A Prisoner's Request
Ice Age 4 fanfic. No spoilers.
Hey guys! This is my first attempt at some furry literature, so I'd like to know if something isn't right or missing... grammar, spelling, anything you find. Comments and feedback go a long way.
I actually wrote this a few weeks before I published it (ice age 4 screened two weeks earlier here in Latin America) but I wanted to wait until the US release date so you could get a better picture of the whole thing. Thank you and enjoy!
The small group slowly separated, each one going to sleep in preparation for the assault on the ship the next day. Manny, as usual, was one of the first to fall asleep. Sid was on lookout detail so he was sitting in a rock, pleasantly talking with some berries. It would be a big day tomorrow, so even Diego decided to turn in rather early. He watched the tree in which they held Shira captive, his mind overflowing with images of the gorgeous blue eyed saber tooth who had refused a bowl of water earlier.
-Heh, what an ego...-he softly said to himself. His mind started drifting back to memories of his old family, and soon he was fast asleep.
He was sharply awoken by a poking in his paw. Instincts kicked in, and he jumped to seize his attacker. Then, a familiar but unpleasant taste made its way through his tongue, and he spat Sid in disgust. The sloth, used to this sort of behavior and quite tired himself, just pointed out that it was his turn to keep watch, and dozed off incredibly fast.
-Man, one of these days I am going to kill that sloth...- he thought lightheartedly as he walked towards the lookout. When he passed by the tree, he was struck by an odd smell, something he couldn't quite analyze. He walked to the improvised holding cell, and found Shira awake, grinding her body slowly against the inside of the hollowed tree. Diego just stood there, still, watching her move and stretch that gorgeous body of hers. Her slender hips, her soft white fur, those perky ears that gave her a rather cute look... very soon he began to fantasize and closed his eyes. A second later, when he opened them, he was met with two deep blue eyes staring at him. They both looked at each other, none of them daring to speak. Finally, it was she who broke the spell.
What are you doing here?
I...I...I was just looking out and... ehm... - Diego stuttered, unable to find the words.
Go on...
I just... are you okay? - Diego asked trying to deviate the topic.
Shira looked at him, a small mix of pain and softness in her gaze. She turned around and just sat down at the far end of the cell, her head low. Diego, against better judgment, entered the cell and sat down near her. With his paw he lifted her head and looked at her. She was crying. Her tough façade shattered in an instant.
-What's wrong? You can tell me...
-As if you could understand these things...
-Try me.
Shira looked up at him. Something inside her made her feel like she could trust Diego, but her mind told her that opening up to his captor wasn't a very good idea. She decided to go with it though.
-It's just that, ever since I left my family and joined captain Gut, I have been feeling this emptiness, this hollow spot inside me which no amount of violence or booty can fill, but why would you care about it? It's not like you...
-Hey - Diego interrupted her- I understand. Do you see any more saber tooth tigers around here? I also left my family a long time ago... so I understand exactly how you feel. It's nothing to be ashamed of.
Shira just stood there, silent. More tears came rolling down her cheek, and slowly, her head came to rest in Diego's shoulder. At that point she started crying with full force, soaking Diego's brown fur. A few minutes passed by, and she slowly started to recover. She stopped crying, and went back to an upright position.
-Do you think that maybe someday I'll find something to fill that void? - She said among sniffles.
-I... don't know what to say, I mean, I thought that I had filled it with my friends but, it's still there. Sometimes it's like...
-Like you're the only one in the world, condemned to die old, sad and alone. - She said.
Diego looked into her eyes. Once hostile and savage, now filled with compassion and sadness, they irradiated a sense of freshness and softness Diego couldn't quite describe. He found himself wandering inside those eyes, being hypnotized by their sheer beauty, and when he snapped back, he found Shira's muzzle pressed hard against his. Their tongues intertwined in a frenetic dance amongst the heat of their shared heavy breathing. The kiss lasted for a few seconds but they felt like decades. When they finally pulled apart, Diego was left speechless. He was about to say something when She pulled him back for another, much more passionate kiss. His paws instinctively reached for her shoulders, and down her back. The sensations were intoxicating, her fur felt like a summer sunrise, wrapped in a soft mix of clouds and vanilla. Everything about her was perfect.
