Our Summers
One of my earliest scripts. At a request, I put together a script for someone who intended to turn it into a comic. As usual, it never went anywhere, and I was never paid. My lack of understanding vis-a-vis formatting and proper standardization is evident.
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“Our Summers”
“Sandy” – Sandy is a 19 year old housecat. She is dressed in a respectable top and jeans. She looks nice but not slutty. When she sits down or bends over, you can see her underwear. She wears a bra to match.
“Stephanie” – Stephanie is a 19 year old vixen from southern California. She has long, bleach-blonde hair and the largest bust of the group. She wears a black t-shirt with “CALIFORNIA” emblazoned on it in pink neon, along with fashionable jeans and shoes.
“Alicia” – A 21 year old punk skunk who wears a tight tube top (you can see her nips) along with a leather jacket and very short leather hotpants. She also wears boots, and whatever punk accessories you care to add. Her hair has been dyed to an unnatural color. There should be an emphasis on showing off her body and she should have a “I will fuck anything that moves” sort of look.
“Chantelle” – A 23 year old “super senior” hyena who hails from Atlanta. She has large hoop earrings and wears a hot pink tube top and a short skirt. She has a big butt and nice hips, but her tits are nothing to cry over either. She’s our lower-body gal so make sure she has good hips and thighs and so on. She’s a big heavier than the other girls but she is in no way fat. Her hair is in dreadlocks. (if you can manage it, I know illustrating them bouncing around will be a bitch and a half)
Sandy and Stephanie are moving into a small, two-bed room in a sorority house. They should come in, there should be sorority symbols on the walls, and a bed on the left and right sides of the room with the windows showing the light outside. The right side of the room is decked out with black sheets, various rock band posters, and an overly complicated sound system. You might also wanna throw a few posters of rappers for Chantelle. There are bunk-beds on either side.
Alicia has a large suitcase, and she starts emptying it out onto the bed. It’s all clothes. She neatly folds them, while looking over at the right side of the room a few times. Stephanie opens her suitcase, and the clothes are small in number and fasionable, and she has a lot of makeup. Alicia then comes in, shaking her hips and popping her gum. She should have a haughty attitude and we should get a good look at her tits, thighs, hips, ass, etc. Chantelle also comes in, and she shakes her hips a lot. You should get a really nice look at her ass, and how shapely it is, along with her thick thighs. Alicia pulls out her chair and flips it around so her hands rest on the top of the back and her legs are spread. It’s a chair with a mostly open back and rear so you can get a quick shot in showing her pussy as you look her over. Chantelle should sit down cross-legged on another chair, and you get a good look at her lower body again as she sits.
Alicia – “Well well well…Looks like a fresh recruit. My name’s Alicia. So, what brings you two to Tau Iota Tau anyway?”
Chantelle – (licks her lips) “ Yeah, I’m a bit curious about y’all myself.”
Sandy sits down – “Hi, and my name is Sandy, and this is Stephanie. As for your question, well it IS one of the most popular sororities on campus. Good place to meet new friends, for one…”
Stephanie – “Yeah, I know I certainly enjoy meeting new people.”
Alicia starts playing with her gum, and you can still see her crotch at the very bottom of the screen. She’s smirking. Alicia – “Mhmm…Well we are a pretty wild bunch. And we do have a bit of a reputation…” Alicia puts her gum back in her mouth and gives Sandy a big grin. “So tell me, what all did you to do this summer?”
The camera should turn to Stephanie and be thinking back. There should be a short transition, like a flashback, and then show Sandy on a balcony at a hotel in the Bahamas. It’s late at night and the moon is up, but she’s in her bikini and enjoying the view while sipping lemonade. There should be relaxing soft jazz style music playing.
Stephanie (as a voice over) “I’d been saving up all through high school so that I could go to the Bahamas. I’ve always wanted to.”
Do a few pans over her body, showing how sexy she is in her bikini. It should really show off her body, but in a seductive, attractive way instead of something slutty.
Stephanie - “I had the time of my life. I met this boy there, named Jonathan…He was sooo hot…”
Stephanie’s hand slides down into her bikini bottom, and she starts touching herself, tentatively at first but then much more so. You should pan back and show her face moaning as she gets into it, and have her fingers visibly move up and down under the bikini bottom.
