Letter to a Mailmare: Part Two: Deliverance

Story by Yukigo Kurosaki on SoFurry

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#2 of Letter to a Mailmare

Princess Celestia pays a visit to Fluttershy's cottage to seek her thoughts on courting Twilight Sparkle for Hearts and Hooves Day, but while there, she finds that Fluttershy has her own pony in mind, one that many fail to take notice to.

Fluttershy can't talk, but she can write, and write she does.

The only question that remains is, how will the abused mare react, and are the feelings mutual?


Hello again! This is the second and final part of my little clopfic, and this is the actual part that has the clop in it. I had a pre-reader for this one, who helped me a lot, AuRon from FimFiction, and he really did help me a lot, he deserves a lot of credit, I thank him a lot.

And as before, my formatting was fucked up by the editor, not my fault. I at least have the decency to make it readable. If you wish to read it in it's original form, go to http://www.fimfiction.net/story/15627/Letter-to-a-Mailmare

Just do it anyway, it's much better there and I want to see how many cross-site views I get.


Fluttershy continued to wear through a bit more of her floor as she paced to and fro. The instant that Derpy had departed, she began to miss her. She wanted her back, to be blunt with herself. Those awkward moments together were some of the best moments she'd ever had, even better than being with her friends, as much as she hated to admit it. She distracted herself with thoughts of what they could do when she came back. "What does Derpy like to do?" She mused to herself, and to Angel, who was sitting atop an arm of the couch. "Maybe I can take her out to a romantic dinner? Oh, but it's only lunchtime, who ever heard of a romantic lunch?" She glanced outside at the clear weather. "But, we could take a picnic." She quickly dismissed the idea with a shake of her head. "No, with the crazy weather we've been having, the ground's too wet" She pondered, sitting on her rump. "Maybe Pinkie Pie would know how to have a good time." She suddenly thought of the repercussions of having her involved in the whole situation. Embarrassment in front of the entire town seemed like a distinct possibility. "No!" She quickly answered herself. "Pinkamena Diane Pie can not know about this!" Fluttershy quickly shut her mouth and turned horrified towards the window, half-expecting Pinkie to be there. Whenever she mentioned that Pinkie couldn't know of something, a kind of Murphy's law kicked in, and there she was. Fortunately, her window was empty of the pink mare. She wiped her brow with a relieved sigh, speaking to herself on what she might do. "Maybe Twilight, no that's absurd. Twilight knows as much about romance as Rainbow Dash knows about chemistry. Speaking of... what about Dash?" She shook her head. "No... too forceful. Rarity?" Again, she shook her head. "No, not Rarity. She'd plan something too... fancy and complicated." She chewed on her lip. "...Applejack? She's honest, she could give good advice." She bit a hoof. "Oh... but her ranch is all the way on the other side of town..." Derpy cleared her throat, standing in the threshold with a blush forming under her cheeks. "F-Fluttershy?" Fluttershy quickly spun around, backing up. "Derpy! I-I didn't expect you back so quickly!" "I told you I'd be right back, and I keep my promises after all." She shyly rubbed at the floor. "I flew as fast as I could." She approached the yellow mare with a little nicker, nuzzling under her neck. "Y-you don't have to be worried about what to do with me, Fluttershy. Just spending time with you makes me happier than I'd ever be alone." "I wanted it to be wonderful for you though, you've been pushed around so long. I wanted to show you that you're appreciated."

