A Holiday To Remember, Part 1
#1 of A Holiday to Remember
This is a follow-up to the story that ...
This is a follow-up to the story that I posted a while back. Unlike with the previous installment, I wrote this entirely from scratch. Aside from the character names, this is pretty much my story. Anyway, I did some checking, but I couldn't find anything else from the original author.
I've been toying with the idea of writing a sequel to the original story, but I wanted to be sure that I could do something different with this. When it came to writing this time around, the characters seen here in the story are based on my own interpretations of them. Also, I came up with a new character for this- she's my own creation, made especially for this story.
"A Holiday To Remember" (THE VISITOR 2)
Written by Seres B. North Based on a story by 'Paul Taylor'
Part 1
"You know, when you first told me about the little adventure that you and Lily had last fall, I wasn't sure if I believed you." Jane remarked as she relaxed in the passenger seat.
Alison glanced over to her friend momentarily, smiling to herself before returning her gaze back to the rode ahead of them. The raccoon took note of the young feline sitting beside her. Her body was covered in dark gray fur, and she had striking green eyes and shoulder-length black hair- that was pulled into a short ponytail in the back.
Jane's distance vision was pretty poor, so she had on a pair of trendy-looking glasses so that she could actually see things far-off from her. The slender female was dressed in a black t-shirt (with the logo of a local rock band she liked) and a pair of black shorts that came midway down her thighs. She had on white socks with a pair of tennis shoes. The shirt was loose on her, but still hinted at the curves of her smallish breasts underneath it.
"Fair enough..." The raccoon replied understandingly. "But then what do you think it now?" Alison asked her with a grin as they drove.
Jane turned to her friend and smiled at her. The pretty raccoon's dark gray/brown hair hung down her back and her brown eyes were visible amidst her dark 'mask'. She was dressed in a light-blue t-shirt (that showed off her medium-sized breasts just enough) along with a pair of blue jeans and sandals.
The cat smiled. "Well, when you invited me on this little trip, it seemed like the perfect chance to see if you guys were telling the truth..." She replied. "Plus, I definitely want to meet this 'Whistle' that you and Lilly told me so much about."
Alison smirked at her friend's comment. "Well, Whistle can be a pretty interesting guy when you get to know him... So, yeah, I'm pretty sure that you'll like him." She explained to her with a smile as they continued down along the road.
"So, then tell me about this place we're going to." Jane asked as they turned a corner. It was only midday where they were, so the sky was bright and clear as they drove.
"It's a condo that belongs to Lily's family." Alison replied. "No one else is using it right now, so we'll have the place to ourselves." The raccoon added with a smile. "It's a really nice place, and the nearest neighbors are about a mile away... so won't have to worry about anyone bothering us."
"Well, considering that Lily's involved... as well as your 'friend', I'm not surprised that you'd want to have some privacy." Jane replied with a chuckle. "Considering how you three spent your time... Well, you certainly don't want to be disturbed during all that sex!"
"This isn't just sex we're talking about..." Alison replied with a faint blush. "We're talking about some first-rate fucking here." She added with a smile. "Whistle has amazing stamina- that's the reason we invited you along, because he has a ridiculous amount of energy!" The Raccoon explained to her as they turned another corner.
Jane turned to look at her as the blue Volvo moved. "...Seriously?"
The raccoon nodded. "I'm being totally serious..." She replied with a smile. "My lower body felt numb the next day, after he'd left." She added with a big grin.
The other woman regarded her a moment. "And you're serious saying that this stud just happened to show up at your door last year?" The dark-haired feline asked her. "Because, you know, I have to say that I find all this pretty hard to believe."
Alison nodded and smiled. "Honest to god, I'm serious!" She replied. "We got his number and we stayed in touch with him, but this is the first time that we've seen him since then." She then paused for a moment. "I'm sure that Lily will be eager to get 'caught up' with him." She added, rubbing her chin thoughtfully as she spoke.
...o.o.o...
Alison and Jane pulled into the gravel driveway, coming to a halt with the dull sound of tires on the loose rock covering. The two women grabbed their luggage and possessions and made their way to the front door. The raccoon sighed, realizing that the front door wasn't locked, but quickly opened it and motion for her friend to follow her.
Once inside, they set their things down and Alison quickly locked the door. She guessed that Lily has simply forgotten to do this earlier when she'd come by. She knew full well just how flighty the vixen could be at times, so simply chocked it up to that. Moments later, they heard footsteps and the two women turned to see Lily approach the two of them. She was wearing a short black shirt and a tight sleeveless blouse that hugged her large breasts. Her long reddish-brown hair hung loos down her back and she was also dressed in a pair of trendy sandals.
