Last Rights
Hey hey hey again people. The second story I've written is below.
Got part of the idea for it (let's say 1%) from watching the Green Mile,
the other 99% from my own imagination. Names have been "borrowed"
from various places, except for one. Anyone with "Day" in their name,
unless otherwise stated, is my creation, so if you wanna use him, mail me.
I'll probably say yes, just to get a kick out of seeing what you'll write.
This story isn't intended for minors, so if there IS anybody under age and
reading, QUIT NOW BEFORE I CALL OUT MINTY!!!
Anyways, on to the story!!!
Last Rights By Day-Mo
Morning. It had finally arrived. Mina watched from behind the bars of
her prison as the sun rose over the horizon. The last sunrise she would
ever witness.
"In this lifetime at least," she thought. This was no comfort to her, she
knew what was coming, and the fact that she was being punished for the
crime of love, that was what bothered her most.
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The goverments of the world were crumbling. No country had power.
Cities were desolate and in ruin. The world's council made a last ditch
effort to save the world from the people who shaped it. They decided to
place their fates in the hands of God. Thus the Religousect was born.
At first, life seemed to return to normal, cities were rebuilt, repopulated,
and so, reborn. Economic stability returned, and people resumed the
lives that they had once thought lost to them.
But then a revolutionist became the leader of the Religousect.
He started the begining of the changeover. Nivek, that was his name.
The one who started it all. When he took power, he demanded that the
teachings of God were taken more seriously. The ten commandments
were placed as the basis for this. Any crime was considered an act against
God, and thus the offender was seriously punished. People began to
disappear, streets began to empty, and countries lost half their
population to the ridiculous laws.
Stealing was punishable by death.
Sex was made legal, but only to procreate. The only love that was
permitted was that of a male and a female, any homosexual activity was
also punishable by death.
And that was what brought Mina to the present moment.
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Mina was brought out of her memories by the sound of her cell door
opening. Her warden had come to collect her. Over the past weeks,
she had built up a friendship with him. He had comforted her when
she was sad, made her laugh when she was in need of happiness.....
He had been a true friend to her.
"Hello Mina," Day said. "You know why I'm here."
"Is it time already?" she murmured. "I say that, but it's seemed
like this morning has lasted a lifetime....."
"I know, but it's time....." Day replied sadly.
He took her by the hand and led Minadown the corridor to her fate.
"I just want to know one thing," she asked solemnly.
"What made you take this position?"
"I-It's not that I w-wanted to," Day stammered, surprised by the question.
"I was drafted."
"Drafted? What do you mean?"
"Well," Day answered, "All single virgins were drafted by the Church for
enforcement purposes....."
Mina remained silent. "How could he still be a virgin?!", she thought.
At 6'2", and with a sleek, slender figure, Day was no male to be sniffed at.
If she hadn't found her true love first, he could have been the one, maybe.
But she knew that once Nivek's enforcers had found you and
"recruited" you, then you could never fall in love. It was simply put,
forbidden.
"Damn you Nivek, Goddamn you!" she thought.
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The sun was shining hard down on the field where they lay.
They had been lying there for hours, enjoyed the warmth of the sun in
each other's arms. They loved one another with a passion that most
envied. Mina and Tomoyo.
"This is perfect, no-one around for miles..." Tomoyo whispered.
"It's like we have the whole world to ourselves, our own personal
playground..."
Mina looked towards her mate lovingly, a seductive stare that was
reserved for Tomoyo, and Tomoyo alone. With a body of silky tan
fur that was softer than that of a new baby's skin, Tomoyo had a body
that most foxes would envy. Mina had known from the moment she'd
laid eyes on her that she was the one, her feelings for Tomoyo beyond
any level she had felt before. She had been her best friend through
high school and college, but Mina had felt something on a deeper
level. It wasn't until their final semester that she had found out that
Tomoyo felt the same way. From then on the two were inseperable,
only showing their true feelings in private, so as their love was not to
be revealed.
"Mina?"
Mina opened her eyes to see Tomoyo looking back at her.
"Remember this moment always..."
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A sharp tap on the shoulder brought Mina back to reality. She had been
daydreaming, her only escape from what she knew was about to come,
and had awoken to see someone whom she hadn't seen in years.
