Lucky's unlucky Day (alternate ending ,requested by littledipper)
all characters are owned by disney . this story was requested by Grimm and the idea for this story is his,but I am still the one writing it. thank you Grimm .
i have decide make this story a crossover ,so Grimm let me know what you think .Again, thank you Grimm for this cool idea. this is the same story again but with an alternate ending requested by littledipper.
It was a beautiful summer evening in the merry old city of london . Lucky was happily playing outside with his new family . Roger had found good homes for all 98 of his brothers and sisters, because they just didn't have any room in their small two bedroom apartment. The kept him around because he was the favorite of the litter and they were hoping to get puppies from him someday.Lucky was playing outside ,and enjoying the company of his mom and dad.
Lucky was considered perdita's pride and joy. She would sooner die than give him up . "Catch the ball",said Roger as he threw it to Lucky ,but just as he about to pick up the ball and bring it back ,his eyes were drawn toward an alley across the street .There in the lonely light of that almost pitch dark alley ,he saw her . She was absolutely stunning ,and her golden fur just shimmered in the light's warm glow .
She was the most beautiful dog he had ever seen. "Come on Lucky ,it's time for bed", said 'Perdita . "AWE MAN, do I have to", Lucky replied as he turn and walked back toward the house ."Listen to your mother", said pongo."She knows what's best for you" . "There are many dangers that lurk around every corner and we just don't want to see you get hurt ,understand?" "I guess so", Lucky replied as he curled up in his usual spot beside the television
Lucky waited until everyone was asleep , then he snuck out of the house, and walked across the street to where he saw that cute pomeranian .Then, there beside one of the dumpster in that murky and smoke filled alley way,he saw her. She was easily frightened, as Lucky approached her."WH.....WH....WHO.....AR...AR.......ARE YOU?", asked the pomeranian as she backing the wall .
"Hold on and just calm down, ok !?", Lucky replied . I am not going to hurt you. I just want to help you out. Hey ' I have an idea , said Lucky . Why don't you come live with me in my house ."But ,I don't even know your name" ,Said the pomeranian. "It's Lucky", he replied as he hoped to establish a relationship. "What's your name?" he asked . "My name is Angel",she replied.
Lucky's heart must have skipped a beat when heard her say her name. The name fit her perfectly because from the first time he saw her ,he thought that she was an angel from heaven . She was a testiment of deep and passionate love and beauty. "So ,your names lucky huh?!" , said Angel . "Well",she said hesitatingly , as if she stalling for time."You know what, Lucky?",she said again. "There is no reason why we can't have some fun first" . Suddenly ,as she said that , his cock was beginning to peak out from it's sheath. She quickly notice it as she moved in closer to him. As she moved toward him, his cock was now all the way out and showing the whole 9 inches of his meaty tool.
"WOW , now I see why they call you Lucky", She said as she took to the entire length of his massive erection into her mouth and began sucking him off . She could hear Lucky moaning and whimpering as she took it all in . "Ohhhh..........Ohhhhh..........OH, YES.......that's it , Just take it all" ,cried lucky as he was thrusting himself into her gorgeous and suppel maw, making tears stream down her face as he was about to cum.
He soon stopped thrusting ,as he felt his cock throbbing deep inside her throat as well as his massive ball sac that was filled with his fertile seed." Ahhhhhhh, oooooooh, Angel, this is it , I'm cumming" ,Lucky screamed as he let loose a torrent of dalmatian cream right down the pomeranian's throat . Quickly, he wrapped his front legs around her furry belly and hilting himself against her , making sure that she swallowed it all.
Once she was done ,she pulled away from his mighty dalmatian rod . "That was good", said Angel as she blushed from embarrassment . "Now that I've had my appetizer , it's time for the main course", said Angel . Her blushed cheeks soon faded as she looked at lucky with an evil grin across her face , as she licked her lips . She saw that the blow job she gave was quickly taking it's toll on the pup .He was worn down a vulnerable and this was her chance at getting a free meal ,and she knew she had to take it.
