For Who the Bell Rings ch1
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For Who the Bell Rings 
Illustrated by NITEHAWK666
Some editing done by Sister >_>
A very good book from a very talent author-Rogger Eggbert
Chapter 1:
A Hard Days Night
Dear Mommy,
I am very very very very lonely. The militatry is hard. I know you told me so, so dont say you told me so but I dont like Neel and Im not going to live with you and him. He is a jerk and not my real dad. I will fight this war and win for you my love and prove to Neel once and for all with all my blood, sweat, and tears that you can be a big boy badass alpha male and still wear diapers too. I practice voluntary incompetence because I can, because we don't live in a fashist dictatership, and no hitler stepdaddy is going to tell this grownup fox otherwise.
From,
Jin
Jin Kitsune wiped the snot from his nose and sealed the envelope with a big gresy smack of the lips kiss. He and his comrades had been through thick and thin, surviving only by the skin of their teeth at times. As he mailed the envelope, he felt a poky pat of the head from a familiar paw. "You always did have a way with words Jin." said Bullet. Bullet was a tall, slender hedgehog except for his booty which was not so slender.
"I was top of my class at the marine academy, you know that." said Jin. "Your spikes have a way with me"
*Bullet blushes*
Jin had been in many a battle with Bullet the Hedgehog, he knew him well. Every inch of his body was covered in dazzling blue spikes, except for his plump rump. Bullet always felt awkward about how his butt was so big compared to his other parts, but Jin didnt mind. Bullets butt was just the right amount of squish, perfect for a battle weary fox to lie down on. Bullet was known as the fastest hedgehog in the galaxy which had earned him the title of elite runner in the elite pamper corpse(EPC) or epic squad for short. Furs in this regament were the baddest of the bad. Jin knew Bullet wasnt fast in everything though. He saw Bullet slow down in other stuff, being his bunkmate and all. Gotta cool down from a tought battle somehow am I right?
"Oh right, Jun. I cam here to tell you something. News form HQ, supplies are running short." said Bullet.
"DAMMIT."
"I TOLD THEM A FORTNIGHT AGO!!!" said Jin.
Alas, another mishap on Commander Ninjas reccord. Ninja thought he was sooooo cool and battle hardy but nobody beet Jin Kitsunes kill count. Not that it was anything personnel, Jin Kitsune didnt have enough room for more notches on his blade so Ninja was safe.
Suddenly Jim felt warm and wet ant the same time. A very pleasurable feeling.
"Oh no. Oh yes.Oh." proclamated Jin.
"Dont try to hold it Jin! Were running too low on supplies!" screamed Bullet.
"But this is my last pamp!" squeed Jin.
"You never change them anyway naughty." said Bullet.
"Because because because because Im just a wittle babby! I cant dew it by moiself. Im jus a wittle babby foxxy." wimpered Jin.
"Ill wring it out for you buddy dont worry, but you know what I need in return ;)"winked Bullet.
"It goes without saying comrade, this is why I do what I do, were low on supplies you need sustenance my friend."spoke Jin.
Bullet proceeded to gently peel the soddy diaper of of his comrade in arms being careful not to scratch him with any of his spikes save for one. Once successful in removing the diapie Bullet wrung it dry over his gaping maw slurping all the contents in one big slurp. He made sure to let Jin clean off his lips *kiss*. After disinfecting it in the microwave he helped Jin back into the diaper.
Ugh, I know that I can still be an alpha Chad while wearing a diaper and Im really tough, but I hate having any weaknesses. I always need a daddy to change my diapers for me. Dont be upset Bullet. You do a great job as a buddy and a daddy. I just wish I could do it myslef sometime." said Jin. That was Jins one weakness. He was an elite fox soldier and yet he couldnt even change his own diaper. Lucky for him all his firends knew how but still he didnt want to be a burden. Being a burden reminded him of his stepdaddy Neel. That motherfucker was a meanie. Neel wouldnt let Jin wear pamps so Jin would have to be sneaky. Jin had had to make makeshift diapers in the past and Neel did NOT like it when the construction paper ripped and made a mess. Luckily Jin didnt mind picking up his things, but it still hurt his feelings when Neel called him a faggot.
"Remember Jin, you arent a faggot, youre a fagGod." said Bullet.
*sniff*"Thanks Bullet your a real badass."
JUST THEN A BULLET RIPPED THROUGH BULLETS HEART TEARING IT TO SHREDS
If only Jin hadnt had to stop for a diaper change Bullet would have been able to dodge the bullet, how many comrades would he have to lose in this dreadful war? Fucking nazis. Sure they had some good ideas, but these ones were bad nazis.
"Leave me Jun Im done for. I miss my x." died Bullet.
That bitch Darkie didnt deserve Bullet how dare his last words be about him. Darkie was a red and black hedgehog that had transferred out of the EPC(Elite Pamper Corpse) and was in general just not a very nice person but they had gained several promotions(though still below Jin) from their rutherless killing style and ability to blend into the dark.
Jin didnt hesitate they had been out of the trenches for too long and Vietnam was not a place to fuck about. Ninja called him on the phone. "What are you doing Jin? Get off the front lines! And report back to me!"ordered Commandant Ninja.
"No sir a true Scotsman never retreats!!" said Jun.
"You are going to come back here right now. We are going to regroup." said Ninja.
"No." said Jin. "Someone needs to pay said Jin."
BACK AT HQ
"Dammit, I'm going to make that alpha bow and clean my tight brown hole. My diaper wont be so fresh when he returns." grumbled Ninja.
"Who knows when that wildcard will return master?" said Dave Villager.
"Ill just send an operative after him. Someone he knows. Someone who can kill him if he decidesing to go rogue." said Ninja.
"You dont mean?" said Dave Villager.
"Yes. Darkie the hedgehog."said Ninja.
"The fashists will PAY for all that theyve done to oppress babyfurs!" yelled Jim Kitsune as he charged the front lines.
TO BE CONTINUED...
Jin Kazama is the biggest, baddest, babyfur on the block. But can he become more alpha than his stepdad Neel? He goes off to war against consumerism to prove his worth. To prove that you dont need potty training to become a chad fox.
Stay tuned for further chapers! ;D
This story books features anthros so please please PUHlease be nice and kind. It dosent have to be your style but dont be a jerk. My fashion choises are valid.
A very good book from a very talent author-Rogger Eggbert