On the other side of that kiss, Shira was feeling no less enthralled by those feelings, and all those repressed thoughts and fantasies came pouring out of her. She was in heaven, and there was nothing that could get her out of it. The sensations were suddenly replaced with a small tingling in her belly. She risked a peek and saw Diego's spire, slowly protruding out of its protective sheath. She watched it with curiosity, absorbing every single detail that she could about it. She then slowly started to remember the long forgotten conversations between her mother and her.
Diego, still immersed in the kiss felt her moan into him. Not a sexual moan, a much more delicate, steady moan. They pulled apart, and held each other tight in an embrace. Shira's words were little over a whisper.
-Diego... y...you're poking me... d...Down there...
Diego felt blood rush to his cheeks, as he quickly pulled away and curled in shame, hiding his cock from her. He immediately started thinking of how stupid he was, ruining it all with the only girl she had ever felt a connection with... hell, the only girl she had actually talked to of his species of course. He was now sure he would die alone; all because of a stupid... his thoughts were interrupted by a playful giggle from Shira. She walked up to him seductively and lay down in front of him. She nudged his nuzzle with hers.
-Well, it seems our silly cat has gotten shy all of a sudden.
Diego didn't answer, he was utterly confused. His mind was still making paranoiac situations of how bad he'd screwed things up.
-Why are you ashamed? It's normal for a saber tooth to experience that in the vicinity of a girl in heat...
Diego, due to his early separation from his family, lacked the knowledge that Shira had in the area. If he had been, he would've immediately recognized the scent that drew him in originally, and the girl's grinding against the walls, mood swings and the characteristic lust as clear signs of her being in heat. He didn't, but her playful behavior and relaxed tone were enough to snap him back to reality. A bit of his confidence regained, he uncurled, his erection having subdued mainly due to the shame. Shira was quick to notice this, and while they kissed again, she slowly slid her paw all the way down and started rubbing his sheath. In no time, Diego's cock was fully erect and throbbing. She stopped her kiss for a while and stared at it.
-What is it? - He asked her.
-It's just that... I've never seen one so close...- she stated silently as she moved her nuzzle closer to it. She inhaled deeply, capturing his musk and causing her back fur to rise in shivers. Diego stood there, frozen, unable to think of anything to say or do. Without any warning, she gave it a strong lick all the way from his balls to the tip, her rough-ish tongue stimulating every nerve in its path. Diego was startled by this sudden act, yet the pleasure he felt was unparalleled. Before he could say anything, however, she came back for another go. This time, however, it was much gentler and slower. Diego felt like he was about to go to heaven, his breath heavy and erratic. Just when he thought it couldn't get any better, Shira engulfed all of his cock into her muzzle. The warmth of her breath, her tongue curling along his shaft and her teeth just barely scratching into his sensitive skin were too much for him to handle. A whole life of forced abstinence and solitude quickly forced its way from his testicles, through the shivering dick and ended up splashing against the back of the Saber tooth's throat in hot warm spurts. In his mind, fireworks blinded him as he had to muster all of his strength in keeping his mouth shut as to avoid any loud noises. After what seemed like an eternity, he started coming back to himself. Shira still had him deep inside her, and was swallowing the last drops oozing from his now very sensitive cock, a look of satisfaction in her eyes. He sighed heavily, and started to slowly close his eyes.
-Hey! No sleep for you yet buddy. Not until you help me with my... problem, anyway.
He opened his eyes, thinking about what she meant for that. She was quick in recognizing the confusion on his face, and with a quick sway she gave her back to him, raising her long tail to give him perfect view and enough access to her swollen genitals. Diego stuttered as he watched her red, puffy, "Y" shaped lips at mere inches of his face.
-Come on, Diego, have a taste.-She said seeing he was still confused.-Poor boy, must have lived alone his whole life if he's so clueless...- She thought to herself.
Slow and steady, Diego inched her tongue towards her. He could now feel the heavy smell of her heat, and he felt his cock start to harden once more. At last, he made contact. The flesh there was soft and warm. He slowly started to lap at her, finding the taste very appealing. Shira felt his tongue move across her lips, temporarily soothing the warmth and itch of her heat behind it. She started moaning quietly as he pleasured her gently. She then felt him put both his paws on her hips, and his tongue started sliding inside of her. She felt him lick tenderly at her inside walls, further soothing her from the pains of heat.
