Spyro and Cynder draft story
Well this is my first upload on the site and I wrote this about a year ago. This is one scene that i decided to get out of my head and onto paper. I tried to write an outline in the summer of 2011( a couple of months after) but i just couldn't finish it because i thought it was too unoriginal. I say this because about 3 years ago i discovered the works of Frost Dragon who , in my opinion, created the single greatest SpyroxCynder story. his stories actually inspired me to come up with my own. sadly he left the site in the fall of '09 so ever since then i have been reading his stories, but never growing bored.
But what I'm trying to say is that i just want some critique on it. This is my first non-school, creative writing. and who knows...i might actually write it
Cynder woke up with a groan as she realized that her head was pounding. The last thing she remembered was that she and Spyro were fighting a group of apes and then he was knocked out with some ranged weapon and then every thing went black. She tried to rub her forehead where she felt a bump, but as she moved her foreleg, she heard a clinking sound and it was held back. She looked at it in a panic and she saw that it was chained to a table. She tried to moved but she couldnt. Each limb was chained to a corner of the table, forcing her to be spread. Frantically, she began to look around realizing that she was in a cave with three large male dragons at the entrance talking. On the the wall to her right she saw Spyro on the wall chained tightly to it so that his back was right on it. His chains, however, were made of dark electricity and there was one wrapped on his muzzle. He was completely unconscious.
"Spyro...." Cynder whispered,trying to wake him.
One of the guards had heard her and turned around. He was a fire dragon and looked like the leader. He was followed by an electric dragon and an earth dragon who looked like he was fighting something in his head which Cynder could sense.
"Well, well.....the black bitch is up," he said with an evil smile growing on his face," I think its time we got started. Ive been waiting for this for a while now." He turned to the electric dragon," Wake up the purple bastard. We need him to watch."
The electric dragon shot a high voltage electric bolt at Spyro and he gave a muffled yell of agony and then panted from the shock. Spyro realized what happened and gave furious growl at the leader.
"Oh, don't worry Spyro. We won't hurt her......too much." he began to laugh mockingly at him. Spyro began to shake with pure rage, not only because of what they were going to do but also because he was completely restricted from doing anything by these dark chains.
" Well let's get started."
The three dragons approached her and unsheathed themselves.
The fire dragon looked her in the eyes." We're gonna have some fun." She then spit in his face. He wiped his face off and grabbed her neck. At this, Spyro vibrated so much that the ceiling dropped some pebbles.
" If you cooperate, we won't completely massacre you."
She had no choice and she opened her mouth and the dragon pushed his member in to her mouth.
"Oh yeah..."he moaned and gave a look at Spyro.
Spyro's mouth and nostrils were billowing smoke and some sparks of electricity were shooting from his mouth. His scales flashed dark as the other dragons took Cynder from behind.
She was whimpering the whole time which was murdering Spyro on the inside.
Then something in him snapped as he heard all the dragons moan as they ejaculated and he saw Cynder's eyes flood with tears and saw a white liquid flowing from her mouth onto the table.
Suddenly, his pupils shrunk to an almost microscopic size and he broke the bond around his muzzle and let out an earthshattering roar causing several slabs of rock to fall from the ceiling. All the dragons in the cave were hearing white noise. They then saw a glowing aura around him. Immediately his forelegs grew to five times their thickness, sprouting a bone blade at the paw joint, and his scales turned dark green all the way to his shoulder. From the neck down, except his hind legs which were yellow, he was blue and became, like his forelegs and hind legs,five times it's normal size. His head and neck became blood red and his horns became smooth and curved back.
His chains disappeared and he turned to the leader, who,like the others, had pulled out of Cynder. Spyro grabbed the fire dragons jaw and crushed it a little. He then looked at him in the eye.
"NOW I'M GONNA HAVE SOME FUN!" His voiced sounded like it was his but mixed with four others.
Spyro plunged his paw into the throat of the dragon, his blood running down Spyro's foreleg. He closed his paw, and ripped out the muscle,jugular, and bone that was in the neck and threw the body on the floor of the cave and blood began pooling. He then grabbed the dragon's still-visible member ripped it off and threw it at the body.
The electric dragon shot an electric bolt at his back, causing him to twitch near the wing. He turned around slowly giving the dragon a bloodthirsty look.
" Now YOU want some!?!?? YOU'll GET SOME NOW,YOU FUCKING ASSHOLE!!!", he roared, in pure ferocity.
He opened his mouth and a beam of pure electricity burst from his mouth. It went right for his head. As the light died down, all that was left was the body with a neck spewing smoke. Like with the other dragon, he ripped his member off and shoved it tip first down into the neck.
Spyro saw, out of the corner of his eye, the earth dragon trying to escape. He quickly sealed him in the cave by making an earth wall in the doorway. The dragon frantically tried to undo the wall with his own powers but Spyro clubbed him with a two handed strike to the back and he fell with grunt. Spyro picked him up off the floor by the neck and pinned him against the wall.
"Any last words?",he growled with a fire in his eyes.
"Look..Spyro....," he choked a bit"...I..I....I didn't want to do it....they said I had to.....or they would kill my mate and hatchlings.....I...I didn't want to lose them ........."
"Ha,...bullshit.....all of it!" He began to charge a high energy earth shot.....
"Spyro.....", Cynder whispered
Spyro turned to her and his face softened.
"Cynder?...."
"Spyro....he's telling the truth. I sensed it when he entered the cave."
Spyro looked at the dragon for a second and then dropped the dragon's neck. The dragon was thrown into a coughing fit. Spyro lowered the wall of earth blocking the cave entrance and turned to the dragon.
"If your worth anything, help us get outta here." Spyro went over to Cynder and broke off the clamps on her legs and placed her on his back, between his wings.
The earth dragon led them out of the maze of underground caves and chambers. When they reached the surface, Spyro had calmed down a bit and looked at the dragon.
"Look.....is your family in danger of being killed now?" he said with some compassion.
"Well now that the cameras saw me leading you out, yes." he said sadly.
"Go get them.....now! I'll help you.....just think about them."
With that the dragon appeared in his home suddenly which scared his electric mate.
"Voltra, get the kids.....now!" he told her.
Spyro sensed when they were ready and warped them back to the entrance of the underground base. Voltra and the dragon appeared with a pouch that contained three sleeping dragonlings. She was shocked to see an enormous four colored dragon looking at her.
"Terros? Whats going on?"she said with a touch of fear.
"Well at least now I know your name,"Spyro said "but I'll explain later."
"Wait.....where exactly are we going?"
"You guys are no longer safe here. We are going to my realm through the rift gate."
As they flew to the gate, he explained everything about the parallel worlds and how Azenor had developed a way to freely travel from one to the other and the problem that they had encountered.
"So since the rifts are powered through dark energy, that's why they needed to collect my DNA while it was charged with dark energy. That's why they had me watch as they raped Cynder, so that I would get so fucking mad and go dark."He looked at his forepaw "But I guess they didn't count on whatever happened to me."
As he said this his body became a shining white and his body shrank to it's normal size. The purple color returned to his scales. He let out groan, depleted of most of his energy.
"Are you alright?" Terros asked worriedly.
"Yeah. I'll have enough energy to take us to the rift gate, but we'll have to camp once we get to the other side." He flapped harder as they approached the gate.
"This might feel a bit weird at first." He made temporary dark signatures for everyone and implanted them. They all shook a bit at this but the feeling soon passed.
"Okay....let's go." Spyro said with a sigh as the others followed him into the rift.
So yea thats it. Please leave a comment or something cuz i wanna get input from people about my writing style and things to fix and such.