Pokemon: Darkest Taboo, Pt. 2 + 3 rewrite

Story by zaft dodger on SoFurry

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#2 of proofed

This is a rewrite of Logan Storm's "Pokemon: Darkest Taboo, Pt. 2" (and 3). I have tried to leave the actual story line intact as much as possible without changing the direction of the story (something the author expressed concern for when I recommended getting a proofreader) but I did substitute some of my own words and rearranged some sentences so they made more sense. This piece is not written how I would have done it so please don't think this is my style.

It has been awhile since the last rewrite I posted and I had forgotten how much work I had to put into it but I was bored; I must have spent 2-3 hours editing and formatting this thing. I probably missed some stuff but it's 3 am and I'm not getting paid for this. Don't ask when the next one will be out; reworking these things is time consuming and I have a life so they will be posted when they are posted.

Enjoy :)



The corridors where dark and foreboding. Every now and then, as lightning struck in far of distance, areas of the Pokecenter would light up for a split second before being swallowed in darkness once more.

Nurse Joy was on front desk going through the last of her paper work before heading to bed like so many of the Trainers and their Pokémon had. Her team of Chancy, Wigglytuff and Audino had retired for the night leaving her alone to finish of the last few odds and ends of a somewhat hectic day courtesy of the howling storm outside.

The pokémon nurse had not noticed she was being spied upon by a Sneasel from one the air vents. The small, dark blue Pokémon cocked her head with a smile about her face. The human female looked familiar to the ones in the other Pokémon Centers and it boggled her mind a little; humans twins were rare identical multiples even more so.

With one last glance, the Sneasel carried on through the air ducts as finally she picked up her Trainers scent. She licked her muzzle eagerly after having learned what she needed to do to help her Human get over his concerns about breeding. She still found it hard to believe he had lost a golden opportunity with a young red haired human female; she'd even had those large milk bags on her chest that most human males seemed to like so much. Her hips where wide and her waist slim, a perfect match for the magazines that where all ways so high up on shelves it was a wonder anyone even brought them.

But then he had fumbled with his words when she had pushed him to instigate whatever mating ritual humans had. The female, unsurprisingly, lost interest and wandered off. Now the Sneasel was going to take matter into her own paws. One way or another she was going to rid her Trainer of his virginity. It was ridiculous that he still possessed it, especially when his scent was that of a male who had come of age and was now able to sire offspring.

It quite perplexed her since -from what she could tell- he was young, fit and reasonably strong for a human. But instead of presenting himself as the highly virile male he was, he came across as hesitant and weak. After all, regardless of species, all Pokémon females preferred a confident male over one that was too nervous to show how good a mate they were; she was sure it was the same with Humans too. Pausing by another bedroom, a man was standing in front of two male Scythers but Seasel had the information she needed. She didn't see how breeding with the same gender would be of use to her so she carried on leaving the three of them to whatever pleasure they had planned.

"Okay boys, you know the plan; now take care of it!"

The guy began removing his shirt to reveal the top half of a Team Rocket uniform and the two Scythers nodded before heading out. Their trainer had selected this room specifically because it was closest to the vault where Pokémon who had received treatment where stored until their trainers came to collect them. Moving silently, the two flying/bug types crept along the dark hallway. They paused every now and then to listen for anyone coming their way but it was late and nearly everyone was sound asleep.

There were two vaults: one for normal storage, the other for Pokémon that misbehaved during their stay and had to be disciplined. The Team Rocket Grunt was right behind them carrying the last two members of their group.

"Excadrill, come on out!" The Grunt whispered, summoning the two Excadrill's from their pokéballs.

It was then the sound of a chair scraping back from the main lobby was heard and the two Scythers went to investigate and deal with whoever it was.

Nurse Joy had heard the distinctive sound of pokéballs opening and had pushed her chair back in a show of frustration.

"I bet it's those ghost pokémon playing their cruel tricks again, I'm going to have to give them a stern lecture for this!" she muttered aloud to herself, she was not amused and this would be the third day in a row the two Gengars had tried to eat the dreams of the trainers staying overnight while their pokémon where being healed.

