Pool Party (Commission)
So https://x.com/Lewd_Quetza had this crazy idea for a commission: Semi-public pool sex baby~
So I just HAD to take up the lewd challenge~ hehe~ Who would say 'no' to the horny?
After beating Writer's Block twice and dealing with the universe once again hating me working on smut, here's an overdue story featuring their cat, Quill getting drunk on catnip and annoying his boyfriend~
Of course said boyfriend will have his "revenge"~
This story is a nice ~4.2K words. Hope ye enjoy!
If ya like what you've read you can commission me here: https://forms.gle/XR3dVibBFzhDfUQh6
“UUUuuggh~ Gaaabe. This line is taking forrrreverrrr…" The lithe, green cat slouched playfully on his giant boyfriend's shoulder. He rested one of his arms over Gabe's chest while the other found itself wrapped the brown cat's waist.
The two cats were sitting in line for a swimming party. The tiny bottom of a cat had found out about this exclusive event from a coworker at his own job. While the coworker had to decline the tickets due to scheduling, Quill had managed to convince the dominant cat to have a date night at the place. Now the couple had to cross one last hurdle… waiting in a line…
Gabe blushed and badly tried to keep a straight face. “Hmph. Smothering me isn't going to make this go faster dork."
Quill chuckled with an unbothered tone. “Hehehe~ Why not use that smooooth mouth of yours and ask the bouncer to let us in early?" The woozy bottom of a cat finished by playfully poking his stud of a boyfriend on the side of his neck.
“Mmmfh~" was the only sound the giant dom could make in response. He cringed and shuddered at the feeling. “I-It doesn't work like that you dick…"
Quill gave him a playfully pouty face. “With that attitude it won't. You gotta belieeeeve in yourself moore dude~"
The brown cat narrowed his eyes and scrunched his nose. A peculiar smell seemed to emanate from his woozy sounding boyfriend. “Bro… Are you on the nip?"
Quill gave the frowning feline a cheeky smile. “Maaaybe~"
Gabe rolled his eyes as a sharp “Next!" was heard in front of him. A stern looking horse stood in front of the two cats. Gabe would reach over his snickering boyfriend's shoulders and began to drag him forwards somewhat.
As the taller feline got close, the bouncer would eye the two up and down. Gabe was wearing a casual pair of black and blue swimming trunks. He read that the dress code was “casual" so casual was what the laid-back cat went with. Quill appeared to be even more modest, a rarity for the cheeky feline. He wore a black two-piece jumpsuit with an intricate yellow jacket. It would have certainly made him stand out but hardly looked swimworthy…
The bouncer seemed to agree with such thoughts but simply shrugged. “Tickets?" He would ask in a stereotypical gruff tone.
Gabe nodded before slowly prying his needy boyfriend off of him. He ignored the green cats sluggish protests as he pulled out two tickets from his pocket. As soon as the stubs of the paper left his hands, his drunken boyfriend clamored onto his shoulder again.
“Heeey look Gabe! He's a horse!" the tiny feline waved happily at them before moving his other hand to poke the brown cat's stomach. “Ya know what that means~"
Gabe's eyes widened ever so briefly before a blush settled onto his “stoic" face. “Uuffhh~ *poke* Ahem! Ignore him sir… *poke* Heee's already started the party in his own mind… Heheh…" He tried to finish with a polite smile but his pesky boyfriend wished to prod him more. “*poke* Uuugh~ F-Fucker…" he would whisper while side-eyeing Quill.
The smirking bottom was having the time of his life right now. His taller half was giving him a look that would make any other sub smile. The horse seemed to raise his eyebrow at the two's interaction. His eyes would widen in slight surprise. “O-Oh right! Weeelll I'm saying Gabe's also got- OOooh~ Aaah~"
Quill lazily turned behind him. He was about to berate the brown feline but he couldn't bring himself too as he found the tall dom's hand firmly massaging his plump ass. He would moan slightly as his pouty face turned into a lewd smirk. “Mmmh~ Finally getting into the game bro?"
