DARREN GOES TO A CONCERT

Story by McLeod on SoFurry

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DARREN GOES TO A CONCERT

Written by McLeod

NOTE:

THIS STORY IS JUST AN ATTEMPT AT SOMETHING BIGGER AND (HOPEFULLY) BETTER. I DO NOT PLAN ON MAKING THIS INTO A SERIES.

"Darren, get your ass down here before we're late!" Xi called from downstairs, his deep voice muffled through the closed door of the bathroom.

Okay, okay, Mr. Impatient One, I'm COMING! I thought as I pulled the hot ceramic straightener through my platinum-blond hair, the usually wavy length instantly flattened the searing plates. I made one pass with the cosmetic appliance, then another... And done! My newly straightened hair fell gracefully in front of my shoulders, the cream-pink tips resting just below my clavicle bones. I smiled as I combed my long bangs behind my left ear with a clawed finger.

I looked really good, as I should: I mean, it had taken me an hour and a half to get ready for the upcoming concert that my friend and I were going to tonight. But the duration of preparation meant little to, for I enjoyed the process of it all: the bathing, the choice of clothing, the application of makeup, and all of the other little (yet drastically important) steps that turned me from the commonplace rabbit to a stunning femme-boy.

But tonight wasn't just about me wanting to look good for my own personal pride - no - I wanted to look good for the person Xi and I would be seeing preform tonight, an artist that has captured my heart and imagination with their anti-norm lyrics:

The Queen of the Internet. Jeffree Star.

I could go on and on about my adoration for the pink-haired, androgynous male, but presently I was under a time constraint: the concert started in exactly twenty minutes. So, I'll make this rundown of my homo-concert-going outfit quick and as descriptive as I possibly can in the time allotted to me.

I was wear the bright-pink, low cut, graphic T-shirt with the words "I'M IN LOVE (WITH A KILLER.)" printed in bubbly letters across the front. The back of the shirt had been systematically slashed ten times, each horizontal gash in the fabric revealing my white fur beneath.

Upon my hips I wore a pair of white, form-fitting short-shorts with splatters of neo-pink paint splashed randomly across the denim material. Passing through the loops at the top was a white leather belt with silver-blue studs, the hue of the mental protrusions blending nicely with my shirt and hair. Blue + Pink + White = Good Color Combination. Elementary color combinations.

But besides the hair (which was fabulous), the clothes (which were epically fabulous), and the shoes (knee-high stiletto boots: blue-dyed leather: $$$), the one aspect of this entire ensemble that truly filled me with excitement were the pair the FX Lenses that I wore upon my eyes. The contacts' hue was an almost-white, ice blue. They gave my eyes a quality of fierceness and monstrosity that sent shivers down my spine as I stared back at myself in the mirror. A thin ring of black had been painted around the circumference of the SynLenses, further adding to the homo-monster-punk-rocker look.

I was very pleased with my choices.

"DARREN EMBER, GET DOWN HERE NOW OR I'LL COME UP THERE AND DRAG YOUR LANKY ASS OUT THE DOOR MYSELF! YOU HAVE FIVE SECONDS BEFORE I START CLIMBING THESE STAIRS!" Xi shouted.

That snow leopard was ever the drama king. *rolls eyes* But I loved him to death and wanted to tell him so...

With a final glance at myself in the mirror, I exited the bathroom and clomped down the stairs, my high-heeled boots digging into the carpet.

Never being the one of much grace (or balance, for that matter), once I got to the last step, the heel of my right boot got caught in the weave of the carpeted stair, sending me flying forward.

I would have broken my nose (and/or my neck) had it not been for Xi standing right there by the last step. Right as I tipped forward, my life flashing before my eyes, knowing that when I landed I was going to have to get major nose surgery to correct my shattered nostrils, two strong pairs of paws caught me under my arms, my face inches from hitting the wooden floor.

Xi pulled me to my feet, my heart pounding so hard against my sternum I thought it would break through the bone. I gave him a weak smile as my body shook from the near-death experience. Please, let me wrap my arms around you and kiss you and kiss you and kiss you forever and ever, my dear friend...

The feline rolled his eyes at me and let out a huge breath. "I told you not to wear those stupid things." He said, pointing at my Death Trap boots.

