[COMM] Oreo Shops With a Succubus (Story, 4700 words)
#11 of Writing Commissions
A commission done for Kilinah, with his adorable, slightly bratty but still cute-as-hell bunny-girl Oreo and my demoncat Lucy going on a trip to the mall that quickly turns a lot more lewd than expected. A good deal of it is just these two cute companions interacting, with some steamy sex and bunny butt blastin' closer to the end; it's no secret that I absolutely adore Oreo, she's definitely my favorite of Kili's many excellent OCs. I can't really quite describe with words how thankful I am that he commissioned me; I still sometimes struggle with thoughts of self-doubt when it comes to my writing, but getting to do this perfect piece with our two girls gave me a huge boost in that regard! Kili's just a really cool blue boy in general. Go check him out if you've never seen his art, I'll link his twitter below.https://twitter.com/kililewd
Story by ThisAccountDoesExist
"You've got to be kidding me... Where is she? I told her to meet at noon."
Oreo let out a haughty huff, crossing her arms on her chest and tapping her paw impatiently. Dozens of people passed her by in the hustle and bustle of the mall's mid-day rush, countless overlapping conversations making it hard to even think. She brushed her bangs out of her eyes for a moment to get a better look across the expansive room, but sure enough, Lucy was still nowhere to be seen in the crowd, not that there was really any chance that Oreo would have missed her if she was; she was a rather hard woman not to notice. She checked her phone again- it was a whole minute past noon- and she was growing impatient fast.
Oreo herself stood at a short five feet or so, somewhat to be expected of a bunny; Though her stature itself was no doubt small, her ego was anything but, strengthened significantly by her cute body and a weighty purse positively crammed with more money than most people would see in a full year. Most of her fur was a pristine shade of snow-white, save for the tips of her paws, her neatly-groomed hair, and her long, floppy ears, both of which were a jet-black color befitting of her namesake. Her clothes could be considered somewhat skimpy by many, consisting of a pair of thigh-high boots, tight short shorts that left ludicrously little to the imagination, a choker, and a frilly, high-cut top that comfortably contained her modest boobs. If there was anything the bun took more pride in than her prestigious wealth, it was her looks, and she was no stranger to flaunting them as frequently as possible.
Her idle irritation was interrupted, though, as she felt the fur on the back of her neck stand up, as though someone had suddenly come up behind her. Before she could react, she heard a familiar, feminine voice booming from a few feet above her head-
"Hey Oreo! Sorry I'm late, I lost track of-"
"AH! Holy shit, Lucy, you scared me." Lucy was cut off mid-sentence by a yelp of surprise from Oreo as jumped nearly half a foot into the air, wheeling around to face behind her where the form of a massive woman had seemingly materialized out of thin air. The colossal cat-girl was barely a few inches away from her, looking curiously down at the considerably smaller bunny-girl with a friendly smile.
Lucy practically towered over her, standing at a monumental eight feet tall; she wasn't too far off from being twice her size, having to actively crane her neck downwards to actually get a good look at Oreo. Her entire body, including an absolutely massive fluffy tail, was covered in a short but dense coat of fluffy, black-and-gray fur, and her feline face was framed with long, flowing black hair that stopped just barely before her waist. Lucy's eyes were probably her most immediately noticeable features- at least while clothed- the two mismatched purple-and-green orbs being the only parts of her entire body with any color besides shades of gray. The runner-up was no doubt the pair of massive horns jutting out from the top of her head, onyx-black and shimmering in the fluorescent lights of the mall and terminating in razor-sharp tips. The horns, along with the rest of her curvaceous, almost impossibly enticing body, left relatively little doubt as to what the massive maiden was.
"Sorry. I didn't want to wade through the crowd, so I just blinked over here," Lucy's eyes narrowed as she took some time to size up Oreo's outfit, perhaps lingering for a little too long on the bunny's bountiful butt and huge hips.
