Special To Me
So this form of writing is extremely foreign to me. I basically don't know what I'm doing. So I understand if you find the wording repetitive, at the same time I don't have a very fantastic vocabulary, its basically limited to like... a 15 year old's vocab. As usual, any and all feedback is appreciated (Also, I don't actually know what to title it, I title AFTER I finished the story so... ya.)
It had been a long day for the both of them, Leo, a Mackenzie Valley Wolf who worked as an electrician was exhausted with the amount of work that he had done throughout his shift, at least the day was over and now he could relax on the couch and watch TV. Cade, a Red Fox, lay with his head on Leo's lap quietly watching with him. Cade was probably more exhausted than Leo was, working as a Lifeguard he always spewed stories of some fool who drowned because they thought they could swim. Today though, Cade had been quiet ever since he got home, it worried Leo but it was nothing he couldn't remedy. It was late in the afternoon, the golden rays of the sun poured into the living room through the windows on either side of the TV, painting the room a sparkly gold and warming it to a very cozy temperature, it looked and felt surreal. Leo looked down at Cade, watching as his lovely blue eyes focused on the TV, his lovely muzzle giving off a gentle red. Leo never got enough of those eyes, he'd wished he was born with blue eyes, but instead he was stuck with a dark brown that looked completely black in most light. Leo brought his arm from the back of the couch and gently placed paw on Cade's arm, slowly rubbing it trying to gain some sort of acknowledgement. Cade didn't respond, continuing to stare a the TV. "Cade?" Leo said playfully, drawing out his name. "Yes, love?" Cade responded groggily, turning his head to meet Leo's eyes. "How was your day?" Leo gave him a soft smile. "Terrible." Cade sighed. "Aw... What happened?" "I really hate people sometimes." Cade momentarily broke eye contact. "After pulling out a child, the parent began blaming me for the incident." Leo prepared for the rant that was likely to follow. "It's not my damn job to babysit people! They need to learn how to take care of themselves." Cade turned back to look at the TV. "My Senior Attendant is going to be mad if there is a complaint, then it's all sorts of trouble for me." Cade exhaled heavily and turned back to Leo. "You never give yourself credit. It takes a special and very skilled person like you to save lives every day." Leo reassured "I don't feel all too special." Cade looked back at the TV Leo saw a small opportunity to exploit Cade's sadness, it was rare for him to get the chance be intimate. "Mind if I get up?" Leo asked. "Nope." Cade replied rather quickly. Leo gently lifted Cade's head and got off the couch, Cade readjusted himself, letting his head down on the arm rest. Leo walked over to the table where the remote for the TV sat, picked it up, and brought it to the other end of the couch. As quickly as he could, Leo hopped onto the couch, sat down on Cade's thighs, leaving the remote by his legs and slid his paws under the sides of Cade's shirt, Cade gasped and quickly shot him a confused look. Leo continued enjoying the feel of the well-defined
muscles on Cade's body. Cade wasn't very buff, he was rather skinny but had very visible muscle tone that made Leo melt. Once Leo managed his paws up to Cade's shoulder he summoned another smile, Cade continued to stare completely oblivious to the happenings. Leo leaned forward lifting Cade's shirt up to reveal his finely toned, white, plushy torso. In response Cade quickly dropped his arms down to his sides, pushing a worried look and hindering Leo's progress. "Don't you worry, I won't bite." Leo licked his lips. Cade hesitated but slowly allowed Leo to remove his shirt, which he dropped off from the side of the couch. "You said you didn't feel so special?" Leo gave him a seductive grin and swung his tail for Cade to see. "How about I fix that." Cade looked as though he was about to say something but Leo put his paws on either side of Cade's neck and quickly stole a kiss on the lips, rather than resist like he expected, Cade welcomed it, allowing him to explore for a few moments. Leo broke the kiss and began working his way to Cade's cheek, leaving a trail of small kisses in his wake; planting an exaggerated peck on Cade's cheek, he gently licked his way up to Cade's ear which twitched as he reached it. Leo kissed his way down the side of Cade's face until he got to the side of his neck; exhaling deeply and warming the soft fur then gently nipping it. Cade let a out a soft moan which reinforced Leo's persistence. Now at the collar bone he began tracing it with tiny fast paced kisses while reaching back to grab the remote. Without looking Leo turned off the TV then set the remote down on the table, all the while planting his love filled kisses. "Mmm... I was watching that..." Cade said softly. Leo smiled to himself and continued; moving to the other side of Cade's body he kissed along Cade's other collar bone making his way to Cade's neck. Leo kissed up the middle of his neck, making these kisses long and drawn out, aware of Cade's sensitivity in that area. With each long kiss Cade moaned, bringing his hand and resting it on the back of Leo's head, gently massaging it with his thumb. Leo, satisfied that his partner was finally getting comfortable, got to the underside of Cade's jaw and nipped at the area where his neck connected with his head, Cade shared a short loud sigh. Kissing his way down his neck again, Leo continued down to his chest, giving a kiss then a small lick which left a small glistening patch in the sunlight. As soon as he made it to Cade's sternum, Leo switched directions, kissing his way to left side of Cade's body listening for his soft moans before pausing to nuzzle himself where he could feel Cade's powerful heartbeat. After indulging himself for a few moments he began kissing down the side of Cade's ribs, Cade's muscles tensed up with every kiss revealing an even more pronounced definition of his body. Leo stopped above Cade's hip and moved his head to center of Cade's lower
abdomen. Sticking out his tongue, he gave a long lick all the way back to Cade's sternum who quietly moaned the entire distance. This time Leo went over to the right side of Cade's body and delivered the same treatment, taking it a little slower so he could really get to know the feel. Moving his head to the center of Cade's lower abdomen again, he began planting multiple quick kisses as he brought up his paws and began working Cade's belt. Just before he got undone it Cade's entire body tensed and he shifted, quickly grabbing Leo's arms. Leo met Cade's worried almost terrified stare which he took as sign to stop, he didn't think he'd get that far anyway. "Not today?" Leo smiled, getting back up into a sitting position"N-no." Cade was still giving him a worried look. "Alright." Leo got off of Cade and walked back to the front of the couch, giving Cade a small kiss on the muzzle and taking back his seat, allowing Cade to rest his head on Leo's lap again. Cade went and reached for his shirt before being stopped by Leo's paw holding his shoulder. "Um, do you mind getting the remote first?" Leo kept his voice as innocent as possible. "Fine." Cade giggled. Note: If you made it down here, whether you liked the story or not, you have the full extent of my gratitude. Your comments, whether bad or good are also greatly appreciated and sometimes treasured. :) Thank you for taking the time out of your day to view my work.