"Oh, hi guys, I'm glad to see the two of you made it." Lily offered, her formidable bust almost moving with her as she spoke. Alison glanced at her and wondered if her meager top could actually contain her expansive bosom. The top three or four buttons were undone as well, exposing the sandy valley of her cleavage to the two of them.
The raccoon her name called and she turned to see Whistle standing there- dressed in a pair of jeans and black t-shirt. He looked pretty much as she'd remembered him. Alison rushed over to him and threw her arms around him, kissing him without saying a word. After a moment, she pulled back and smiled up at him. "It's great to see you again, I really missed you." remarked.
Alison then took a step back and gestured towards the other woman. "Oh yeah, this our friend Jane, the three of us have been friends since college." She explained.
Whistle nodded. "It's nice to meet you, my name's Willowaster Lonestar, but most people just call me 'Whistle'." He explained, stepping forward to shake hands with the feline.
The dark-haired cat took his hand to shake it and looked up at him, noting how much taller than her he was, but smiled back him nonetheless. "Wow, it's great to meet you..." She began. "Alison and Lily told me so much about you, so I was really looking forward to meeting you in person."
Whistle smirked slightly at the remark, but remained cool. "Well, it seems like I have a lot to live up to... I hope I haven't disappointed you." He replied with a smile.
Jane shook her head and smiled back at him. "From the look of things, you have nothing to worry about. I've been pretty impressed with that I've seen so far."
"It's not going to be dinner time for a while." Lily announced. "In the mean time, why don't we all get changed and head out back to check out the pool?" She suggest to the other, before exchanging a quick glance with Alison once she finished.
The idea seemed to go down well with everyone. Jane (with her things in tow) and Whistle left to go change- both heading to the respective rooms they were staying. Lily and Alison were sharing the main bedroom, so their two guests could both have a room to themselves.
Alison walked up to the vixen, who was busy milling about the kitchen. Lily stopped and looked over to her long-time friend. "I know you... We've been friends for years, so I can tell when you're up to something..." The raccoon began, crossing her arms as she continued. "So come on, just what it is that you're up to?"
Lily giggled slightly and gave Alison a small smile. "Oh, you know, just the usual sort of things- I mean, I figured you'd be just as eager to pick up where things left off with Whistle." She replied with a smile and continued organizing thing in the kitchen. "So just relax and go get changed."
The raccoon shook her head, but couldn't help but smile at her friend's scheming. And with that, she departed from the kitchen/dining area with her things to go change in the mast bedroom.
Lily just smiled to herself, before going to gather up her things and get ready...
...o.o.o...
Jane stepped out into the back yard, onto the tiled surface, and looked at the medium-sized pool the dominated the most of it. There was also a modest jacuzzi and a barbecue set up as well. And, of course, a tall wooden fence encircled the while thing- giving them some much needed privacy.
The feline was dressed in a simply yellow one-piece swimsuit with a low back. She had her glasses on, as well as a pair of sandals on her feet. The outfit hugged her figure enough to show off her small slender form, as well as conforming the subtle curve of her smallish breasts and her flat stomach. She removed her light blue towel from over her shoulder and hung it on the back of a nearby deck chair.
She turned around in time to see Lily emerge from the condo. The vixen paused to shut the french doors behind her. She then stepped out into the sunlight, in all her curvaceous glory. Jane found herself at a loss for a moment, taken back by her form...
She was wearing a small black two-piece number that clung tightly to her curvy figure. The skimpy top was made up black triangular-shaped segments that barely covered her large breasts. While the bottom piece was much the same, comprised of small black bit of material that only just covered her nether regions with only the smallest degree of modesty. Jane could tell from the woman's body language that she obviously knew just how her looks effected those around her.
Lily's long dark reddish-brown hair was pulled into a low ponytail in the back. Her feet were adorned with some nice-looking black sandals and she was holding a long white towel under her arm. Her hips and cleavage seemed to bounce and sway with each stride of her long legs as she moved to set the towel down next to Jane's. The feline shook her head, but still smiled as she watched the vixen move with a surprising degree of fluidity.
"Nice swimsuit..." Jane quipped with a smile. "Though, I'd like to know just who exactly you're trying to impress with it." She added jokingly. "Oh, and thanks again for inviting me."
The vixen smiled back at her and shook her head. "What are you talking about? I'm not trying to impress anyone." She replied, placing her hands on her hips. "It's just the way that I see it... If you've got something, then flaunt it." She added with pride. "And your welcome... I'm glad you were able to come along... And I figured you'd enjoy getting to know Whistle."