Derpy licked her cheek and Fluttershy felt herself getting hot. "I know you appreciate me, Fluttershy. I've been ignored by ponies for over nine years now. Even having a conversation like this is the most romantic thing I could ever imagine; when nopony wants to talk to you because they think you're stupid, it just gets lonely." Fluttershy's ears wilted and she found herself pressing her muzzle against the mailmare's neck. "That's so sad..." She trailed off. Derpy shuffled nervously. "There is... one thing... you can do for me." "What's that?" Fluttershy perked up, prepared to do anything for the mare before her. "Can you, kiss me again? I've never had any kind of real romance before, and that kiss before, you know... the accidental one, I felt like I was just melting into it." Fluttershy hesitated, feeling herself lock up, but it was only momentarily. Once you looked past her wall eyed stare, Derpy really was a beautiful mare. She was still scared, but nonetheless she leaned forward, stretching out her wings as she did so. "Yeah, that seems..." She paused, her voice but a whisper. "...nice." She rocked on her hooves, glancing around the room, as if she expected someone to be watching her. Satisfied, she suddenly pushed forward and planted her lips on Derpy's. Derpy gave a surprised little squeak, not expecting Fluttershy to be so assertive. It was nothing like the gentle drifting together that she'd read in her novels. Her ears perked up and twitched briefly, eventually settling as her eyes drifted shut. A shiver rattled her form as she once again felt that prickling warmth against her lips. Her senses all melted back into the background, except for touch, as their lips slid past each other, working with their instincts. Both were naturally curious about romance, and if what they'd read was true. They deepened the contact, Derpy opening her mouth slightly. Fluttershy's tongue slid past, wrestling sloppily with Derpy's, pressing against it, wrapping around it, pushing it back. Derpy felt a little saliva run down her chin, but she didn't care in the slightest. They were probably doing it all wrong, but she couldn't find a reason to stop, pushing Fluttershy's tongue back to her own mouth, repeating the motions, now holding Fluttershy back. She heard the faintest moan drift from Fluttershy's throat. Blood rushed through her veins, heart thumping. Her wings rose against her own will, stiff as a board, flared fully for flight. Her face burned, such an embarrassing thing to happen! She pulled back with a gasp, the slightest trickle of their combined salivas hanging between them. She desperately pushed her wings down, though they refused to stay down for long, always popping back up. "Sorry, sorry... this is so embarrassing..." She glanced up, gulping. "I-I just don't know what went wrong." Fluttershy gave a coy little giggle. "Oh, it's alright, I'm not much better." She gestured back to her own wings, just as erect on her back. She tried to ignore the insistent tingling in her flanks, pressing her legs together. That kiss worked magics on her that she doubted even Twilight could understand, even if it was improperly done. She quivered, wiping off her mouth. An idea came to her suddenly. Derpy was on her wings all day, wasn't she? She was good with massages -- after all, she'd managed to massage a bear. "Derpy, would you lie on your belly for me, you know... if that's okay with you?" Derpy blinked in confusion, but gave a nod. "Uh, sure Fluttershy, what do you have in mind?" Fluttershy straddled her back. "Just relax, my love." She blanched slightly. Did she just say that out loud? Did it even matter anymore? She ignored the feeling and pressed a hoof to Derpy's back, at the base of her mane, flapping her wings to hover slightly, freeing both of her front hooves to press at her back, making small circles, kneading downwards. Derpy shuddered and pressed her face into the ground. This kind of attention certainly wasn't helping her wingboner. She gave a quiet little purr and turned her head to the side, closing her eyes and just enjoying the attention with little twitches. "Mmm... Fluttershy, that feels great." Fluttershy gave the slightest of smiles, continuing on, her hooves moving fluidly across the span of her withers, focusing on the muscle groups that spanned to her wings. Derpy's hind leg twitched and she skipped a few breaths. "A-ahh... Fluttershy..." She gasped out, melting beneath her skilled hooves, as a few knots