role very well.

"If you're a fan, you have quite a way of showing it, certainly, not the best I've had in response from it, this is rather interesting." she swayed in the other direction unable to unbind herself from the metal chains "I'm quite proud of that work." Zigzag began getting her footing again to move towards the other woman just outside her view.

"If you have something against it, I'd like to know, we're not the type to enjoy upsetting our customers." "Nyet, dey are good, but I wonder if you truly understand responsibilities dat commissars may have, we are to keep order in ranks, and make men fight for their homeland or die for it." the larger woman responded in her deep, accent "you definitely do make good image, but your execution, nyet nyet, dat needs some improving." Zigazag chuckled "You sound like you're one to talk about such things, why all this trouble for a sex shoot then?" "Because, I v'ant to show you how a real commissar does it, and dere never is cameras or anyone v'atching." A pair of red eyes suddenly glowed, the face of the creature noticed. She was a dragon of some kind, her elongated muzzle a deep red hue, her lower jaw an onyx black down to her cheeks, and along the back of her shoulders. Her center pattern matched her upper muzzle color, a brilliant crimson, as she towered over Zigzag. As her body figure could be seen under her opened cloak then. She definitely held the muscles of an Amazonian, and the tits to match one too. Zig's tail perked a little as she looked at the other female with the short chance she had

"Well, Miss tall, dark and ravishing officer, wonder what you're planning to do with me then?" "<Enough to make you feel the heat.> " The Drakess smirked, slipping forward, the ambient light illuminated her body. The coat was open, exposing her amazonian body. Deep crimson scales shimmered against it, the outer edge black along her flanks, arms, thighs, and legs. Her tail coiled around her right leg as her hat slid forward, shielding her eyes. Tossing the item in her right claw into her maw, she moved into the tigress for a kiss.

Zig accepted the kiss, feeling the maw press against her lips as the dragon woman tasted quite...welcoming. What was thought to be fiery breath, was instead sweet, cinnamony flavor with a faint scent of vodka. A long tongue pushed into the hybrids maw, with Zig's own going to meet it, tangling quickly her own thick and wide tongue with the long, slender one of her captor. Pulling against the chains, the tigress hybrid would push into the other woman, putting her renowned tongling skills to the test, finding the dragoness to be just as capable. The longer, reptilian tongue quickly wound against Zigs own as the feline purred into the embrace, wishing her hands were free to get a nice grip on this busty, built woman as she felt those large tits press into her own, easily dwarfing the felines with their girth as she gasped out from the pressure on her front, yet kept her tongue dueling with the other womans. Slowly, an object was pushed towards Zigs mouth as the feline felt it at the tip of her tongue, sliding to meet it. Zigzag felt the orb against her rough tongue, tasting a strange sweetness about its smooth exterior, pressing against it as the dragon woman tried to push it into the hybrids maw. With a stroke of her rough tongue, Zig felt a part of the skin peel suddenly, letting a drip of the objects juices fall against her tongue. She tasted a sudden sourness, that turned incredibly sweet, surprising the felines senses as her tongue reeled back, allowing the dragoness to deposit the fruity tasting orb into the felines maw before the dragoness pulled away, drawing a bridge of saliva. Zig found the sweet thing between her lips. She licked it again, fluttering her eyes from the souring, that became more potent. It almost tasted like raspberry, but sharp, and very arousing. "Unfh...my captor is a brilliant kisser, do I need to be tied up like this if we're going to do it?" "For now comrade, you do, but you make choice on dat berry in you. Spit it out, and dis adventure is over...but eat it, ????? ? ?????? ???, ????????? ??????? ??? ????? ??????????.

Zig smirked, looking at the dragoness, before she bit down on the fruit, and then it hit. A sharp sour flavour rocked her tastebuds as the feline would jolt from the explosion of ferment, she felt the dragoness upon her, pushing her back as the chain thunked against the metal frame overhead, supporting the weight of the two as the large woman kiss Zig again, feeling that tongue tangling again sharing the sweetness Zig had released before the drakess pulled back, smirking once more, slipping on something she had from her pocket, and putting it on Zig's head.

"Remember your officer cap? You need to wear one cromade before we begin." She'd place it on the felines head, shielding her eyes, and perhaps, keeping the element of suspense as the dragoness slid along the side. Coming around to the back, she pushed into Zig's behind, tugging at the greatcoat she wore with those claws before tearing into it, shredding through the leather as Zig gasped in shock. "Hey now, that's expensive~" Zig whispered as she pushed close to the other woman, inhaling the dragonesses cinnamon scent. Every bit of her body tingled as though it had been heightened by what she had tasted, and every gentle touch was felt two-fold by the aroused feline prisoner.

"Don't vorry, I get new one, better den capitalist pigskin, but dat is if you can handle a real officer of the Red Army" the drakess hurred, licking along the earlobe of the feline tigress hybrid.

"I've handled worse," Zig responded, hissing while biting her lower lip "I'm sure I can handle whatever Soviet-era gulags would throw at me."

Chuckling, the dragon female drew a metal object from her coat, it was long, a glint of metal caught the light as the hybrid twitched some. Zig had thought the object was a rifle, but rather, it was a giant metal dildo, bearing some shape to an AK-47, but smoothed to a single long rod attached to a rifle stock. The mere sight tingled between Zig's legs as she went wide eye.

"Ooh...my!" she whispered, seeing the 24' steel rod as the drakess smirked wider, bearing her fangs.

