Moon Fox (Rewritten Version)

Story by Rakuen Growlithe on SoFurry

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#2 of Moon Fox

Here's the rewritten version from... sometime. I think it's a pretty good improvement.


For something to be in balance it is essential that there are two opposites. It is true there can be balance between three or more objects but there must be at least two. If there is only one it cannot be out of balance but it can also never be in balance as there is nothing to balance it. All around the world there are opposing forces that balance each other out; backwards and forwards, left and right, good and evil, life and death, dark and light, day and night.

The world during the day is unrecognisable during the night and few creatures are active during both times. For those that are active at one time the opposite is an unknown and enticing mystery. Vulpix was a creature of the day and mesmerized by the nocturnal world. The scenes he knew, of dim shadows beneath bright green leaves during the day would change to darker tints of blue and purple and impenetrable black. Often he would lie in his den and stare into the gloom, trying to see through the darkness. As he became more comfortable with the night he began to venture out for midnight strolls; preferably when the moon was full and cast its silver glow over the world, insufficient to dispel the mystery but light enough to grant Vulpix his vision. One of Vulpix's fondest memories was formed on a night such as that when the moon shone high above him...

Vulpix was further from his home than he realised, he didn't feel tired at all so he hadn't noticed for how long he had been walking, and now as he looked around he realised he was lost.

"Okay, don't panic," he told himself, "You can find your way home. It doesn't matter that you don't recognise where you are and can only see foot in front of your face.

He laughed nervously before groaning at his stupidity. Now he would almost certainly have to spend the night away from home and out in the open.

"This sucks," he commented, scuffing the ground with a paw, "I guess I should at least try to find my way back."

Shaking his head and mentally berating himself he chose a direction and began to walk. The biggest problem was that he didn't walk in a straight line; he would meander from here to there going wherever he felt he might find something interesting.

Step by step Vulpix moved further away from his trail and in consequence became even more lost.

"Why are you in my territory?" queried a voice to Vulpix's left.

"Whoa!" yelped Vulpix in surprise.

He turned to face the voice while at the same time trying to remain calm. He knew there were pokemon that might eat him in the forest and that knowledge was shown by Vulpix's rapidly beating heart.

"I d-didn't know," stammered Vulpix, "I was just wandering around. I'm very sorry."

"Where are you going?" asked the voice again, this time originating behind Vulpix.

The poor fox spun around again. The voice sounded more curious than angry noted Vulpix with relief. Hopefully that meant he wasn't going to be attacked for accidentally entering the mystery pokemon's territory.

"I'm just trying to get home. I'm lost," admitted Vulpix.

"Lost, eh," mused the voice, once again behind him.

Vulpix spun around a third time, expecting to once again see nothing but instead he found himself nose to nose with an umbreon male. Vulpix jumped back in shock, stumbling slightly and the umbreon chuckled at the nervous fire-type.

"What's your name?" the umbreon asked Vulpix while circling him lazily, his red eyes drifting over the fox's body.

"Just Vulpix," answered Vulpix.

The umbreon's actions were making him nervous but the umbreon's voice. To Vulpix the voice was the most soothing sound ever. It was soft and gentle while at the same time being strong.

"I'm Umbra," said the umbreon, stopping in front of Vulpix again after walking right around him, "and I suppose you would like me to show you the way home."

Vulpix nodded silently as he studied Umbra, now that he was still. Umbra's golden rings were glowing slightly and pulsing, Vulpix guessed in time with his heart, and were easily distinguished from the short, ebony fur that coated the rest of the umbreon's body, from his long ears, over his well-muscled chest until the tip of his cylindrical tail. Vulpix gulped slightly. He was gay and comfortable with it and Umbra was the most handsome pokemon he had ever laid eyes upon. He felt an inclination to go right up to Umbra and kiss him directly on those delicious lips. He gave a shudder and tried to force the image from his mind. This wasn't the time to think of that. He still didn't even know if Umbra would help him or not let alone what Umbra's sexual preference was.

"And If I decided to help you find your way home what would I get out of it, hmm?" asked Umbra.

What could he give Umbra wondered Vulpix. He had nothing to give. He was a dreamer, living day to day. He didn't even have spare food. He only collected extra for winter. But he had to offer something. All he had was his body. If Umbra was hat way inclined things would work out very nicely but it was a risk. If Umbra had no interest in males then he would be in an extremely bad situation.