Gabe's own blush would redden as he frowned. “More like I'm trying to shut your ass up... You're acting a lot more ballsy from that little amount of catnip you had…"
Quill's pouty face came back before turning into a cheeky grin. “Hmph~ Silence me AAALLL you want! Still won't stop me from doing this!"
The grimacing dom blushed harder as the drunken cat poked and prodded him further. “I'm gonna make you pay for this you fucker…" He gritted his teeth and smiled again at the bouncer. He stifled a few more moans as the bouncer would rip the tickets with the greatest deadpanned expression ever.
“Enter…" he would say, peeling back a pair of curtains to reveal a door.
Gabe nodded before dragging his smirking boyfriend with him. “Come on you fuckhead. I'm gonna DOWSE you in some water REAL quick…"
About 10 minutes later…
As the couple passed through a final set of doors, the smell of wetness combined with alcohol wafted through their muzzles. They would be met with a large dark blue drying carpet that led all the way to a rounded open bar. Within a seemingly well dressed coyote was quick to nod in their direction.
“Good evening my fellow felines! Can I interest you in our lovely special Aquamarine Catnip~!?" He would reach under his desk and pull out a large, intricate bottle as well as a smaller bottle.
Quill's eyes immediately lit up as the smell of catnip hit his nose. He pulled himself off of Gabe and stumbled onto the bar counter. “OOOH! That sounds awesome! I'll take ten!"
“Like hell you can stomach ten dumbass." Gabe leisurely slid between the drunk bottom and the bartender's counter. He turned to the coyote with a smirk. “Don't listen to this idiot, unless it's a dick he doesn't know what he really wants."
The woozy bottom frowned at the taller cat. “Hey! I DO know what I want actually! Aaaand it's NOT cock!" His frown then contorted into a lewd smirk. “Not yet at least~… I WANT MORE BOOZE!"
The bartender simply chuckled at the two's back-and-forth before beginning to mix the drinks. “Heheh~ I was actually referring to you my tall yet slender fellow…"
Gabe raised an eyebrow in slight surprise. “Huh?"
“Heh~ The drink is complimentary and meant for guests who have dressed for the occasion."
Quill's eyes widened. “WHAAAT!?" The bottom then turned back to his tall boyfriend with narrowed eyes.
The brown dom met his look with a smirk. “What? I'm not the dickhead that came here fully dressed in his “cool" jacket for a SWIMMING party."
The coyote raised his hands with an innocent smile. “Heh. Well it's up to you if you would like to give the drink to someone else. I-I just make 'em."
Quill initially kept his pouty face before smirking deviously. “Hmph~ No matter!" He pushed himself off the counter and firmly gripped his clothing.
Gabe would narrow his eyes at the cheeky bottom. He looked TOO confident for this to be good. “The fuck are you planning?"
The green feline would let out a chuckle. “Hehehe~ I'm earning my right for more drinks! Juust sit back and- WATCH!"
As soon as that word left the bottom's mouth, he would deftly toss away both his jacket and undo his jumpsuit. Gabe and the bartender watched in surprise as Quill's modest outfit gave way to a much more provocative bikini suit.
The suit was a similar yellow and black like his jacket and jumpsuit. His “bra" was made of two thin pieces of cloth, allowing almost all of Quill's flat chest to be completely visible. He wore an even thinner pair of yellow panties that held a small but noticeable bulge.
Gabe blushed at the sight as he immediately felt his trunks tighten. His own massive cock bulged in response as he watched his boyfriend's bubble butt sway in full display. “H-Holy shit…"
The bartender would gulp and pull on his bowtie slightly. “O-Oh my~…"
Upon hearing those words the smug cat would twirl around once more before walking back over to the bar and resting his hands on it. “Is the drink feer me now~?"