"Oh, shut up, Xi." I grumbled. Then, "Thanks for not letting me break my neck, though." He smiled and moved some hair out of my face. My pulse quickened and my heart beat accelerated at his nonchalant gesture. Oh, just give me a minute alone with you...

His silver eyes shove in the fading light that was coming through the door-windows. His smile revealed pearl-white teeth. The urge to jump on him and molest his mouth with my tongue ran like a bullet through my instincts and thoughts. "Darren, how long have we been friends? Huh? How many times have I had to save you from busting your ass in some utterly ridiculous manner? Go on, say it, Mr. Prideful."

I ground my teeth together and stuck my tongue out at him, totally a childish move, but one they didn't require me to admit my faults. I couldn't let him know just how weak I really was without him to guide me from day to day. "Come on, Furball, we're going to be late."

He chuckled and held the front door open for me, a smirk plastered like a neon sign upon his maw. Ohhhhhh, how that expression simply irked me to no end! I loved hated when he looked at me that way.

Once the door was locked behind us, we made sure we had our wallets, I.D., and cell phones, and then we both piled into his small, red, Kia Rio. We backed out of the drive way, pulled onto the main road, and were off to see the Pink-Haired Diva in all his glitter-enhanced glory.

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TWO HOURS LATER...

As Jeffree Star sang his hypnotic tune, I screamed along with my idol, Xi right beside me. My eternal guard and protector. Strobe lights flashed to the beat of the song:

"You taste like heaven baby... A brand new craving lately... Surround me - I'm drowning! Let me hit this - so delicious!"

The people surrounding us were just as excited as I was, all full of energy and fan-pride. Like me, many Furs were dressed eccentrically in shades of pink, blue, white, purple, black, and red. Many hand mini L.E.D. lights sewn into their clothing. I was impressed by their resolve. The light thing was actually a really nice touch.

Up on stage the King of Pink sang his heart out to the crowd, the other band members gyrating as they conducted their instruments to produce the techo-filled rhythm of the song. Jeffree looked epic all by himself, the human wearing fishnet, chains, and lots, and lots of pink. His vibrant pink hair was tied back into a ponytail, the length swishing behind his head.

I was transfixed by the raw talent and beauty of the female-looking man up on that stage, the way his voice flowed through my body simply turned me into his faithful listener. I raised my arms over my head as my hips swayed and swished the the beat of the song. All around me there was much head banging, and paws raised to the air in the sign of "ROCK."

Then, to my sudden surprise, a pair of large paw wrapped themselves around my waist and pulled me backwards into a muscled chest. I could help but yip as the hard muscle pressed firmly into my back.

"Enjoying yourself, buddy?" Xi whispered into my ear. (Okay, he actually shouted it because of how loud the music was, but for the sake of argument, he whispered.)

My brain seemed to lockup, my heart momentarily halting. I couldn't even turn to look at the snow leopard as his meaty paws held me tight. My body went stock-still. Was this really happening? Was it?

"Keep dancing, Darren. Come on, loosen up." He commanded, his hot breath misting across my earlobe and cheek. My body unfroze and brain continued to process information.

I was finally able to speak, turning my head to the side so that the feline would be able to hear me. "W-What are you doing, Xi?" Of course I stammered like a frightened leveret in front of him.

I felt the odd sensation of his cold nose rub against the back of my neck, pressed into my hair. He breathed into my hair as he responded. "Dancing, Darren. I'm dancing with you. Give it a try."

Like a slave, I obeyed. I focused as hard as I could on the music (which was damn hard to do) and let my body act on the gyrations of the notes. My body began to twist and glide to the electronic sounds. My denim covered rear was grinding into the big cat's crotch area. A blush formed on my cheeks, probably turning my white fur to a hearty shade of pink.

Xi murred into my ear. "There ya go, babe. Just let go and enjoy yourself."

So be it. I allowed my carefully-built barriers to crumble and fall, the chunks of lust-preventing stone dematerializing into subconscious dust. I felt the flow of the music course through my very soul as the I released myself from all restraint.

For the longest time, I've wanted to feel the cat's body pressed against mine - his heat warming me, melting away the ice tomb I keep my heart locked in. Now I did feel that, and it felt wonderful. fabulous. great. amazing. lovely. superb. terrific. right.