Getting up from her desk she never saw the two shadows stalking her, their predatory eyes focused upon their prey as they stalked her, waiting for the perfect opportunity to strike. Straightening out the creases in her pink dress, Nurse Joy grumbled to herself as she dropped her paper work by mistake. She was really going t scold those Gengars when she found them. Taking a deep breath to calm herself, Nurse Joy leaned over to retrieve her paper works from the desk counter; the glimpse of her firm, slender thighs could be seen from behind was all her two stalkers needed to change their plan of attack.

A scream left Joy's lips as something heavy landed upon her back, forcing her down over the desk top- or she would have screamed, had a Ping-Pong ball shaped object not pushed it way into her open mouth. The flat sides of two chitinous blades held her head in place as a squatting Scyther began pushing it's abdomen forward, her lips closing around the thick tapering shaft, but it couldn't push in very far; her throat wouldn't stretch that much to accommodate the abnormal shape of his tip.

On her back she could feel the hard body of the other Scyther, its own abdomen easing between its insectile legs as it jabbed with its hard member, trying to find an opening beneath her dress and finding himself blocked by her pink cute panties. He leapt off of her back in frustration, thrusting its beaked face underneath her uniform and snapping at her panties; scratching her skin in the process of tearing them apart.

"** MUNNNNNNPH....UMPH!" **Nurse Joy screamed against the insectoid length pushing through her mouth, unintentionally sending vibrations down first Scyther's length; much to its delight.

[She's perfect!] The first moaned loudly.

His brother eased his head out from under the humans dress and nodded in agreement, removing the pink panties -what little remained of them- from his mouth with a grunt. He rose to his full height and brought his abdomen back up between his legs, a greenish-white ball the same size as his brothers own tip emerged from the very end of his thorax. With a twisted grin he thrust under her dress while extending his entire tapering length, easily finding her lower lips.

Nurse Joy's eyes widened in horror as she felt the blunt pressure stretching her lips open as the flying/bug type pokémon's reproductive muscle applied pressure against her entrance, trying to force her open. She was scared as hell at this point as she was more than familiar with the anatomy of pokémon in the Kanto region and knew exactly what was about to happen.

She was no virgin, she'd lost that to Town's Gym Leader he'd been quite skillful in his demolishing of her chastity, but this was different; these where pokémon. It was wrong on so many levels to be doing this. The shape of their poke-hoods, while okay for other bug-types, would probably cause her considerable pain.

"AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH** H!"** She screamed against the member in her mouth when the second pokedick finally forced Joy's poor opening to give way and accept it's length, much to the owner's delight.

[Arceus, she's tight brother! UHNNNNN!...yeah, take it all!] The Second scyther moaned.

The feeling of the human's hot passageway gripped him so incredibly tight that he thought he might pass out from the sheer pleasure right then and there but after a few moments he applied more pressure, easing the thinner end of his tapered length into her trembling body. He loved how she squirmed and struggled against them, it was an amazing sensation. Their trainer loved to watch from a hiding place as they abused trainers or, if victim was a pokemon, actually joined in on the fun. Right now though, their trainer was asleep.

He felt the part he loved most was when her body stiffened in response to his shaft gradually stretching her open with the wider sections of his bug-hood. The second Scyther was now panting as he thrust his powerful abdomen further up under the humans dress, forcing her already over-stretched orifice to accept even more as the last section of his member entered her.

Much to Nurse Joy's dismay, it made her convulse uncontrollably as she was brought to one orgasm after another.

The first Scyther was gasping. His eyes were closed tightly as he began to twitch and jerk, his seed flowing freely down her throat. The sperm irritated her raw flesh when he pulled free. Her hands shot up to her sore throat as his fluids had the desired effect and kept her from calling out for help.

Turning, he moved around the desk before leaning down over her back. His abdomen slipped underneath her dress and the slick member soon found her tight little pucker. The throbbing cock pressed aggressively inward, slowly forcing her to spread for him.

Joy gripped the edge of the counter top, her mouth wide open in a silent scream as her anus was forced open. Unlike his brother, the first Scyther was not as considerate in easing forward gradually. He rammed his entire organ completely inside her with a single thrust, humping his abdomen violently against her tight, firm rear.