Coyote maintained eye contact with Quill as he pulled out a new cup and poured the drink mixture in it. “O-On th-the house… Enjoy the-the party~" He blushed and panted heavily as the words stumbled out of his mouth in response to the whole scene.
Quill smirked victoriously as he picked up his drink and began sipping it. He felt the liquid catnip hit him immediately again. The surrounding water seemed to glow brighter. “AAAAAaaah~ Thisss issh sso well made!" His eyes trailed to his cute, tall boyfriend. He laid onto the brown cat. “Mmmf~ Gaaabe~ Yew gotta try this stuff!"
The giant dom breathed heavily as the drunk cat unknowingly pressed himself on his crotch. He slowly wrapped his hands around the bottom's exposed ass. “Y-Yeah? Suure bro…" A lewd smirk would form over his face. “Hold on. Lets cool you down in the water." He would wave off the bartender as he looked across the large pool that surrounded the open bar. There were already a few other patrons swimming around or hanging near the pool with similar drinks to Quill. Gabe needed to find a slightly less populated part of it… “Aaah~ There we go. Come on you shitter let's go swimming."
Quill continued leaning on Gabe as he felt himself be pulled towards one edge of the pool. He giggled as the dominant feline seemed to place a hand firmly around his ass again. “Oooh~ Thaat's one way to convince me~"
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As Gabe reached his chosen corner, he would look around at the other guests on last time. Everyone was still too oblivious or partying too hard to care. The most the cat heard was some whistles in his direction but he honestly couldn't tell who they were for.
Quill had already taken up the annoying mantle of slowly floating with the dom. He made sure to let out an audible moan as he felt the water brush against his anus. “Mmmfgh~ Gaaabe they put something gooood in the water~"
Once the taller feline was sure no one was watching, he turned his back to the corner and managed to feel out a place to “sit". “Aaaah! Yeah~ I think you're right Quill, they must have done something good to the water…" As he said this, he would take the time to loosen his trunks, letting his massive, throbbing brown horse cock slowly begin peaking in the water. “Come over here, I found a cool spot!"
Gabe smirked deviously as his drunk boyfriend lazily swam over to him. The woozy bottom didn't seem to notice the gigantic brown rod hovering barely beneath the surface. He would wait until Quill was deathly close to his cock…
Quill sighed as he neared the sitting feline. “Uuugh~! Why did you have to park yer cute asss all the waaay over here?"
The smug dom shrugged. “I thought you knew I liked the WARM parts of the pool. Now get over here so we can order another drink."
The green kitty pouted slightly as he swam closer. The drunkard would stop just short of his boyfriend as he felt something warm brush against him. “Oh~! That is good and warm! Hfff~"
Quill sank himself lower into the water, as he did, the warmth seemed to expand. He felt it pulse slightly in response to his touch. The tiny bottom would giggle to himself as he brushed his face against the warm surface.
“Mmf~" Gabe covered his mouth as a moan would seep out of his throat. The dom didn't need to try at all for Quill to fall for his trick. He gleefully watched as the watery visage of the green cat's face slowly rub against his pulsing organ. “Hehe~ Like the vent bro?"
The woozy bottom slowly popped his head out of the water with a smile. “Mmhmm~ I do love dicks! Whhy would you think I didn't dude!?"
The brown cat raised an eyebrow. “Huh!? That's not what I- " The dom scoffed and rolled his eyes. It was obvious that the water's surface had jumbled his words to the drunkard. “Hmph~ Sure yeah fine…" A devilish thought then crossed his mind. “Well, if you like dicks so much, how about I help you find some?"
Quill narrowed his eyes as he felt his boyfriend's soft hands firmly push his face back into the water. Part of him wanted to resist the push but he sensed the hint of playfulness in the brown feline's somewhat aloof tone but his curious side would win out. He let his face brake the surface and would barely get a chance to react as his maw was quickly filled by a large, familiar object. “MMMMmMMPH~!"