"What are you looking at me like that for ,Angel ?", said Lucky as he tried to catch his breath. "Well.....uh..., I guess there's no harm in telling you since you won't be around to tell anyone else", Angel replied . "What do you mean by that ?" asked Lucky ." HE HE HE HE , you have fallen into my trap and now you are going to be my dinner". Lucky was frightened now as Angel pinned him to the ground .
The pup struggled to get free from her as she unhinged her jaws, preparing to devour the helpless pup. "PLEASE DON'T EAT ME" ,Lucky begged, as his happiness was quickly turn to fear. He began to cry and whimper as the hungry dog pulled the his whole head into her gaping maw ,surrounding him in total darkeness .Lucky kicked and struggled violently as he felt Angel's teeth clamp down like a vice around his tender neck .
Angel giggled to herself as she watch the pup stuggling ,and trying not accept that he was nothing more than. Lucky tried yelling for help ,but it just came across as a low muffle. Angel moaned happily as she took her first swallow , pulling his head into her vicelike throat as her mouth was now clamped down around Lucky's belly ,as well as both of his front paws now being held tightly within the slick confines of her hot throat .She had the whole night to herself, so didn't see no reason to rush things .
She wanted to enjoy this,and enjoying it she was as she licked his underbelly savoring the flavor of her morsel ,and making him easier to gulp down. Thoughts began running through Lucky's mind as his life was slowly slipping away.Why didn't listen to his dad. His mind was quickly filled with regret . His mom and dad tried to protect him, but he didn't listen . Tears began to fall from eyes as he was dragged further down toward his temporary home .
Angel began giggling as she gulped down even more of her tasty treat , feeling his renewed struggles as she began gently rubbing this nice bulge he made inside her throat .All that was left outside was his back legs and his tail,which kicked about in air trying to stop the descent . Her tail was wagging happy ,as she watched the last part of her meal flail about in front of her .
She decided that i was time to end it ,as she tilted her head up in the air , watching the pup squirm and struggle right to the very end as she opened her maw again ,but this time letting gravity play a part in Lucky's demise as his feet descended into void that was known as Angel. Nothing left out side but a lonely old tail. She watched it wag back and forth intensely, as she slurped it up like a piece of spaghetti ; letting out a huge belch and finishing her meal.
She quietly listened to the gurgles and groans as her meal found its way into the pink fleshly prison that was Angel's belly . She moaned again as her thoughts were now lost to feel of his furry body pushing past the sphincter a descending into her depths . Once free of the slick walls of the throat ,Lucky was able to talk again .
He took the chance yell for help ,"HELP........HELP......... ,PLEASE.........., SOMEBODY.......... HELP ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!," Lucky cried out,but it proved futile as his cries for help were cut off by Angel's belly fur. Well , "I guess today wasn't your lucky day, so just be a good boy and digest for me" ,said Angel as she just layed and gave new distended belly a few well deserved rubs and pats.
She soon drifted off to sleep , rubbing her gut lightly . "AHHHHHHHHHHHH", "PLEASE, ANGEL, LET ME OUT OF HERE" , "GOD ,HELP ME", scream Lucky as he tried to reach her one last ,but once again his words had fallen on deaf ears. He soon fell into a deep sleep caused from the lack of air, and with that , Lucky accepted his fate curled up inside her belly
The morning soon came as Angel stretched out a little bit , looking down at her belly , noticing that lucky wasn't digested . I must have indigestion ,Angel thought . Well I guess the only thing I can do is let him out . She quickly walk beside the dumpster ,lifted up her tail and began to push the little pup out . UHHHHHHHH ,It hurts so bad , now I know what child birth feel like,said Angel as she saw Lucky head being forced out of her tight hole . Lucky was happy to see daylight again as the rest of his body soon follow as he was pushed out onto the ground .
Lucky got up and cleaned himself off . He was getting ready to go home , when Angel stopped him . Lucky, said Angel ,I want to say I'm sorry for eating you . I want to make it up to you . How said Lucky as her words of sencerity now peaked his curiousity . I want to be your mate ,and carry your pups inside of me, said Angel . Lucky was stunned at her answer , and he thought that maybe today would be his lucky day ,as they walked back home , paw in paw , and know that she would soon be one of the family.
THE END