Charlie & The Spartans
kk...as you can see, this is a different story than the one I got back from Luka, but...oh well. Next time I have a comic done, I will be sure to see a ruff draft before accepting the final product.
Anyway, this is what I gave Luka.
Enjoy
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Start set up:
Charlie is an older dog with a bit of grey showing in his muzzle.
He has a great sense of adventure so is always off, checking out new things, looking for a bit of fun and someone new to play with. He still has a couple tricks up his sleeve, and Charlie's been eager to try a few of them out.
He saw those horses out there, just a mile or so down the road from the new farm.
End set up:
"Mmmmmm, Mmm, I bet they'd like to play!" thought Charlie as he stood by the fence, watching those great horses.
"Hey boys." called Charlie "My name is Charlie. You wanna play?"
"We are The Spartan Horses", said the first Spartan proudly. "You better go home old dog.
"Check it out!" said the second Spartan with a grin. Old Yeller wants to play with Us!!!"
At that, the first two laughed riotously as the third Spartan said, "I don't know...I think he's kind of cute."
"Careful old dog, you don't want to get hurt." laughed the first Spartan.
Charlie easily jumped over the fence, and landed directly in front of the three stallions, startling them just a bit.
Charlie's ass was up in the air and his paws were on the ground in front of him in that classic "puppy wants to play" stance.
"Oh come on. Let's play!" Charlie taunted.
Before they could finish nickering, Charlie jumped, quick as lightning and almost gently, nipped all three horses' right below their ass, just avoiding the kicks from each, and finished back in that playful puppy stance right in front of the three again.
The first two Spartans looked surprised, but it was the third one that spoke up. "Ok now. That's hot."
Charlie winked at the third Spartan and said, "Oh geeze guys, you're making this too easy."
With that, Charlie quick as anything moved again, nipping the first two of the three on the inside of the thighs and the third Spartan, he skillfully licked from the left and bottom of his balls right up to the base of his tail sending shivers up the horses' spine, landing again right in front of the three surprised horses.
The third Spartan's pleasure at that move was immediately apparent.
Turning to the first two Spartans, the third said, "You guys can hang back if you want, but I'm ready to play with this yellow dog. Come on Charlie. Catch me if you can"
With that, the Spartan turned and ran towards the trees.
With a hungry grin on his face, Charlie wasted no time and was right on that Spartans heels, leaving the first two Spartans to gaze in wonder at the speed.
The Second Spartan finally shook the surprise off his face, and turning to the first Spartan asked, "Aren't we going after them, and get in on this action?"
The first Spartan still looking at the two disappear into the trees with a sly grin on his face said, "You heard him. He wants that dog to himself."
Looking at the second Spartan, the first said, "Doesn't mean we can't go watch. You make a sound though, and I'll pull that pretty tail off and feed it to you."
The chase continued for some time. Both Charlie and his Spartan were laughing loudly as they ran, zigzagging through the trees.
Suddenly, the Spartan sidestepped next to a tree, catching Charlie off guard.
As he did, he reached out and grabbed that yellow dog by his arm and started to draw him in.
Charlie regained his balance almost immediately, and still allowing himself to be drawn closer into the Spartans embrace, braced his feet against the tree and pushed hard, sending the Spartan backwards to the leaf covered ground with Charlie in his arms. As they fell Charlie went in and deeply kissed the Spartan, both their eyes closing in the pleasure of the encounter. Even as they hit the leaf padded ground the kiss continued, both becoming as hard as the old oak trees under which they held each other.
Charlie lifted his head up with a smile, and gazed into the Spartans eyes, whispering, "Wait right here. I'll be right back." Charlie started to lick and kiss the Spartan, starting under his chin, working his way down that golden path and took the hardened Spartan in his mouth, all the way to his base in one smooth movement. Working that horse, he moved faster and faster forcing an arcing of the Spartans back. Just before the great Spartan could cum, Charlie stopped and began to work his way slowly around the horse's balls and down to his ass using that tongue with all the skill his years had taught him. Charlie worked that ass, almost bringing the horse to climax a second time.
Charlie stopped, causing the horse to open his big brown eyes. Charlie just smiled and reached under the Spartan, and lifted the horses' hips, muscles bulging with the effort. The Spartan said, "Oh yes, I want you inside of me, yellow dog." Charlie smiled again, and entered the great horse and very slowly began working them both to a long and intense climax.
Meanwhile hidden in the trees, the first two Spartans were showing their surprise again.
"I can't believe he's on the bottom" whispered the second Spartan.
The first Spartan replied, "Yeah well, did you see the size of that old dog? He must be part Great Dane."
The second Spartan said, "Yes...and all the best parts too."
The second turned to the first, and asked, "Are you as turned on as I am?"
"I sure am you lug. Now kiss me, damn it!" said the First Spartan as he took the second into his arms.
As Charlie and his Spartan lay cuddled together in the leaves both breathing deeply, Charlie looked up, and asked, "So my Spartan, just what is your name?"
The Spartan opened his eyes, and said, "Kiss me again Charlie, and I'll tell you."
Charlie lifted himself up, and with his hand on the Spartans cheek, drew close and kissed the great horse, both their eyes closed, bringing them both to arousal again.
When the kiss ended, they looked into each others eyes, and the Spartan asked, "What was the question?"
**End**