Stephanie – “All I could do was think about him. He was just so nice to me, and he had these big muscles…”
She should just keep at it, getting more intense, moaning and whimpering and working herself to the point where she’s curling her back and so on. I highly recommend you have her take off her bikini bottom and top and start working her pussy and pinching her nipples. An overhead shot which switches to a side pan going from her crotch to her moaning face would be good, and you can finish it with a between-the-legs shot.
Stephanie – “So when his flight was delayed and he needed some place to stay for a night, of course I offered him a place to stay.
Jonathan is a big, heavily built wolf. He should look like a football or hockey player. He’s wearing nothing but a towel and a smile. He lets go of it, and you get to see his enormous wang. He walks over to Stephanie and kisses her on the cheek, giving her a good grope. She then kisses him back and moves over to the balcony, gripping it and wiggling her hips a bit. You should take that shot from behind so that the audience can see her wet vagina.
Stephanie – “We spent the whole evening out on the balcony, staring at the stars and just…Talking.”
Jonathan gently slides into Stephanie on a side shot, and you should give it a good side shot of them humping, maybe a forward shot or two as well. I suggest you start out showing their crotches on the side shot, then pan up to show their faces and her bouncing boobies, then shift to a front shot, and then a between-the-legs shot. They should be going at it in a modified doggy style, with Stephanie gripping the railing instead of being on all fours. Both of them are really enjoying it and getting into it. You might also wanna show a between-the-legs shot.
Stephanie – “It was magical.”
As she finishes saying that, there’s a strong internal cumshot, with a nice big “O-Face” going on. I suggest you have the cumshot be a between-the-legs shot so we can see some fluids, then go back to the heads-and-chest shot so we can see the expression on their face.
Back to the dorm room. Alicia is grinning in a side shot, and Stephanie looks mildly embarrassed, even blushing, as she remembers the fucking she was getting back there. Alicia licks her lips as it comes to her turn.
Alicia – I didn’t go to the Bahamas this summer, but there was a beach involved…
Transition to a wild party beach. There should be lots of lights and noise and bodies moving around in front of a stage. Shadow persons are best here, just a generic faceless crowd. There’s one guy up on stage with a mic, and way too much lighting and stupid shit. Think anything that MTV does during spring break. That kind of awful.
Man on stage – ALL RIGHT GUYS, ARE YOU READY TO JUDGE THE HOTTEST WET T-SHIRT CONTEST PANAMA CITY BEACH HAS EVER SEEN?
Cut To the back stage area. Alicia is wearing a wet t-shirt and a thong bottom and there are three guys around her, all wearing t-shirts with “JUDGE” written on it in big letters. Alicia’s t-shirt is already wet and you can see her nips, in fact, the t-shirt is pretty much translucent. There’s two on her right side and one on her left, and she’s eyeing them. She’s also wearing very tight cut-off daisy-dukes.
Alicia – There was a beauty contest, and the winner got a pretty nice gift package, so I decided I’d enter.
When Alicia says “package,” you should pan over the guys crotches one at a time, showing they all have huge erections. Then have Alicia get down on her knees (still a forward shot) and two of the guys pull their pants down, and Alicia starts working on ‘em the way Alex did in her animation.
Alicia – I knew if I was going to win I’d have to convince the judges I was the best, so I decided to meet with them ahead of time and discuss my special qualifications.
Show a side-shot of the third guy humping her face while the other two wank a bit, then zoom in to show that he’s really working her over, and then cut to a between the legs shot so you can see he’s driving it in to the hilt and that her tits are bouncing.
Alicia – I have a pretty talented tongue and it didn’t take me long to win them over…
Cut to Alicia giving one guy a reverse cowgirl (up the butt) while the other two are on either side of her. It’s a front shot so you can see her tits and spread legs. She sucks on one guy, then the other, while the guy underneath her humps it hard.
Alicia – Still, I wanted to be fair, so I gave them plenty of time to look me over and judge my qualifications and appearance.
