Take it Off

Story by lantheorc on SoFurry

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#40 of Writing Prompts

This is my take on last week's writing prompts for the Writing Corner, this time the prompt was "Two characters from different stories of yours meet in a situation unrelated to either story." I had a hard time coming up with this one, I don't really keep track of the characters I use and mostly I do one shots, so I had to re read a few stories to pick the two characters. Anyway, I hope you enjoy and remember to leave your comments below. If you would like to practice your writing, meet other writers, get advice or just talk, you can join us here Writing Corner (NSFW)


I looked at the tiny piece of fabric between my hands, the bright red color contrasted heavily against the sable black fur of my hands. Twin warmth spots formed on my cheeks the longer I stared at the piece of "cloth", my ears flicked madly at the very thought of wearing it.

"Do I really have to wear...this?"I asked the half naked polar bear in front of me, doubt creeping in my voice.

"If you want to rock your man's world, then yes." He replied while his fingers sneaked beneath the strings of his gold thong. "I can assure you, it always work."

"But it doesn't cover a lot." I told him while I toyed with the strings of the revealing underwear.

"That's the point, you have to show off what you got." Replied the bear with a grin, cupping his package with an large hand. "And from where I'm standing, I can see a lot to show off."

"But are you sure this will fit? I wouldn't want to break it, I'm kind of...big down there." I whispered, my voice almost breaking at the end while heat spread through my cheeks.

"Who would have thought? A big bull like you having second thoughts about his equipment, that's so cute!" The big bear said , giddy with emotion. A strong snort left my nose as I stamped my hoof against the ground in defiance; a queasy feeling coursing through my veins. "Sorry, I didn't want to offend you."

"No, it's not your fault Ivan. It's just- only my mom and Oldaron have ever called me cute." I mumbled, looking away while an errant hand rose up to scratch the base of a horn. "I'm still not used to others doing that."

A pleased smile appeared on Ivan's face, showing a row of shining white teeth, his blue eyes filled with mirth. He closed the distance with a couple of nimble steps, his hands grasped my shoulders in a comforting hold.

"It's okay, I get it, Dasher gets like that too. I didn't mean to make you uncomfortable, I'm sorry my friend." his eyes met mine, the mischievous glint replaced by an honest brilliance and a deep regret. "But to answer your question, I'm quite sure it'll fit, I got an eye for these things, it comes with the job."

"I see. I guess- I guess I should've guessed it." was my brilliant reply, the feel of the soft cloth was still feeding my doubts. A few seconds passed without a word said between us; my fingers were idly playing with the red fabric until the image of my beloved flashed in my mind: his tusked smile, the red tinge of his cheeks, the haze of lust clouding his eyes. I gulped loudly, swallowing back my fears before I gave Ivan a firm nod; a warm smile appeared on his face, large hands patting my back a few times before he moved on.

A soft snort left my nose as I gripped the red thong in my hands with determination, preparing myself for what I was going to do. Courage gathered, my eyes started to look around the large room: black sofas and chairs were sprawled all around while a row of metal lockers stood by the far side. A set of black double doors stood at the other side, the only bit of color in a sea of white that covered the walls. Around and around my eyes looked, but no matter where they fell there was one thing they didn't find, the implications sending shivers down my back. I could feel the deep weight of fear settling in my stomach the longer I went without speaking,

"Is there anywhere I could change?" I asked with a quivering voice, almost jumping from hoof to hoof with nerves. Ivan's brow rose in response, an incredulous look crossed his face while his lips twisted into an amused grin.

"This is a strip club handsome, what did you expect? Now, off with the clothes and show me what you got." The big bear said, giving me a wink at the end. I cursed under my breath, a low rumble emanating from my throat as I resigned to my fate.

With trembling hands, I undid the buttons of my shirt one by one, each one revealing just a bit more of what laid beneath. At first, it took all my focus not to pop a button but as I looked at my friend, his trademark grin set in place, I let myself go. My hands explored pecs as they were freed from their prison of cloth, cupping my pecs and pushing them together for the bear's pleasure. The next couple of buttons revealed a trail of thick white fur, the ivory path crossing my belly all the way down to my navel. Cold air hit my warm fur as the yellow fabric felt to the floor. I looked up at Ivan, his blue orbs trained on my every move, calculating and eager. They asked for more. My tail trashed wildly behind me while I gathered my courage for the next step; I closed my eyes, my fingers honed in on the button of my breeches and, with a single flick, sent them to join with my shirt; the brown fabric slid down my legs without much trouble and pooled on the floor, leaving only thin brown boxers to protect my dignity. I lost no time to strike a pose, flexing my arms and tightening my legs, before I move to a few more I had practiced for my beloved's pleasure. A deep hum pierced the silence of the room, my ears flicked with trepidation as I waited for the verdict, but none came. My tail lashed against my leg, a challenging snort left my nose while my fire started to run through my blood. My hands traveled down my stomach, following the trail of fur until they came to my bulge; without losing a moment, I stole a page from Ivan's book and let y fingers slip into the boxers, threatening to bring them down only to turn around to present my ass to the bear, shooting him a coy grin over my shoulder.

Ivan was quick to counter with a mischievous grin; dexterous fingers took hold of his thong, a low growl coming from him moments before he flashed me his package. The show caught me of guard, heat rising to my cheeks, but I got the message. With a quick twirl I turned back around, my fingers gripped the cords that kept my underwear in place and then, pushing through any lingering doubts, slowly pulled the cords, the knot came undone seconds later, the boxers joining the pile of clothes. A low growl pierced the silent room moments later, pleased and hungry, sending shivers down my spine.

I kicked my clothes to the side and, before Ivan could get a word out of his muzzle, I donned the thong , the flimsy piece of cloth went smoothly up my legs, it hugged my package like a second skin without being uncomfortable. A pleased hum came from the bear while he walked around me, his eyes taking into every detail until he came to an stop in front of me, a pleased smirk twisting his lips.

"Well, well, I knew you had a nice body but I never thought it would be this delicious, your man is certainly lucky," Ivan said with a husky tone as he strutted closer, his powerful legs closing the distance between us with a few strides. A meaty hand landed on my chest, smoothing the fur with soft, tempting strokes, "we will have to work on your presentation though."

"What do you mean?" I asked, nerves prickling my stomach.

"I mean that you got some nice moves there but you don't show the goods all at once, you nee to..." the big bear said while he twirled my fur around his fingers, pulling me towards him; a hint of white teeth shined on his face moments before he brought his muzzle dangerously close to mine, his thick masculine musk filling my nose. "make them work for it."

I could only gulp as he let me go, pulling quickly on my nipples, his trademark grin on his face. My dick was left straining the poor thong, proof enough that I had chosen a good teacher.

"I-I see." Was all I managed to say while I adjusted my package, earning a chuckle from the bruin.

"Oh you will see stud," Ivan told me with confidence dripping from his every word, "by the time we're done your husband won't know what hit him. Now, let's start with the basics: The entrance."