Gabe's eyes nearly rolled into the back of his head as the warmth of the bottom's maw and the water flowed through his cock. “Huuffff~ Damn that's fucking good~" He would smile as Quill's small amount of writhing soon turned into slower but purposeful bobbing. “Keep it juuuust like that~"
“MMmmmph~" Quill's own cock throbbed in his panties as the precum of his mate surged into his maw. Thank goodness he was trained to hold his breath for longer periods of time. He wasn't expecting Gabe's cock but it was a welcome taste to mix with the drink he just had.
He allowed himself to sink deeper onto the brown cat's shaft, he gagged slightly as he felt a soft hand grip onto his head. “Bblll~ Mmmph~"
Gabe would cover his mouth as he couldn't stop another moan from escaping his throat. The warmth of Quill's mouth combined with the warm spot the cat laid at. His cock throbbed as the water poured along his anal ring, spreading it ever so slightly with every pulse. “Nnnngh~ HaaaAAAggh."
The sound invited a few patrons to look in the brown cat's direction. Some would raise their eyebrows at the strange blob of green seemed to subtly shift in the water. Many would blush as Gabe's tensing form seemed to reveal the truth to the onlookers.
. Quill's eyes would briefly widen again as he witnessed the brown cat's massive orbs clench and tense up. He gagged as cum surged into his throat. “MMmhhh~! Gjkkkhhl~"
The tall cat would feel Quill attempt to firmly grasp his legs. He couldn't help but gasp a bit loudly as he felt the flexible bottom fully engulf his rod. “OOoooh~ Mmmmngh~ Fuck…" The satisfying noises of moans bubbled up to the surface in front of him, causing the dom to sigh happily as his first orgasm died down. “Aaahh~"
“Is there something I can help you with sir?"
Gabe froze as a familiar voice was heard behind him. He would turn to find the same coyote bartender giving him a wry smile. The felines eyes then darted around him, some of the other patrons were also side-eyeing him as well. He blushed and chuckled as Quill's head would reemerge from the water.
“GWAAAHH! F-Fuck dude! Give me warning next time~" The drunken bottom swam over and nuzzled the taller cat with a smile. “Maann that was hot~!…" His own cock would pop outside of his already tight panties.
Gabe's blush of slight embarrassment reddened more as he felt the affectionate cat rub the sensitive organ against his legs. His annoyance would reach a head as Quill would spot the coyote in the corner of his eye. The green cat immediately stopped his nuzzling and pulled himself over to the feet of the bartender.
“Heeeya! Can I get another one of those drinks~?" Quill would give the canine an innocent smile. A slight bit of cum would dribble out of the bottom's mouth, something he would quickly fix with a wipe from his hands.
Gabe narrowed his eyes as the coyote wordlessly nodded and walked away. It wasn't his nonchalant boyfriend ordering his next drink that caught his eye but the magnificent ass and panties the tiny feline was waving in his face.
The dom gulped quietly as he quickly scanned his surroundings again. The initial outburst the annoying little cat had attracted more onlookers initially but nearly all of them seemed to have returned back to their conversations. The giant cat would have smirked victoriously if he didn't feel something wet sneakily prod at his neck.
“Hmph~. Who're you staring at weirdo?" Quill made his own evil smirk as he playfully poked the brown cat again.
Gabe shot a frown at the bold feline. “Oh? I'm just making sure there's a sizable audience…" As the cheeky bottom attempted to sluggishly poke him in a different sensitive spot, Gabe would manage to firmly grab the green cat's hand.
Quill remained unfazed as his poking assault was briefly stopped. He boldly met the giant feline's smirk of his own. “Oooh~ What do ya need an audience for~?"
Instead of answering, the dom would sit up and push himself very close to the oblivious cat. Quill would narrow his eyes and blush as Gabe would wrap an arm around the smaller feline's chest.
