web comic test script
this is a test script of a comic i would like to do as a web series that would come out maybe every other week or once a month.
any constructive cretinism would really help thank you for looking.
INTRO
The year is 2045 fifteen years after the end of the third world war that lasted ten years. This is the story of a young General that leads an off the books organization named the Alien Paranormal Operation Service (A.P.O.S) with in the government of the New Union of Soviet Socialist Republic (N.U.S.S.R). APOS is charged with operations that deal with Alien delegate protection and investigations dealing with witch craft, alien terrorist attacks, and attacks of paranormal origin.
CHAPTER ONE
"Officer on deck" chief of the deck called out into the briefing room as everyone rose and saluted the general, "At ease you may be seated men and women" the Soviet General stated looking over the faces of the men and women that were under his command may they be from Russia, France, Japan, UK, or the UCA (United Colonies of America). "Today we will be getting a delegate of the Tranoi to speak to the people of our countries and we are to escort her and her family and guards to all of the different cities of the mother land before we hand her over to the MIB in the UCA but keep your eyes open we have received numerous threats as has her guards."
The General watched with his solders as the shuttle from the great space station that orbited earth landed on the run way in Moscow. As the alien shuttle pulled up to the terminal a great band started playing the national anthem of the Soviet Union to welcome the ambassador of peace and prosperity from the Tranoi space station. As the shuttle stopped and docked with the terminal bridge the APOS team jogged to the bridge to welcome the Tranoi people and they saluted the Ambassador whom saluted each of them as she and her family walked into the terminal and she was greeted by the Soviet Premier and Prim minister the three bowed to each other as did their families. As APOS escorted the Ambassador to the waiting transports that were escorted by heavily armored vehicles. As the caravan was escorted by police they closed off each road to the Kremlin so the convoy would get there without any interruption. Once the cars pulled up to the stage that was wrapped around by a transparent bullet proof shield the Premier said a few welcoming words to the people of Russia watching in the stands and in the surrounding buildings of the Red Square. Soon the alien ambassador walked up to the microphone and thanked the premier for the welcoming speech. As she spoke she looked around as a device on her clothes translated everything she said into Russian for the crowed to understand her and she smiled softly as large boxes of medical supplies, food, and water were given out to each city of the host country she was in and her people were passing out the food and water as the medical supplies were transported to all of the hospitals. As the hospitals had finally been fully stocked for the first time in twenty years the Tranoi smiled as she looked around happy to help the people of Russia and soon everyone around the world. As the speech ended people dispersed and the ambassador walked back into the limo and she sat with her children and husband as the premier and prim minister got into the car a gun shot was heard as the car was shot at but the bullets didn't penetrate the armor plating but another shot was fired popping the tire as the limo speeds off while the Tranoi secret service and the APOS teams ran into the building that the shot came from they heard a lowed explosion coming from two floors up killing 32 including the shooter and injuring three people. As the two teams searched the building for any other shooters, two med crews ran into the building to help the injured evacuate the building. Once no other shooter was found the two teams evacuated the building before going to another to search for any combatants before they split up to check each floor before meeting back at the armored transports. Once everyone was loaded up into the transports they drove in the direction of the limo went and they were able to catch up to it as the convoy made its way to the Premier's palace that was heavily guarded.
To be continued...