"I took a rifle of my homeland, and melted it down to dis thing, perfect for disciplining comrades who not ready to make sacrifice for the motherland." she said, removing the stock as a belt rolled out. The dragoness slid it along her own loins, letting the metal end swat against Zigs backside as the commissar tightened the straps.

"Hrmm, then I'm a bad officer to the motherland, I'm ready to take whatever you can give me."

The dragoness smirked, slipping the rod between Zigs legs with a satisfying swat, the metal was cool to the touch, sending shivers down the feline hybrids spine as Zig squeezed her thighs against the smoothed metal, letting it rub between her womanly slit. Zigzag shivered, feeling the excitement doubled between her legs as she squeezed her thighs around the metal rod, trying to keep it against her hot slit. The drakess responding in kind, gently butting the top against Zig's loins.

"Hrmm, are you already getting aroused, comrade?" The drakess said, pressing herself into the backside of Zig, reaching one of her large taloned hands around and gripping the left breast of the hybrid.

"Oh fu~" Zig said suddenly feeling her nipple groped firmly, the claws digging into her soft flesh as she pressed back into the other woman, the drakess obliging by shoving the dildo further along the wanting woman's cunt.

"Hrmmfh, you are begging for dis already and I haven't even started! <Then I show you how deep this can get.>" "Shut up and speak to me straight you giant lizard, show me what a real commissar can do to a naughty officer!" Zig responded, biting her lower lip as she ground into the larger woman, feeling those massive tits against her backside.

"Dah,if dat is what you want~" the drakess gripped onto the tit of the assaulted breast, pulling the feline closer to her body. Zig would find the scales on the front to be rather smooth, slick and polished, but strangest of all, how warm she was for a reptile. This dragoness was incredibly warm as her tail coiled around Zig's left leg, slipping up to rub against the dildo, pushing it firmly against the hybrids loins and getting another moan from the trapped woman in response before the dragoness slid her toy back forcefully, grinding against the outer lips and exposed clit. Back and forth, Zig rode atop the length, rubbing herself along it's smooth exterior as she huffed each time the direction changed, her eyes lidded, the sensation of the metal, the occasional change from smooth to a riveted texture drove her wild as it would tease her clit perfectly, tapping it along the rivets or lines along the exterior while still slipping smoothly between her legs.

Coming to a pause, the drakess withdrew her dildo from between Zigs legs as the feline arched her head back with a disappointed huff.

"Hrmmfh, is that it, I thought real commissars lasted longer?" Zig asked, still ready to go as the drakess pinched the hybrids nipple again.

"Nyet, dat is merely a warmup." The commissar whispered, slipping the dildo between the hybrids legs again, only this time aiming the head towards the woman's nethers "it's time for real fun to be had."

She'd ram it in firmly, pressing hips right into the backside of Zig's own behind, slapping them up against her and pulling back, pushing and pulling her rod inside and out of the hybrids swollen cunt. Zig would try her best to keep her moans down, not wanting to give the satisfaction to this giant woman as she bit her lip harder, teeth bearing as she squeezed her thighs, trying to lock her grip around that metal rod, but finding it was becoming hotter and hotter with each thrust inside her. Gasping out, Zig tugged against the chains as the dragoness pulled her close to her large body, squeezing those tits against the felines backside as she plunged her dildo deeper. Zig let out another gasp, arching her back as the giant rod moved in, then pulled back, then in again, over and over, the pace getting faster and faster as the smooth metal became slick with Zigzags pre-fem juices.

"Hehe, take it all comrade, you have much to answer for." The drakess whispered, licking along the felines ear as Zig huffed out hotly from the sudden nibble and warm breath against her fur.

"Y-yes...yes Komissar, I have much to answer for~" she whined, arching her head into the big breasts of the woman behind her as the giant dragoness pounded faster and faster, tweaking Zigs nipple again and again as she'd slap the hybrids ass with her free hand.

Faster and faster the commissar went, pounding zigs womanhood with the giant metal rod, hotter and hotter it became that Zig had to finally let out a shrill moan, panting with each slick rut into her, crying out louder and louder as her body quivered with excitement, tugging at the chains, wanting to fondle herself from the incredible arousal coursing through her system. Her antics instantly drove the dragoness to slam up right into Zigs confines. Grinding right against the hybrids backside, the dragoness hurred low as she'd pull the feline, stuffing the rod deep inside her as Zigzag gasped, eyes going wide as she was hilted, saliva drooling from her mouth as she came from the excitement. The shock rippling across the feline's body as she slumped against the larger woman, panting out hotly as she looked back, the bigger female's eyes seen for a moment below the cap as she smirked and embraced Zig in a kiss as the feline closed her eyes.


An alarm broke the silence as Zigzag opened her eyes. Looking at the time, she slowly rose her upper body, looking at her surroundings. She was back in her bedroom, but how could that be? had everything before been just a dream?

Groggily, the feline hybrid rubbed her eyes, moving her hand slowly to tap the snooze, but it brushed against something as she pulled it back instantly. Something smooth and cold on her nightside table shocked her senses as she looked in surprise. There was a bottle of vodka, opened, with a shot glass beside it, and the image of the label red "Red Commissar" with a picture of the drakess from her dream, holding a raspberry in her claw while flexing with a big grin. Zig picked up the bottle, the faint whiff of vodka with cinnamon reached her nose as she licked the top, finding the same taste from before as she chuckled, looking at it.

"Maybe it was a dream, but I wouldn't mind meeting you again if that is a possibility...Kommissar. Next time, the drink is on me."