Housewarming gifts
I'm a new fur in the community and I am trying to develop my writing ability for story settings. Any constructive critique, praises, or suggestions--especially from experienced authors--is greatly helpful and appreciated. Thanks and enjoy the reading.
Mike milled about and rode around on the sidewalks and streets of his sub-urban town on a warm summer day. The sky was a little cloudy and a possible threat of rain toward the evening but it was cool enough to not make this deep-purple, at least at close inspection, panther keep indoors all day. He stood a little over 5'8", naturally flexible with modest strength and very energetic. Mike was all about the speed and the wind across his body and spent a majority of his free time speeding around on his bike.
Riverville was a pretty close-knit community. Neighbors generally watched over each other, kept in touch with politics, and anything related to children. The parents were fairly competitive with their kids, sometimes with keying of cars and shouting matches, but that usually was left to old grudges with the same four or five families. Mike kept on top of things himself, generally because he visibly saw the whole town at least on a weekly basis.
There were new neighbors that moved in a few days ago but he didn't pay too much mind because he saw nothing of real interest. He zipped by the house and glanced over to see another kid about his age just sitting on the steps looking horribly bored. Mike wanted to check it out so he made a small u-turn and stopped in front of the house.
"Hey, what's up? You just moved in here?"
The other kid was sort of startled about the casual up-front approach, but got real excited, "Yea, my parents decided to move down here and get away from the city-life. I really don't know anyone around here yet though."
"Correction," Mike said with some arrogance, "You know me now."
"I should know better. My name's Terry." He stuck his paw out.
"Mike. Put it there," and they shook hands.
"Hey, did you need to go somewhere or where you just exercising? Because you can come in for a drink and get out of this heat. I can show you around too."
"Sure, I was just riding around to kill time. I'd love a drink actually, you got soda and stuff?"
Mike brought his bike on the porch and they both entered the house. It was larger inside than what the outside of the house demonstrated. The setup was pretty nice, the living room was to the right and dining room was to the left with the kitchen further down. The entrance was a small room with a closet for coats and outdoor gear and a stairway that lead to the living quarters.
Terry came out with the soda cans and gave one to Mike and put a paw on his shoulder, "Here ya go, buddy."
Mike took the drink but he thought it was odd for Terry to put his shoulder on him. He wasn't uncomfortable with it; he just never was around any other kids that did that. "Sweet, I love this drink and I'm partially dehydrated from this heat. You get your room unpacked yet? You play any video games at all?"
"No and yes. My dad has to build me some shelves to put some of my stuff so I have to keep them in boxes and slide them in and out of my bed for now. It doesn't bother me too much, but I like to keep things neat."
"Heh, I wish I was the same way. At least so my mom wouldn't nag me everyday for it."
Terry's room was pretty spacious. The walls were painted a grey-blue and his bed room followed a mountain/canyon model. There were no shelves and the room seemed empty otherwise. Mike instinctively shot over to the TV and perused his game collection.
Terry saw Mike's eyes bug out and jaw drop. Terry could only smile as he knew exactly what Mike was looking at. "You like that, apparently."
"How...how...no.it's fake...isn't it...can't be...but it is" Mike pinched himself then went over to poke Terry with a finger then looked back at the object. "It ain't a dream, I'm real and he's real...but that can't be real." He finally took the case and opened it up and it was empty.
"Ha! I knew it was fake, it was too good to be true! You couldn't possibly have 'Gun Coliseum 4' a week before it was to hit shelves," Mike was in Terry's face holding his shoulders.
Terry's face was of absolute disgust, he rolled his eyes and slanted them and took his remote turned on the Furstation and TV. The introduction music of 'Gun Coliseum 4' resonated from the speakers and tears started to well up in Mike's eyes. Terry closed in and whispered, "I shouldn't let you play after that. You aren't worthy."
Mike went to the floor and did the classic 'I'm not worthy' praises and started to kiss Terry's feet. "Ok ok! We can play. I need to kick your ass anyway."
Mike jumped up and gave Terry a choking hug "Thank you, thank you, thank you, thank you!"