"Long time no see, sis..." said the figure before her.
Mina only stared, her mouth wide open in shock.
"Oh come on, don't I even get a hello?" he joked.
"Matthew!!! What the hell are you doing here?!"
"Guess who got "recruited"....." he said sadly.
"Oh...Matthew, I'm so sorry..."
A small tear ran down his left cheek.
"Don't cry Matthew, everything's going to be alright..."
Matthew raised his head and looked straight into his sister's eyes.
"If only you knew that it wasn't, that I....."
Matthew thought the words, but even though only he could hear
them, he couldn't bring himself to finish them.
He knew what he had to do.....
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Midnight. They lay together under the glow of the full moon. Tomoyo had
wrapped the covers around Mina, as long as her fur was, she still felt the cold
a little more than everyone else.
"Tomoyo?" said Mina.
"What is it, my forever?" Tomoyo replied softly.
"Do you think it will ever end? The Church's rule, I mean. Will we ever be able
to live without fear? This was not God's way, not to be scared of life. God would
want us to embrace it, free from persecution for what we are....."
Tomoyo wrapped her arms around Mina, holding her tightly. Mina's long golden
fur felt so good against her own. She savoured this moment, then spoke.
"Mina my love, it doesn't matter if the Church does rule forever or if freedom is
only a heartbeat away, what matters is that I love you, you love me, we love
each other, and no-one, not even God herself, can ever stop me from loving you."
That was all the reassurence that Mina had needed. She broke her love's embrace,
turned around, leaned in towards Tomoyo and gently pressed her lips against her
partners. Tomoyo responded by opening her lips slightly and brushing her tongue
against Mina's teeth. The warm feeling that Mina had experienced many times
before had returned once more, and she fully embraced Tomoyo, opening her
muzzle wide to allow access to dance tongues.
They kissed for an eternity, their lips never parting, until Tomoyo took the
initiative. She broke away, and began to lay butterfly kisses on Mina's neck,
slowly working around to her front, and started sucking gently on her right
breast. Mina gasped as Tomoyo's tongue traced circles around her nipple.
She had done this before, but Tomoyo's previous words had heightened her
expectations of the orgasm that she knew was coming. Mina's breaths got deeper
and louder as Tomoyo's left hand worked magic on her other breast, while her
right grazed the inside of her thighs. "Tomoyo..." was all that Mina could manage,
her head tilted back in sheer ecstacy.
"Shhh......" Tomoyo whispered. "I know..."
Tomoyo stopped teasing Mina, and brought her right hand to Mina's sensitive jewel.
Slowly, she glided her fingers in a figure of eight pattern around Mina's opening.
Tomoyo left her head's previous perch, and made it's way down to the inside of Mina's
legs, stopping to plant soft, loving kisses on her stomach. "You smell so good," Tomoyo
cooed, "Like peaches and cream..."
Mina smiled a dirty little grin. "If I smell so good, I'll bet you can't wait to find out what
I taste like..."
"Oh I wasn't going to wait, I was just about to....."
With that, Tomoyo leaned in and stroked her area with the tip of her tongue. Mina shook
as the familiarity of her mate's touch engulfed her in pleasure. Tomoyo nuzzled into Mina,
inhaling deeply, savouring the musk of her lover. Mina was in heat, there was no denying
it, but where a man could fulfil one part, a woman could triple that. The softest of touches,
where to kiss, how much pressure to apply.....Tomoyo pushed these thoughts out of her
mind as she focused on bringing Mina to orgasm. She soon found Mina's clit, and resumed
the suckling she had began on her partner's nipple.
"Ah.....oh God.....please don't let this end so soon," Mina thought. But what she once had
been thinking had now become lost in a mist of lust and passion. Her only concern now was
to climax, all other concerns had temporarily disappeared. She moved her hands to the back
of Tomoyo's head, preparing herself for what was coming.
Tomoyo recognized this signal all too well, and gently, but firmly, inserted a finger inside of
Mina. Gradually she built up a steady rythm, before introducing another. Tomoyo started to
run her tongue up and down Mina's clit, attempting to bring her best friend's pleasure to an
explosive finish.
