Commission for Brekna

Story by ColtonBunny on SoFurry

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A short commission for Brekna on telegram, aka Fennecnom on FA ( https://www.furaffinity.net/user/Fennecnom ) . Contains oral sex and willing permanent unbirthing/vaginal vore between Brekna's character Opal and my mouse Alex. Let me know what you all think!


Opal waited in bed, wearing nothing but knee high socks. The gold and black stripes matched her feathers, the warm glow of flickering candlelight in the bedroom making her golden feathers seem to flicker and dance as well, even though she hardly moved. She heard the front door enter, and before long her boyfriend opened the door to their shared room. The mouse was still dressed for work, a loose button up shirt and gray slacks. His jaw dropped as he saw his girlfriend, legs spread apart to give him a perfect view. He stood stunned in the door, eyes focused in on Opals slit, a small shine in the dim light letting him know just how ready she was.

"Come on Alex, it's nothing you haven't seen before." Opal said annoyed. She spread her legs out a bit wider. "Now come here and give me a kiss." Alex nodded, and after another minute of stunned staring knelt down and pressed his lips to her beak. Opal gently pushed him back, annoyed. "Not there Alex. A bit lower." The mouse kissed his girlfriend on the chin, then before she could get annoyed pushed her head lightly to the side and kissed down her neck. He nipped lightly at her collarbone as he climbed on top of her, then moved on to her chest, his hands running down her sides as he mouthed over her breasts. He dug his fingers into the feathers on her round supple ass as he worshiped her breasts, his tongue seeking out her sensitive nipples for a quick lick, a firm suck. Opal let out a small grunt of pleasure, her own hand running through the mouse's hair. She let him enjoy himself for a moment before gently pushing him lower. Alex happily complied, kissing his way down her chest, reaching her belly. Here he stopped again, seeking out her navel with his tongue, kissing her belly while he scooted his body down further. Then lower, lower, gently, slowly lower until finally he pressed his lips against her mound. He have her lips a single, delicate kiss before moving on to Opal's thigh, holding her leg reverently as he kissed his way down to the top of her socks. He was about to push one of them down lightly when Opal grabbed him and roughly pulled him back up to her pussy. "Right here." She said, crossing her arms in front of her chest. "You know that."

Alex grinned up at her, then lowered his head and went to work. Teasing was done, he decided, and he attacked his birds sex with relish. He brought a finger up and pushed it against her entrance, slickening it with her fluids before he slowly, steadily pushed it into her, curling it gently against her folds. Opal moaned again as she felt his mouth wrap around her clit, lightly sucking. His tongue pressed down, not on her sensitive nub but next to it, slowly circling, only occasionally brushing lightly against her pearl as he steadily worked his fingers in and out of her slick passageway below. He released his mouth from her mound and pulled his finger out, pushing his tongue into her instead. She tasted sweet, a mild yet intoxicating flavor to the mouse. He breathed in her scent deeply as his tongue pushed as far into her folds as he could make it, licking at her walls. Opal struggled not to squirm as he worked, every instinct telling her to wrap her legs around his head, to hold him there until she hit her peak. But Opal had other plans, and as Alex pulled away to take a breath, she stopped him from sliding his fingers back inside her.

"That was nice sweety, but I think I want something a bit more... filling inside me now." Alex smiled, undoing his belt and finally revealing his very erect cock, slightly curved and pink against his light gray fur. He climbed back up, lining his cock up with Opal's vent, but her hand came out again and stopped him. "As nice as your cock is, I really do need something bigger right now. Much bigger. Do you understand?" Alex looked at her, her light smile, her gorgeous yellow eyes flickering in the candlelight, and nodded. Opal leaned down and slowly began unbuttoning her lover's shirt, kissing him lightly as each button came loose. "I've wanted you inside me for so long." She kissed him. "Truly inside me, not the previews we've been doing." Another button came off as she pressed her beak against his mouth. "I want you inside me and I never want you to come out." Alex moaned as his final button came undone, and Opal ran her fingers lightly against his cock. "I want you to be all mine mousy. Now and forever. Are you ready?" Alex threw his arms around her in response, his hips lightly thrusting against her belly in pure instinct.

"I am yours. Now and forever. How would you like to take me?"

Opal squeezed around her mouse, feeling his shoulders, his back, his ass. He really did have a lovely ass, she thought. Such a shame she'd never see it again. "Your hands felt so good in me. Let's start there" She took his hands in hers and gently lowered them to her lower lips. She pushed them in, and her passage easily spread wide enough for them both to enter. Opals eyes closed as she groaned, loving the feeling of being stretched. And this was only the beginning. She kissed Alex one last time, clenching around his hands, then pushed him down again.

Alex couldn't help but watch as his girlfriends pussy slowly started to devour him. Her muscles pulled at him, gently if he didn't resist, but irresistibly if he tried. Just to see what would happen, he tried pulling back as his elbows started getting sucked in. Her walls instantly tightened, squeezing around his arms and not letting him back out. "You didn't change your mind did you mousie?" Opal asked, panting.