And so I danced, letting the purest parts of my spirit take over.

"You make me feel... ...so fierce!"

Xi gripped my hips as I ground myself against his crotch, his own body dancing to the music, in time with mine. His massive thighs pressed up in between mine, spreading my legs, his footpaws in control of mine. Hell, his entire body was in control of mine.

I had no complaints.

I almost fainted when he teethed at the back of my neck, his sharp fangs scraping (gently) against my furred-flesh. The connection between his teeth and my skin sent bolts of electro-passion sparking through my body, energizing my heart to beat fast against my rib-cage. His fangs barely touched my neck and I was already swooning under the gentle pricks. He growled softly as I let out a shuddering moan.

"You like that, Darren?" He asked, and, "How long have you been resisting me, my friend?"

I could only moan as his teeth bit a level harder into my sensitive, nerve-filled flesh. His question floated around in my hazy mind, though, and I tried to focus on that. How long had I been wanting him for my own?

Answer: Years now. Five to be exact. Ever since we turned thirteen-years-old, I have wanted the snow leopard to be my one-and-only soul mate. I have no explanation as to why, except that Xi has always been there for me. He's always protected me from the bullies who liked to tease me because of my femininity and homosexuality. The cat was always the one to pick me up if I fell - always the one to make my blue days happy ones. The cat was part of me, he existed in my very soul.

"Take it off! Take it off! Don't stop! Don't stop!"

"I've been wondering when I'd get to have you all to myself. I've wanted this for so long." He growled into my ear, gently nibbling the length of the long, white thing.

I groaned and pressed myself firmer against him, wrapping my arms behind me and around his expansive back, holding us together, our bodies swaying to the music. His soft lips pressed against my jaw, and moved down, so slowly and sensual.

Those warm lips glided down the length of my throat, eliciting soft moans form me. His simple ministrations were like a drug to me, one of which I was eternally going to be addicted to, should we last that long. I had a feeling that, after tonight, we would be spending a whole lot of time together.

Jeffree rushed to the edge of the stage, bedazzled microphone in hand, his inch-long nails glittering in the neon lights. His ruby-studded lips sparkled as they formed the words he sang, his bright-pink hair swishing beautifully. This wo-man was a true artist and an idol to so many. I thank the Gods for creating him.

The Diamond Crowned Queen reached out over the stage's lip and out towards the crowd, many paws and hands straining to connect with the gorgeous man's hand. I would have rushed forward, weaving in between people for my chance to actually feel the touch of my idol, but I was kept in place by Xi, the snow leopards arms firmly wrapped around my waist. His mint-filled breath wafted around my head, making my brian go all fuzzy.

"You look better, Darren, than him. You've always looked prettier." Xi whispered sensually into my ear, sending shivers down my spine.

I whispered back, tapping my tail against his jean-covered crotch. "And you've always looked handsome to me."

He laughs. "No, not 'handsome,' Darren: sexy. You think I look 'sexy'. Say it. I want to hear you." He bites at the side of my exposed throat. My knees begin to tremble with the effort of holding me up.

"You're my prescription baby, I'll take you, now take me. Outlast me, I'm crashing! Heartsick passion, forever lasting!"

I moaned out my respond on a withering tongue: "I've always thought you've been sexy, Xi. Always."

Xi rubbed his furred cheek up against mine, his claws rippling down my fabric-clad sides. It tickled. I squirmed and giggled.

(Fail!)

The silver, black, and tan cat just laughed with me over the boom of the bass and the blast of the speakers. He rested his chin on my shoulder, wrapping his arms around my middle and just held me close as the song neared its end. This was the last song of the night, and so far it was turning out to be a splendid one for closure.

Xi said something then that utterly took my breath away and numbed my brian, the words like a mysterious drug that invaded my consciousness.

Xi [in a low, predatory growl]: "You just wait till I get you home, Dares... You and me are gonna have lots of fun. You'll see, baby."

"Your so sweet, but you gotta know something. I want it, need it, gotta gotta have it my way! You make me feel... ...so fierce!"

With that, the song ended, the lights dimmed, and the world changed for me forever in just one word...

...Xi.

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I don't remember coming home.

I don't remember unlocking my front door and stepping into my dark and quiet home.

I don't remember walking up the stairs...