“Mmmmph~" Quill moaned as the cat's brown hands would slip into his bra strap. His blushed reddened. “Pervert…"
It was when that word left the drunken cat's mouth that Gabe would press himself onto them. “Roughhousing in a pool is only perverted if you think about it."
Quill gave the encroaching dom a frown of suspicion. “Huuh~? But like roughhousing is banned inn- Ooooh~ Mmmf~"
Gabe smirked as he witnessed the small cat look back at him with a surprised whimper. The cheeky dom had seized his chance and slipped his hand into the poor bottom's panties. He would part Quill's precious rump and find a tight, sensitive ring for him to play with.
“Aaaafgh~ G-Gaaaabe~" His frown would soften into wry smile. A blush quickly spread over his already flushed face. “D-Doon't staahp~ Mmmh~"
The smirking dom prodded deeper into the cat, water would flow into stretched hole causing Quill to moan slightly louder.
“Nnngh. Oooh~ Yess-MMMMPH!" Quill's shivering moans would be stopped with a surprise brown hand wrapping around his mouth. “Hnngh?"
The dom leaned onto the green cat, towering over him with an evil smirk. “Shh~ They'll hear us roughhousing you fuck."
The bottom let out a moan of slight frustration at the giant cat but soon calmed down. He would frown as he then felt Gabe's fingers retreat from his wanting hole. “Hhmmmff~"
Gabe rolled his eyes at the sight. “Hmph. Don't worry bitch, I'm gonna give you what you've been begging for this whole time~"
The tiny cat gasped in surprise as he then felt his panties loosen. The poor feline didn't get more than a second to process what was happening before his whole crotch made contact with the warm water. “Uuufhh~ Mmmph."
Gabe chuckled as the bottom's tail curled sharply in the water as he slid more of the thin, yellow garments off. “Yeah? Hope your ready bro. This is for being a dickhead all night!"
“MMMMmmph~!" Quill's muffled moan quickly petered out as the coyote would round the corner to the pool towards him. The dominant cat's stifling hand would remove itself as the canine approached. “Mwuuauh! Oh hey! You got my driIIINK~!?" His eyes would widen as he felt something large press against his anal entrance
The coyote tilted his head with a wry smile as the green cat's shivering hand failed to reach the platter his drink laid on.
“AAAaaah~ G-Gaaabe could you h-haave let me have my get my drink first?" Quill looked back at the tall male with a nervous smile.
Gabe returned the smile with a vengeful smirk of his own. “I don't know bro. Couldn't you have not embarrassed me so much while we got into this place?"
The brown cat didn't wait for an answer. He grabbed the flustered bottom by their waist and pressed his flare cleanly through the tiny feline's pucker. “Mmmf~ Tight as always~"
“OoooOoooh~ Gaaabe~" Quill shivered as the small bits of water that had seeped into his ass was being parted by the dom's giant cock inched further into him. He dropped his arms and gave up reaching for his drink. He couldn't stop an embarrassed smile formed on his face as the brown feline above him easily hit his pleasure spot. “Nnnngh~ T-Thhaaat's so good~"
The coyote scratched the back of his head before chuckling. “Heh~ I-I think I'll just… Leave this here~ Hope you two, err… Enjoy your… playing~?" He would then slink away, badly attempting to hide his own erection while seeming as calm as possible.
Quill could only stare longingly at his drink as Gabe's massive dick ravaged him. As soon as the small feline could feel the brown cat's massive orbs slap against his more modest sized balls. “Mmmph~ Can I saaay sorry at least~?"
“Heh~ This is the only “apology" I want from you…" The smothering dom would then pull back before slamming into Quill's ass.
“Uufff~…"
*Schlck*
_ _ “Uuun~…"
*Schlck*
_ _ “Hufff~…"
Every thrust from the larger male felt like it pierced Quill deeper and deeper. Even with his looser, drunken form, his boyfriend's titanic cock still stretched and strained his limits. He shuddered as more precum pulsed into his insides. His body felt like it was getting warmer and warmer. “Gufffh~ Fuuuck~"
“Hrrrnn~" Gabe gritted his teeth as he fought against the water's resistance. Each time he pulled out, the water would seem to make the tiny bottom's ass tighter. He would close his eyes and straddle Quill as he felt his balls tense. “Grrrr~ Haaaa-AAAAaaaagh~" He slammed his cock deep into the smaller cat one last time.