"Well, you're looking just as cute as ever, aren't you? Always nice to see you showing some skin, hm?" Oreo's unamused expression in the wake of the demoness' compliment was betrayed somewhat by her softly reddening cheeks; Lucy couldn't really tell underneath the bangs covering up her eyes, but the bunny was in the middle of examining her own attire, finally letting out a little scoff as she shook her head disapprovingly.
"Wish I could say the same, what exactly are you wearing? Last time I checked, this isn't the gym, big girl~" She motioned melodramatically at Lucy's clothes, the succubus wearing nothing else besides a pair of skimpy athletic shorts and a tight crop-top bra over her basketball-sized breasts. It was definitely typical of Oreo to tease someone nearly twice her size, but Lucy was plenty used to it by now.
"Hey, I just picked out whatever was comfortable. If I had a choice, I wouldn't be wearing anything at all, unless maybe you'd prefer that..?" Lucy poked her tongue out playfully, leaning down just enough to get to face-level with the now-blushing bitchy bunny and flashing her a smug, toothy grin. A second or so later, she straightened back up, scanning the stores around the mall. "Well, we're not going to get anywhere by bickering like this, I'm just happy you invited me. What's the plan for today, hm?"
Oreo motioned towards her purse, unzipping it and pulling out a wad of large bills from within that made Lucy's eyes bulge in surprise. "Shopping spree, that's what. I've got a walk-in wardrobe I need filled with the hottest outfits I can find, and I want you around for a second opinion. I mean, you're a succubus, surely you're good with this sort of thing."
She gave the demoness a teasing poke in her exposed tummy, wiggling her wide hips enticingly towards the towering cat. "Unless, of course, you can't handle it~ Wouldn't want you to go making a mess in public, now would we?"
The prospect of seeing Oreo try on increasingly erotic attire was no doubt incredibly appealing to Lucy, she couldn't have brought herself to turn it down even if she tried. She could handle it alright, although for just how long remained to be seen. Still, though, she wasn't one to back down from a challenge, especially not one from the bitchy bunny, so putting on her sultriest, most seductive voice, Lucy accepted, a smug smirk crossing her face. "Oh, you're on, hun."
"Of course, like you could ever resist my charms," Oreo teased, pointing across to the other side of the mall where a lavish-looking store stood comparatively calm in the ocean of overstuffed outlets and restaurants packed to the gills with patrons. "We're going over there, away from all these... commoner stores. C'mon now, we don't have all day~"
The two girls crossed through the raging river of people and onto the opposite wall of the wide hallway, hugging the bustling storefronts as they hurried over towards the other end of the mall. Oreo practically had to break into a full-on sprint to keep up with Lucy's massive strides, hurrying ahead of the huge woman and coming to a stop, panting slightly, in front of their destination.
As they walked inside, Lucy was met with one of the most overly ornate and exceedingly excessive clothing stores she'd ever stepped foot in; Oreo of course not so much, being more than used to the ways of the wealthy. Shelves stocked full of designer clothes lined the walls, along with elegant displays of gilded or gem-encrusted garments whose price tags probably reached high into the five-figure range; Even the store itself was fitted with golden tiling and elaborate, delicate crystal chandeliers hanging from the high ceiling. Really, it looked as though someone had taken the ballroom of a mansion and stuck it inside a standard suburban mall, the aesthetics clashing chaotically with the mostly middle-class vibe of the rest of the building.
Once she was done staring, Lucy followed Oreo over to the women's section, where the bottom-heavy bunny was perusing a shelf full of designer athletic clothes not particularly dissimilar to the ones Lucy was wearing, with the exception of a few added zeroes. "These are pretty cute, right? What do you think, Lucy?"
She held up two pairs of shorts somehow even smaller than the ones she was already wearing to show her feline friend, apparently looking for a second opinion. Lucy couldn't really tell any difference between either one, though that was possibly a consequence of her hyperactive and hyper-horny imagination quickly manifesting a mental image of Oreo near-naked in nothing but the tremendously tight shorts; Her face flushed a soft shade of red barely visible on her black fur, but it seemed like Oreo took note of it all the same. "Mmm, I'll take that as a 'yes' then. Thanks."
