Wreathed in Shadow and Flame (original and rewritten)

Story by Rakuen Growlithe on SoFurry

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I'm submitting both versions in one because while I like Moon Fox I don't really care for this one and it's not as good. I actually noted that originally because apparently it was written after a period of not writing anything. Also important is that the original and rewritten versions have a completely different tone.

Also, in the original I gave my best Minesweeper scores. I've kept that part and also added my current scores in brackets. Luckily I've improved in all of them.

Beginner: 6 (5) seconds

Intermediate: 33 (31) seconds

Expert: 107 (98) seconds


Wreathed in Shadow and Flame

By: Rakuen Growlithe

Disclaimer: This is pornography involving pokemon that belong to Nintendo and not me and is not intended for the eyes of anyone underage or anyone that does not approve. Story is mine.

Original Version

A male mightyena wandered freely through the night. His dark Grey coat disguising him as he walked through the shadows, following a trail of stars. He was feeling lonely. It had been a while since he'd had a female and earlier in the night he'd spied two eevee lovers getting considerably more acquainted.

He stopped suddenly at the edge of an open field. He surveyed the land and stared in shock. There, like an answer to his prayers, was a female ponyta, glowing in the moonlight, as if she'd stepped out of one of his fantasies, vainly trying to bring her tongue to her swollen sex. Mightyena perked up at the sight, feeling a stirring between his hind legs. He knew he had to help the mare get release. If he felt good helping her that was just a welcome bonus.

"Having trouble?" asked Mightyena, startling Ponyta.

She spun around to face him. Her burning mane and tail lighting her surroundings in a soft glow.

"I didn't see you," she stammered, shocked at his arrival.

"Well, you did look rather busy."

Ponyta shifted embarrassedly.

"Well...I..."

"You need help," decided Mightyena, striding up to the horse pokemon.

He was slightly bigger than she was.

"I could use some help," admitted Ponyta, "I don't suppose you'd...?"

"I thought you'd never ask. I'll happily oblige, as long as you cool those flames."

"They won't hurt you," promised Ponyta as she turned around and presented her rear end to Mightyena.

He could see her cunt needed attention badly. She was in heat and her swollen lips smelt strongly and ached for a little treatment.

Mightyena pressed his nose up against the pony's slit and inhaled her scent. The pheromones it contained entered his brain and caused his dick to elongate and poke out of his sheath. Mightyena's large tongue came out and ran up the delicious lips in front of him. Instantly Ponyta whickered from the pleasurable feeling and began to secrete copious amounts of her lubricating juice. Mightyena tasted the sweet juice and plunged his tongue deeply into Ponyta's cunt to taste more. She gave a soft neigh of desire and pressed her rear back against Mightyena's muzzle. His tongue danced in the embrace of her smooth walls, savouring and exploring. A short distance in he licked against her hymen. This was Ponyta's first heat. It filled Mightyena with excitement to know that he'd take Ponyta for her first ride. He ran his tongue over her rump; his doghood was fully erect and ready for business.

Without warning Mightyena reared up and positioned himself. He was slightly concerned about her fire but he felt nothing as her flames stroked against his grey fur.

"Ready?" inquired Mightyena, nuzzling Ponyta's back.

"I'm ready," nodded Ponyta.

Without wasting more time in conversation Mightyena eagerly thrust hard, burying his whole length into the virgin horse in one move. She cried out from the pain and sudden intrusion but it soon passed. Mightyena drew back before re-entering her slowly. Her fresh walls gripped his shaft tightly, forcing him to push hard to move in and out. He growled deeply in pleasure and outside his knot slowly swelled. Ponyta's juices were soon flowing rapidly, leaking out of her and running down her and her lover's legs through their sodden fur. This increased lubrication allowed Mightyena to pump incredibly fast, the pleasure building to great heights within his body. With a howl he thrust in with all his strength, his knot popping into Ponyta and swelling as he orgasmed. Mightyena's body tensed as it spurted shot after shot of his canine cum into Ponyta's womb. Ponyta came while Mightyena was still cumming, her vaginal walls squeezing the dog almost painfully and her own juices ran freely.