“HAAAA~ OOoooh~" Quill would tense and shiver as he felt large amounts cum flood into him. He instinctively clenched his ass around the dom's massive dick, ensuring that a single drop couldn't escape. “Hufff~ Mmmph~ T-Thaat hit the spot~…"
The tiny cat's own cock would twitch with every pulse of the dominant feline's throbbing rod. He could feel his own balls tense with a similar rhythm. He sighed loudly as his own cock spurted out a steady stream of cum. “Hooo~ F-Fuuck~"
Gabe would give the reeling bottom a few more thrusts of reassurance as he began to calm down from his high. “MMMmmph~ Oooh yeah baby~…"
Quill would moan as the giant dom's cock rubbed against his pleasure spot a few more times before the pulsing stopped. “Huuugh~ Mmmmh~" He would shiver as the pressure on his ass seemed to slowly release. “Aaah~ E-Easy taking that out Gabe…"
The brown cat smirked at the smaller feline as he continued pulling out. “Tch~ Yeah I'll take it out nice and slowly ~" He would then pull back quickly, the surrounding water made the action much easier than he expected. “Huufff~" Another moan would escape him as the tight insides of drunken feline gave way to the warmer, thicker water.
“Shit~…" Gabe would sigh loudly in relief, earning some looks of confusion from some guests and suspicious looks from others. Gabe would quickly recover from his orgasm and greet some of the faces with an innocent smile. “Hehe~ What's up y'all?"
The question would make most of the patrons shrug and return to their business. Gabe would smirk victoriously as he began to pull out of his boyfriend. Bits of cum flowed out of the bottom's ass and mixed with the surrounding waters.
“Uuff~ That was a good lesson. Did you enjoy it asshat?"
The brown cat waited for a response but got a comically loud purring instead. He narrowed his eyes and leaned onto the green cat. “The fuck? Really dude?"
Quill's sleeping form had the biggest smile the dom had ever seen. One could guess the sneaky feline was faking it, but Gabe knew better. The annoying cat was deep in a drunken hangover nap.
Gabe rolled his eyes as he grabbed the bottom's napping self and began swimming both of them to one of the pool exits. “Hmph~ All that waiting and embarrassment for one drink and a good fuck, now you're asleep…"
As the dom reached the railing, he transitioned from grabbing to carrying the hungover cat. He would lift both of Quill's legs with a single arm and cradled his back with the other.
The sight of him carrying his drunk mate bridal style would cause a few patrons to whistle sensually at him. Gabe merely shook his head as he began walking to one of the drying stations.
“Oh! Wait sir!"
Gabe would flick his ear in response as he turned to find the coyote speedwalking towards him. In the canine's hands, an intricate to-go cup filled with the same fluid Quill drank and the bottom's discarded yellow and black panties were situated in his hands. The brown cat would turn to fully face the bartender.
“Whew u-uhm, we didn't want you to leave these~ hehe~" He finished with a blush as his eyes trailed from Quill's cute coinpurse balls to the brown cat's giant bulge. “Th-Thank you so much for visiting~"
Gabe nodded politely and allowed the bartender to lay the two items onto Quill's sleeping form. “Nah! Thank you! We might be back if this stuff happens again." He then narrowed his eyes and whispered in a quieter tone. “And maybe this fucker won't take all of his nip before the party even starts…"
As if on cue, one of the bottom's arms would shift, coincidentally ending with one his hands deathly close to poking a spot near Gabe's neck again.
The dom narrowed his eyes and shook his head. “Hmph… Let's get you dried fuckhead…"