He groaned loudly, enjoying the way her soft inner walls felt like vices around his whole girth. The sensation of his cocktip popping through the tight outer ring into her bowels sent his mind spinning in ecstasy.

Shaking her head from side to side in agony, Joy prayed to Arceus to just let her die but it never happened. She might have enjoyed it had it not been for the aggression of her rapists and shape of their Pokéhoods crushing her cervix and roughly scraping the depths of her bowels.

The poor human struggled to stay conscious, terrified of what they might do to her if she wasn't awake. Shaking from the stress her body was under, she was helpless to stop the sperm in her stomach from coming back up and her breasts grew painfully sore from the constant friction against the desk despite her dress acting as a barrier.

Much to her dismay, Nurse Joy was starting to enjoy what was happening to her. She had fought hard against it but their insectile members were reaching places and filling her in ways she hadn't thought possible. She began thrusting back at her assailants, wanting them to keep using her, degrading her. she hated to admit it, but she was becoming addicted to being violated by domineering Pokémon.

Thrusting their abdomens inhumanly fast, she was jerked about like some rag doll; the increased tempo triggered by the imminent approach of their release inside their victim. Both Scythers were panting and grunting as they felt each other's organs through the thick membrane separating the two passageways; another thing they enjoyed about human females. The heat building inside their bodies was driving them in to a frenzy of breeding, much to Joy's delight.

The second Scyther finally forced the pouting entrance to Joy's womb to dilate and give way to it's bulbous member in a fit of primal lust, sending the tip plunging into the most sacred part of her body.

If Nurse Joy could have made a sound she would have demolished the entire Pokécenter with her scream of pleasure. Thankfully, however, this proved to much for her to handle. Her mind felt like it was exploding in pure ecstasy as both males jerked and bucked wildly, releasing their hot, sticky seed inside her climaxing body. They slowed to a stop with a stupid grin of satisfaction on their faces.

Without a word they gave a grunt and pulled free from within the quivering wreck of a woman who was a now card-carrying Poképhile.

[We have to breed one of the other Joys someday] said the first Scyther stretching his exhausted body and sighing happily.

[I agree,] his brother replied, [Maybe we can get our trainer involved as well, he'd love their hot mouths.]

With that, the two Scyther brothers took their leave; dragging the human along with them. They'd dump her in the vault to avoid raising alarms when they made their escape. She didn't seem to mind to being dragged, she was quite out of it and wasn't aware of anything for quite some time.

The two Excadrill had managed to drill a hole into the thick protective door of the vault and the man was climbing through with a sack in hand to load up on as many Pokéballs as he could. He was a little disturbed by the way his two Scythers had dealt with the Nurse Joy but now that his prize was within reach he forgot about it.

"We hit the jackpot boys!" He announced, unaware of a certain Sneasel looking down from a nearby vent. She had lost her way, even with her Trainers scent to follow, and felt her fur stand on end as she saw what had become of Nurse Joy.

It happened all too swiftly as the vent was torn apart and the small bundle of fury launched herself into their midst. Her claws turned a silvery colour as she used Metal Claw, taking the already exhausted flying/bug types by surprise. Her steel claws ripped through the thorax of one, sending its transparent ichor splattering across the room. Pivoting on the spot, she narrowly avoided the slashing attack of the second Scyther's counterattack as his brother fell to the ground writhing in agony.

Sneasel's eyes narrowed angrily, her claws no longer metallic but still bared in readiness to fight. A menacing growl left her throat as she crouched down, setting her stance and waiting for the Scyther to attack.

The two Excadrill on her left suddenly dived down at the wooden laminated flooring, literally drilling through the wood all the way down to the concrete foundations to give the Team Rocket Grunt a way out. True, the man could have used the two Ground/Steel types to attack her and would have had an advantage type-wise, but the longer this went on, the more likely people would awaken and come to see what the fuss was about. He decided to cut his losses and abort the mission.

"Take Care of the Sneasel and join me when you can!" he called out as he jumped down the newly formed escape tunnel.

