Sample #1: Griffon pairing, incest (F/d)

Story by Asymmetry on SoFurry

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#1 of Writing samples

Sample from a 2k-word commission. The request was for a playful scene between father and daughter in an ideallic forest setting, that would culminate in the latter being mounted and knotted, as was their habit.


"You don't play fair," he breathed.

"And where do you think I got that from?" the griffoness replied, peering over her shoulder at him with dark eyes. "So, Father, do you give up?"

Kael grunted. Frustration was building with the growing desire to mount her, but he knew as soon as he let her climb back onto all fours she would scamper away, leaving him painfully unfulfilled.

But then he had an idea.

Making sure to keep a firm grip on her forelimbs, he moved down her body. Puzzled, she watched over her shoulder as he positioned himself between her legs. Her eyebrows shot up the moment his pointed, glistening tongue lolled out of his beak.

"That's not fai_ahhh_!" she cried. Yun laughed to himself as he licked delicately at her sex, making sure to focus on the small nub of flesh that sent a convulsive shudder through her limbs with every flick of his tongue. No, it wasn't fair, but he knew she wouldn't be able to ignore it once he had worked her up into a state of arousal.

Her scent was making his member leak with a thin, sticky stream of fluid. Anticipation was building, but he had to be patient. He had to bring her to a state of such desperate need that she wouldn't dream of running away before he could mount her. And as he drove his tongue inside her, a reluctant moan escaped from the back of her throat.

"Y-You can... do that... as much... as you like," she gasped, her claws digging in and shredding moss from the cracked stones beneath her. "I'm n-not... giving in..."

Kael withdrew his tongue and swallowed the salty taste, not quite managing to suppress the shiver of arousal that passed through him. "Then I should stop, then?" he asked coyly, lifting his head away from beneath her tail.

"Don't you dare stop," she begged, her eyes widening in alarm. "Father...!"

"Looks like neither of us will get what we want," he said, a sly grin pulling at the corners of his beak. "Unless, of course."

Kael knew he had won their little game when his daughter wordlessly raised her hindquarters, an attempt at presenting herself despite still being awkwardly pinned down. He let her climb onto all fours beneath him, so that his limbs framed hers on either side and her arched spine was flush to his chest and belly, soft and warm. She was a young adult now, and her current size fit against him perfectly, though he knew she would outgrow him someday. This game that they so enjoyed to play wouldn't last forever; for now, he was determined to enjoy it for as long as it could last.

His member slipped beneath her tail and pressed up firmly against the heat of her well-moistened entrance. Its dexterity allowed him to rub her there for a few moments, wringing out further shudders and bitten-back moans until her patience reached its limit.

"What are you waiting for?" she asked, her words clipped and thirsty and almost petulant, a reminder that she was still his little girl at heart.

"Oh, just savoring the victory," he replied. "As if there was ever any doubt."