Slave of a Dragoness - Test

Story by Cookie251197 on SoFurry

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A horrible writing test.


Please note that this is my first uploaded story. I wrote it within 2 hours on my phone. And suggestions or opinions will be greatly appreciated. ========================== Silence, the one that i broke like a glass bottle. My legs unbeariably stung as thorns and nettles whip against me as i rapidly dash through this bulky forest. I dont know were i am nor do i care. My entire life has just been a miscarry. The earth discourages my presence to this unforgiveing world. Furiously my body roars, 3 days without any food or satisfying sleep feels like centuries. My body got hurled into the sky followed by a spine chilling snap. I troppled down the hill hitting everything from rocks to trees. Red painted everywere, but then everything went pitch black...


I refretally woke up with damp grass in my wounded face. The air was rather thick. Strands of green plants were dyied unusally red. Weak signals of strenght rushed around me. I moaned. I gradually reached my sences and studied my surroundings. 'My life is coming to a hault here?'. The bushes infront of me quivered. Silence. My heart is pounding my chest. I franticly look to my sides for my blade. A massive figure loomed out the shadow of the trees and bushes. My ears lay flat on my head and my tail stiffened. The figure was a dragoness. I whimper and shiver and the beast stomped towards me like a machine. It is twice my size, It had diamond scales and a white furry underbelly. Its ocean blue eyes focus on me. Its snout pressed against me. It was soft and moist. The dragoness inspected me. It eye rests on my sword. She growled. Her claws grasp me. I clench my teeth in pain. She smashs me against a rock. I yelped in frantic pain. Blood streams down my torn shirt. The dragoness pins me onto my back. I am whining and trembling underneath the dragoness paws. Only my shoulders and head are exposed. She stares. She opens a bag that hang from her scaley back. She was beautiful. The dragoness retrives a collar from her bag and tightens it around my neck. She then takes out a needle. I start to stuggle. She pierces the needle into my shoulder and injects the liquid into my system. I start to feel weiry. A few seconds later i blank out...


I awake. There was no moist air or any birds chirping. I was in a cage, covered with a soft blanket. I tug it away and a breeze of air swirls around me. My pink pluffy skin was exposed. The dragoness had stripped me naked. I cover my private areas with my tail...