Shadows inside the vault began to stretch out, merging with Sneasel's own and coiling like tendrils around her legs as they slithered up her body. They gathered around her claws, melding with them and growing far larger than normal.

[Time To Die Bitch!] The bug sneered at her, raising it blades it bolted forwards with extreme speed. It's exoskeleton acted as natural armor while granting the solid mass of muscle encased within the ability to explosively accelerate.

It was Predator Vs. Predator.

Sneasel reacted quickly, launching an attack of her own and slashing her ghostly claws of pure shadow through his body. It left no visible wound but the Scyther's intestines were clenched in the now-corporeal claws that had just eviscerated him.

[Beg me to let you die quick!] She laughed coldly at the male whose eyes where wide in shock. He had lost but he refused to give in; if he was going to die, he would take her down with him.

He struck swiftly at her, his body seeming to spin as his bladed arms slashed and hacked in her general direction in an all-or-nothing assault.

She managed to defect a good number of the strikes but there where too many of them coming her way and was starting give ground under the onslaught. A tear ran down her face as she realized she wasn't able to win this. She was never going to get the chance to try and teach her Trainer how to breed.

That is, until a gout of flame engulfed the Scyther. It roasted his body, leaving nothing but a charred husk when it was extinguished. A Blaziken swaggered into the room, examining her work with smug satisfaction before turning to the Sneasel.

[There you are, Oni. Do you know how long Bunny and I have been looking for you?] The fighting/fire type grumbled at her, hands on her feathery hips.

[Hey, it's not my fault, Blaze; I ran in to some trouble!]** **Oni retorted, jerking her claw at Nurse Joy whose afterglow had yet to fade.

[So I see. And I had to bail you out again!] Blaze smirked, walking over to the injured Scyther lying on his back. He clutched a blade-arm painfully to his chest; the pain in his abdomen was nothing compared to seeing his brother burned alive by the Blaziken's Flamethrower attack. [Sorry about this, no witnesses allowed.] The fire/fighting type grunted, raising her foot and curbstomping the injured Scyther's head. It split the skull with ease; brains bursting out and squishing beneath her claws, smearing against the laminated wood.

[Come on, Oni let's get going before Jack wakes up] said Blaze, turning to leave.

Oni gave a sigh and nodded wearily, following Blaze out; but not before giving the Scyther's corpse a vindictive kick for good measure.


Chapter 3.


They arrived back at their trainers room and were greeted by a Lopunny that had a more than pleased look on her face.

[So Bunny, what distracted from your half of the search?] Blaze grunted in her typical brutish manner. Oni smirked, enjoying the dig at the Normal type Pokémon, The scent of multiple males was upon her; all Eevees of one type or another, probably from a trainer with an all-Eevee team.

Lopunnys -even amongst other pokémon- were thought of as the 'slut pokémon' rather than the rabbit-type' pokémon as the humans did.

**[I had little choice! Those poor Eevees were all virgins and of breeding age; it would have been a crime against nature for them stay untouched by a female's paw!] **She replied, raising a paw to her chest as if she had been performing a selfless and righteous duty. The truth was she was a total slut with less control of her libido than most other Lopunnys had. And that was saying something.

[Well either way I found her.] Blaze mused, jerking a taloned thumb at the Sneasel.

[Why'd you take off like that, Oni? Did you find some stud to fuck?] Lopunny asked playfully, characteristically crude in her manner.

[I was trying to learn how humans breed but all I found where trainers being seduced by or seducing their pokémon.] Oni said tiredly.

Blaze cocked her head and found herself interested in learning more.

[Eeew! Breeding with humans?! Thats gross. I mean, yeah, they are kind acute and can be so tender and loving but eeew. It's just plain wrong!] said Bunny, repulsed by the idea.

[Why is it so wrong? We often seek out Pokémon types incompatable with our own so we don't bear an egg when we're in heat. I mean you just pleasured six Eevees, not Lopunnys, didn't you?] Blaze retorted.

Oni thought about this for a moment before chipping in.

