Bear With Me For Hyena Good Time
The Commander is now leading everyone to their own specific rooms and you saves you for last
So this is part 2 Part 1 is right here! If you wanna get the PDF here ya go!
Commander Brigham had you follow in complete silence. Looking around, the inside of the prison was a bit more spacious than you had first imagined, but what caught your eye was that most of the doors looked rusty.
He dropped everyone off into different rooms as he went down the halls. It took him a few minutes to do so, as he would walk into the rooms and have everyone wait outside until he was done doing whatever.
You had thought about escaping, but every time you remembered what happened to the other two outside, you thought better against it.
You and whoever was left had tried to ask him what he was doing, but he would only smile in response before inviting everyone along. You tried to look at the nameplates for each room, but most didn’t have any. Despite that, only one stuck out: the Church of Chasity.
Soon, it was just the two of you.
You walked alongside him in silence. Every time you looked up at him, he only flashed his fangs. You were going to say something when you both suddenly stopped in front of a cell that seemed to have rust all over the door.
“Weww, we awe hewe! the beaw i wawnt uwu tuwu meet iws vewy speciaw! Hopefuwwy, he cawn hewp whip uwu intwo shape…” his mouth cruels up near the end, but upon seeing you, he returns to his beaming smile as he opens the door.
[“Well, we are here! The bear I want you to meet is very special! Hopefully, he can help whip you into shape…”]
As you entered, the first thing that hit you was the smell of burnt fur. The entire room reeked of it; even the commander had covered his nose upon entering. He gave you a gentle nudge, forcing you further into the room and closing the door behind you.
“The man uwu awe wooking fow iws a wittwe fuwthew in. Duwu, have a good time, okay.”
[“The man you are looking for is a little further in. Do have a good time, okay.”]
The further you went, the worse the stench got. It wasn’t till you saw a bear with a collar on his neck that was connected to the wall. The bear looked as if he had been there for days as his fur was all matted, and his clothes looked worse for wear. The bear lifted his head to see you and gave you a weak smile.
“Hello there, how are you today?” As he finished his sentence, a sudden shock went through the collar, causing the bear to scream in pain.
“Now, now Ludwig, we tawked abouwt thiws. Juwst because the two of uwu juwst met doesn’t mean uwu wewen’t supposed tuwu insuwt him."
[“Now, now Ludwig, we talked about this. Just because the two of you just met doesn’t mean you weren’t supposed to insult him.”]
The commander’s words echoed throughout the room, but you were uncertain where they came from.
“To be honest, Ludwig was supposed tuwu hewp in the wefowming of peopwe fwom thiws affwiction of being howny, but instead, he was a bit too sympathetic awnd couwdn’t give out the pwopew tough wove needed tuwu hewp. So we wewe hoping you’d be abwe tuwu hewp cowwect thawt!”
[“To be honest, Ludwig was supposed to help in the reforming of people from this affliction of being horny, but instead, he was a bit too sympathetic and couldn’t give out the proper tough love needed to help. So we were hoping you’d be able to help correct that!”]
Commander Brigham’s cheery tone echoed throughout the room. Your gaze returned to Ludwig. The bear twitched between breaths. When his eyes met yours, he tried to give you another smile but quickly changed it to a severe frown.
“Sor-!”
Was the kind natured ursine about to apologize?
“Good job, Ludwig! Wemembew why you’we hewe!”
[“Good job, Ludwig! Remember why you’re here!”]
Ludwig wipes the drool from his mouth before standing up. The bear easily dwarfs you as he makes his way closer to you. You get ready for whatever he has in store for you.
“You look more useless than a declawed tiger.”
Ludwig smirked as you gave your hands a once over. You know you’re not a fighter, and if you had to take on someone in a fight, you’d rather just flee. It was something of an insult, but…
“Um, okay?”
As you stared at the bear, another shock went to his collar. It was powerful enough this time to send him crashing to the floor. Ludwig clawed at the collar as he tried to pry it off, but that only made it worse as more went through and signed his paws.
“Come now, Ludwig! I know uwu cawn duwu bettew than thawt!”[“Come now, Ludwig! I know you can do better than that!”]
The commander was taunting the bear at this point. He swatted your hand away as you walked over to help the bear.
“DON’T! I’M…I’m fine. Just give me a moment…”
Ludwig lay on the floor as he gathered himself. The bear struggled to get off the ground. Every time he made progress, he would fall back down. And every time he fell, the commander would laugh.
The room was soon filled with Commander Brigham’s laughter and Ludwig’s constant falling. You wanted to help, but Ludwig would shout at you to stay back.
It took a hot minute, but Ludwig finally got up. The fur around his neck was thoroughly singed; you could even see where the burn marks started around his neck. He convulsed with every step he took towards you. Not wanting him to suffer any further, you just stood still, waiting to see what he would do next.