"Just don't announce this across the whole town or anything. Just a small perk my dad gets for working at the company but it's 'technically against policy to play it before retail.'"
There was a beanbag chair so Mike sat on that while Terry moved to the bed. Both were pretty evenly matched and time was devoured into the evening.
"You gonna stay for dinner here? My parents won't be home till about six but I wanted to make the invitation anyway."
"Of course, man. Geeze, it's 4:30 already, I need to call my mom and let her know then."
"Phone's downstairs. Hey, I need to get a shower because I intended to this morning but I got sidetracked. You can keep playing after you make your call."
Mike called his mom and said he was going to stay over at a new friend's house for dinner. He then played deathmatch against the simulated bots and was surprised at the increase of the AI since GC3.
Terry came into the room, damp fur and holding a towel around his waist. Mike continued to play the game and Terry shuffled around the dresser for new clothes to wear. Terry let the towel drop to the floor and Mike tried to not look but he was allured to it. Terry was unaware at that instant but Mike examined his friend's backside. Terry was a slender collie with a mix of creamy brown and light black against his back. The top-side of his tail was brown with the hanging fur on the under-side was a soft white. The fur from his arms were hung loosely and were brown from shoulder to elbow, which then blended to white.
Terry turned around with a pair of boxers and saw Mike looking at him with a surprised expression. "Ummm...did I do something wrong?" he said nervously.
Mike was startled, "Ah, no! I mean, we're both guys right. I just expected you to change in the bathroom but...that was silly of me, right. It's your room." After a few moments, Mike looked to the floor, "I'm sorry, Terry. I don't play sports and we don't have to shower after gym class so I guess I was just...I dunno"
Terry put the towel around his waist around him again and knelt down beside Mike, "Dude, I'm sorry. At my old school, we had to shower each day and since I played soccer, I did it twice as much. I'm so used to being seen naked by other guys that I just didn't think about you just now. I don't want to put you on the spot like that so I'll change in the bathroom."
"No, no. I mean, I didn't mind. I just...you can change here, I kinda liked the show," Mike threw a hand in front of him mouth and just wanted to disappear right then and there.
"You mean this show?" Terry got up and stood in full glory, unashamed. Mike paced up and down Terry's body and couldn't help but get excited at seeing the pure, white chest and belly. Mike was trying to be modest about looking at his sheath and balls, but there was little use hiding it. Mike even found it very strange that Terry wasn't aroused in the slightest; he was truly comfortable being naked in front of him.
Mike managed to get up and stand within a few feet of Terry and wanted to say something but his mouth opened and nothing came out. "See, there's nothing wrong with the whole naked thing so I'm gonna get dressed now."
"W...wait!" Mike managed to stammer out and placed a paw on Terry's shoulder before he could turn around. "Y...you don't have to. I like seeing you like this." Mike was now inches from Terry and Terry started to hesitate.
"Well, look, ummm, I..." Terry looked away and the thoughts running through his head were overwhelming him. "But, you're a guy!"
"I know that, well, duh...but I mean...I can't really put it into words. Is there really any harm in at least trying? If we don't like it, we say nothing, and no one will know anyway."
Terry just put a paw to his head and shook it "I just don't know. I know what you're saying but I...but you do sound a little convincing."
"I'll make you a deal then." as Mike brushed a hand up Terry's chest, "You undress me to the buff and if you have no attraction to me, I'll stop and never try again. If it ever comes up, all that happened is that we saw each other naked and nothing else happened. It's practically non-risk on your part. You'll never know until you at least try, right?"
Terry said nothing and thought about it for a few seconds. He slowly moved his arms around the bottom of the shirt and removed it from Mike, exposing his dark purple chest and belly. Terry looked for a few seconds and went for the zipper with less hesitation and quickly pulled the shorts and briefs to the floor and Mike stepped out of it. Mike stood at full attention, with his eyes closed and trying very hard to control his breathing. Mike's penis was becoming more stiff and it was already wet with precum. Terry rubbed the panther's belly, careful of not accidentally touching the growing member.
