steele's revenge: chpt 1: steele's revenge
#1 of steele's revenge
this was my very first furry story series. the story line's pretty pathetic. please tell me what you like about it and if you didn't like it. why not and what can i improve?
Steele's revenge
a lone dog lay outside in the cold December night, abandoned by all, his once looked after coat a mess, he was so hungry. And yet once he was the biggest star in Nome, people had looked up to him but now they don't even look at him at all. He cries at night wishing the old days back... the days when he was famous... the days before balto.
He was a sled dog, the lead sled dog, the best lead sled dog in nome. But it all changed when balto took all the glory for himself... or at least that's what the dog believed. Then three dogs walked past, one dog was talking "i hope I never see him again" the second dog nodded and started talking "yeah he was the meanest, the most malicious, the most" "he was a pillock!" Interrupted the third dog who yelped as he was hit over the head. "nikki, kaltag, star... please help me" cried the dog.
Kaltag looked at him "why should we... you never did anything for us" the dog looked desperate "uh... yes I did... um I... uh" star laughed "he did something!" Nikki and kaltag looked at him "he did?" "yeah that's right star tell them what I did" star nodded "he raped me"! Nikki and kaltag stared at steele "he did... did he"? The dog started shaking his head "no I didn't... please you've got to believe me" nikki suddenly thought "hey kaltag remember that time when star's ass was bleeding and he refused to tell us why"? Kaltag nodded "he said he cut his ass on a rock or something like that?" "yep that's it... I guess we now know what happened" the three dogs approached the dog snarling.
"please guys, I was horny... no please don't" the three dog's attacked him biting and scratching after a few minutes the three dogs left the homeless dog, his blood reddening the snow around him... he passed out. After a few hours he came too when he heard some one talking to him "hey mister... hey are you all right"? "yeah... yeah i'm fine" then he got a good look at the dog "you look so much like her... what is your name"? "my name's kodi" the dog smiled "kodi huh... do you know a husky called jenna"? "yeah she's my mother" "your mother"!? "yeah and my father's balto" "balto... balto.. did you say balto"?! The dog started laughing "balto... heheheh do you know what he did"? Kodi smiled proudly "yeah he saved Nome's children" "no he didn't... I did"
kodi stopped smiling "what... of course he did"! "no he didn't... I was on the sleigh team and he wasn't, I was running to Nome with the rest of the sleigh dogs with the medicine then out of nowhere he attacked stealing the medicine and leaving me to die... when he got back to Nome he told everyone his own version of the tale... making me look like a monster then my musher abandoned me" kodi shook his head "no my dad would never do that... he is a hero" "he also stole my girl... jenna" "no your making it up" the dog laughed "no... I have proof... follow me" kodi followed the dog to a shed on the outskirts of nome.
"the proof is inside kodi" kodi walked inside "um there is nothing in here" the dog laughed some more "no no, there is me and you... all alone... all alone together... hehehehe! if I can't have your bitch of a mother... I can still have you... all alone... with me"! kodi was scared "um i'm leaving now" "no. you're not going anywhere... jenna heheheheh"! "um i'm kodi" the dog was in hysterics "don't be ridiculous jenna... you can't be your son!"
The dog walked towards kodi, his dick dripping with precum "no please don't... help! HELP!" He screamed. In town star's ears perked up "eh"? "what's up star"? Kaltag asked "i thought I heard someone scream for help" nikki got up "well we better go help then" they ran towards where star heard the screaming they opened the shed door and gasped as they saw kodi on the floor crying and the dog they had beaten earlier "you"! The dog cried as he tried to walk towards the three dogs but couldn't as he was still tied to kodi "get your dick out of him" cried nikki "why should I... this is my first time with jenna... i'm loving it... heheheheh i'm going to do her every night"! Star looked confused "but that's not jenna... that's her son" kaltag jumped on the dog but was knocked aside by one of it's paws "oof that hurt" he moaned as he flew into one of the walls and passed out "kaltag"! Star cried as he too tried to attack but was beaten as well.
"ugh please stop this" kodi pleaded from under the dog "it's too big"! "heheheh it's too late for that jenna... you could've been mine... we would've had so much fun... but no you picked some half bred mutt instead... i've spent too long alone... but no more" "please let me go" "shut up"! He cried as he bit kodi's leg "FUCK"!. jenna ran towards balto "balto love, have you seen kodi"? "um no... I thought he was running the post" "well the other post-dogs don't know where he or dusty are" balto looked confused "dusty"? "yes the one he fancies" balto nodded "well let's go look for him then" they ran about town asking if anyone had seen him "wait jenna I can smell him... it also smells like a female dog... possibly dusty... and some other dogs... I think" balto and jenna ran towards where he smelt kodi
"ugh it smells like semen around here... you don't think kodi and dusty are... nah let's go" they got to the shed and saw dusty outside masturbating "oh kodi... one day... one day I will be yours"! "uh dusty"? Dusty screamed "oh it's you jenna... how long have you been watching"? Balto laughed "not very long... long enough to know you've got a thing for my son"! "oh um... uh... yes I do... but I can't tell him... what if he says no"? Jenna sat down next to her "he wouldn't say no... in fact he would do more than just say yes... if you know what I mean" dusty blushed "so where is he"? Jenna stopped smiling "i don't know" then they heard a crashing from inside the shed "oh jenna that feels good... it's a shame you didn't take me to be your mate"
balto crashed through the door and saw the dog raping his son "you fucking bastard... I'm going to kill you"! "oh bingo... i'm so glad you could come" "it's balto. Now get off of my son" the dog started laughing "i guess I could... but only if I can have... her" he motioned towards jenna "no" "it's easy balto... it's either him... or her" balto started snarling "neither" he jumped on the dog biting and clawing soon jenna joined in "no one hurts my children" she cried, kodi pulled himself from the dog's cock and ran off. He soon stopped when he saw dusty "dusty... um hi" dusty blushed "hi kodi" "um... I was wondering if... um" dusty smiled "if"? "if we could... you know... um get together one day and... um" dusty licked his face "yes kodi... I would love to" so the two dogs ran off into the town. Together.