-Th...that's it Diego...mmmmmm just like that...
She felt her pleasure rise, and started pressing her hips against Diego's face which caused him to go just a bit deeper. Soon enough, she felt the familiar pressure in her womb and just like that, she came. Her body shivered and shook, her eyes shut in pure bliss. A torrent of fluid came rushing down her vagina, which Diego lapped eagerly. When the movement stopped, she collapsed to her belly and let out a long, almost silent moan. Diego was quick to lay by her.
-Ohhhhhh... that's something - She thought for herself - Way better than curling up and using my paws or my own tongue.
-Did you enjoy that...kitty? - He asked playfully, teasing her with the nickname she hated so much. He got a small nod as an answer. Shira looked calm and sleepy, but in her mind there was full chaos. -Should I... Would he agree? What if I don't like it... what if he doesn't like it...- Her thoughts raced as her mind tried to agree.
Well... I... I guess I'll be going now...-Diego said being completely honest. He had no idea that what they had just done was just the foreplay. He started to get up, but was quickly interrupted by Shira.
-Wait. Don't go... We aren't done here...
Diego just stood there, confused once again. This whole night had been a very interesting one, probably the best in his life. The mere thought of it not being over was enough to freeze him on the spot. Shira watched him. She kept expecting him to make a move, but the feline failed to deliver.
-Are you telling me that you don't know about mating? - She asked, baffled. After she got another confused look she motioned him to sit down. He then explained that when he was just a bare teenager, he had left his family to roam with more youngsters. Needless to say, during that time he had little to no contact with the opposite gender. And as the others hadn't also, it wasn't like he could talk about it with them. Shira felt somewhat bad for him, and offered to explain the whole concept to him. She got a shy nod, but that was all that she needed. She then began to explain every single part of the process. She could see in the saber tooth's eyes that this was the first he had heard of it. When she came to the part about virginity, however, she suddenly stopped. Diego noticed that something was troubling her, but when he asked about it he saw she had begun to cry again. He stopped talking and immediately hugged her. He waited patiently until she had recovered but didn't dare to ask again. Before he could do anything, however, she started talking.
-In my pack, we have a lot of traditions.-She said, softly- One of them is that every girl coming of age must be deflowered by the leader. To this, I paid little attention as a child, our leader being a very gentle and loving sabre tooth. He had quite the reputation for making a girl's first time memorable. As my body began to develop, my mother started instructing me in all these topics. She taught me all there was to know and so, three days before my deflowering ceremony, I was ready. Then something happened. Our leader was killed during one of our many hunting trips. Everyone thought the circumstances were a little odd, but no one dared to say a word. Naturally, that very day, a new leader arose. He was his young son, but was ever so different from him. He was rude and immature and selfish... but I'm getting off topic. The next day, on the eve of my ceremony, one my cousins arrived. She had just been deflowered by the new leader, and was crying louder than I thought possible. Her genitals were dripping with blood, way more than usual. That night, I ran away. I didn't know what else to do, I... I just...- at that point, She couldn't speak anymore. She resumed her crying while Diego stood there, comforting her. When she calmed down, she looked up at Diego. In his face she saw compassion, yet not pity. Amongst anyone else around, he was the only one who could understand what had gone through.
-Since then I... I thought I was destined to die a virgin, a sad, exiled girl without friends, family... without a mate... but now, I think that's no longer the case. Diego-She said looking at him- will you please take me?
Diego's heart just stopped. Even in his wildest dreams, he hadn't imagined this situation ever developing. But now, he had to make a decision. It took him less than a second to reply.
-Yes... I... I do want to be your first...- he said sheepishly, barely able to get the words out of his mouth.
Shira's eyes lit up, her heart racing against her throat. She moved up and hugged him, strong and firm, as one would hug a friend. Before long though, her heat started acting again, and she looked up to kiss him. Her paws raced through his back as she melted into the kiss. The mere situation had them both aroused in a jiffy, her pussy coated with juices ready to receive his already hard spire. She pulled away from the kiss and took a long hard look at his cock. She noticed every detail, every bump, the small spikes at the base of the head... she couldn't take it anymore.
-Please, Diego, I... I need this.... Make me yours, now!