It was around this time that Lucy felt her own bottoms growing a little bit tighter; a quick look down at her waist and she was immediately greeted by a huge and very noticeable bulge forming between her legs. Up until now, it had been mostly difficult to see her extra endowment underneath her shorts, but at this point just about anyone that looked her way would clearly be able to make out the outline of her humongous hard-on gradually growing with each passing second. Try as the succubus might to stem the nagging feelings of arousal, it was nowhere near that simple, especially with Oreo constantly asking her for opinions on outfits she'd picked out, each one seemingly more skimpy than the last.
Oreo made her way through the entire section of the store at an agonizingly slow pace, Lucy following close behind as she struggled to keep her eyes off of the adorable bunny-girl's bouncing butt; She was only just barely able to keep her burgeoning beast of a cock from bursting out of her shorts with all the willpower she could muster. She couldn't tell for sure, but she swore that Oreo must have been keenly aware of her situation, the singsong tone of her voice and the subtle smile on her face positively dripping with a smug, self-satisfied energy expected of the black-and-white bunny.
It must have been a solid hour or so later that Oreo finally slowed down, picking out one last outfit from a gold-plated clothing rack and handing it back to Lucy to hold. "Alright, I think we've narrowed down the choices enough."
Oreo's idea of what "narrowing down" meant clearly didn't align very well with Lucy, whose arms were so full of merchandise that even her heightened demonic strength was having a hard time holding it all up. She had lost count of just how many there were, but there must have been at least a few dozen different pairs of shorts, panties, bras, and bikinis all collected in the massive mountain of fancy fabrics; As if Oreo wasn't already hard to see enough with their heavy height differences, she was now almost completely obscured from the demoness' vision. Oreo couldn't hold back a sort of snickering giggle at the sight, tapping Lucy teasingly on the thigh and pointing over to the back of the store. "To the changing rooms, come on! Honestly, I should bring you along more often, it's nice not needing to lug everything around myself."
Oreo was at least polite enough to help Lucy navigate over to the changing area, and once they had finally made their way over without causing any significant collateral damage, they slipped quickly into the first vacant room they could find.
The changing room itself was a rather literal interpretation of the term, although that wasn't particularly surprising given how ludicrously lavish the rest of the store already was. It looked a lot more like a bedroom than the typical tiny little closet-sized affairs found in most businesses; it was just as vibrant and gaudy as the rest of the store, although considerably more bare. The only furniture in the room was a bench on one side, a row of shining silver hooks fixed to the wall, and a full-body, golden-framed mirror on the other side to give its occupants a good view of whatever they were trying on. Oreo strutted out into the center of the room and turned to Lucy in the doorway, her hands on her hips as she pointed over to the clothing hooks. "Alright, you can hang all the stuff up and we can get started."
"H-how long's this going to take, Oreo?" Lucy was definitely relieved to get a temporary break from being the bunny's personal shopping bag, but she could tell that the true challenge was very much yet to come. She took her seat on the bench across the room as Oreo strolled over to examine the wall of outfits, considering each one carefully before picking out one of the several dozen that were there and walking back to her position in the center of the room. "Oh, I don't know. As long as it needs to take, really,"
She shot Lucy a toothy grin and tugged teasingly on the hem of her shorts, causing the cat to blush. "Don't go complaining now, you couldn't begin to imagine what a privilege this would be to anyone. Just sit back and enjoy the show~"
Oreo might have been supremely self-absorbed and more than a bit bitchy by most peoples' standards, but Lucy really couldn't object to that. Her pride certainly wasn't entirely misplaced, there were probably many, many people that would kill to be stuck in a store watching the rich rabbit try on a ludicrous amount of lingerie, and Lucy was all for it. She didn't exactly know if her shorts would survive the session, though...
