Eternal Phantasia - Chapter One - The first Appearance
So this is the first chapter, and a rather amazing one at that.. Or I hope so. Anyways, this chapter will be explaning.. um, the slight creation of final boss which is.. well, in an way, the "final boss". So shall we get started? The same copyright yada yada, zaku, mr.toshina, and today's appearing character zachary are all my character's. Please do not copy or use with out permission and um.. Sorry about the typo party above, i'm still waking up.
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Why is it so quiet?.. So dark?.. Where am I, how did I get to this place? A forest? Lake? I don't reconize this place, and yet it feels as if I have been here before.
Fur matted in a cold sweat as zaku's eyelid's flash open. His bright blue orbs darting left and right around his room as if searching for something. He then rised up into a siting position, leting his right paw reach up and gently rub over his forehead, wiping off the sweat and panting softly. A odd dream had woken him up from his sleep, which was what caused him to pant and panic. Something wasn't right "..What's going on?". He then pulled the sheets off his legs, nude underneath and sliping his legs over the edge of the bed. Leting his feet gently touch the soft carpet floor and then rise into a standing position. His tail slowly curling and uncurling.
"What time is it?"
Eyes gazing over at the end table next to his bed, seeing his alarm clock show it was one fourty five in the morning "Jeez... I should go see if zach's up, I could use some.. Time away from this house."
... The cricket's were loud and rather annoying as he exited the mansion and walked down the main street which was called "Lenard". He noticed people walking about here and there, with car's driving down the street time to time as well. It was one of those mornings where no one wanted to be late, and no one was awake inless on their way to early work or drunk out of their minds and can't seem to find their way home "Ah life of the city..."He mumbled while fixing the black sleve less t-shirt he wore which was odd for him, also wearing normal jeans. He didnt wear his usual inverted cross medallion or earings. Just walking the street looking like another teen.
It didn't take long before zaku reached the rather nice looking apartment which was actually a type of loft at the same time. The apartment room being one gaint room but with an upstair's that looks kinda like a balcony inside the room. As he walked up to the door and knocked, a crash was heard followed with shattering glass and a odd "what the hell." look on zaku's face. The door slowly opened a crack as someone with a rather deep but plain maleish voice saying "Who is it?"
"It's zaku moron." The door then flung open, the shirtless coon standing infront of the door with his bright brown eyes gazing at the silver fox and having a wide smile on his face. His tail even wagging as he said "Dude, why are you here?"
"..Long story, just having sleeping trouble..."
"Oh no, another dream. Alright, come on man."The fox nodding happily as he entered. Once in the light of the room, you could notice the coon's build. It was toned, and rather muscular looking compared to the stereotype coons. You could tell he was a athlete and did alot of runing and joging. He was actually on the track team at his school, and second best next to a cheetah that goes there "So whats the problem this time?"The coon asked while taking a seat on a couch right in the front room. Zaku closing the door before walking over to the couch and siting next to him. Ears pricked back as he sighed, head then lowering while closing his eyes ".. The dream, I am in a forest with a lake... It's dark out, and I can't see anything but the lake which moon light is shining into.. Then the lake starts moving and then..... I don't know, I always wake up right about then."
"Sounds slightly odd, but you shouldnt let it get to you zaku, your a good guy. It's probably just a dream."
He then sat closer, leting his arms slip around the fox's waist and pull him close. Leting the back of his head rest on his gray fured chest "You gonna stay here the rest of the morning?" Looking down at the fox with a concerned face. "Yeah, I think I will."Zaku said as he looked up at his coon friend, smiling at him as he said "Thanks zach, for being here for me."
"No problem zaku, you know I would do just about anything for you......"
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"Zaku........ Zaku....... ZAKU!"
"Huh!?"
The silver fox snaped back to reality, standing on the sidewalk and facing in the direction of zach who's arms were crossed. It was the third day after zaku's father's release of eternal phantasia and it was a big hit. Him and zach were on their way to try the game for them selves to see what the fuse is all about "Uhhh.. Was I out for long?"He asked.
"You stood there for 20 minutes staring at nothing as I flailed my arms and yelled your name like hundred's of times!!"The coon was looking odd, but very attractive. Having on a sleve less blue t-shirt, some blue jeans with the knee's cut open, a blue beane with holes in the top for his ear's to poke through and a gold hoop earing in his right ear. He was a very good looking coon, and standing at 5'11. Zaku shook his head and smiled with a blush, wearing his usual leather vest, pant's and inverted cross medallion. Nothing new to him today as the fur on his muzzle turned a slight pink and said "Heh, sorry.. I guess I dazed off."
"You think? Now lets go!"He said with a smile, runing down the street with zaku standing there... But then took off sprinting following zach..