My mind came back into focus the moment we reached my bedroom and Xi slammed me up against the wall, his lips and fangs attacking my exposed throat. I clutched at his shoulders, my blunt claws digging into the fabric of his shirt. My breath caught in my throat as he chewed eagerly - carefully - on my life-sustaining jugular vein. My blood felt like lava as it course through me, Xi's razor teeth the catalyst to my red matter's rise in temperature.

His strong paws gripped me under my ass and hefted me up the wall, my legs held up on either side of his hips. I wrapped my high-heel-boots around his waist, pulling him against my body as his lips traveled up my neck and jaw. I threw my arms around his muscled neck and gasped as his fangs slid across my jaw bone. This felt like heaven.

"Have I ever told you how hot you look when you dress like a chick, Darren?" Xi panted into my ear, his tongue lapping at my blushing cheek. I shivered at the sensation.

Holding me up with one paw, the snow leopard reached past me and twisted the doorknob, pushing the door open, and carrying me into my room. He kicked the door shut with his footpaw with a SLAM! The sound echoed in my head as we crossed the room, reaching my bed. He leaned forward, my legs still wrapped around him, and laid me upon the bed, his body a muscular cage surrounding me.

He leaned up and, in a quick succession, removed my and his shirt. The cool air of the A.C. wafted over my barren chest, my nipples hardening as the air collided with them. My blond/pink hair laid out on the bed all around my head. Xi grinned down at me, a hunger in his silver eyes that I've never before seen. With a menacing growl, he lunged at my chest.

"NGGGGHHHH!" I moaned loudly at his rough, sandpapery tongue assaulted my stiff nipples. The feeling was electric, a rush of blood instantly cascading to my dick. The bulge that formed in my tight short-shorts was (and I'm not being egotistic here, at all) huge. The zipper looked as if it was going to burst at any moment.

I dug my fingers into the leopard's short, curly black hair, my back arching a bit as his feline tongue twirled and swirled around my nips. When his tongue was lapping at one of them, his paw has tweaking the other, simultaneous pleasure rushing through me from my sensitive protrusions. I gasped and moaned, totally under the predator's control.

These teasing went on for an eternity, a dark spot of pre-cum staining through the white denim fabric. Xi's crotch ground into my clothed rear, intensifying the erection(s) pressed between us, HIS and mine. I felt his cock straining to break free of its jean-clad prison. So much heat and musk was flowing from the adonis's body, so much that I began to get light-headed. The musk smelled wonderful, its unique odor pungent and pleasing.

It was at that moment, for the first time in my life, that his lips pressed themselves against mine. I went wild. I wrapped my arms tightly around his neck and locked him into a lover's embrace, my mouth hungry for his. He responded just the same.

I pushed my tongue in between the sharp teeth, colliding with the hot and moist ribbon of flesh that was his tongue. Our tongues danced together, the style: Tango. I groaned into his open maw, his tongue prodding the roof of my mouth and the back of my teeth. He rested his upon his elbows, which were on either side of my head. We kissed with absolute abandon, overly enjoying the feel, taste, and sounds coming from our make-out session.

"I can't that it anymore, Darren. I need you. Now." Xi growled as his paws began fumbling with my shorts. I pressed up against them and just let it happen.

Ziiiiiiiiiiiipppp!

The long, loud, and drawn out sound of my zipper sliding down filled the the room, our bodies breathless and shivering. Xi lifted my legs and yanked the short off my body. He tossed them into a random corner. His eyes gleamed with lust as he stared down at the pink bikini underwear I was wearing, the entire front of it soaked with my pre. He thumbed at the little white bows sewn into the sides. A smile passed his maw.

"How cute..."

SHHHHRRRREEEDDDDDD!

I gasped out loud, more in surprise than pleasure, as my bikini was ripped from my thighs. The cat gripped my ruined underwear in a tight-clenched paw and held it to his nose, breathing in deeply. A shuttering breath wracked his god-like form as he let the breath out, the carbon dioxide filled with my scent.

His lust-filled silver eyes locked onto my raised rabbithood. His mouth began to water. He moved like lightening.

"FUCKKKKK!" I screamed as his hot maw engulfed my shaft, taking me all the way to the hilt. The big cat moaned with ecstasy as he sucked the seminal fluid from my 10-inch dick. I spasmed under him, my hips bucking up into his moist maw, my fingers gripping the sheets.