She needn't having worried however, as Mina's stifled screams of ecstacy were telling Tomoyo
all she needed to know. Mina had been standing on the very edge of an orgasm for what
seemedlike a moment of immortality, as though her pleasure was everlasting, but the
combination of Tomoyo's fingers and tongue had killed the deathless satisfaction and had now
given birth to the ultimate zenith, the being who had all power, and yet left you feeling in
complete control, the orgasm. Mina bathed in it's warm, comforting glow as Tomoyo lapped at
her juices. When the beast had returned to the mists from which it came, Mina pulled Tomoyo
back up to face and, using her skilled tongue, gently cleaned her love's face. Tomoyo reciprocated
by passionately kissing her mate, then snuggling down into her chest before falling asleep.
Mina was just drifting off, still hazy in her orgasm's wake, when she thought she heard
Tomoyo whisper something.
"Peaches.....and cream....."
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The sound of a door opening jolted Mina awake again. She realised that the Priest had
arrived before her to read Mina her last rights.
"My child, is there anything you wish to declare before God as your final moments
approach?"
"Yes Father," Mina replied, "but I do not know if God will accept what I wish to pray....."
The Priest took Mina's hands in his own. He looked her deep in the eyes before he
spoke again.
"My dear, if you truly believe what your heart tells you is right, then God will accept
your proclamation as it was meant to be."
A single tear rolled down Mina's cheek. The Priest brushed it away with his thumb.
"Don't worry my dear," he whispered, "Soon you will be with her....."
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They had to stop, they couldn't run forever. Somehow, the Religousect had found out
their secret. Unknown to them, they had been followed for a while now. They had been
suspected of being in love, and they were being hunted. Now nothing else mattered,
just their survival. But now it was over. They had been caught. Tomoyo put up a
fight. Mina had pleaded her to stop. And strangely enough, she did. But it was not of
her own free will. It was of the soldiers. And the bullet that had penatrated Tomoyo's
heart. She dropped to the floor without as much as a whisper. Mina watched as her love's
body fell onto the cold hard ground. And with that, Tomoyo was gone. No kiss, no
final goodbye, no "I love you," just a short sharp, finish that was the death of not only
Tomoyo, but the death of Mina's reason for continuing to breathe. She screamed Tomoyo's
name over and over again, but no amount of calling would bring her back from the place
she has gone to. Then she felt the butt of a rifle to the back of her head.
Everything went black.
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"Ready."
This was it.
Ready or not, Mina's life was about to end.
Matthew's eyes were red from crying. He had been assigned to fire upon his sister.
He had fought long and hard to switch assignment with someone, but in the end,
he realised that if he had been reassigned, he would have his revenge on the bastard
who killed her. It was ironic that the older of the two would outlive the younger, but
irony was a concept wasted on one that must murder family on orders.
"Bastard. Nivek, I WILL kill you, that I promise you....."
But Mina's time had come.
"Aim."
Mina looked up to see who her executor was. Matthew had tried to conseal his face
behind the rifle, but instead locked eyes with his sister. The tears had begun to flow
again. Matthew had understood the words his sister had mouthed to him.
"I love you brother.....make it quick....."
"Fire."
A single line of blue smoke flowed from the end of the barrel and drifted lazily into
the air. The bullet had found it's mark. Matthew dropped the rifle, fell to his knees,
and wept into his hands. He was inconsolable now.
Mina looked down at her chest. Her brother had granted her the thing she had asked
for. She glared at the blood which oozed out of the hole the metal dragon had left.
She could feel the world fading around her. But there was one thing that remained.
A reassuring sound that comforted Mina as she slumped on the cold sterile floor.
"My forever.....come to me.....together once more......for eternity....."
"Tomoyo....."
Then she was gone.
*fin*
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So.....whatcha think? I have to admit, I still think that I'll never get the hang of this,
but as long as my buddies ask me for parts in a story, then I'll have to knock these
out, won't I? If you wanna send me any criticism, good or bad, E-mail me at:-
Anyways, Day-Mo (that's me!!!) has one last question for you all.....
If a man says something, and no woman hears it.....
.....Is he still wrong?