Jane simply let out a sigh and shook her head. "I knew it, I knew you had to have something planned." She remarked with a small smile.
Whistle then emerged from the condo, wearing a simple pair of red swimming trunks. Alison soon appeared right behind him. The raccoon was wearing a dark blue revealing two-piece, though not nearly as showy as the one Lily was sporting. The matching top and bikini bottom were both fixed together with laces- the bottom over either hip, and the top around her neck neck and in front, between her breasts.
Whistle was carrying their towels and the wolf set them down on the nearby table as the two of them joined Lily and Jane near the pool. "Well, now that everyone's finally here... I certainly wouldn't mind trying out the pool." Jane remarked with a smile.
Lily smiled at the suggestion, but shook her head. "That sound's like a great idea..." She replied casually. "But right now, I think it's a good time for the three of us to get reacquainted..." The vixen explained in a sly tone. "...And for you to get to know Whistle." She added with a big grin.
Jane shook her head and smiled back at the two of them. "Well, you know, after everything that I've heard about you, Willowaster, I have to say that I am rather curious..." She replied, placing her hands on her hips with a smile.
Lily nodded, and stepped up to Whistle, placing her hand on his chest. "Trust me, Jane, you won't be sorry once you know what you're in for." She explained in a salacious tone. She then turned to wolf and smiled up at him. "Just take a look at it, you'll see what I mean..." The vixen remarked as she urged Whistle towards one of the nearby deck chairs.
He shrugged his shrugged his shoulders, but smiled and sat down. Lily got in front of him and then knelt down before the wolf. She nodded up to him and reached over to firmly grip the hem of his swimming trunks, smiling deviously at him as she began to pull at it.
With deliberate slowness, she tugged the trunks off of him, drawing them down his legs and tossed them aside. She grinned brightly at the sight of his half-erect member, and reached over to grip it gently in her darkly-furred hand. The vixen began diligently stroking his large member, till it stood up to it's full length... The hard pink flesh glistened in the afternoon sun, the faint outlines of veins were just visible as surface became slowly became slick with perspiration.
Lily smiled to herself as she casually stroked Whistle's hard shaft. Jane watched as she jerked him off for a moment, then the Vixen leaned in and took him into her mouth. The dark-haired feline walked up and knelt down beside the fox as she bobbed her head up and down along his shaft. Lily glanced over to her friend and freed the wolf's dick, offering it to Jane with a smile.
The other woman moved in and quickly took him into her mouth. The vixen watched quietly as Jane closed her eyes, her lips slowly descending down the head of his cock. She circled her rough tongue around the tip of his wolfhood, causing Whistle to groan slightly as Jane nursed his aching member inside her warm mouth. The feline then wrapped her fingers around the slick flesh and began gently stroking it, just as the vixen had done moments earlier.
Lily smirked as she watched his pained reactions to the efforts of the two woman. The busty fox leaned back in and cupped his furred balls in her hand and caressed them. She smiled and extended her tongue to lap at them for a few moments. She then quickly began kissing and sucking at his balls. While she was doing this, Jane slowly began moving downward to take more of his hard member into her mouth. She pulled back up to the tip, the moved down again... The feline quickly established a rhythm as she went down on the wolf.
Whistle groaned audibly under the ministrations of the two women before him- both the vixen and the cat were eagerly working his dick at both ends. His privates were being flooded with pleasure as the two females licked and sucked the tender flesh of his member.. The young wolf realized that it wouldn't be much longer until their efforts finally pushed him over the edge...
After a few more agonizing moments, Whistle shivered and lurched forward slightly. His dick pulsed and his hips bucked even as the two women continued to pleasure him. Lily smiled to herself, knowing what was about to happen, but remained silent as Jane continued going down on the wolf. The feline was caught off-guard when he came into her mouth, filling it with his thick seed. She pulled back as another spurt of his seed splattering onto her face as she struggled to swallow the first load.
Lily watched in fascination as the other female managed to swallow the wolf's seed with effort. Jane paused and took a breath, then reached up to scoop some of his seed from her cheek and slipped her fingers into her mouth. After a moment, the dark gray feline smiled strangely. "Wow, there sure is a lot of this... Not bad, though." She remarked with a smile as she swallowed some.
Lily crawled over to the cat and smiled at her. The vixen then reached over and scraped up some of the cum from off her face and licked it lapped it up from her fingertips. She then leaned in to lick some of it off of her face. She smiled at the taste, swallowing it happily, then moved over to brush her lips against the other woman's and kissed her. After a few moments of this, Lily pulled back from their heated kiss and smiled warmly at her.