Side shot of Alicia on all fours. One guy is under her, laying flat. Another guy is up her ass, fucking her doggy-style. The third guy is humping her face. They hump in order, mouth-ass-vagina so that there’s a circle of fucking going on, and her tits move accordingly.
Alicia – Still I know that it was my personal attention to their interests that got them to go my way.
First cumshot should be the guy in her mouth. Camera should be at hip level and an angle so you can see her face and his cock sort of in perspective. He pulls out, she closes her eyes and opens her mouth, and he creams all over her. She licks at it a bit. Then cut to behind, show the two cocks inside her. They stop, and the one in her vagina cums hard and there’s so much it leaks down the shaft and onto his balls. Third shot should be another hip shot, this time from the guy in her ass, she’s looking over her shoulder at him, her tail curled up and back and laying on her back. He pulls out, wanks it hard, and shoots out all over the underside of her tail.
Cut back to the dorm room. Alicia looks like she’s getting aroused, and Sandy is blushing a bit more. The camera pans to her, and she looks up at the ceiling a bit, putting her hand to her chin.
Sandy – A beauty contest, huh? I never did anything like that. I did have an interesting encounter when I was a cocktail waitress, though...
Cut to a classy bar. There’s an attractive, handsome young fox behind the counter in a very nice bartender’s uniform. Sandy is dressed as a cocktail waitress and walks by with a tray of drinks. The fox stares at her and smiles, clearly very pleased.
Sandy – The man who owned it put his son Todd in charge of the place. Not just because Todd was his son, though. He made some very nice, fancy drinks and was really talented, and a good boss to boot.
While she’s saying the above, do a side shot of them both drinking out of the same tropical drink sort of thing. They should be smiling and flirting with their eyes. Then cut to a back room, where the fox is picking up various boxes.
Sandy – One night after closing time I decided to have a little private chat with Todd.
Sandy comes in and closes the door, locking it with an audible click. Todd smirks, they move together, kiss, and start fondling one another in a side-view shot.
Sandy – You see, I had just bought a new car, and they payments were a bit more than I realized. I really needed a raise.
Sandy slides down and the camera slides down with her. She undoes Todd’s pants and pulls him out and starts rubbing on him, then sucking on him. Still a side shot.
Sandy – I knew that I was one of the cutest waitresses in the bar, and that a lot of guys showed up just to have me serve them.
Cut up to show Todd’s o-face, then cut showing Sandy with her skirt hiked up and pressed against the wall, Todd between her legs with his pants down around his ankles in a side shot.
Sandy – I explained my situation to Todd. He was a great listener, and was very sympathetic.
Start off continuing the side shot, then go to a back shot, showing his ass moving and her legs bouncing, then a low shot between his legs showing how he’s going in and out of her vagina. Then another side shot, focusing on their faces and her titty-bounce, showing they’re both having a good time.
Sandy – So of course he gave me the raise, provided I didn’t mind pulling a few extra hours here and there.
Go back to the between the legs shot and show the fluids moment. He drives it home and then the goo comes out, splattering down low. Cut back to the faces, showing they’re having a good time, then have them come together and kiss.
Cut back to the dorm room. Sandy has gone from embarassed to horny and is looking at Alicia hungrily. Alicia recognizes the glance and decides to get in one more story before they go at it, as fucking is imminent at this point.
Chantelle – A bar huh? I worked at a bar once…
Alicia is in a much less reputable bar, dancing on the pool table. Start out with a side shot of her shaking her tits and hips to loud music and cheers from the generic crowd (recycle from her last bit). Show an upskirt shot from the audience view so you can see she’s not wearing a damn thing under there.
Chantelle – One time I got drunk cus it was my day off, but my boss called me to come in anyway.
Chantelle gets down on all fours, show a three-quarters shot emphasizing her ass and her curled-down tail and still keeping her face in shot. The focus should be on her vagina, ass and hips. Remember, she’s our lower-body gal! Show it off!
Chantelle – There were customers everywhere. I knew it would be a lot of work to satisfy them all.
A guy comes out of the crowd, with his junk already out, and gets up on the pool table and just shoves it in from a side shot. She moans a bit, looking at him over her shoulder, then the camera cuts to just her moaning face. Another cock comes into shot and she just starts sucking it.