Oreo wasted no time slipping gracefully out of her garments, setting her boots carefully against the wall, folding her shorts and top neatly and resting them beside the mirror. She stopped her stripping once she got down to her panties, offering Lucy a teasing little tug at the side of them as though she might remove them. The cat-demon across the room was a vivid cherry-red in the cheeks as she couldn't take her eyes off of the bun's body; Oreo was facing away from the succubus, giving her a generous view of her soft, squishy bunny buns as her huge, pure-white puffy tail twitched and quivered cutely above. The panties really didn't leave much to the imagination except for the naughtier parts of Oreo's body, though, the tremendously thin black fabric only just barely obscuring her bits with the rest pressing tightly into her cushiony cheeks.
"Don't go making a mess just yet, big girl. Keep it in your pants, I need your opinions on all of these."
That was much easier said than done as the tight, stretchy fabric of Lucy's shorts continued to fight against her rapidly hardening hard-on, Oreo had barely even started and she was already feeling a familiar horny heat settling into her loins. Still, though, she didn't want to disappoint her friend, pushing against her more lustful urges enough to delay the inevitable destruction of her bottoms for a little while longer. In the time it took for her to stifle her over-eager endowment, Oreo had put on a pair of athletic shorts and a sports bra from before, mostly mirroring Lucy's look as she turned to the demoness for her approval. "Okay, how's this one?"
"It's... nngh- Pretty cute, I'd say," Lucy managed to stutter out a response, although it seemed rather obvious that Oreo wasn't considering her comments on the clothing nearly as much as the response from the rest of her body. Lucy felt her surging shaft give a massive, heavy throb as she admired Oreo's outfit, a tiny jet of precum shooting from the tip of her covered cock and passing right through the thin fabric of her shorts; Oreo's smile widened as she watched the whole debaucherous display, taking the succubus' squirming as a sure sign of success. "Great! This one's a keeper, then."
She pulled off the first set of clothes and fitted them back onto their hanger, setting it down next to her original outfit and selecting another one off of the wall, still almost completely naked. The time it took for her to pick one out and get it on gave Lucy just enough time to get her turgid tool under some semblance of control again, only for that to be shattered as Oreo caught her attention to see just how much it set her off.
Predictably, though, pretty much everything Oreo tried on was enough to get Lucy hot and bothered enough to nearly burst out of her shorts every time, the puddle of precum leaking down onto floor of the dressing room quickly growing larger and larger with every piece of lurid lingerie Lucy was forced to evaluate. Once they had passed the halfway point, it became overwhelmingly obvious that the cat's coverings were not long for this world, the audible sound of fabric straining to contain her colossal cock filling the room as Oreo slipped her paws into another impossibly skimpy bikini.
"Alright Lucy, what about thi-"
RRRRRIP!
Lucy had finally reached her limit, fully letting loose as her shorts crumbled under the burden of containing her battering-ram of a bitchbreaker. The thin black fabric basically exploded as a prodigious pillar of meat flopped out from within, a massive three-foot-long, throbbing horsecock leaking great big globs of precum like a broken faucet. It was the same jet-black color as her hair and her horns, the shining surface slicked with sweat and sexual fluids and visibly steaming with the heat radiating off of it. Her huge balls, two oversized grey orbs hanging heavily below the base of her cock, were large enough that they nearly brushed against the floor. Lucy's long, black tongue lolled out of her mouth as she huffed and panted with desire, arms and legs shivering slightly; She looked almost apologetically at oreo from across the room. "S-sorry, I just... a-aah, couldn't hold back any longer."
Oreo's expression was an equal mix of disappointment and deviousness as she slowly strolled over to the seated succubus, shaking her head as a sly smirk crossed her face. She had only managed to get the top of her bikini on before Lucy's shorts burst, and now that things were beginning to get a little more hot and heavy, the bottom probably wasn't going to be necessary. "Hmph. We only got halfway, but I guess I really can't blame you. You lasted longer than I expected; Honestly, I thought you'd burst as soon as I took my shirt off."
She gave a cute chuckle and took another step closer, her hefty hips swaying with her motions as she slipped a finger underneath her panties. "I guess you've earned this, you've helped out quite a bit."
