The Secret Plot for the Rats of Nimh Part 1

Story by TheSavageLycan on SoFurry

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Brisk is a young rodent who managed to escape from the terrible clutches of Nimh. He now is joined by familiar characters such as Justin, Mister Ages and Jenner and is tossed into the world of the Secret of Nihm.

The top Ships for this story will be Jenner/Brisk and Justin/Brisk. Stay tuned for the next part!


Justin wasn't sure what was happening, but all the rats of the Bush were in an uproar. There were whispers from rat to rat about a newcomer. Someone else that had managed to escape from the terrible clutches of Nimh.

Among the uproar, Jenner had heard of the newcomer as well. The sinister rat that had plans on killing the prophet Nickodemius, with this new rat coming to the rosebush, Jenner had a scheme to use the new rat to help in assassination plans of the prophet.

But of course Jenner knew that he had to plan this carefully. He knew that Justin would more than likely already had won the newcomer over with their Plan to journey to Thorn Valley. But of course, Jenner had his ways of persuasion. He knew that he could convince the newcomer all the same.

Brisk was a young rodent, frightened and afraid. The mark that Nimh had left upon him wasn't going to go away as easily as the Rats of Nimh constantly promised.

Brisk had been ushered into the bush by another rodent by the name of Mister Ages. Mister Ages seemed to have gone through a lot in his time. He was old and had gray whiskers and a rather plump and round body.

Mister Ages sighed heavily and looked at Brisk. "I am sorry for what you have gone through my boy. No one else but us knows the terrible cruelty of Nimh," He had said with a sad tone to his voice.

"We were lucky enough to have gained the intelegence to escape that horrid place. But I do have to ask you something, did others manage to come with you in your escape?"

Brisk gulped slightly and sighed. "Unfortunately no," The young rat had said sighing softly. "It was just me. I was the last Rat to be given the injection. They had done everything in their will power to keep me there, but well you know I outsmarted them."

Mister Ages chuckled softly. "Atta boy, I think the humans have outdone themselves by making this injection to give us more intelligence then themselves."

"Now, now mister Ages you're not pestering the young lad are you?" The voice of a handsome rat had said smirking wide at the two of them who stood together.

"Are you bothering the new guy already Mister Ages?" A handsome voice inquired from behind them.

Brisk and Mister Ages turned around to see a rather dashing and handsome male rat before them. It was Justin, the Captain of the Guard. Justin was a handsome brown rodent with a slender yet toned body. He had black eyes and wore a blue and white tunic against his handsome body.

Brisk gulped and smiled softly. "Nah, I- I'm fine." Brisk had said trying his best not to stutter.

Brisk was a peculiar rodent, not only was he intelligent likes the other rodents of Nimh. But he had a liking toward other male rats as well. He was as what humans would call him, homosexual.

"My name is Justin, the Captain of the Guard," The young rodent said smiling softly.

"Y-yes I know," Brisk said smiling. "The other rodents in Nimh had told us about you and your comrades."

Justin smiled and grinned at this. "Well, that is good news. That means other rats are aware of our escape. Hopefully they will be able to do the same in the future,"

"Why didn't you and the rest of the rats all escape together?" Brisk inquired.

Justin sighed. "It had pained us a great deal, to leave the others behind. But of course we have plans on recruiting newer members to help us make more escapes happen."

Jenner was watching in the background. His bright green eyes gleamed excitedly as he heard Mister Ages and the new rodent talk about Nimh. But the male snarled quietly as he saw Justin approach.

Jenner knew that he had already failed to get to rodent, apparently named Brisk to get him on his side. "I'll get you to me eventually," Jenner had said hissing slightly in frustration before disappearing in the darkness.

"Justin, would you please take Brisk to his room and um let him get comfortable?" Mister Ages had asked curiously.

"Yes of course," Justin said smirking wide. "It would be a pleasure."

When Justin was left alone with Brisk he smiled softly. "So, come this way. We'll have a pile of clothes for you to put and try on." The young male said smiling.

Brisk's mind swarmed with lewd thoughts about what he wanted to do with Justin at this point. He was nervous just being left alone with him. It was the fact that he and Justin were about to be alone together in a single room. This thought alone made his heart jack hammer against his chest quite rapidly.

Justin led the young rat down many hallways and finally approached a half open doorway. "Well, here we go." Justin said smiling. He opened the door and allowed the young rodent to walk on inside.

Brisk walked into the room and looked about in awe. There was a large bed centering the room. On the ceiling crystals glowed brightly with various colors. "Wow," Brisk said gasping in amazement.

"I know, its amazing isn't it?" Justin had asked.

"These rooms are especially made to calm anyone that goes inside of them." Justin said smiling.

"Is that so huh?" Brisk asked twitching his ears slightly. "You know something else that is beautiful?" Brisk asked nervously.

"Hmp can't see anything else that is beautiful, unless you are talking about yourself of course." Justin said smirking.

Brisk was taken aback by what Justin had just said to him. 'Wait, did Justin say that he was ugh beautiful?' Brisk thought to himself.

"You heard me," Justin said allowing his eyebrows to rise up and down in rapid motions. This caused the young rodent to blush deeply. He cleared his throat.

"Well, ugh thank you, you are quite handsome as well sir." Brisk had said trying not to stumble on his own words.