loosened in her back, releasing their tension. Her tongue lolled out lazily as she nickered, splaying out. "B-by the Princesses... how'd you learn to do that?" Fluttershy just giggled softly. "I've had a lot of practice with the animals." She casually moved down to the bases of her wings, rubbing into the junctions tenderly. Derpy gasped, head shooting up, entire body shivering. "Fluuuter... uhhn..." Fluttershy's cheeks lit up brightly. Did she just moan? She tried again, working her hooves into the toughened patch. Derpy's eyes clenched shut and her body tensed. "H--hhhh... mm! Fluttershy..." She panted. "C-careful Fluttershy! That's a sensitive area!" "I-it is? I'm so sorry, I didn't mean... please don't be angry." She swiftly apologized, feeling silly for not knowing that fact. It obviously was rather tender, considering Derpy's reactions to the slightest rubs. Derpy nodded, responding to her question. "Y-yeah, you're a pegasis, hasn't anypony ever touched you there?" She glanced backward. "And don't apologize, Fluttershy, it didn't hurt." Fluttershy coughed slightly. "Oh... o-okay, but n-no... I always bolt when somepony touches me." The mailmare slowly rose to her hooves. "I'll show you then" She turned, gesturing to the floor. Fluttershy laid down hesitantly on her belly, wings twitching. Derpy laid one hoof on a wing, and stroked softly against the pillow-like surface. Fluttershy shook and twitched, then gave a squeaking gasp as the hoof brushed to the very base. "Oh yeah... that is kinda... mm... tingly, isn't it?" Derpy nodded, continuing to work into the sensitive base. Fluttershy quivered and gasped periodically as the sensation coursed through her. She whimpered a bit. "O-okay, you can stop now..." Derpy continued on, Fluttershy's legs buckled, leaving her splayed out against the ground. "N-no... really! T-this is embarrassing!" Derpy was enamored with her reactions. She knew pegasi were quite tender there, but she was hardly even touching her, was Fluttershy particularly sensitive there? Maybe she was just oversensitive in general. From what she'd heard about her in town, she tended to start at the slightest touch. She decided to lean under her wing and give her a little nip. Fluttershy's eyes flew open and she then just buried her face into the floor, squeaking out a rather unmistakable noise: a moan. Fluttershy was starting to regret surrendering herself to Derpy, she was going to end up embarrassing herself to the ever more flirtatious mare. "I... really should get back to your massage, you were quite tens--uuu..." She cooed as Derpy applied another nip to her wing. "Stoooop..." She pleaded halfheartedly, melting under her hooves. Was it suddenly hotter in the room? Her heart was beating hard, and she couldn't keep her thoughts straight. They just kept drifting away to Derpy's wonderful body. "A--ghn..." She trembled, eventually just letting it happen. Derpy giggled, moving away from Fluttershy's wings for a while (much to her relief) and now just stroking her back. "It's cute to hear you moan like that, you're so sensitive. I don't think I've ever made a pony make that sound..." "Uu...uh..." She purred out absently, broken beneath Derpy's hooves. Her eyes closed, a smile plastered on her face. She didn't realize how much she herself needed a massage. Derpy hummed a nursery rhyme as she worked, making Fluttershy want to just curl up and fall asleep. She almost did so too, eyes lidding as Derpy's hooves roamed around her back. The world faded into a blur, and she constantly made little purrs, barely even keeping track of where Derpy was now. That is, until she felt her tail being lifted. She gave a harsh squeal and bucked back, her hind legs hitting Derpy straight in the chest, sending her stumbling a few feet backwards. She coughed, much of her breath knocked out of her. "O-ow..." She got back up shakily. "I probably deserved that... I was just curious." "Oh Celestia! I'm so sorry Derpy!" She jumped to her hooves and rushed over. "I didn't hurt you, did I? Oh Princesses... I'm so sorry!" Her eyes welled with tears as she constantly apologized and fussed over Derpy to make sure she wasn't injured. "I didn't mean to kick you, I swear!" Derpy waved away her hooves, as the pegasis was suddenly all over her. "Fluttershy, really, I'm fine, I've taken dozens of hits harder than that. I crash every dang day." She saw Fluttershy in a genuine state of panic, tears streaming down her eyes, trying to keep her