Scars
Brian looked over at the fidgeting badger sitting next to him on the plane. He couldn't help but think back to the night when that badger asked him to marry him the week prior. He didn't look half as nervous then as he did now, which made Brian...
The Blacksmith Prince - Chapter 1 (first draft)
Eaton panted from the oppressive heat of the forge and the effort of running the grindstone as he examined the sword in front of him. He eyed it with pride as he triple-checked every detail, from the intricate polished hilt, to the etching at the base...
Mistakes
Grant finished his sandwich at the small sub shop in the airport and checked his watch. Perfect timing; Derron's plane was due any minute. He wadded up the paper wrapping from his sub, grabbed his luggage, and walked out, throwing his trash in the can...
Inadequate 2
Saturday I went to lunch with my friend, Ken. Of course he wanted to go to the ramen place near me, it seemed that almost every time he wanted to grab food, it was something Asian. Not that I don't like Asian foods, but I like to switch it up. I parked...
Inadequate 1
Why am I even here? I thought as I sipped on my scotch, holding it in my muzzle for a couple seconds before swallowing. So far no one had approached me to chat or even ask the time (not that they would, there's a clock on the wall behind me), and I...