It was one of those day's, where the sun was shining, a cool breeze blew through the area and everyone was doing something relaxing. It was a saturday, and a beautiful one at that. All the cherry tree's in town that Mr.Toshina had planted years back were in bloom and the street's were covered in a light blanket of pink cherry petals. One of zaku's favorite sights. Speaking of sights, as they ran, zaku couldnt help but stare at the sight of his friends rear and grin almost evilly. Soon they reached the closest phantasia center and entered the large building. The room was filled with beings of all sorts, fur's, human's, and everything in between. It was amazing. People were talking about the game, making statement's or discussing how the system was better than any normal rp they played. Zach and zaku went to the front desk, with zaku saying "I am mr.toshina's son. Identification number 23478560145." The lady human wearing white and having long green hair then said "Identification number reconized, hello zaku sir. How can I help you?"
"Me and my friend request a teleporters for eternal phantasia, have any open?"
She started typing into the computer on the front desk, giving this "hmm..." and "OH!" looks as she then said in a rather pleasent voice "We have ten teleporters open today.."She pointed at two behind them on the wall "You may use those, and I hope you enjoy your experience."Zach frowned while zaku lead the way, zach had a thing about human's and it made him uncomfortable. But stoped hiding as they reached the door's to the two teleporters. Standing side by side as zaku said "See you on the other side."
"yeah, you too..."Then they both steped in, closing the door's behind them..
Zaku gazed around the small space like closet that was blue and had a monitor infront of him. A voice emiting from it. It was a woman voice, and it said "Welcome player, will you be playing a new character, or exsisting?"
"New."
"New character profile setup loading. Real name please."
"Zaku Toshina."
"Character/Username?"
"Zaku Silver Fox."
"Thank you........... Name registration complete. Do you have any codes you would like to enter?"
"No..(codes? He even gave the game codes?)"
"Thank you. Welcome user zaku silver fox. Please hold as I scan your eternal data."
A blue beam of light Emited from the montior, moving over zaku's body then retracting back into the monitor "Data scan complete. Ready to be teleported Zaku Silver Fox?"
"Yes..."
".. Teleporting."The rooom started shaking to him, then everything changed as he seemed to fall through a vortex of multi colored lights and odd waves of energy. It made him feel wozy, but just as quick as he entered the vortex, he exited. Now standing in a clearing in a lush forest. Zach appearing next to him. "Welcome player's Zachary Coon and Zaku Silver Fox. Zaku Silver Fox. Class, magician. Abilities. Can phase through solid matter, use low and meduim class magic except for summoning, eternal, telekenetic, and some time magic. You can also use magic ritual circle's to use summons, high class spells, and transformations but it has a 70% chance of failing.. Zachary Coon. Class, Telepathic Master. Abilities. Can use any form of telepathic and telekenetic powers. Also can use any class of water and wind magic. Even summonings. You also have the hightened ability to manipulate minds... Weapon's usable to your classes? Zaku Silver Fox is limited to using only saber's, magic orbs, staff's, battle fans, and rod's. Zachary Coon can use any sword weapon, bow, staff, and gauntlet weapons. Armor limit none, here you may use any type of armor.. Starting armor, zachary coon has on mythril chainmail, silver armlets, and silver legings. Zaku Silver Fox has on scale plate mail, gold armlets, and silver shin gaurds."
"Woah, gold!? Gah, black and gold is so tacky!."
Zach turning to look at zaku with this "..what the hell?" look. Arms crossing before his ears twitched to the sound of the woman saying "Zaku Silver Fox, would you like to change the color of any armor you have on?"
"Yes, change my armlets and shinguards black."
"Yes zaku... Color change complete, anything else?"
"No.."He said, smiling as he looked at his wrist, the once gold bands around his forearms now black to match his outfit "Character registration complete.. Please pick a weapon to start out with."
"A.. Weapon?" Zach asked.
"Magic orb/Saber sword!"
A green sphere would appear before zaku, and then it would change into a green bladed saber with a blue hilt, then change back into an orb "Is this the weapon?"
"Yes." Reaching out with his right paw and taking it out of the air, smiling as it transformed right in his paw, now griping the hilt of his saber.
"Silver Long sword for me please."And as requested, a silver long sword in a brown sheath would appear "Is this the weapon?"
"Yes"He said with a smile, taking the sheath and tieing it to his belt, then unsheathing his sword by griping the brown hilt tightly and drawing it out in one swish. "Thank you for waiting. You may now play, enjoy.."
"...Ok.. Now what?"Zach asked zaku as he then said "Monitor, party registration. Name, crimson blades. Leader, zaku silver fox. Party member, zachary coon."
"Party reconized, all players please stay close to the leader inless in a town, city, excetra. Enjoy Crimson Blades."
Zaku grined, his tail wagging as he looked at zach and said "Follow me.."Zach mumbled something but followed zaku as they walked down a dirt road. But just then, a part of four would jump out of the tree's. Landing infront of the two fur's as the leader who was a cheetah from school.... Also zach's rival in the track team "Brad.."He said with a growl, the cheetah dressed in a white tank top, and some jeans but holding a long sword "Heh, so zach is a noob to phantasia. Hmph, this will be fun. Lets take them out."He said. Zaku shaking his head as he readied himself. Zach standing beside zaku, also ready as he glared at brad "Bring it on!"
"Party battle reconized, The Yellow Titan's Vs. The Crimson Blades. Activating battle area."A dome then formed around the area, it then turning transparent but having an odd blueish look to it "May the battle begin, enjoy."