only lover. "Fluttershy, please, that was my own fault. That was... well, stupid of me to try something like that." "So... you do like me like... um..." She shied away, unable to mention it. "Enough to be... romantic with you?" Derpy offered quietly. "Of course. I've never had sex before." She coughed. "Um... well, I did, but I didn't enjoy it at all. He never made me feel it, or to really want it, it just kind of happened. He never made me feel like..." She looked up, a tear in her eye. "...you." She turned away, a nervous habit of hers, to make herself look normal, hiding her off-kilter eyes by showing only one. "I just... I just wanted to see what you looked like, if you're as beautiful there _as you are everywhere else. I guess that was a silly thought..." "Yeah, it kind of was" "...of course you are." She continued her thought as if Fluttershy hadn't spoken. Fluttershy was about to giggle with the silliness with the thought, until Derpy continued speaking. The urge to laugh was caught in her throat and she swallowed awkwardly, cheeks flushing. "...Um... D-Derpy? How long do you have until you have to get home?" "A-A couple hours, then I have to be home for Dinky." "D-do you want to... you know?" She barely asked. "I-If that's okay with you... no pressure or anything..." She squeaked out, even quieter, voice barely above a whisper. "It's okay if you don't want to... or..." Derpy gave a toothy smile behind a quick little blush. "I'd be honored to, Fluttershy. Though... I don't really know what to do." "Lick and rub... you learn fast enough." A quick image of a romance novel aimed at the filly-fooling demographic that she'd read popped into her mind. "...not that I'd know anything about that." "You're such a terrible liar, Fluttershy." Derpy cooed and kissed her, though this time on the neck, guiding her onto her back. Fluttershy gasped and shuddered as she was lain on her back, leaning away from the kiss to expose more of her delicate neck. Her hooves instantly reached to cover her shame, but she hesitated, instead letting them fall to her side, nervously spreading her legs. "Am I... good... enough?" She nodded with a little giggle, her eyes locking to the jewel between her legs. "You're better than good, Fluttershy. You look like you take care of yourself." Derpy didn't really need too much convincing, she'd jump at the chance to make love with someone who really cared about her, but she figured Fluttershy might need a little bit to help her relax. "Do you ever... play with yourself?" Fluttershy gave a little bit of a nervous squeak, but was able to giggle it away. Nopony else was here, and she trusted the mailmare. "Uh... a little. Sometimes, when I'm reading a really good romance and it gets to the... dirty parts, I like to envision myself there. B-But I never really get very far, there's always an animal looking at me, and I get too shy to really continue." Derpy giggled. "When Dinky's away and I need something to do but I don't really feel like going out to town, I'll sometimes... mess around with myself. Made some real messes, too, good thing I've made so many other ones in my life that I know how to clean them up..." Fluttershy gave a coy giggle. "Well... uh... I do a LOT of reading... and I've heard some pretty crazy things..." "I'm sure you haven't read about an innocent student trying to peek at the rump of her teacher, constantly." Fluttershy covered her mouth. "Cheerilee?" Derpy nodded and gave a little nervous grin. "Yeah, at least when I was still in school, I always tried to look, because I was curious. I wasn't exactly... um... well, what I'm trying to say is I was pretty obvious about it. I'm not really a very subtle pony, as you might know." Fluttershy was intrigued, though she tried not to act it. "So, did she catch you?" Derpy blushed. "Yep. She yelled at me, though she wasn't _totally _angry, she told me where I could find a book that would explain 'everything that I wanted to know' in the library. This was before it was run by Twilight." She leaned over Fluttershy, starting to lick at her neck. "Are you really sure you want to go through with this, Fluttershy?" "I have to, Derpy. I've always backed away from everything. I-I'm not going to run away from love." "Love doesn't have to be sex." Derpy noted. "I know, but it's too late to go back. I'm... I'm... um..." She pressed her hooves together. "Er... excited?" She barely whispered the words out, swallowing back a bit more embarrassment. Derpy