"I'm waiting," stated Umbra, getting a little bored as Vulpix took his time in deciding on a fitting payment.

This was it. Vulpix didn't stop to think it over he just acted, obeying his body and ignoring his rational mind. He stepped forward and rubbed the side of his muzzle along Umbra's strong neck.

"I'm sure I can do something you'll enjoy as a reward," Vulpix murred.

Umbra's eyes narrowed and in a flash his body faded and merged with the surrounding dimness. Vulpix stumbled forward in shock and fear as Umbra reappeared beside him, tackling him onto his back and pinning him down.

"What was that about?" growled Umbra, his voice dangerously low.

Vulpix's eyes were wide with fear. He'd ruined it. Screwed up completely. Umbra wasn't gay and he was going to kill him. Vulpix could do nothing butt tremble as Umbra's growling muzzle moved continuously closer, his sharp teeth glowing in the moonlight. Vulpix closed his eyes as Umbra lunged forward then opened them wide with surprise as the umbreon's lips were pressed roughly against his. Umbra's cool tongue pushed its way through Vulpix's stunned lips and into his warm mouth. Vulpix moaned in bliss as it traced the edges of his teeth and stroked the soft, moist lining of his cheeks. Soon Vulpix had recovered enough from the shock to return the kiss and his own tongue reached out for Umbra's, found the other males and began to wrestle it, giving him a taste of the sexy umbreon. After a short while Umbra slowly removed his tongue and broke the kiss. Vulpix stared up at him, slightly confused, with his lips tingling as they remembered the touch of the dark pokemon.

"I was only playing," smiled Umbra, "Is that the kind of payment you're offering?"

Vulpix nodded eagerly, swallowing the traces of Umbra's saliva that lingered in his mouth.

"Then I'll be pleased to help you," grinned Umbra, moving off of Vulpix.

Vulpix tried to rise but was stopped as Umbra gently pressed him back down with a paw.

"Don't be getting up just yet," Umbra told Vulpix, "I want to be paid in advance."

Umbra moved down from the prone Vulpix's head until he was easily able to reach between Vulpix's hind legs. Vulpix was breathing heavily, knowing what Umbra was about to do. He spread his legs a little wider while keeping his tails flat. Being so close to Umbra and the kiss they had just shared had more than a little aroused Vulpix and in the short white fur of his crotch it was very easy to see the red head of his penis that was beginning to harden. His whole body glowed with pleasure as Umbra began to lap at his emerging dick with relish. This new stimulation encouraged Vulpix's penis to grow faster and it was soon at its full length.

Umbra then ignored the needy organ and began to tease his vulpix reward. Umbra ran his tongue over the fox's sack, taking each ball in his mouth in turn and giving them a gentle sucking. Vulpix was thoroughly enjoying the treatment while his abandoned cock was dribbling pre all over his clean stomach. The almost-clear fluid disappearing into the soft creamy fur. Watching the liquid ooze free was turning the umbreon on so much that he could no longer ignore his own member that was begging for attention.

Umbra let one of Vulpix's balls drop from his mouth and stood over Vulpix, nose to crotch. After a pause to lick the errant pre-cum off his partner Umbra took the first half of the Vulpix's dick easily in his mouth. After that he had to suppress his reflexes to force the rest down his throat before he could begin to suck on it, trying to extract the delicious cum that was hidden away from him.

Through his pleasure-dazed state Vulpix looked up to see Umbra's own erect dick suspended near his muzzle. He gently rubbed his nose on the insides of Umbra's thighs, much to the surprise of the dark pokemon, tickling him and almost causing him to choke. The Vulpix's pink tongue flicked out from between his lips to experimentally taste the umbreon. Small droplets of pre-cum were lapped up by Vulpix, transported to his greedy little maw which began salivating heavily from the taste. Strong but a taste the vulpix craved more of. He opened his jaws and gently closed them over Umbra's member, being especially careful not to hurt him with his sharp teeth.