Without much of a warning, she threw off her panties, turned around, and sat squarely down onto Lucy's lap, her bouncy butt rubbing up against the side of Lucy's enormous erection as the succubus let out a soft squeak of surprise, her cock responding in turn by sending a spurt of prespunk soaring a few feet in the air before falling back to the floor with a wet splat.
In her seated position, the demoness' dong nearly passed Oreo's head, the very tip of the throbbing equine endowment rubbing up against the top of her neck; Even with how absolutely immense it was compared to the positively petite bunny-girl, Oreo was visibly keeping more composure than Lucy as she set to work giving the massive maiden a hot and hugely horny hotdogging. Even though she was so much smaller than the succubus, Oreo's butt was more than big enough to properly service the spurting shaft, Lucy unable to really make any sounds besides mewling moans and groans of lust.
"Try to hang in there for at least a little longer, I want to actually enjoy this too, yknow," Oreo scoffed, moving her butt up and down on Lucy's lap as her partner's powerful cock painted every inch of her ample ass with precum. She got into a steady rhythm as the loud, sloppy slaps of bouncing bunny butt filled the entire dressing room, compounding on top of the hung harlot's horny moaning. It was taking just about all the willpower Lucy could muster not to cum on the spot, the soft sounds of her overstuffed balls sloshing beneath the two girls a sure sign that she was desperately in need of some sort of release.
"Hope you're not going to pop from a little bunny butt, big girl. I thought a succubus would have a little more self-control, hmm?"
The bratty bunny's continued teasing certainly wasn't making it any easier for Lucy to resist as her moans shifted slowly into soft, horny growls, her ludicrous libido starting to set in. Oreo's cute, puffy anus was just barely visible through her bouncing butt, drenched in lewd liquids from her nearby pussy as it was clear the bunny was enjoying this a little more than she was willing to admit. Every time she bounced up and down on Lucy's massive meat, it slipped dangerously close to the fat flare of the equine endowment, threatening to slip inside if she wasn't careful enough...
Oreo had already had her fair share of fun for the evening, the demoness' devious side showing itself as her eyes glowed with a mischievous glint. With one swift motion, the succubus grabbed the bunny-girl's sides with both hands and picked her up; it happened so quickly she could hardly register what was happening before she was immediately flipped around to face the cat and dropped onto the throbbing tip of Lucy's cock, a full foot of pulsing demon dong pounding into the depths of the bitchy bun's butt in a matter of seconds.
"A-AAAH! L-Lucy-"
Oreo's haughty facade was almost instantly shattered as the succubus slammed into her ass, her overconfidence shifting into overwhelming lust as the next few inches slipped inside. Fortunately, with a sneaky spell cast by Lucy just before her immense insertion, she'd rendered the bun's battered backdoor stretchy enough to take her tremendous tool without any issue; even with her magical assistance, though, Oreo's butt was gripping her humongous horsecock so tight that she almost thought she'd cum on the spot.
"W-what was that about self-control, hun?" Lucy laughed, still stuttering from the sheer stimulation of the amazing anal; The tables had been turned quite quickly, Oreo now being rendered the cute, cooing mess out of the two as her rear was ravaged by her newly dominant feline friend. Inch after inch was carefully crammed inside slowly enough to not overwhelm her, but forcefully enough to pound the bratty bun into a lust-drunken haze, and she was feeling it. Even with two feet of cat cock stretching her out and bulging her belly obscenely, she needed more.
"J-just- Nnnngh, ghh- shut up and f-fuck me harder, dammit! F-fuck, it's t-too much..."
Lucy did as she was told, still taking enough care not to go so hard as to hurt the bottom-heavy bunny, both of them utterly lost in lustful bliss as the demoness took things a step further and pulled the hare's head close to her own, firmly locking their lips together.