snickered. "Well I knew that." She said, as if it were obvious. "I could tell by how wet you got... you left a spot on the floor when I was messing with your wings. Speaking of..." She reached her hooves behind Fluttershy, working back into her wingbases, licking down her chest and then up her neck. "What?!" Fluttershy began, craning back her head to see the little moist spot on the ground where she had previously lain. She went to speak, but her words were stolen as Derpy again teased the delicate wingbases with her hooves, feeling her tongue burrowing into her neck fur, wetness penetrating into her skin. "G-ggah! N-No... D-Derpy!" Fluttershy didn't even know why her words resisted, she enjoyed every moment, her dew soaked flower quivering as Derpy's leg rubbed against it. It was such a delicate sensation, each fur tickling the sensitive lips. "H--hha... Derpy... m-mmm..." She purred out, tense body relaxing a little. "It sure has been a while," Derpy commented. "I hope that I'm good enough for you." "You don't have to worry about that." Fluttershy rebutted, her voice trembling. "If you keep up like that..." She didn't have the strength to finish her thought, but then again, she didn't have to. Derpy took her liberty with Fluttershy, lips meeting briefly with the yellow mare's, brushing against each other. Entranced, Fluttershy kissed back with lidded eyes. Their tongues met without thought, but not without emotion, wrestling, tangling, exchanging subtle flavors. Fluttershy's chest rose with a deep inhalation, resting her hooves on the back of the mailmare's head, unconsciously locking into the kiss. Fluttershy didn't know she could possibly cry any more tears, but sure enough, more fell down her cheeks, not generated from sorrow or fear, but rather joy. Derpy finally pulled away long enough to whisper. "I love you too, Fluttershy." The shy mare choked out a little sob, unsure of how to react, trying to give her words of appreciation back. She was only able to give another gasping sob though, as Derpy had decided to give her ear a little lick. Her body writhed under the attention from all angles. "You really are sensitive everywhere, Fluttershy." Derpy teased, pulling back from her ear. "A-Am I?" She asked, unable to come up with a witty reply on account of her embarrassment. Derpy didn't reply, instead her teeth latched onto that tender triangle of flesh while her hooves roamed back to her wings, more forcefully than before. Fluttershy could have been mistaken for a feline for how her back arched, squirming with sharp moans. "A--ah! Oh! D-Derpy! W-what are you-oo--oOH!" Her eyes rolled back, panting quickly, biting her lip to try and prevent any other outbursts. It was far from easy work, sweat dripping down her face from the effort. Or maybe it was just the innocent, yet nonetheless strong pleasure that coursed through her? She couldn't tell. Eventually, her will broke as Derpy kneaded her ear between her teeth, squealing, panting, eyes shooting open. Derpy finally released her wings and ear from her clutches. "Has my little filly had too much?" "Y-you're horrible!" She whined, though her nervous smile betrayed her true thoughts. Her pants and gasps quieted only slightly when Derpy pulled back, her crooked amber eyes staring into Fluttershy's, a rich teal. She quickly darted her eyes around Derpy's face, seeing the seductive smirk. She couldn't understand why until she felt the hoof pressing against her nethers. Those strained noises returned with a vengeance, her jaw quivering. "Nnng! A--ahh... Derp...y... hh-aaa..." "I've wanted to do that to somepony special for a while now." Derpy whispered, licking her neck. "Me too..." Fluttershy blundered back. She didn't really understand what she was saying, she just wanted something to respond back with, to not leave the sweet mailmare hanging. It was Fluttershy's first relationship, at least the first that really meant anything to her, and she was doing all that she could not to ruin it. "You don't have to hold back so much, I won't think any less of you if you're being a naughty filly..." Derpy ventured another tease. "S-stop..." Fluttershy whimpered out another coy reply, cheeks flushing pure crimson. In response, Derpy only began to rub her hoof quicker along her slit. Fluttershy squirmed, a bit of her wetness spreading onto Derpy's hoof. "Oh Celestia... oh gosh... oh gosh... OOooohhh... Deeerrrppyyyyy!" She wailed, her fur standing on end, a flood of sensation