The Impure (DRAFT 1)
The Impure by Sheba Wolf
Thick dark blood runs down the large male's arm as the young wolfess sinks her teeth further into his flesh, instead of stopping him it makes him grow stronger in his lust. A screaming pain shoots through her body as he plunges his thick hard shaft into her virgin hole. She yelps loudly and bites harder onto his arm. Tears run down her face as he begins to thrust, pain running through her body with each thrust of his hips.
He has her pinned, one paw on the back of her neck holding her scruff and one on the ground, now covered in thick blood. She is on her knees, her fore claws dug into the earth, he is behind her on one knee, thrusting hard and mecifuless. She tries to kick him away but he effortlessly pins that leg down with a large hindpaw.
Finally after what seemed like hours his knot swells enough to tie them, he continues to thrust wildly then releases his hot sticky seed into her. She growls as this happens, clamping her jaw harder she hears bones snapping. Suddenly there is a blow to the back of her head and everything goes black.
Awaking the next morning to the sounds of her pack howling for her the wolfess realizes that she had been out all day and night. She sits up slowly but not slow enough. Her head begins to spin and she falls back down to the ground. She lies there as the thoughts of the day before come rushing back to her.
She had been cutting and cleaning a deer that the alpha had killed when a very muscular, handsome wolf came out of the trees behind her. He was completely naked and had several scars on his arms and chest. His sheath was very large and his balls were twice the size of the alpha male's. Slightly embarrassed she turned away from him not letting him see her blush as she continued to clean the deer. She didn't know him but he knew her somehow. He called her over to him by name. Fear mixed with a bit of excitement and embarassment flooded her emotions as she turned and walked over to the male. She tried to hide the fear she felt but knew that he could sense it.
As she stood up and walked towards him and he began to grin, suddenly when she was in arms length he grabbed her by her arm, spun her around, and knocked her to the ground with his forepaw on her scruff. His other paw hit the ground beside her head as they both fell to the ground. She tried to get up but she could only get to her knees. Looking to get away any way possible she bit down on his arm and blood began to flow down it, he leaned close and whispered in her ear "aww come now why'd you have to do that? You and I both know you want this bitch."
As she shakes her head to clear her the alpha and his mate emerge from the trees and slowly make their way over to her slightly sniffing the air in a nervous manner. Both the alphas look worried and scared. Thier ears laid back and their tails hanging low, almost between their legs. Getting closer to the young wolfess they catch a strong odor. Turning to each other they relize that they both know who was here, and what had happened.
To be continued...
Please give me critique, however do NOT be rude about it, I know it needs a lot of work.