"So, Jane, what do you think so far?" Lily asked her deviously with a smile. "And we're only getting started, Whistle's far from spent." The vixen explained to the other woman, motioning to the panting wolf as she flashed her big smile. "Now that you've gotten a taste, would you like to be the first one to try him out?" She asked her while stroking Whistle's shaft.
Jane smiled and shook her head. "Thanks for the offer, but I think I'll hold off on that for now..." She replied with a wave. "I'll take my turn later, but right now... I'd rather just watch, so I can get an idea of what I'm in for." She offered as she sat back on the tiled ground.
Whistle glanced up as Alison approached his seated figure. The pretty raccoon glanced at the seated wolf and smiled at him. "Well now, that's very generous of you my dear." She began. "I think I'll go ahead and take you up on your offer."
Alison reached behind her back and undid the tie on her blue bikini top, she then reached up to undo the lace behind her neck. She let the top slide off her and tossed it aside. "How about it, are you up for having a little fun- just you and me?" She asked deviously, her dark brown nipples were now in plain view to the Wolf and the two females seated on the ground nearby.
She walked up before him, noting the smile on his face, and climbed onto him. She situated herself on his lap and flashed him a sexy smile. "So how about it?" She asked him, rubbing her core against his hard shaft, gasping slightly as she felt him through the fabric of her bikini bottom. Whistle smiled and pulled her against him, causing Alison to gasp as she felt his hard length, grinding against her slit through the thin fabric of her bikini.
This went on for several secants, until Alison was soaking wet with arousal. Her bikini bottom now clung to her, making the outline of her slit visible as she moved against him. Then, after a moment, she lifted her lower body up and reached down to the ties on either side. She gripped the laces and pulled them, freeing the article from her mound and then casting it aside. The darker lips of her pussy were slick and glistening in the light, and it was clear that she was more than ready. She gently gripped his member as she guided herself to the right position.
She adjusted herself so that her dripping core was hovering right above his rigid shaft- her own juices trickling onto it as she slowly lowered herself onto him. She gasped as she felt the tip of his cock part her outer lips, but quickly slid downwards in a quick motion- impaling herself on his large shaft with a pleasured cry. The raccoon moaned audibly at the sudden feeling of being totally filled. Alison instinctively began moving up and down on his dick without even think about it.
Before she could even finish composing herself, the wolf grabbed hold of her by the hips and lifted her up- then pulled her back down. He lifted her up a bit and then began thrusting straight up into her, causing Alison to cry out with each motion of his dick. Whistle bucked up into her, his shaft easily moving in and out of her slick folds. As he continued to pound against her, she eventually slumped forward, placing her hands down against his chest to keep herself upright as her entire body bounced up and down on his shaft with each thrust.
She gasped suddenly in surprise as a new sensation hit her- Lily had reached around her from behind to skilfully tease her stiff nipples. The raccoon moaned noisily as the vixen pinched and rolled her dark buds between her fingers. She smiled to herself as she continued to teased her nipples and kneed the soft flesh of her friend's breasts.
Her entire body was wracked with pleasure as Whistle continued thrusting deep inside her. And soon, their combined efforts proved too much for her- with Wolf beneath her pounding into her aching core and the vixen behind her tormenting her breasts, she arched backwards and cried out. Whistle and Lily watched as Alison's head lolled back and she cried out in ecstasy. Whistle grunted as he felt her insides grip him as she came, soaking the wolf's shaft with her juices.
The vixen simply smiled and supported her friend, watching quietly as she orgasmed. Lily then helped pull her off of the male, their mixed fluids dripping messily from her core as she separated her from Whistle's still rock-hard shaft. Jane watched, transfixed as Alison gasped raggedly for breath as she sat down on the smooth tiled floor below.
Lily stepped forward and smiled down at Whistle. She ran her hands down along her stomach, pausing just above the top of her skimpy black bikini. The vixen's eyes narrowed as she looked at him, she then spoke in a low tone. "So... How about you and me go next?"
To Be Continued...
When I started writing this, it wasn't supposed to be a multi-part story... But as I was writing, it quickly ended up being much longer than I had planned. So as a result, I chose to separate it into chapters to keep it from running on too long.
If everything works out like I'm hoping, I should have the next chapter posted on the site sometime next week, so be sure and keep your fingers crossed... When I was writing this story, this was one of the rare times that I wrote the scenes out of order- the sex scenes are usually easier to write than dialogue scenes... Go figure. Still, it's not a method I'd recommend to other writers out there.
Anyway, I'll see you guys again in the next chapter. So please leave me some feedback and let me know what you all thought about it.
-Seres North