Oreo's moans were momentarily muffled by the sloppy smooch as Lucy probed her own long, ludicrously wet tongue around inside Oreo's mouth in a frenzied french-kiss, an unmistakable taste of cookies and cream befitting of the bunny's name crossing her tastebuds as she continued to hammer her horsecock in and out with all the force she could give. Shortly after, Lucy felt a sudden spurt of pussy juice spraying against her loins, Oreo reaching her own orgasm from the intense anal alone as she practically drenched the bench the two friends were fucking on and then some; Lucy herself could feel her climax coming on, the heavy heat in her loins building with each passing second as she intensified her body-shaking slams into the overstuffed Oreo. She narrowed her eyes lustfully and leaned in as close to Oreo's ear as she could, lowering her voice to a soft, sensual whisper that sent a shiver of stimulation down the bunny's back. "Hope you're ready, because I'm not pulling out."
This was too much for Oreo, and her entire body clenched tightly around Lucy's colossal cock, setting off a chain reaction as the succubus was, in turn, pushed over the edge. In unison, both girls were slammed with incredibly intense orgasms, Oreo sending a sizable squirt of girlcum splattering onto Lucy's lap as the demoness' heavy balls clenched to her cock, the belly of her equine endowment bulged obscenely with the sheer volume of her load. A blast of cat cum at least as thick as Oreo's arm rocketed forth from its flaring tip directly into her depths with immense force, flooding her belly in a matter of seconds as it ballooned outwards with the first spurt alone; Their twin moans of erotic ecstasy filled the room as quickly as Lucy was filling Oreo, gallons of succubus spunk surging forth to cumflate the bratty bun's burgeoning belly.
"Ghh, holy fuck, Lucy, don't you dare stop-"
A solid sixty seconds of Lucy's sustained orgasm passed as Oreo rapidly reached her limit, her stomach refusing to grow any larger as every new rope of cat cum pumped into her sent a gallon or so of the creamy filling inside her spurting thickly out from the sides of Lucy's cock. A puddle of demon semen at least an inch deep spread out a few meters from the epicenter of their whole enormously erotic display, only narrowly missing the clothes Oreo had carefully set next to the mirror on the opposite wall. The monumental mess only kept getting bigger as Lucy slowed down her persistent plapping a little bit, her steady slams becoming heavier and more deliberate as she continued to dump the full contents of her balls into the hugely horny bunny.
At last, she gave one more huge, forceful thrust, hilting to her base inside Oreo and letting go of her hips, leaving both of them panting and gasping for breath from sheer exertion.
Later...
The door to the dressing room creaked open, the flustered feline face of Lucy poking out from within as she stepped cautiously out into the hall of the store. Her entire body from the waist down was completely drenched in a conspicuous combination of fluids, and from the waist up was not much different, dripping with sweat as the demoness' sports bra was still somehow holding onto her massive breasts. Her shorts were a different affair entirely, having been utterly annihilated a few hours prior, she had only tenuously managed to put them back together with her magical skills, although they still threatened to burst at any second as her still-erect shaft pushed forcefully against the abused fabric.
After she stepped out of the room, Oreo followed close behind her, her pure-white face now a shade of deep cherry-red. Though she had fit herself back into her original outfit, her belly was still so bloated with cum that she looked at least nine months pregnant and then some, the rear end of her shorts dripping succubus spunk onto the floor in giant globs that she uselessly hoped nobody would notice. The two girls were both magnificently messy, not-so-subtly displaying the debauchery they had taken part in to the world as they sheepishly made their way towards the front of the store, a pile of cum-coated clothing and price tags held heavily in Lucy's hands. Neither of them would soon forget the look the cashier had given them, but after Oreo had pulled out her purse and paid for all of the sex-saturated stuff, it seemed like they didn't care enough to ask any questions.
Eventually, they were on their way out of the store's front door, each girl carrying twin bags of leaking lingerie as they tried as hard as possible to ignore the many, many ogling, awestruck onlookers. As they finally reached the mall's exit, leaving a steady trail of sexual fluids behind them, a smug, smirking Oreo gave Lucy's leg a teasing bump with her well-used butt.
"Why don't we come back tomorrow and try on the rest? See if you can last any longer than today, hmm?"