The Changed chapter 1
My first attempt a smut long time reader first time writer tell me how i did.
Alright I fixed some grammar and punctuation keep the suggestions comming! I'm using this to refine my writing so no criticism is rejected!
"Hey Ru!" I stand at attention swiftly as my superior officer (and lover) lieutenant Rien Stockman calls my nickname. A quick salute and the 250 lb rottie pitbull mix (built like a tank) ordered me at ease. "You know you don't have to be so formal with me sergeant we're off duty right now." "I'm sorry Rien sir habit." I feel the color run to my face in embarrassment. "You shouldn't be so embarrassed" he said with a grin." It's not like I caught you with your pants down again." I turn an even brighter red as he mentions that incident; he almost caught me fondling myself as a private. "Why do you have to bring that up that was almost two years ago?" "Yes but I remember it like it was yesterday..." "So how was your shift? You just get in?" I butt in before he can go on a tirade.
"Another shipment was delivered to that compound. I wounded what I in those crates." The camps Colonel had been permission to go ahead and start scouting the enemies' positions and activities at a secret experimental laboratory about 20 miles outside of a little town in Wyoming called Thermopolis where military caravans have been spotted bringing in strange packages in covered trucks. "At least I'm not back at home base." Rien sighed "Why whats goin on?" "Oh a massive amount of "our kind" have been goin missing over the last few weeks. Some say it's to avoid the upcoming conflict but..." he trails off into silence. "You think differently?" "It doesn't matter what I think. I follow orders. That's it. They don't listen to me anyway. Don't believe the U.S. government would go that far..." he trails off again. I can tell its bothering him but I don't presist.
"I know what would make you feel better." I growl climbing into his lap. "Oh yeah!?" "Yeah." I stop anymore speech with a deep kiss and proceed to grind his emerging bulge. Great part of being the "bad guys" when your off work they don't watch you. You can do what you want as long as your ready for line out in the morning.
I quickly undo the facets on his uniform with practiced ease and slip my hand up his undershirt. He realises a little moan as I play with his nipple. Horny mut must have been waiting all day. With my other hand I snake my way down his chest and start to rub his rock hard erection straining against his military green jeans. I fumble with the button until it releases and slowly unzip him. His massive 10 inch pointed canine cock ignores his underwear completely flopping out above the elastic lining as if it didn't exist. I giggle and mutter "how lewed" as I stand and move towards the cot stripping my uniform as I go. Finally dropping my underwear and pants before stepping out of them.
Slowly standing up he finishes undressing himself in a rush before almost bounding across the room after me. He grabs my thin waist and growls lustfully "you tease" in my ear before pushing me roughly into the cot. Which slid a little on the tent's nylon floor. He releases my shoulders and moves his hands to my toned ass spreading it in front of him. I lift my tail in submission. I feel his wet tounge press itself to my taint and move agonizingly slow to my anus. Where he starts to circle slowly around my rim with just the tip of his tounge. I whine in desperation. As if taking that as a sign he presses is tounge down and licks over it sloppily. Before he begins to press. It was incredible how smoothly he inserted his tounge in my tight cavity leaving no button unpressed. Leaving me leaking pre onto his bed.
Slowly he stands up tounge slightly out, and grabs my hips roughly. He spins me over onto my back and runs his pre cover tip up my cock. Putting my 8 inches to shame. He then lines his hard throbbing cock to my freshly lubed hole. And thrusts hard burying himself up to his bulbous knot. I grit my teeth as he claims me tears welling in my eyes. We don't get enough opportunities for me to become used to it, but I love it when he takes me so rough. At this point there is nothing but to grit my teeth and hold on as he starts ramming home in fiendish fury. As the pain starts to subside and pleasure washes over me in tidal waves I feel his tip pokeing at my prostate. I start grinding my hips as best I can against the invading member feeling my peak come closer. I feel his knot growing slowly as he starts pressing it harder against my abused hole. With one last hard push it pops in and pushes me over the edge. He forces me to lock lips with him as I cum coating our chests and even up to our chins in my seed. All the while he is tugging with his knot making it last even longer until he releases his seed deep inside of me painting my prostate white. As he rides his orgasm I feel it spurting and filling my insides warming me from the inside out. We snuggle close his knot buried deep inside me and pass out.