When Mightyena finished cumming he collapsed on top of his equine partner, panting hard. He felt her heavy breathing under him and basked in the sensation of afterglow while waiting for his knot to shrink sufficiently for him to pull out.

The End

Rewritten version

It was late at night and the entire world was covered in a thick, black blanket. A cold breeze sighed morosely, dragging behind it a light grey fog. Hidden in the fog, stalked a solitary mightyena, his golden eyes piercing through the night's cover, searching for any potential meal he could find. His paws carried him in a familiar direction, the path to a small stable. A single ponyta or rapidash would last him a while and, with his nocturnal camouflage, he could take one now without fearing their battle advantage.

Mightyena circled around the farmhouse and stables until he could feel the wind blowing into his face before he began crawling slowly and silently through the undergrowth. The chances of a kill were far higher if he was completely undetected until the last moment. Any sooner and the sound of a struggle could alert the stable owner to the plight of his pokemon. He crawled closer through the bushes until he had a good view of the entire field and surrounding buildings then he stopped to look.

There. Mightyena could see a ponyta at the side of a building with no other signs of life anywhere nearby. He chuckled to himself, he could see she has haltered to a metal ring set in the brickwork. He could kill her with no risk of her escape. On the negative side he wouldn't be able to take her carcass with him but he could still gorge on the fresh meat. Without even a rustle his muscular, grey body began to move forward, closer to the prey he had just selected.

As the soft, cool grass seemed to flow beneath Mightyena's paws as he crept rapidly toward the ponyta he noticed a strange scent on the breeze. It didn't take him long to realise it was coming from the ponyta and it was a scent he'd been exposed to many times before; it was the scent of heat, sexual readiness, and specifically the ponyta's first heat. The enticing smell played at his mind, making him consider the horse pokemon as sexual prey. Once that thought had taken a hold in his mind he quickly warmed to it. Being a lone mightyena was great for all its freedom but mightyena were pack pokemon and alone he'd been unexposed to mates for longer than he cared to remember. Mightyena decided quickly; he would strip the ponyta of her virginity.

"Hello," greeted Mightyena, revealing himself and smiling inwardly as she jumped with surprise.

"H-hi. Are you a friend?" replied the ponyta nervously.

Mightyena came closer noting Ponyta's body language, scared and unsure.

"Yes, I'm a friend," Mightyena assured her, marvelling at her naivety, "Your master mentioned you were having a bit of trouble with the weather."

"Wh-what?" asked Ponyta in confusion.

Mightyena gave a friendly laugh, "You're in heat. It was a joke."

"Oh," blushed Ponyta, embarrassed that she'd seemed like such a fool.

"I came here to help you," continued Mightyena in a friendly tone, "I've heard a heat can sometimes be very uncomfortable."

Ponyta nodded earnestly, the rope on her halter waving between her and the wall.

"It's itching," she whined, "And I can't reach it."

She tugged lightly on the rope to illustrate her point.

"I can see. It must be horrible," he sympathised.

He padded over lightly to her, closing the gap.

"May I?" he asked once he was near her rump.

"I-I guess," agreed Ponyta.

Mightyena brushed his nose against her swollen cunt taking a series of sniffs as Ponyta squirmed happily, although with a blush showing through her white fur. Her fresh scent made a low growl of pleasure echo in his chest and he began to nuzzle her mound harder, soon rubbing his face over it, exciting the young pony and dampening his fur with her pussy juices. He felt her push back on him, wanting more, wanting him to go inside and fill her with his canine semen. As he nuzzled he slowly stepped back, her mimicking his movements until she reached the end of the rope and couldn't proceed any further. Mightyena then stayed at that distance so just the faintish touch of his nose and soft, furred limps teased her cunt.