Xi groaned around my thick rod. "Damn, Dares, you taste fucking amazing. Simply. Fucking. Amazing."

Just like his maw around my dick felt. Simply. Fucking. Amazing.

His black-haired head bobbed up and down in quick motions, causing me to gasp and whither under him. His claws were currently teasing my nipple again, adding to the overall level of pleasure. I couldn't last muck longer in this...condition.

"Xi! I c-cant take much m-more of this, mmmmm!" I stuttered, my heart beat flying out my chest and smashing through the ceiling from how hard it was beating. I doubted hummingbirds could beat their winds as fast as my vital organ currently was.

I almost cried when his maw vanished form around my aching cock, the cool air sending chills down my spine. He was on his knees and between my legs in a matter of heartbeats.

Then, a something I've never felt before began. It was amazing, fabulous - above and beyond fingering yourself.

His tongue was massaging my tailhole.

"OH GODS, XI, DON'T STOP!" I screamed and undulated upon the surface of the bed, my toes curling and my claws beginning the rip through the sweat-damp sheets as I grasped at them for dear life.

Holy. Fuck. This. Felt. Amazing.

(And that's just a mild expression, at most.)

He chuckled as his rough tongue did its job, and did it well. Each revolution of that gritty piece of flesh felt like my body was being caressed by a thousand pleasure-probes.

Xi said something to me then that made the blush rush back to my cheeks (not that it had gone away): "Your old man told me you've been taking some long showers here lately, Dares. Why is that, hmmm?"

Oh, Gods...what else did my dad talk about with him?! I was going to kill my father, I swear.

All I could do was gasp out ("Ugh!") as my best friend continued licking and slobbering and smearing his tongue all around my entrance. The feeling was almost euphoric in nature. Hell, it was just that!

Now it was I that needed him. "Xi, p-please..."

He looked up over my saliva-slicked boner: "Hmmm?"

"N-No more teasing, Xi. T-Take me. Please, just take me n-now." I begged, looking at him with my artificial ice-blue eyes reflecting in his natural silver ones. They showed nothing but wanton and ferrel need.

Ours both did.

"What do you want, Darren? Tell me what it is you need." Xi whispered, reaching up and giving my cock a (toe curling) stroke. I moaned softly, my head becoming light with sexual pleasure again.

I willed myself to speak, my voice trembling with anxiety and embarrassment and unending pleasure. "I need to feel you inside me, Xi. Mate with me...please."

He smiled, his white teeth flashing in the darkness of the room. "As you wish."

ONE SECOND: My legs are pulled into the air and fall to rest upon his shoulders.

TWO SECONDS: He is rubbing lubricant all over his massive cat cock, his jeans long ago removed and disregarded. My eyes grow wide as I see the enormity of his piece.

THREE SECONDS: His large finger is pressing into me, spreading my hole, preparing it for something much, MUCH larger. I groan and beg in a little kid voice for him to please fuck me. I need this to happen. I've waited for years and years for this moment.

NOW: I felt it press against my ring of (now loosened) muscle. It felt so large (which it was), so hot (which it was), and so damn good as it demanded entry into my virgin ass. His breathing was slow, steady, and full of lust. Mine was fast, erratic, and full of want. We completed one another, him and I. The Lovers' Puzzle.

"Nnnnnnnnnh!" I gasped out as his thick cockhead began to edge forward, expanding me. Enlarging me. Stretching me open to be filled with his Love.

So fuckin' good...

I grunted in pain as the head popped! inside. Xi stopped moving and gently massaged my thighs, his gorgeous eyes looking down at me with concern. He wouldn't move until he knew I was ready. I had to say so, though.

I waited another 30-seconds before nodding for him to go ahead. "K-Keep going."

In sunk another inch of his monster cock. Again he waited.

I nodded. He continued.

Go. Stop. Wait. Nod.

Go.

Stop.

Wait.

Nod.

Another inch, another inch, and another. Eleven in all.

This process kept going and going until he was, finally, all the way in, the tip of his large dick brushing against my prostate, but not so that it produced pleasure. Not yet, at least.