She lay down on her belly, her tail raised up high. Diego came closer, slowly and gently positioning himself on top of her, like she had said before. It took some work to get their genitals lined up, but in a few seconds his tip was softly pressed against her swollen labia. Softly, containing the unbelievably powerful urge to just thrust inside her as hard as he could, he started penetrating her. Her folds parted slightly, offering some resistance to his head as he pushed the first inch inside. A sense of warmth invaded Diego's penis, a tingling sensation on the head. Shira felt some pain while he slowly parted her folds for the first time. Nonetheless, the arousal and pleasure masked such pain to a certain point. Diego kept pushing as slow and steady as he possibly could. After the first inch, he hit a barrier. She winced at the contact, knowing that a mild thrust of the majestic saber tooth over her was the only thing left to do. Then, something happened.
Shira and her friend had just returned from a walk. They entered the small cave reserved for her family and set the small rabbit Kauri had found. They sat down by the far end.
-I can't believe your cousin gets to be initiated by the new leader today. God, if he's half of what his father was she is going to have a good time- Kauri giggled as they snugged closer to keep warm.
-That's easy for you to say, you already had yours...
-oh, is someone getting a bit jealous? It's a wonderful experience, and the big guy made it better. He was so gentle, so caring so...
-Whoa there girl-Shira said- Don't get too excited now, I sleep here after all and I don't want the floor to be all sticky.
-Sheesh, what a bore-Kauri said playfully-I bet it's just the excitement from you being initiated tomorrow.
-Oh, stop it you... hey have you seen your sister's mate? Wow does he have a mane...
The chat went on and on and on for some time, mainly girl stuff. A couple hours later, Kauri was just about to go home when they heard crying. They went to the mouth of the cave, where Shira's mother and her sisters were gathered around her cousin. She was crying, and when Shira sneaked a peek, she saw that, under her tail, her Vagina was extremely red and swollen. That came around as a surprise, since she was really sure that she wasn't in heat and none of the other girls had returned from their ceremony in such state. It was the pool of blood, however, that had formed underneath her, that really shocked her. She was unable to look any longer, and just stayed a little further out, listening to the interrogation performed by the rest of her family. Not one single word was said by her, but the situation was pretty clear to all of them. After the commotion died down, they all decided to go to sleep and discuss the matter the next day. Shira, however, was not planning on staying there for her own ceremony. As soon as everyone fell asleep, she walked all the way to the cave of the only person she could trust.
-Shira? What on earth are you doing here? It's late and cold!
-Sorry Kauri, I just can't wait. I'm leaving.
-What? Where are you going? Why now? Why without saying goodbye? What about your deflowering ceremo... oh... -Kauri said as she grasped the idea of her friend's predicament.
-I'm sorry, I have to. You saw my cousin! I'm not going to let that happen to me. I just won't.
- I understand. It pains me to say so, but it's the right thing to do. I... I just don't want you to leave, that's all. But there's no other way, right?
Shira nodded. Tears had started to stream from her cheeks. - I can't say goodbye to anyone, they would make me stay. I need you to do it for me, specially my mother. Tell her I'll always love her and that I'll be ok. Take care, my friend. I love you.
Shira started walking away, her only bearing being "away". Her friend's last words echoing in her ears: "Please, someday, come back. I hope you can someday find the male that will initiate you the way you've always dreamed"
-Stop- She said to Diego. Her memories were so vivid again. The tears, the cries of pain. The blood. Suddenly she wasn't so sure anymore. There were so many ways in which this could go wrong... and the consequences, moral mainly. How could she cope with the fact that she had left her family and friends to avoid something, and then have it happen anyway? Could she take the risk?
Then she silenced her thoughts. Her mind focused on the male above her. His soft fur against her back, the way he supported himself in those big paws of his so he wouldn't put too much weight over her. His heavy breath, ruffling the fur at the back of her neck. So warm, so soft. His innocence, his truthfulness, his newfound devotion to her.
"I hope you can someday find the male that will initiate you the way you've always dreamed"
She had found him; he was mounting her, his phallus actually touching the barrier to her innermost sanctum. And she had been about to call him off. She made her mind.
-Do it. - She said, gritting her teeth and expecting the pain.
Diego, who was oblivious to the inner debate she'd had, prepared himself. In an act of instinct, he moved forward and put her neck in between his jaws, clenching them just enough as to not cause damage. Then, without further ado, he jabbed forward in a sharp motion, and hilted her. Her hymen gave way with ease, and before he knew it, his cock was surrounded with a tight grip and an almost unbearable heat. He had to close his eyes strongly and painfully press his toes to the ground in order to avoid Cumming right then and there.