"Ohh," trembled Ponyta, moaning in lust, "Don't hold back like that. I need it!"

Mightyena chuckled, "Alright," and began to lick slowly, his flat tongue sliding over her labia and being rewarded with the mouth-watering taste of her juices.

He still didn't place a thing inside of her and as she begged more he began licking up until he could taste the spicier flavour of her ass. Ponyta still nickered and whimpered from the sensation but it wasn't as intense as earlier. Mightyena slowly indulged himself as he swirled his tongue in shrinking circles toward her hot tail-hole. He enjoyed both the taste and smell of her ass; mixed with her ever increasing heat that was making his solid dog cock ache with arousal and need. He pressed his muzzle more firmly on her anus, giving it wet kiss then rearing up and mounting the small horse, unable to control his urges any longer.

"Oh yes," cried Ponyta eagerly as Mightyena landed on her back and wrapped his forelimbs around her waist, holding them together.

Mightyena felt her almost dancing, eager to know be taken by him and have her lusts answered. He pressed his cock against her pussy, finding it wet enough from his teasing and plunged straight in to the hilt in one smooth, cruel thrust. He grunted with exertion as he claimed Ponyta's virginity and ended his own undesired celibacy. With his cock finally in the warm confines of her cunt, Ponyta's cries of pain meant nothing to him and he was sick of hearing her desires.

"Shut up!" he growled, "I don't want to ear any more from you. If I do you'll find yourself dead before you can even react."

He gave a groan as she tensed in fear at his sudden change in tone and realised she'd been tricked. Although Mightyena couldn't see Ponyta's tears slowly form in his eyes he shook them loose and to the floor as he slid his member out to its head and then slammed back into his victim. Each thrust in that shook Ponyta's body made Mightyena growl louder as more of his pre was smeared inside her, allowing him t slide back and for the even more easily. He used his claws and strong legs to hold onto her tight as though she would run away and with her satisfactorily restrained he directed his energies into humping her hard.

Soon Mightyena's knot was large enough to begin hurting Ponyta every time that he yanked it out her cunt and popped it back in mere moments later. His ears flicked and he snarled at her.

"If you don't stay silent I'm going to rip your throat out!"

He punctuated his threat by slamming especially hard into her, his body jerking as he came to a stop before his thick, swollen knot was able to shove itself inside the once-virgin-equine. She obeyed after that and just hung her head, gasping for breath. As he tried to pull out again Mightyena found his knot had become too large and he was now tied inside Ponyta.

"I'm almost done," grinned Mightyena, both disgusting and relieving Ponyta at once with his message.

Quickening his pace Mightyena began to pant uncontrollably as his cock ached with even more pleasure and his balls tightened in their furry sack. With a last lunge he pulled himself into Ponyta with everything he had, the claws on his forelegs scratching her skin and leaving twin sets of red lines on either side of her body, and his cock spasmed in her depths and began to fire Mightyena's cum. He trembled as spurt after spurt shot forth making Ponyta's cunt twitch and spasm around his and increased the rush he felt. Although it was only a minute or so Mightyena's climax was that sexual high he hadn't had for ages and he wanted more from the crying pony underneath him.

Mightyena waited until his knot had finally shrunk then began pulling out.

"Ponyta," he began, "One thing I need to add."

He watched her lift her head then gasp as he began to piss in her cunt. She jumped forward and he let her, his dick falling free, still sending a stream of strong dog urine over her hind legs and rear. He grinned as she backed away from him, fearfully eyeing him and trembling badly. Her front was clean but further back she was a mess of cum and urine and stunk like she was his territory, which was exactly what he intended.

"You're my slut now!" he growled, "I'll be back soon and take you for another ride and again after that and if you ever refuse or complain I will tear you into little pieces. Do you understand?"

Ponyta nodded, her eyes wide and thick trails of tears running from them down her face to fall to the ground.

"What are you?" demanded Mightyena.

"Y-your slut," sobbed Ponyta shamefully.

The End