Zach grined, eyes turning dark blue as waves of telepathic energy circled around two of the other parties member's. Freezing them in place before thrusting his right arm out, blade clashing into brad's as he tryed to slash at the coon while using his powers. Zaku just gave a sway of his body before briskly walking up to one of the people who tried to slash at him, but phased through him and stood behind him. Saber diving into his back and out his chest. Blood trailing down the front of the being's shirt and down his back. Zaku growled as he noticed blood was on his vest "Gah, you got my fucking vest wet with blood."And then with a yell, he would pull out his saber and drive the tip right back into his back. The player then vanishing as the woman voice said "Green Momba defeated, retracting from eternal phantasia."
Zach jumped back, grining as he binded brad's legs and arms. "Heh, looks like you and your team is immobilized."
"Not yet."The cheetah said as his eyes turned red, a burst of flame's erupting right on zach's chest as it sent him back and slaming back first into a tree. Groaning as he held his chest with his free paw. Zaku was behind a tree, preforming a magic circle which was red with blue runes with in it's lines. The other player's were released from their binds. And zaku's spell failing "Fuck!!....."
....Everything seemed to slow down as the forest grew quiet. The other team's player's stoping while glancing around "B-brad.. Is it..."
"No... I-it couldnt be.."He stuttered. The woman voice now saying with a rather warning/concerned voice "Battle feild dome destroyed, final boss entering area. Do you wish to be retracted from eternal phantasia?"
"No way, me and my team can handle that idiot monster."
"Crimson Blades, wish to retracted?"
Zach cringed as zaku was kneeling next to him and rubing his chest. Slowly healing it for him "No, we will just run.. We will never get good at this game inless we stay."
"So be it.."
A black beam shot out of the tree's, erasing the tree's as it went by and completely disintergrating brad's last two party members as the monitor said "Hulking gaint and ninjitsu girl defeated by boss. Retracting from eternal phantasia. Character data erased."
Brad gulped as he heard that, he heard that when final boss defeats someone they have to start over and arent allowed to return to phantasia for a week "....Uhhh... This game's been out for only afew days and people are already being deleted by final boss. Who made that thing anyways!"
"Creation unknown. Final boss is a name we gave the creature for it has the strongest energy level on this world. Chance's of it being defeated at this point in time? 2%."
A loud laugh echoed around the area as another beam zaped brad who yelled out and vanished "Cheetahling defeated by final boss. Retracting from eternal phantasia. Character data erased."
Zach and zaku gulped, zaku now siting next to zach as he pulled the coon to his chest and kept his arms around him. Growling as they waited. A large being who made almost no sound while walking entered the clearing. It's dark red eyes gazing at the two fur's as it spoke in a husky, deep, and a slightly enchanting voice "Fox of silver ore.. Why are you here on this land?..."
"Uh.."His eyes gazing up into the large black beast which looked more like a shadow.. A large shadow "I-I came because I wanted to see what the big deal was about eternal phantasia.."
"You do not belong here, the one with blood hair should be here. If not, the two world's shall corrupt and no longer exsist.... Bring me toshina!"
"...I.. I am toshina's son, zaku.."He stood up, growling as well as having a rather confident look upon his face. Paws clenched into fist.
"Son of toshina. Your presence here disturbs the balance. Heh, as punishment for coming here with out permission.." Zaku's eyes widened, blue electricity runing up his body before his head tilted back and yelling out in pain.
"You shall be cut off from the other world. And then killed. With you gone, toshina will have no choice but to come. And then I shall destroy him. Thus ending the two worlds." Zach gasped and yelled "No you can't do that!."
"I am sorry gray coon."Zach yelled out as a sphere of darkness wraped around his body and then vanished. Followed with the same voice saying "Zachary Coon's presense lost, unable to find Zachary Quinlan. Unable to retract player. Chance of survival, 20%."
Zaku fell to his knee's, tears runing down his face. Not from pain, but from what he heard. Was zach dead? "no.."
"Yes, and now to finish you son of toshina.."
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"GRAH!" Final Boss cryed out as something happened, a black figure darting around behind tree's. It was rather large, and had a long tail but was hard to see. The large creature growled as he said "Seems he has returned, i'll be back for you son of toshina.."And just like that, he vanished into thin air... Everything seemed to spin to zaku as he fell to his face and blacked out. His world darkening in his state of unconciousness..... "Final.. Boss.. My dad. What the hell is going on?..."
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Ahh, chapter one complete. Slightly rushed, i'm sorry. I promise to make it better and more thought out. It's just I didnt have alot of time. Anyways, i'm sure there are typo's. I'll proof read it later and resubmit it ok? Anyways, zach has mysteriously vanished. Final boss is trying to destroy both worlds. And a new figure has appeared, is he friend, or foe? Ah, I love a twist. Also, remember that the begining of the story is a flash back to the first night, of the two days before zaku's dad went into isolation to study and make eternal phantasia which took two years. And there will be more flash backs to that time. So some things will be explained during the flash backs. Ok? Good. Any questions, e-mail me, or if you have msn messenger. Add me [email protected]