[Well as long as the authorities don't find out there shouldn't be any problem with a human pleasuring our kind. We also wouldn't have to worry about getting pregnant when we're in heat!]

Bunny looked like she was going to throw up at the mere idea. She did not mince any words voicing her own opinion on the matter.

[ARE YOU OUT OF YOUR ARCEUS DAMNED MINDS? DO YOU REALLY THINK OUR TRAINER WOULD WANT TO SHOVE HIS COCK UP OUR HOLES? HE'S NOT LIKE THOSE OTHER MENTALY DERANGED HUMANS WHO BREED WITH POKéMON, DO YOU WANT US TO BE ABANDONED BECAUSE HE'S AFRAID THAT WE'LL JUMP HIS BONES OR SOMETHING?]

Oni flinched at the outburst but Blaze glared at Bunny, trying to decide whether to burn her alive or just slap the hell out of her. Oni swiftly stepped between them to act as a buffer while she tried to diffuse the situation.

[And what do you suggest, huh? Do we let our trainer continue to suffer? We all smelt it; he's of breeding age for his kind. We all remember how bad our first time coming into heat was.]

Blaze sighed, her shoulders sagging. Oni was right. In-fighting wouldn't help their Human one bit. They needed solutions, not more problems.

[But humans are always in season; Jack's not used to it yet, not to mention all the failed attempts to hook up. Maybe we could try Nurse Joy? She smells like she's experienced.]

Bunny smirked slightly, liking this idea; especially since it meant easing the subject away from interspecies-breeding.

[She sure does. Our Jack needs to breed with a human female who knows how to handle nervous first timers. Hell, you should've seen how scared those Eevee brothers where until I took the lead!]

Oni had to agree, it sounded like a great idea except for one rather big problem; Nurse Joy would probably not take kindly to any propositions for some time. It had only happened a few minutes ago, but just in case Blaze had forgotten -which was likely- she spoke up.

[That might be a problem. Remember where you found me Blaze? Didn't you see the state Nurse Joy was in from after those Scythers raped her? She'll be in no condition to do anything for quite a while after that.]

Blaze and Bunny looked at her and all three sighed in unison.

[FINE! But we do it careful and build up to it so he thinks it's his idea and we have to agree it's ane-time thing.] Bunny relented, but was determined to at least set limits. **[Eeew; I can't believe I'm even agreeing to this, it's wrong on so many levels!] **She shuddered, completely grossed out by this, but they were right. She wouldn't wish celibacy on her worst enemy. She was impressed her Trainer hadn't shown any signs of his suffering. Maybe he was doing it so as not to cause the three of them to about him?

But his scent didn't lie and he shifted uncomfortably when he was around female humans he found attractive; it was adorably cute when he tried to get noticed but she was glad he hadn't gone through with paying that one female in the ally to breed with him, she had smelled wrong; as if she had all kinds of diseases. Luckily Oni and herself had kept him occupied long enough for Blaze to chase the unsuitable female off. Besides, she was somehow sure that Female had once been Male. She didn't know how that could be, but there was definitely something peculiar about her(?) scent.

[So who does the deed?] said Blaze, interrupting Bunny's thoughts. It had been something she hadn't considered, really. It was probably going to end in an argument like things always did, though.

[Well definitely not you! Well, not right away; you'd break him!] The Lopunny was shocked when instead of coming up with some snide retort Blaze actually agreed with her.

[You're right, I could easily snap his body in half by mistake. I'd suggest Bunny but we know how much of a prude she is about this sort of thing; sooo... since you where his first pokémon you should really be the one to do it, Oni.]

Oni blinked, as did Bunny, though in the Lopunny's case it was at being called a prude. Her, of all Lopunny's, a prude! She felt her dander rise, outraged by the insult. So much so that Bunny launched herself at Blaze and ended the discussion like they usually did- fighting it out.

The Sneasel looked at her sleeping trainer feeling apprehensive and uncertain; not at the idea of breeding with him, but whether or not she would be able to satisfy him like the Gardevior she had watched with her trainer. Would their own trainer enjoy it or freak out by it like Bunny had sait he might?

She decided more research would be needed before she dared even attempt to breed with a human.