Since Umbra had started working on Vulpix earlier than Vulpix had started on him Vulpix was a lot further along than Umbra and it didn't take much time before Vulpix had forgotten all about sucking Umbra as he became lost in a world of pure pleasure. His mind went blank and all thoughts were replaced with the sole desire for more pleasure. Vulpix began rolling back and forth and waving his limbs around in bliss, only staying in position because of Umbra's legs on either side of him.

Umbra let some of Vulpix's penis leave his mouth to make it easier to suckle, especially with the amount of pre-cum that was no making its way into the umbreon's mouth. Umbra drank down the last blob of pre then swallowed more of the cock and gave it a vigorous tongue bath that drove Vulpix over the edge of sanity into the realm of orgasm. Umbreon heard Vulpix's high-pitched bark of pleasure that emanated from between his hind legs and so was prepared for when not even a second later his whole maw was filled with a flood of hot Vulpix cum. The near-scalding, thick, milky liquid shot out faster than Umbra could swallow and soon streams of white cream ran from his mouth in ivory streams down his black-furred neck. Once the feast ended Umbra stepped back, licking as much stray cum from his lips as he could as he surveyed the panting fire-fox lying recumbent on the grass before him.

"Roll over," commanded Umbra, tapping Vulpix's side with his dark nose, practically indistinguishable from the fur on his muzzle.

Vulpix took a second to gather his strength and will his muscles to respond but then he rolled onto his stomach and rose, a little unsteadily. Umbra moved behind Vulpix and gave him a cheeky nip on his rump. Vulpix yipped softly, splitting his six tails down the middle to provide Umbra with easy access to his posterior and bending his forelegs so his butt was raised up. Umbra climbed onto Vulpix's back and positioned himself so that the leaking tip of his cock began to slick up Vulpix's tight tail hole.

"Will you be able to take it?" asked Umbra, not wanting to hurt Vulpix even though Vulpix had offered him his body to with as he wished.

"I'll be fine," nodded Vulpix, "I've done it before."

"'Kay. I didn't want to hurt you...unless you want me to," he added as an afterthought.

Slowly Umbra penetrated Vulpix. His sensitive cock being squeezed tightly as it forced its way into Vulpix's ass. The feeling for Umbra was incredible as Vulpix's rear end was even hotter than his mouth.

Vulpix groaned as his walls were shoved to the side to make a passage for the umbreon on his back. Once he was Umbra was hilted in him Vulpix felt the other foxy pokemon's cheek brushing against him and he nuzzled against the soft face.

Umbra slid his forepaws around his lover and gripped the warm body tightly before licking Vulpix's lips and murring with pleasure as the two pokemon's bodies glowed with pleasure in their embrace. With a shudder Umbra pulled back, removing almost his entire prick before thrusting it back inside of Vulpix. It was tough going at first since there was no lubrication but as they went on Umbra's pre became smeared throughout Vulpix's anus making Umbra's thrusts smoother and faster until he was drawing out to the limit and thrusting back in with all his strength.

Vulpix was shivering with pleasure as Umbra used him. He could feel the umbreon's breath rushing past his face with every forceful entry and he took comfort in the strong paws gripping his body. Suddenly Umbra pushed all the way in. His butt felt like it was being pulled apart and Vulpix knew the umbreon had shoved its knot into him and they were no tied. Umbra bit down on the back of Vulpix's neck as his thick cum flowed into Vulpix's rectum filling the fox up.

Exhausted after his orgasm Umbra's legs gave out completely and he collapsed as dead weight on Vulpix's back. Since Vulpix wasn't exactly in the best condition he collapsed as well, Umbra's knot pulling inside him and giving off a dull feeling of pleasure.

After a couple of minutes Umbra pulled his shrinking knot from vulpix with a wet pop. Vulpix struggled to his feet, stumbled over to a tree and collapsed at its base.

"I'm really tired," yawned Vulpix, "May I ... sleep here ... tonight?"

Umbra dragged himself to his own feet, "Yeah. Whatever. I'll help you tomorrow I need rest too. I'll be nearby."

With that Umbra faded from sight. Vulpix watched him go slightly sadly. He'd hoped Umbra would lie with him. Still, he reasoned, the umbreon wouldn't just desert him. Cheered by that Vulpix closed his eyes and drifted into sleep. The cum settling inside his body reminding him he was being watched over this night.

TheEnd