For Shira, it was a totally different experience. As soon as he popped her cherry, a sharp, stabbing pain invaded her whole pelvic region. The jaws around her neck kept her still, and diverted some of the pain. Still, she couldn't relax her lower body, squirming a bit as she grew used to that fulfilling sensation. Diego kept perfectly still inside her, letting her get used to having his dick inside. She had instructed him in what he should do if the occasion to deflower another girl ever presented to himself, although she had no idea that just a few minutes later, he'd be using those exact tips on her. On the outside, he appeared cool and controlled, but he was actually very close to the point of nervous breakdown. He could feel her pain and, even though he knew that was to be expected, he wondered if maybe he'd been to rough or had done something wrong.
As Shira's lower body became still and she managed to relax, he slowly unclasped his jaw from her neck. It left one or two minor bruises, but he knew he had not bitten down hard enough as to puncture the skin.
-You okay? Does it still hurt? - He asked with concern.
-Y...yeah, I'm ok... - That was, in fact, false. Shira was more than okay. She could feel his spire buried deep within her, pulsating inside of her like a second heart. The pain had completely subsided, replaced by the best feeling she'd ever had. She felt every ridge, every vein, every bump in him, as her tight pussy embraced it like a glove. It was like they were made for each other, the lone two pieces of a jigsaw puzzle. And just when she thought it couldn't get any better, he started pulling back slowly, causing the small barbs at the base of his head to flare and rake her walls in an effort to induce ovulation. It was painful, yes, but not in a bad way. It was that sort of mild pain that brings about more and more pleasure. He pulled out until just the head remained inside, and then pushed back in, causing a release of endorphins on both of them.
Diego, who up to today was completely oblivious to this whole aspect of life, now wondered how he could've lived without it. Shira was in heaven, all the best sensations she ever had rushing back to her in a tidal wave of pure pleasure. Diego's instinct gradually took hold, increasing his rhythm and duplicating his pleasure. Shira had no idea that, under the influence of the barbs and her heat, she had begun to ovulate. Not that she cared anyways; it would have taken a mammoth stampede to divert her attention. As Diego's thrusts became shallower and faster, all those years without sex finally caught up with the kitty. She came harder than ever before, coating her insides with fluid and making her spasm in pure ecstasy, and then she then did something that Diego thought was impossible. She purred. The cute, soft sound, along with the vibrations transferred down to his shaft proved to be too much for the no longer virgin feline. With a hard thrust, he went as far down her as possible, until the tip was wedged firmly in her cervix, and came. Thick ropes of fertile sperm coated the inside of her fertile womb. He shuddered as he unloaded himself inside her, and after several seconds of seeing fireworks, he relaxed. His oversensitive cock now was hurting from the contact with her slick vaginal walls. He pulled out with a wet pop, and fell to his side, right alongside her new mate. She was still feeling ecstatic from the ordeal, and muttered something about it being better than licking herself off like before, and fell asleep. Diego, tired as he was, knew he couldn't just fall asleep right there with her, even though he would've loved to. Gathering all his strength, he stood up and cleaned her up a bit using his tongue. He then cleaned himself up and finally, satisfied with covering up his tracks, gave her a kiss in the forehead and walked out of the cell. He looked at the sky. It was almost time to wake up Manny for his turn to keep watch. He walked up only to find him sitting, wide awake, looking towards him.
-How was the lookout? - He asked, casually
-Boring, actually.
Yeah... I bet it was.-He replied with a strange look.
How long...-Diego began but was interrupted.
Quite a bit. I saw most of it. Heard, actually. You guys made a bit of noise.
Diego was paralyzed, no idea as to what to do or say.
-Normally, I'd be angry at you for not being alert against any threat, or for getting too comfortable with a prisoner. But after hearing both of your stories, I'd say you deserve a break. I'm not going to tell anyone about this and Sid, well; he was just too lazy and tired to even wake up. Your secret is safe, my friend.
Diego couldn't have asked for more. He thanked him and went down to get some sleep. Little did he know that within Shira's womb, something had started. Something that would prove to be a bigger adventure than anything he'd ever faced.
-J