Mike opened his eyes and met the collie's. "Well, anything? Even a little?" Mike was blitzed nearly off his feet, but the bed against his legs saved him from falling down. Terry was already in a deep kiss with Mike and it took him a few seconds to recover and enjoy the bliss with him. The feeling was immense and tongues were interlocking and exploring the new territory with much eagerness. The kissing lasted several moments and Terry pulled Mike away from the bed and drew himself closer. Both furs were fully erect and Terry forced the legs to cross between then and every part of their body was meshed closer together.
Mike's wet penis rubbed against Terry's and random bucking of their hips occurred intermittently. Mike became more greedy and cupped his partner's balls and moaning escaped from the collie. After several moments, Terry broke off the kiss and contact and Mike tried to regain his breath. He saw the look on Terry's face, a look of a hunger so primal and so deep and that dinner was him! The collie pushed roughly against Mike and he fell on the bed. Terry quickly hopped on top and did light kisses around his neck and chest and teased the panthers member, already messing up both furs with the dripping of precum.
Terry gently guided his lover to the head of the bed and placed a finger on his chin. With a vindictive smile, Terry slowly moved the digit lower and lower, past the belly button and to the head of the panther's penis. Terry grasped the lower part of the shaft and lifted the penis upward a little and gave the entire shaft a long, slow lick. Mike's hips bucked forward and there was a moaning for more. Terry couldn't tease anymore, given the wonderful taste of the precum and started to suck on the penis. Mike rolled his eyes to the back of his head as Terry suckled and circled his tongue on the head. Mike moans were more frequent and the ecstasy was building. Mike's hips were bucking widely and Terry was awaiting his prize. A steady stream of semen shot into Terry's maw and he eagerly gulped it down to clear room for the sequential bursts. He was rewarded a few times and he squeezed the penis to make sure got every single drop. Even with his efforts a little dribbled down the sides of his mouth and he rubbed it on the back of his paw and licked it off.
Terry laid down beside Mike and the exhausted panther curled up next to him and rested his head on Terry's shoulder. Terry had a beaming face of pride as Mike purred very loudly and he also knew his turn was next.
After the small rest, Terry was given a small kiss of affection on the cheek and a soft smile. Terry discovered the use of a cat's tongue as the panther groomed and teased the stomach and pubic region. The area was pretty damp after he was given a through cleaning. Mike motioned over to the throbbing penis, a little jealous of the slight length and girth compared to his own, but more for him to play with. Mike studied his partner's face for any signs of pain as he increased the friction for the starting licks. The only expression that could be seen was a state of bliss and convulsions of his body when Mike swirled his tongue slowly and carefully around his pink head. Mike put the tongue aside and started to suck faster and faster, keeping pace with the increasing moans from his partner. The moans began to turn into 'yips' like a puppy and he was nearing his climax. Mike went back to the head one more time and gently cupped and squeezed the balls to make the orgasm more intense for his partner. Terry arched his back wildly and made a very audible gasp. Mike moved his head away from the member and closed his eyes, feeling the warmth over his face as the creamy liquid streamed from the penis.
Terry was trying to catch his breath and got much more than he thought he could possibly get. He shifted his body around to try to get more comfortable and just lie there with an afterglow no masturbation could have ever gotten. Mike just sat on his knees between Terry's open legs and enjoyed the scene that he was able to push him to that level of ecstasy. Terry opened his eyes and the former expression was quickly replaced with a funny face. He started to snicker and then burst out laughing. Mike became horribly confused and tried to get the collie's attention but had little effect.
"Dude, come here." Terry walked Mike to the bathroom and pointed to the mirror. "You look so ridiculous, this is just so funny!" and more laughs came out of him. Mike stood there almost mortified and truly felt naked in front of him. Blood rushed to his head and could be seen on his face. "I'm sorry Mike. I still love you, man." A deep kiss was shared between the two and some of the cum moved to Terry's face. Mike smirked as he saw the little bit of white splattered on Terry's face now and could imagine if a lot more was on there.
Terry moved to the shower and turned the water on. "Close the door. I think we should clean up a bit. I guess this would be my third cleaning today, huh?"
Mike could only smile and purr.