Times & Tribulations Of A Succumouse
#2 of The Succumouse
*This is an EXTREME adult story if you are not 18(21 in some evil places) I must ask you close this now (ya I know not going to happen but my ass is covered) send comments or flames to
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Mouse, Demon, Transformation, Harm, Rape,
!NOTE! *This story is and is not a sequel to Eliana the Succumouse it pick's up right after Keven's untimely wait no, deserving demise. However unlike the first story the events are not recollection by Eliana but a first person telling of what is happing at that moment this is done because I got a bit of feed back saying all the past tense was confusing to some and me.*
Times & Tribulations Of A Succumouse
"I have only been a succubus for four days, and two fursones are dead granted one truly deserved what he got but last night I just could not bring my self to get out of bed. All I could think was that first boy. He didn't deserve what happened and then a voice chimes in deep in my mind, it whispers how can you know?"
My name is Eliana M. (mouse) Tilton. I'm fourteen years old, I stand four foot eleven inches tall and my tail is about the half that in length. My breast are well below an A cup and they will never be any bigger. My fur is light gray and my eyes are brown, most of the time. I live in a small two storied house with both my parents who never seem to have much life altering advice when needed.
I was always the brainy kid in school, you know the kind. It dose not require any more explanation on how my school life was, if you have ever been to a school you know. Ill pay them all back in spades sooner or later my list is already getting shorter. At start it had twenty seven names I can now remove three Kevin of course was first and he payed worse of all so far. Mark was second got to him and number three, Stacy, last night.
That night I waited for the change at its normal time of 1:00am. My fur tingled and I felt the fire burn through me. I have to let the change go slow or I might lose control of it, I don't want a repeat of my first night. The fire moved slowly from the violet spot in the center of my chest. It washed over my small breast concentrating under my shoulder blades. I felt the hard lump begin to grow below the tight skin. I looked at myself in the mirror as the lumps grew and lengthened they spread and from them, four finger's curve off each wing with three joints each. Between them a thin layer of skin grew linking them together. The leading edge of the wings tingled as the violet fur began to cover it. The skin that connected each of the fingers like ribs of the wings darkened until it was as black as the night out side.
I could feel them, move them now. I ran my paw over them slowly they are so sensitive that it makes my hole body shiver. The fire moved its way up my neck and back around to my jaws. My teeth slowly change to pointed almost k-9's. My tongue Strikes out like its being ripped from my mouth it lengthiness painfully and the tip splits in two now forked it returns to its new pointy surroundings. Next my round ears curve and into long points, they are still in the same place and there size dose not changed just the length and shape. My head fur which I've always wanted to dye since it's the same gray as the rest of me flushes jet black. From my head fur line two slender red horns slowly follow the shape of my skull leaving just about two inches underneath them, until they are just behind my ears. The fire moves down my chest again concentrating just above my sex in truth I love this part. The sheath I'd taken from that poor boy I killed on my first night grew in to its place full and ready. Finally the tip of my tail slowly flattens in two a triangle shape and the whole thing turned black, I had honestly found that one just oddly bland.
Mark had not taken all night, crushing is undeveloped nuts was far easier then I thought. The poor little cat boy hadn't even hit puberty yet. Was a real surprise to me but there was no doubt about it when I held his maleness in my paw, never being a man might have been a bit harsh, he only put his piss in my lemon aid. So I went for number three, Stacy. One of the few girls on my list Stacy was nothing more then the living embodiment of Bitchamis Maxamis. Gorgeous girls don't get me wrong. She is a bit leggy for my liking. Her coloring is typical of collie's red whit in the typical pattern. Why was she on my list? As the head of the cheerleader squad she was in the best place to labile some one anything. So she started the Lesbo Lin nick name that some people still call me.
It was 2:58am when I climbed silently in to her room threw the previously locked window. Girl sleeps like the dead I swear. As I stood over her still frame, I felt the hunger build deep inside. I'd fed a bit off little Mike but I didn't want to kill him, he was a jerk but he had his punishment. I was slightly overwhelmed as I gently removed her blanket reveling that she slept nude. Her full breast at least 6 times the size of mine teased me looking so soft and inviting. Her tight athletic body shivered as the air passed through her fur with the blanket gone. I did not want to wake her just yet so I slowly lowered my self down next to her on the bed examining her curves and wonder full tail so full and colorful unlike my naked piece of skin. Slowly I placed my paw on one of her firm cheeks moving it over her long fur until my paw rested on her tail. Lifting it only slightly to reveal her obviously overused sex and her tail hole, this seemed to have never been touched.
Quickly deciding how I would feed off her I lined my stolen member up with her overused sex sliding in with tender force then back out. Her sex's juice runs down my member as I wanted just the smallest amount lube for what was to come. I lined up at her more forgotten hole. With one thrust I forced it in. her eyes snapped open with such force I swear I could hear it I clamped my left paw around her muzzle keeping her from screaming in pain and surprise. Fear washed over her and I soaked it in.
"shh. Stacy calm down or this will relay hurt, I'm only gong to take what I need then ill be gone if you keep quiet. Or if you're a bitch ill rip your tail off and stuff it in this lovely tight place of yours."
I continued to force my way deeper in to her previously untouched place. She twitched and pulled trying with all she had to pull free but there was no way to break free of my grasp being so much stronger then her. Her whimpering from beneath my paw which was still clamped firmly in place drove the hunger on as I drove in again and again waiting for the drawl of her very essence into myself.
My pleasures and satisfaction grew as I felt the final build up to my feast. With one last shove and a moan from the bitch it began. With each pump of my member deep with in her more and more of her strength sapped away her fur lost its shine and her eyes became dull just before she slipped away I forced my self off her panting hard from the effort.
"There now that was not so bad was it bitch" I landed a firm smack on her ass making her jump and yelp. She struggled with the wooziness of having a few years of her life suck off. She forced her self to look at me turning with lust and hate filled eyes that ill admit made me want to finish what I had started
"You...sick...piece of..." her eyes go wide as she gets a full view of me still leaning over her. Just before she was able to scream I clamped my paw over her muzzle again
"I warned you to be quiet guess ill have to rip that tail off after all been making me jellies this whole time anyway."
As I ran my other paw down her back using my hips to hold her down she squirmed, pushed and pulled trying to free herself. My paw clamped around the base of her tail I rubbed it at first teasing her softly she began to relaxing thinking I had just been trying to scare her making it all the more easy to quickly force it up until the vertebra snapped and split from her pelvis. It had only taken a second to snap it, with a little drag of the claws her skin gave way my prize in hand she passed out.
However once it was in my paw's I just could not bring myself to ruin such a lovely thing, I bet with a little reading into taxidermy it will make a lovely trim for a hat. To be fair I'm not heartless I did call for an ambulance from a pay phone a block away from her house didn't want her bleeding to death now how would she suffer the teasing and name calling she put me through if she died.
I realized only shortly there after that the sky seemed lighter then it should be. With shock I realized dawn was approaching with a speed I might not be able to out fly. Naked with a disembodied tail was not how I wanted to walk home. Lights were coming on in windows as my wings cut through the wind. As I approached my yard I could see safety in the form of my open window. The fire shot through me before I landed falling the last few feet on to the roof hurt but I would only fell it later as my body twisted itself back to normal in the open air. I must be more carefully or learn control.