A Cub's Trip
This is a story I wrote for someone very special. It's my first attempt at this so contructive criticism would be appreciated
Daddy's cub went to the state park with her class today. It was a long bus ride there, but I read the books Daddy had given me and kept my backpack held over my lap. Boys in my school think it's funny to blow up the girls' skirts, but I don't. They're not my Daddy, and only he gets to see my panties 
Once we got there, the tour guides started us all on a long trek through the park woods, but my skirt kept getting hung up and I was falling behind. I fell so far behind that I missed which way they went at the fork in the path. I was scared and so I picked one and ran down it as fast as I could as I started crying.
I couldn't really see where I was going, which is why I guess I didn't see the root lying across the path. I tripped and fell and started to really cry, but then there was this maintenance man there next to me. He looked like the kind of person Daddy always warned me to stay away from, all dirty with engine oil and stuff. His fingernails were sooo horrible! But I didn't have a lot of choice in the matter. I was lost and he looked like he worked at the park. He had a funny accent when he asked if I was ok. I shook my head and showed him my knee. It was all red and scratched. The man said his name was Thomas and he'd take me somewhere nice. I nodded and tried to get up myself, but he scooped me into his arms. His hands slid up under my skirt, rubbing my butt gently and I told him "No" just like my Daddy taught me, but he didn't care! He laughed at me instead!
He kept sliding his hand all over my panties, which were a little wet because I'd been thinking about how Daddy picked these ones out for me and how he touched me all softly when I wore them for him. The work man thought that since they were wet that HE must have made them wet and he started whispering what a dirty girl I was, that I'd never been lost at all, and that maybe I would get what I'd come looking for. But I didn't want anything from him at all! And I told him so and told him to stop touching me and I tried to kick him, but he held me close to his body, smothering me in grease smell and continued rubbing my panties. I knew he was getting them all dirty and it made me cry harder because these were SPECIAL panties from my Daddy!
Finally we reached a big green house looking thing, with lots of windows. The workman opened the door and threw me inside. I saw him start rubbing himself as I tried to pick myself up off the ground, but my legs felt funny and my panties were really wet and sweet smelling. He closed the door and I saw a few workmen gathered on the outside of the house and they were touching themselves like Daddy did when he and I were playing. I missed my Daddy, so I curled up and started to cry again, but my little pussy was so warm and tingled so much that I couldn't keep it up for long. I decided I should try and find another way out, or at least somewhere that they couldn't all stare at me. I couldn't walk so I crawled on all fours, my tail making it very hard to keep my skirt from flashing up.
After I'd crawled halfway the length of the house I was starting to get tired and really hot. When I stumbled, I assumed it was because of that. When I tried to keep going I found I'd gotten tangled in a vine of some kind. The harder I pulled at it, the tighter it got. I tried to get up and run, but another vine snaked out and wrapped around my other leg. I was really scared and I rolled over onto my knees again and found all the men were still staring at me! I cried out for help, but they only seemed to touch themselves faster! I tried to fight off the vines, but I ended up getting my hands and arms tangled too.
The vines snaked up my body till they were inside my shirt and skirt. They pulled my legs apart and ripped my shirt apart so they could lift my hands up over my head. I could barely see a bigger vine coming up between my legs and I tried to close them but the vines were too strong. The big one looked like it was coated in some sap stuff and I really didn't want it to touch me. I whimpered at it to "go away" but instead to thinner vines came up along my tummy and circled my little breasts. They slapped them and flicked and tugged at my nipples. It felt really good, but I knew it was wrong and as I started to cry harder I felt the big vine rub against my panties.
It was like a small electric shock. It felt so good and all I could think about was getting more and I spread my knees wider, letting the vine rub as much as it wanted...but then it started pushing at my panties. It still felt really good and I really wanted whatever it wanted to give me...but only Daddy got to do things under my panties. I tried to struggle more, but the thin vines slapped my breasts harder and try as I might, I couldn't get my legs to cooperate.
I lay there as the big vine pushed aside my panties. It was hot and soft and sticky and felt so good. Everywhere it touched turned to fire and I wanted it inside...but that wasn't right! That wasn't what good cubs did! But I didn't have much of a choice. It kept parting me and parting me, sliding deep inside me, pumping and thrusting and I couldn't stop my hips from thrusting back. I turned my head and could barely make out the group of men. There was cum all over the glass and they were all stroking themselves as they watched me...and I knew they'd done something to me! Something so I couldn't move or something, but with each thrust it was harder to think.
I moaned loudly as the vine hit deep inside and I felt it change shape. It got narrower and I could feel it sliding deep inside than I knew was possible. I felt four large lumps slide up through the vine and felt them inside me. The vine withdrew a little bit, leaving the things behind and starting thrusting again, faster. I was getting that funny tingle in my belly that Daddy calls cumming and I cried out for my Daddy as I came so hard from the vine's ministrations. But the vine didn't stop. It kept thrusting and the two smaller vines tugged at my nipples, prolonging my orgasm. I don't know how long it kept up, because I blacked out.
I woke up briefly, feeling a great pressure in my tummy. It was bigger than normal and the workmen were rubbing it and I felt something slide out from between my legs. They kept it up and my tummy got smaller as three more things slid out. I was so tired that I actually smiled when one of them told me I was a good girl. I blacked out again and when I woke up I was back with the group. Teacher said I'd fallen and hit my head, and that I'd been out and lost for hours...but I could still feel how soaking wet my panties were. I decided I would tell Daddy as soon as I got home so I wouldn't get in trouble for getting my special panties all messy.