working over every inch. Fluttershy was starting to panic. The pleasure was notably one sided, and she had to do something.... something. "Flutter... AH... ooof... what are y-you?" Derpy was suddenly on her back in a burst of strength and will from Fluttershy. The yellow mare herself blinked in confusion, unsure of what had just happened. Apparently, she'd done a reversal, now she was the one on top. Not one to waste an opportunity, Fluttershy went for Derpy's neck, hesitating only a moment before doing to Derpy what Derpy had done to her, licking and nipping across the sensitive flesh. Derpy was still trying to figure out what happened, but that curiosity faded into a carnal desire, letting the now surprisingly dominant Fluttershy kiss and nibble at her. "Oh yes... please..." Derpy whispered huskily. Fluttershy roamed a bit further, her curiosity getting the better of her. Derpy spread her legs quite willingly, exposing her ash grey pussy to the shy mare. Fluttershy was trembling as she lowered herself down between her legs, trembling even as she held to Derpy's lithe form. Fluttershy paused for a long moment, going over it in her mind. "_You can't back out now Fluttershy, you've come so far, and by Celestia, you _need _it!" She finally pressed her nose to Derpy's flower, to see it, much like hers, quite wet with their combined teasing (though Derpy was by far doing most of it.) She nuzzled in, taking a short inhalation of the scent. It was quite pleasant, surprisingly, or at least to her, smelling of hay. She gave a tentative lick inside, tasted of it too. It was Derpy's turn to sporadically breath and gasp, with Fluttershy's nose and tongue applied right to her pleasure points. "Oh F-Flutter... mmm..." Her leg twitched with the spikes of pleasure from Fluttershy's curious tongue. "Y-you're pretty... good at this..." Derpy couldn't think of a place she'd rather be. She'd experienced the pleasures of the carnal arts a few times before, with her own experimentation, but none had been so intense as when experienced with another pony, a mare no less! Fluttershy stalwartly licked, right up and down the part of her flesh, the juice sticking to her tongue. Such a peculiar flavor, but she wouldn't trade it for the world. Derpy's back bent backwards, her hooves grasping at the ground. Her voice rose an octave and a half, babbling out whatever was on her mind at the moment, she couldn't focus enough to make a coherent thought. "Fluttershy... right... ha... yes, there. Oh you know what you're... hah... you sure this is your... mm...mmm!? OOooh... Buck me Fluttersh--ss--hhhyyyy!" She eventually bit back the cascading waves of ecstacy to collect her thoughts. "Th-that nub... at the top... please!" Fluttershy had read enough to know what that did, of course in the heat of the moment she'd forgotten about it. Her tongue exited the tight walls of the ash furred mare and instead licked at her clit, caressing it with the tiniest of strokes. What were moans quickly progressed into squeals, thrusting her hips forward eagerly, involuntarily. "Yes... yeeeeeesss! Oh Fluttershy...!" Fluttershy diligently licked and suckled the sensitive button as Derpy melted under her, until, finally, she pulled back, a bit of Derpy's juices clinging to her muzzle. "Am I... doing a good enough job?" "Yes!" She fired back immediately, barely managing to breathe the word out. "You're doing w-wonderful, really." "You're sure?" Fluttershy shyly asked, a drop of the clear liquid falling from her chin. "I'm sure!" She said, an undertone of annoyance in her voice. She winced, ears flopping down, apparently regretting the tone. "Yes, sweetheart... I'm sure... don't worry. Just keeping doing what you're doing, alright?" "A-Alright." Fluttershy dove back into her inner thighs, tracing a path along every surface her tongue could reach, sometimes pressing in to the tight walls, other times drawing back to lick at the stiff bump at the apex, secretly relishing how she shivered, though she'd never mention it out loud. Derpy laid back to enjoy Fluttershy's increasingly skilled ministrations, wings splayed out beneath her. Her chest rose and fell in deep, but rapid breaths, occasionally missing a beat and either inhaling too much or gasping to pull in more. A pleased whimper would occasionally drift from her open mouth, and she visibly gripped at the ground as the pleasure became more and more intense, eyes alternating between opened and closed. "Please... faster..." Fluttershy, gulped. "O-okay." She