Chantelle – I’d never seen the place so packed. I had no idea how I was gonna handle that much.
Cut to Chantelle on her back, her head hanging off the side of the pool table. A new guy is fucking her missionary while yet another new guy humps her mouth. After giving a wide shot, cut to the crotches and then pan to the head.
Chantelle – Still, somehow I made it through, drunk as a…well, you know. And I walked home with more tips than ever before.
Cut to Chantelle on her knees, no clothing, mouth open. There’s guys crowded around her and they’re all cumming on her as a big bukkake, and she’s already pretty soaked by the time they arrive. She licks her lips and closes her eyes as the current batch finishes and the camera cuts again.
Cut back to the dorm room. All four girls are smiling and visibly aroused and you can see the powerful sexual tension in the air.
Sandy – So, you fucked a bunch of judges and then a whole bunch of random guys at a bar. And here I was thinking all the stuff people said about Tau Iota Tau was just rumors and exagerrations.
Chantelle – Well, you fucked your boss for a raise, and that little vixen let herself get fucked silly by some wolf she met in the Bahamas.
Stephanie – So what if I did?
Alicia –Well I’d say there’s a reason they picked both of you up even though you’re just a frosh.
Sandy – So, ever fucked a girl before?
Alicia – Not recently enough…
Chantelle – I like where this is headed…
Stephanie – Mmm, you’re not alone there…
Cut to Sandy laying down on her bed, Alicia comes in over Sandy and they start kissing and groping. The screen very quickly fades to black, and there’s a few moments silence. Then there’s thumping and bumping and the girls making exclamations of pain as they bump into things.
Sandy – What the fuck is happening?
Alicia – The wiring in this place is total shit. Hold on, they put a breaker box in each room, if I can just…
The lights suddenly come back on, and Alicia is standing in front of a breaker box, having just flipped a switch. She’s totally naked, front view, showing off her bod yet again.
Alicia – Ahh, here we go.
Sandy – (off screen) here we go indeed…
Three-quarters view, Sandy is licking Alicia, and they are both moaning. Focus on Sandy’s tongue and Alicia’s crotch, then pan up to show Alicia is loving it. Then cut to Sandy lying down and Alicia returning the favor, nibbling and licking on the bed, first a side shot, then a three quarters, then cut to pan from above, showing them in a 69 position. Give each girl a good show showing them getting in lots of lip and tongue action, then a side shot showing them buried in each other’s muff, then cut to a side shot of them scissoring to a big massive messy orgasm. Then, and only then, do you end the move it.
Cut to Chantelle and Stephanie, who are kissing and making out, nuzzling and getting all over one another. Pan up and down their bodies a bit as they move, making it a point to show off Stephanie’s huge breasts and Chantelle’s good lower body.
Chantelle – Well they certainly didn’t last long…
Stephanie – (gropes Chantelle’s butt) Yeah but it was a good show.
Stephanie falls down on the bed with a nice tit bounce, you see from overhead and she smiles and smirks at the camera. Then cut to her perspective, you can see Chantelle towering over her, and she’s wearing a good sized pink strapon.
Stephanie – Where’d THAT come from?
Chantelle – If you’re going to become a Tau Iota Tau, you’re gonna need to learn how to always be prepared…
Go to a behind shot, between their legs, showing the slow penetration and lots of moaning. Then move forward, sliding from hips to faces, their bodies moving slowly and giving you lots of tit bounce and body motion. Stephanie is trying to wrap her arms and legs around Chantelle, and Chantelle puts her hands and knees on the bed and is moving on all fours. Keep up with this a little while, showing their faces, then Stephanie starts to get her “O” face. Cut back to between their legs to show the splatter, and then go back to showing Stephanie from above, Chantelle rubbing at and groping her tits. Then show their faces smiling at each other.
Cut back, showing all four of the girls glowing and sitting around smiling at each other. Just a good group shot.
Alicia – “Well I think we’ll all get along very nicely in here.”
Stephanie – (a bit giggly) “I’d say so!”
Chantelle – I’d say I want seconds!
Sandy – Well let’s not get into it THAT quickly, we’ve got two whole semesters to make it through.