Night Long Lasted (fully fixed)
Well here's my disclaimer thing. You must be 18 or older to read this. Even if you are 18 you may not want to but I hope you do any ways. This is one of my first stories that I like, and I hope you like it to. Enjoy Backwolf11.
_ Night long lasted _
Let me start by telling you who I am. The best way to do that is to tell you my name, and where I'm from, so here goes. My name is Zack, and I live in a place called Dartin. It's a small town, near some big cities. Hmm, I should also tell you what I look like. Well I'm a fox, with white fur, my tail has a black tip, I have green eyes, and this is my story.
One night I was walking home when I came across a wolf on the side of the road. He was hurt pretty badly. It seemed as though he had been mugged or some thing like that. So I picked him up and carried him home with me. At the time I was living in an old apartment. When we finally got home, I took off his clothes because they were wet from the storm.
Oh wait a minute, I forgot to tell you about the storm, didn't I? Well it was a bad one; one of the worst in many years. That's way I was walking home; my car had spun off the road.
Now back to what I was saying. I took of his clothes and carried him to the bathroom, and gently laid him in the tub as not to hurt him any more. Then I filled to tube with warm water. After that I went to my room to change my clothes which were also wet. Then I went back in to the bathroom to check on my wolf friend. When I got there, he was starting to faze back to conciseness, and that's when it all started.
"Where am I?! Ahhh! My head hurts so much! Did I fall or something? Who the hell are you?"
"Well to answer your question, Your at my apartment, I found you on the side of the road, and my name's Zack; nice to meet you. In addition, I think you were mugged or some thing." I walked over to the medicine cabinet and grabbed a bottle. "Here is some aspirin for your head ace."
After that, we talked while he cleaned himself off. It was strange, he didn't mind me being there while he was in the tub. He told me his name was Tom. He was a dark black wolf with deep blue eyes and a very nice voice. Umm were the hell did that come from. Damn can't get a head in the story. So after he got out of the tub, I got him some of my clothes and we sat on the couch and drank coffee for a while and talked about different things until out of no were he kissed me.
"what was that for?"
"I just waned to show my thanks for saving me."
"Ok, can I show my thanks for being thanked?"
I didn't let him answer as I pulled him in close and gave him a long and deep kiss. Before I knew it, his tongue was in my mouth and I did the same. As we sat there making out I was asking myself what I was doing. I'd just met this person and yet I was making out with them... Though I didn't think about it too much, I loved it and it made me so happy to be holding and kissing someone. After a while, I broke off the kiss and we sat there in silence for a few minutes before he said.
"Zack I think I love you, but I just met you and I have a feeling to do some thing right now but I don't know why."
"Tom I think I love you too, and it has to be fate that brought us together. I think I want that too."
After I said that, I got up and walked slowly towards my room only turning around once to signal him to follow me. As he walked in, I was looking for my new bottle of KY jelly in the dresser. When I found it and turned around, he was standing right in front of me with his shirt off. He looked so amazing I almost dropped the bottle. He walked a few steps toward me, and took and threw the bottle on the bed. He then took off my shirt and we kissed for a while holding each other close. The feel of his fur on mine was unimaginable. I was so happy I didn't even notices the bulge in my pants, but Tom did and he was dead set on taking care of that little problem. He slowly bent down and unbuttoned my pants. Then he slowly unzipped them. I did the same to him, thinking of what I was going to do with my little wolf. We then took off each other's pants and boxers. I then laid him on the bed with me above him. I then held him there for what seemed like an eternity. The feel of his body and mine... The feel of his member against my own... He then looked me in the eye and said, "Take me please. I want you so bad. It's unbearable."
"Well if you want me that bad, then that's what you'll get."
I then turned him over so I was facing his back. I then moved his tail out of the way and took the bottle and poured some jelly on my now throbbing member. It felt cold but I knew it would soon be warmed by my wolf. I rubbed the lube on, and I felt so happy that I almost came all over his back. Then I took a deep breath and said "I love you." I then slowly moved my member towards his asshole. When I felt the tip start pushing against the side of his butt cheeks, I spread them apart and move my member into him. As it started going in he slightly grunted and moaned. So I went a faster, and when I was all the way in him I propped him up on his knees to make it easer. I then stared puling out of him, and he moaned with joy. I was so happy to be pleasing my wolf, and was going to be even happier when he was in me. So as I was going in and out he looked at me and so softly said "could you go faster I want to feel you more." I couldn't of been happier to oblige. As I started got faster and faster he stared moaning louder and louder I was starting to sweat as I felt myself get ready to cum. when I did I made sure to push as far in as I could so that he would feel me cumming inside him. After I collapsed onto him and we laid there for only god knows how long. It felt good just being inside him laying there. After a while he said, "Zack that was amazing. Now it's my turn."
"Ok. I'm ready whenever you are, Tom."
Right after I said that he spun me over and laid me on the bed under him, pulling me over to the end of the bed. He then put on some lube and pushed himself into me hard and fast. It hurt but still felt good, then he stared pushing in and out just as hard. All I could do was grunt and moan in pain and pleasure. When he came in me the first time I thought he was done. Boy was I wrong. He kept ramming me for 5 hours, and what a five hours it was. After a while I got a boner again and he started masturbating me. It felt so good to have some one else do it. Before I knew it I was cumming all over my stomach and chest. Then almost simultaneously he came in me for the second time. There was little place for it to go so it stared coming out the rim of my ass and over on to my tail and on to the bed. The feel of his cum on my tail felt so good I wondered what it would feel like all over me. I said this to him and he let me know first by cumming on my chest then my face. As we laid there out of breath holding each other tightly we kissed and he got some of his cum on his face. So I licked it off for him, and he smiled and stared to suck my dick. I was very tired but it felt too good to make him stop so I let him do what he wanted. He slowly movee down my shaft than back up, licking the tip, and then back down. I couldn't contain my self any longer. It felt so good. I was about to cum when he tried to deep throat me, and I came down his throat. He was surprised but he like it, and sucked on me until there was no more cum to be had. We then laid there for a little while before I got up and walked towards the shower and signaled for him to come with me. We were both coved in cum, and smelt like sex. So we took an hour long shower. After I went back to my room and changed the sheets on the bed and then we laid down and went to sleep keeping each other warm during the stormy night.
_ The end _
Well I was board so I went thro this old story and tried to fix it, but it still kind of sucks. Well that's my point of view. If you like it then that's awesome. I wonder if it will be excepted.
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