mumbled, not really bothering to pull away, as she was buried in her at that moment. The muscular appendage dexteriously flit around inside Derpy's ever quivering pussy, their tails flicking aside out of instinct. "B-buck! Celestia... you're so good Fluttershy... how much do you read?" "Um... well..." She paused, thinking of an answer. "D-don't stop! Rhetorical question!" Derpy added hastily as she felt her attentions waning. "Oh." She resumed right where she'd left off, making lewd slurps as the juices flowed quite liberally. The mailmare's face was fully flushed now, tongue hanging out and her mind in a haze, only able to choke out little sounds. Her breath rose to near hyperventilating, head tossed back. "Ah... ah... aaah.... aaahhhh!" Derpy's moans rose in volume and intensity, her wings flapping uselessly against the floor. "Mmph!" She held her mouth shut tight, and, failing that, stuck her hoof straight in her mouth, biting down on it, back again arching, a shrill scream muffled behind the intruding hoof. Her nethers grasped hard on the tongue and a few spurts of sticky cum fell over Fluttershy's face, hitting her right between the eyes, her entire body shaking like a leaf. Fluttershy could only blink, frozen in a state of shock. "What... was that?" Without thinking, she wiped off her muzzle, sticking her hoof idly in her mouth for a taste: a sweet, sticky hay... maybe a hint of daisy. She froze, eyes widing, quickly pulling her hoof away. What in Equestria was she doing?! She banished the thoughts with a quick shake of her head, looking down at Derpy below her. She was splayed out across the ground, eyes seeming even less focused than usual, dazed, confused and broken. "H-hhaa... Luna... that was..." She took a ragged breath, trying desperately to get to her hooves, legs shaking when weight was applied to them. "...absolutely crazy." "Sorry, did I do it too hard? I'm so terrible, it's my first time and it's just so hard to do it right and..." Derpy quickly stopped her with a hoof to the mouth. "Fluttershy, don't worry. That was the best thing I've ever experienced." "I-I thought you were shaking because you were scared." Derpy gave her a deadpan stare, though it was hard to perfect considering the rather comical placement of her eyes. "Wow, you really haven't cum before." "I haven't..." She admitted. "Well, from what I've heard, it's different from pony to pony... but when I cum... I really shake." "...oh..." She whispered, feeling rather silly for not knowing that. "Oh hey... don't worry about it Fluttershy. We're both really new at this, and romance isn't known for being the most... accurate. Maybe we should ask Twilight for some better books. Course... I may not be able to understand them. I'm not exactly a genius." "Are you calling yourself stupid again?" Fluttershy asked, almost angrily. "No, no! I'm just... you know, a little bit less than average. You helped me see I'm not stupid, but it'd be just hubris to say I'm smart." "Says the pony who correctly uses 'hubris' in a sentence", Fluttershy quipped. "...Heh." Derpy had no response for that. "Well..." She gave a seductive little giggle. "I suppose it's your turn then?" Fluttershy blanched, quickly deflecting away. "Oh no, you don't have to! I'm a romantic and all that, I'm satisfied when you're satisfied..." She ended her statement with a nervous laugh. Derpy licked her lips, then Fluttershy's muzzle, tasting a bit of her own leftover juice on it. She played with it on her tongue, sampling it's quite unique flavor. _"Must be using a lot of hay flour in my muffins..." _She thought to herself. "Well... maybe I'm not satisfied." She nibbled along Fluttershy's ear, this time aware of the weak spot. "Oh Princess... not the ear... please not the eeaaaarrr..." Fluttershy pushed her hooves into the ground, head turning into the nips. She trembled, tongue hanging out limply. She squeaked as Derpy rolled her onto her back, turning about face with a few flaps of her wings, her muzzle pressed right up against her flower. Fluttershy was still moist from earlier, dripping with new juices as she was unwittingly aroused from her efforts on Derpy. Her voice was a terrified vibrato, blush overtaking her face as she realized just where Derpy had her mouth. "N-no! R-really! Y-you don't h-have to...ooh...ooohhh!" She was cut off as Derpy began to lick furiously, much more sure with her motions than Fluttershy had been. In reality, she had