He places paws on you and looks you deep in the eye. You could smell his breath as he breathed right onto you.
“Even if you were dying, I wouldn’t try to save you.”
You look at the big bear as he stares deep into your eyes. It wasn’t the kind of insult you were thinking, but the thought of not being taken care of by the fluffy gaint seemed to strike a nerve.
The thought of never being held in his arms as he would spoon-feed you some soup. Him, checking up on you and wiping the cold sweat off your body when you get cold chills and can’t take care of yourself—never knowing how gentle his caring touch could be felt like a needle has been driven through your heart.
“Ah, but, WHY?! I’d kill to be cared for by a man like you.”
Ludwig beemmed bright with a cheeky grin as he looked between you and the door. You heard the commander’s goofy voice right behind you.
“I guess thawt wiww be the best we wiww get fwom uwu, Ludwig,”[“I guess that will be the best we will get from you, Ludwig,”] you feel a firm grip on you should. “as fow uwu, come with me. We might need tuwu find uwu a mowe ‘suitabwe pawtnew.’”[“As for you, come with me. We might need to find you a more ‘suitable partner.’”]
As you leave the room with the commander, you look back only to see Ludwig waving. You just gave a curt wave back.
“Just so uwu know, I was getting a bit bowed watching the two of uwu,”[“Just so you know, I was getting a bit bored watching the two of you,”] The next thing you hear is Ludwig’s screams through the door, echoing throughout the hall. “But fow the next guest we awe going tuwu visit, I juwst hope we don’t have the same pwobwem as with Ludwig.”[“But for the next guest we are going to visit, I just hope we don’t have the same problem as with Ludwig.”]
The lion drags you by the hand as he marches his way to a new room, much like a father would a disobedient child. You tried to get a read on his emotions, but he wore his cherry smile the whole time. When he had finally stopped, you stood in front of a door with a worn-out sign. Looking hard, it roughly read, “Disciplinary Room.”
“Wewcome tuwu youw new woom. Hopefuwwy, thiws owne won’t be as disappointing as the wast owne.”[“Welcome to your new room. Hopefully, this one won’t be as disappointing as the last one.”]Commander Brigham nodded for you to go through the door. Fearing the lion, you walk in. “This guy might be a bit wough, so have fun~!”[“This guy might be a bit rough, so have fun~!”]
He slammed the door behind you, and its sound filled the quiet room. The torches on the wall gave you dim lighting as you looked around. As you began making your way further, the sound of a man crying soon filled the halls.
You remember there was on guy who was brought in here. It crossed your mind that it could be him who is crying, but you have no idea where he is. What’s worse is whoever made him cry must be some kind of monster. You had to deal with Ludwig, who, though meant to be mean, was gentle with his insults, even at the cost of his health.
Whoever was in this room must be one of the worst. Thinking over who could fit the bill of making a grown man cry, the only one that crossed your mind was Gunther, the bandit bull. You froze at the thought of dealing with a monster like that. As you continued forward, you prayed that it was someone else.
When you got to the center room before you, sitting in a high chair with a studded leather whip, was a hyena. Jayden, a solder in unit 57-J.
Part of you was happy to see him, and not Gunther, but the sounds of the crying man reminded you that you should be careful. You cautiously approached the hyena, keeping your guard up as you watched the hyena’s paws.
“Hey, Jayden. Ho-!”
He flicks the whip at you, nearly hitting your feet. You look at where it did land. You saw that part of the floor had chipped. You looked back at the hyena as he slowly rosed from his chair. He twirled the whip in his paw as he moved closer in. The hyena stood a few inches away from you.
The two of you say nothing as Jayden begins to circle you. His whip scraped against the floor, mimicking the sound of pouring sand. The usually kind-hearted hyena looked ready to kill.
“So, yeah, I’m not sure what’s going on, but for some reason, I’m, um, here. So co-!”
Jayden cracked his whip on the ground again, and a thunderous echo rang throughout the room. You immediately stood to attention as you felt the hilt of the whip on your back.
“You are here for punishment and nothing more. We are not here to be friends. This is the job the Commander had given me, and I will be sure to see it through.”
With his free paw, he points to the corner of the room. Squinting your eyes, you could make out a blob. Upon closer inspection, it was the man who had come here before you. The man was completely naked and covered in whip marks. He was crying in a ball as he mumbled to himself.
“I promise to be good. Please, no more.” He just kept repeating that in between sobs.
Turning to face Jayden, from the corner of your eyes, you see the hyena rearing up to strike you. In a split second, you jumped out of the way, barely dodging the whip. Its thunderous strike hitting the already broken man. His cries of pain seemed to have brought some weird joy from the hyena. Jayden raised his whip once more, ready to strike you.