"Not at all." Alex said, gently pushing his arms into her. After a moment, her muscles relaxed, allowing him to feed himself to her. Opal stayed passive for a while, focusing entirely on the sensation of being stretched and filled more than she had in years. She moaned and groaned unabashedly, after all, the only witness to her abandon wouldn't be able to tell anyone about it. And he encouraged it, pushing her walls out with his arms with every moan, massaging her deepest depths with his fingers as she groaned.

Before long the mouse's face was pressed against her entrance again. He kissed it, enjoying the taste and the scent of his lover, even more now that he knew it would soon surround him. He looked up at her one final time, and she gazed down on him, meeting his eyes. They each thought about saying I love you. They each decided it was unnecessary. Actions spoke so much louder than words after all. So instead of saying anything, Alex forced himself to lower his gaze and push his head against her mound. She parted for him, moaning as her eyes rolled into the back of her head with the feeling of being stretched. She wanted to watch, but couldn't help but fall back onto the bed, her body shaking, instinctively trying to ride whatever lovely thing was making her feel so full. She came around her lover as his head popped into her, the passage surrounding him convulsing seemingly randomly. Seemingly, only because when it was done they both discovered that the mouse had been sucked even further into her, twisted around so that his shoulders could slide into her and now almost waist deep in Opal's warm, soft cunt.

The air he breathed was thick with Opals scent. He was amazed he could breathe at all, the thick fluids that had become even more prevalent as she came around him seemed to be everywhere, but now and then he managed a quick, intoxicating breath between gulping her natural lubricants down. His cock twitched, dripping fluids of its own, but they were useless in the open air outside his lover. With his legs turned he could no longer push himself into her, but luckily her body seemed aware of that, the walls gently rippling around him, pulling him even deeper into his avian love. He could feel his hands enter a larger chamber ahead of him, Opal's womb, spreading to accept him into it's loving embrace. He moaned, the sound muffled by the thick fluids and soft flesh around him. He knew Opal couldn't hear him, and he groaned and squeaked with pleasure as his body was gently massaged deeper into her.

Opal was still lost in bliss as she consumed her lover. The spreading was the most obviously pleasurable part of the experience, but everything about it flowed together into a wonderful river of sensation. The texture of his soft fur against her entrance, just before it was lubricated, gently tickling her sex as it pulled the mouse into her. The way he moved inside her, writhing in pleasure against her walls, his tongue reaching deeper into her than he ever had before. She couldn't hear him, but she could feel his body vibrate slightly as he groaned, every motion he made was woven into her pleasure no matter how minor. She looked down and saw his dripping, desperate, ignored cock standing at attention, almost ready to enter her. With a groan of effort as well as pleasure she sat up and reached down. Her hand tenderly caressed Alex's member for a moment before she gently pushed it up, until the head was pressed against his belly. She squeezed again, and pulled the mouse even deeper into her, his cock head now pressed just against her entrance, not quite inside her. She ran a single finger down the bottom as her other hand held it still, then clenched again. His head pushed into her, and she saw him pulse as his cock desperately added it's own lubrication, quickly lost in the already slick depths of her cunt. She slowly released his cock, ensuring it was well and truly trapped within her before finally letting go. Then she leaned down again, letting her body consume the mouse she loved.

Alex almost came as his cock was pulled into Opals passage with the rest of him. His head pushed into her womb at the same time as his cock pushed into her pussy, almost making him choke on the first full lungful of air he'd gotten since diving into her. He tensed, trying to resist cumming until his sex was entirely inside hers. He almost succeeded, the base of his cock pressed against her entrance as it pulsed out of his control, pumping his load into her depths. He knew it must be splattering against his belly, but he couldn't feel his own seed against the lubrication surrounding him.

Opal could, and she smiled as she felt her meal release his load into her, an added bit of warmth and wet added to the sensations of devouring him deliciously. Alex had always loved to cum inside her, she was glad he got to do it again. She could feel him starting to curl up in her womb, his shoulders and chest already inside it and more quickly following. The widest part of him finished with it's journey, the rest of him was quickly swallowed up by her ravenous sex. His legs sliding against her skin felt lovely, but her stretched pussy started to feel sadly empty long before his feet disappeared in her. All too soon his tail was sliding into her, she reached down and gently stroked it, curling it around her wrist before letting go and watching the final part of her lover slide inside her. She felt around her stomach, bulging out and squirming slightly, lovingly caressing the mouse curled up within. The intense pleasure of taking him was over, but having him inside her simply felt right. Not pleasurable, not even sexual anymore. Simply the way things were supposed to be. He was hers now, forever, and she felt him pressing gently against her stroking hands. Before long she fell back, exhausted, her hands still resting on her swollen womb. By the time she woke up, she knew, her body would have started breaking him down. Making him not just hers, but a part of her, inseparable forever. She rubbed him gently as her exhausted body dragged her off into sleep.