even less of an idea, but was much more willing to just try it. Fluttershy was already bucking, gasping with each less than delicate lick across her clit. She kicked up at the air, fighting to suck in each breath. Whatever attempts to speak were quelled by Derpy's curious licks. Fire spread across her abdomen, burning through her veins. It was almost too much too take. She'd never gotten anywhere near this far when she was working alone. She was frozen in half shock, half pleasure, rising quickly with the novel sensations. Suddenly, Derpy pulled away, muzzle matted with Fluttershy's produce now. She'd been making an awful lot, that was for sure. "Mmm... strawberry..." She licked her lips, forgetting what she'd come up for. "Oh right... are you alright Fluttershy? You're awful quiet." With the almost overwhelming sensations now gone, Fluttershy was able to take a few deep breaths, a long, drawn out moan forced out of her throat, cheeks now a bright shade of pink. "Ce--lestia..." Words still weren't coming well to the mare, but she managed to squeak out a couple more. "S-so good..." Derpy gave a faint smile, pressing herself back in, her efforts redoubled, and never one to be worried about sounding lewd, slurping up Fluttershy's sticky cum. Fluttershy's tongue hung limply out the side of her mouth, eyes squeezed shut. In lieu of moans, feminine squeaks accompanied each buck of her hips. "B-buck... oh gosh... I'm so... hh...hha... I feel it c-coming!" Her mind was swimming, flooded with hormones, her breaths shaky. Without thinking, her hoof went to the back of Derpy's head and pressed it into her hot sex, clenching her thighs tight around her. She bit her lip until it almost bled, then felt something break inside her, stars flashed across her vision. She snapped her head back, and whereas Derpy had been relatively quiet, Fluttershy practically screamed at the top of her lungs for a couple of seconds before curling her legs up against her belly, twitching, a gush of thin juice covering her entire rump and Derpy's muzzle. She hoped to Celestia that Derpy had closed her eyes, though it was only an afterthought, as she was left gasping. Her limbs felt like lead, she was just unable to move. Derpy licked a bit of Fluttershy's cum off her face and giggled. "Whoa... impressive." She grinned, but soon she took a spot next to Fluttershy, pulling her hooves around her neck. "So... how was your first time, Fluttershy? I didn't... go too hard did I? I know you're a sensitive filly..." Fluttershy groaned, pulling her eyes back in focus. "Y-You were fine..." She slurred in an inebriated pleasure. "More than f-fine a-a-actually!" She coughed and gave a shy little smirk. "Was... I... um good, too?" Derpy nodded frantically. "Oh yeah... that was fantastic." She fought back a giddy little squeal. "Ugh... what time is it?" She glanced back at the clock. "Oh wow, I need to take a shower and get over to my hous--" She looked back to Fluttershy, who was now soundly asleep on the ground, a wide smile plastered on her face. "...aw." She couldn't help but chuckle, lifting her up carefully. She flapped her wings rapidly to lift them both, a little shaky with the combined weight. Fluttershy instinctively nuzzled into Derpy's chest with a coo.

"D'waa... you're adorable Fluttershy..." She said quietly, reminded of tucking in her own foal. She laid her down in her bed, pulling the blankets over her, then planted a kiss on her forehead.

Derpy borrowed Fluttershy's shower quickly, for she surely couldn't fly home in such a condition. She grabbed one of the blank parchments lying around from when Fluttershy had written her letter, taking a quill and marking out a small note to say she'd gone out.

Dear Fluttershy,

You fell asleep. Don't feel bad, you probably got up early, and you came pretty hard. That was absolutely wonderful, and I will never, ever forget it. I look forward to going out with you, as mates. Please write me another letter, or talk to me when I'm delivering the mail, I'll take you over to meet Dinky.

I'll see you later, Fluttershy. Consider the love requited.

Love,

Derpy Hooves.

P.S. I didn't actually learn that word on my own, I read it in one of those romance novels and looked it up in the dictionary.

She tucked it into an envelope, giggling, plucking one of Fluttershy's petunias out of the ground outside and placing it in a vase, leaning the envelope next to it, embellished with a heart.

Just like her own letter had been...