"How you doing, D?" Xi asked, his voice so deep and sexy, his eyes so full of passion and need that only I could appease.

I smiled up at him, my body so relaxed. "Fucking fantastic, dude." I used my deep voice, and he L-O-V-E-D it.

IN. OUT. Slooooooowly. *smile*

IN. OUT. IN. OUT. A bit faster. *groan*

Now, like a rocker: INOUTINOUTINOUTINOUTINOUTINOUT!!! *SCREAM!*

"OH, FUCK! HARDER, XI! NYAHHH!" I bellowed, the bed squeaking and groaning beneath us as his cathood pummeled my ass like a hyperactive pulsar.

Sweat formed all over our bodies as our lovemaking increased in momentum. Glistening drop of the salty liquI id dripped from my lover's face, soaking my fur and the sheets I was laying on. Xi was grunting and panting, his muscles bulging under his short coat of fur. He truly was the sexiest thing that I've ever seen.

My cock sprayed rivulets of precum all over my stomach and lower-chest, further soaking my already sweat-drenched fur. Xi pounded into me, a living, breathing piston of sex-fury and strength. He eyes were clenched together as his thick meat pushed deeper and deeper into my body, now slamming into the bundle of nerves that was my prostate.

My back arched and I groaned and moaned, undulating spastically under the fabulous kitty cat. "F-Fuck me, Xi! Oh, y-yeah! Ngh! Your cock feels s-so damn good! MMPH!" I cried out to him.

His heavy, tomato-sized balls slapped into my ass with each thrust, the audible slap! slap! slap! slap! egging him to push harder.

Faster.

Deeper.

My mind was completely consumed by his magical body. I knew no time, no space, no location or duration. I only knew that I never wanted this feeling to end. I never wanted to be without my friend, who secretly, like a whisper, became my lover. He was my world now - a world I couldn't imagine existing without Xi in it.

The time was nearing...

The musk filling the room was like a exotic perfume, one that I happily inhaled with all the force my lungs could muster. I reached up and pulled Xi down upon me, his sweaty chest slick against my own. He opened his jaws, fangs bared, and clamped down HARD upon my shoulder.

I yelled in a mix of pleasure and pain, his sharp teeth sending endorphins in to fight against the pain. That acute feeling soon passed as my orgasm crept closer, and closer, and closer. My balls were tightening up, screaming for absolution.

"Xi," I gasped out, his hips continuing their steady bombardments against my ass-cheeks. "I'm about to b-blow, baby." His response was a drastic increase in speed and force, the bed threatening to collapse under us, our lovemaking was so powerful.

"D-Don't hold back on m-me, Dares. Cum for m-me." He grunted out between thrusts, his sharp claws shredding into the bedsheets.

I held him in my arms like a vice as I reached my peak.

I screamed as my orgasm took control over my used and fatigued body.

"I'M C-CUMMINGGGGGGGG!!!" Oh, and how I did.

My back arches up against his chest and my eyes snapped shut as spurt after gooey spurt of rabbitcum fired up into Xi's chestfur, pooling as much as it could before dribbling down and leaking onto my stomach. My cum shot out in the gallons (not really, but it felt like it), the searing spunk warming my already overheated body. My balls pulled so close to my cock I thought they would be sucked into themselves, so strong was my finish.

Xi was not far behind. His breathing was hardly what would be considered "normal," as he grunted like a foghorn. His thick, muscle-bound arms encircled me upon the first explosion of cum.

Now THIS was a feeling that I would never forget: The thick streams of catcum that were being pumped deep inside of my love-tunnel. Each pulse of his cock resulted in a new volley of scorching semen being blown into my ass, filling me rather quickly.

I couldn't hold it all inside. Steamy amounts of jizz squirted out of my bum as Xi kept spasming, his thick cock heated as hell.

"FUCK YEAH!" Xi shouted out as the last wave of hot sperm entered me (only to gush out again from how full my rear was already). With a shuddering breath, my lover collapsed on top of me, panting as if he were stranded in the Sahara desert.

I felt so weak...

So alive.

So loved.

P-e-r-f-e-c-t.

I couldn't keep myself from passing out as my sweaty kitten rested upon me, his heartbeat matching mine.

The last thing I remember was the feeling of his velvety lips kissing my throat.

[: THE END :]

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