As he swung his whip at you again, you immediately jumped to your right, nearly avoiding another strike. Without a second thought, you ran towards the door. You could hear the mad cackle of the hyena close behind.
“RUN ALL YOU WANT! THERE IS NO ESCAPE!”
Jayden was in hot pursuit as you tried your best to flee. He would strike at you every now and then, only to miss by a few inches. He’d laugh with delight as you picked up your pace. Looking back at the hyena, all you could see was his wicked smile. He bore his fangs and foaming at the maw, a great motivator to have you pick up the pace.
Not paying any attention, you slammed into the door. Once you regained yourself, you tried to open it but noticed it had no knob. Before you could even panic, the Commander opened the slot.
“Hey! Open up! I don’t want to be whipped by this psychopath!”
“Sowwy, but thiws iws the ‘discipwinawy woom,’ so thewe iws nothing I cawn duwu tiww uwu have bewn ‘discipwined’ ~?!”[“Sorry, but this is the ‘Disciplinary Room,’ so there is nothing I can do till you have been ‘disciplined’ ~?!”] The lion chuckled, “Pwus, I think youw fwiend iws hewe fow uwu!” [“Plus, I think your friend is here for you!”]
Turning around, you came face to face with Jayden. Whip at the ready to strike no matter what direction you went. Before you heard the shutter close, the lion’s chuckle graced your ear.
Fear began to settle in as you locked eyes with the hyena. His taunting smirk shined as he twirled his whip. Jayden cracked his whip once more before reading it to strike you.
“Well, why don’t you look at that? You have nowhere to run. Any last words?”
Jayden stroked the ground, sending a thundercrack throughout the room.
“If I had known you were next, I would have let Ludwig’s ‘insults’ hurt me more.”
You gave a nervous chuckle as you closed your eyes, accepting your fate. You waited for the strike, but nothing happened. Seconds passed before you slowly opened your eyes. When you got a good look at the hyena, his face contorted in a cacophony of emotions.
“Is Ludwig okay?”
You just stared at there, staring at the hyena. He let out a growl before raising his whip once more.
“HE’S DOING FINE! I think. He was ‘insulting’ me, but he wasn’t very good at it. I kinda felt bad for the bear.”
“So, is he alright?”
“Not sure. The last thing I remember was hearing him scream out in pain. He wore a collar that shocked him like crazy. Commander Brigham then brought me here for proper punishment.”
Jayden paced back and forth, mumbling to himself with this new information. You couldn’t bring yourself to care for what he had to say as an opportunity had presented itself.
While the hyena was contemplating, you crept up right behind him. With both hands in twined, you clocked Jayden on the back of the head. To your surprise, his head was harder than you thought. The blowback left your hands feeling a bit numb.
The hyena ended up dropping his whip on the ground. Before he knew it, you had already lunged for the whip, with its leathery hide now in your grasp. A smirk curled up as you turned to face Jayden, whose eyes switched between you and the whip.
“Give it back!”
He held out a paw, expecting. You look at his open paw briefly before chuckling at the hyena. Then, a surge of calmness washed over you.
“Sure!”
You raised the whip over your head, and with one overhead swing, you flicked it at his feet. Jayden immediately jumped to his right, but not giving him any time to recover, you immediately flicked your wrist, catching the hyena’s calf. He howled out in pain.
Tears began to swell up in his eyes. You raised the whip to strike him once more, but a soft, squishy feeling gripped your arm. Looking over your shoulder, you saw Commander Brigham behind you with his trademark smile.
“Oh, poow baby. Iwt seems thiws guest was too much fow uwu tuwu handwe, but thawt's okay, Jayden. I’m suwe uwu need tuwu west a bit!”[“Oh, poor baby. It seems this guest was too much for you to handle, but that's okay, Jayden. I’m sure you need to rest a bit!”]
Commander Brigham ushered you out of the room, being sure to take the whip from your hand.
“WAIT COMMANDER! THIS WAS A FLUKE, I PROMISE! PLEASE, COMMANDER, I’M SORRY! PLEASE FORGIVE ME!”
The hyena’s pleads drowned out as you made your way down the hall, much like Ludwig’s.
The lion’s arm over your shoulder as the two of you walked off. At this point, you were too scared to ask him anything. He finally broke the silence after the two of you made it a good way down.
“You know, I have two guys who awe pewfect fow uwu. Seems thawt they weawwy wanted tuwu tawk tuwu uwu, too! So don’t wowwy. Whethew the convewsation with uwu thwee goes weww ow bad, iwt iws juwst going tuwu be a peacefuw chat!”[“You know, I have two guys who are perfect for you. Seems that they really wanted to talk to you, too! So don’t worry. Whether the conversation with you three goes well or bad, it is just going to be a peaceful chat!”]
He let out a deep, unnerving laugh as he guided you down the hall.