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Disclaimer: Anything events or similar circumstances that appears in this story series and throughout every chapters are just pure coincidence. Everything that comes from here is from my perverted mind.

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Internal Auditor 14

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It has been a year since that fateful day. Everything has changed, for the better and for worse. For some, it was constant. For most, it was profitable. Business was booming and the stocks kept increasing with each coming month. Profits after profits were made and this was all thanks to the multibillionaire of a man named Basil. In a short span of time, many were richer than they used to and were elated with their investment. Even those who do not follow the trend of stock investment have now boarded the bandwagon.

On the other hand, numerous talks and rumours were flying around and spreading about the bubble bursting. Due to a sudden shot in business and riches, the safety bubble of the country might break any time soon. In fact, stocks weren't their only mode of long term investment. Gold and property seemed to have escalated and it wasn't by a small percentage but rather, a large one. To put it simple: it was the biggest return of the year and the country's Gross Domestic Product, also known as GDP, doubled.

Generally, many knew and thanked Basil for such an act of novelty but to certain number of people, they knew better; the truth, in fact.

Voden continued to stay on with his current job and despite his hissy fit with the higher authority over Shaun's company and its downfall; he was yet to be suspended. In fact, he was promoted and given an assignment that was proved to be of his worth. He may have rubbed at Basil the wrong way but due to his experience and seniority, the organization needed him.

As for the rest of the external audit team, well, let's just say they weren't off the hook easily. Luckily enough, Largo had something to fall back on with his wide range of contacts; more than enough to cover up for Chamil and Alice. Both girls came pair in pair and the bull was determined to help ease the burden. It may not be the same as they once had but it was something rather than nothing.

As for the company, Basil took command and every assets and liability was taken over. The wolf made more than his share of the earnings and no one was there to stop him. All of Shuan's hard work, gone to his father and yet, the man felt not a pinch of remorse for his son. Shaun had yet to settle in to his new surroundings. Numerous amounts of large burly men filled the prison and the wolf was half afraid of what his fate might stand. In fact, he heard rumours of how the new inmates were treated with pain... And pleasure. The wolf didn't know if he should be grateful towards his father or not since Iris was there to protect him. The hawk never left him out of sight and whenever he felt insecure, he would stay with him till the end. Through it all, the wolf had yet to confirm his feelings about the avian. He has been truly helpful with everything and his companionship and yet, he hasn't reciprocated once. Each time a cold shoulder was given, Iris tried to soothe him with comfort and food. Even through that, Shaun didn't acknowledged.

However, the rhino brothers were off to a good start. After everyone has settled down and had no other contacts or connection with Shaun and that god forbidden company, Blake and Black were well off with a better living lifestyle. The money they received was more than they expected. Better apartment, new life and best of all, able to be together till the end. It may seem as a taboo to others but to them, it was far more than love itself.

Nothing more could be said for the rest. Greg went back to his old life. He had no regrets what so ever after this turn of events. As for the two lovely tigers, Smith's name wasn't cleared completely since he had broken the law and ethics of a professional profession but for now, his license would have been revoked and only after a few years would he be able to return. In the meantime, he's got himself a pawful of tiger. Speedy offered him to stay at his place till things are settled with his license and if possible, to stay on forever. Smith loved him just as much and wholeheartedly agreed. Even through the trials, the tiger never left sight of him.

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It was probably one of the loveliest nights, truly a sight to behold. The moon was just perfect and the weather was calm and slightly windy, making the place cooler than usual. Atmosphere partly contributed to such an amazing night. Both tiger were at home after a much delicious homemade meal and everything was kept and cleaned before going off to bed. Living room, spotless with little to no mess - much to their surprise - and the kitchen shining like a silver metal. Everything was in place and what better night than to keep each other company.

Ever since Speedy offered Smith to stay over at his place, the tiger was more than happy to oblige and has been on this amazing spot till this very date. It was a win-win situation. Speedy no longer had to sleep alone and wake up with no more than just a pillow while Smith obtained unconditional love from a mate. They were more than happy to be with each other and the gods above had given its approval.

Tonight was going to be different; different in a sense where Speedy actually proposed to Smith to be his boyfriend for the rest of his life and permanently a mate for good. Smith was elated when the tiger proposed and given an approval answer without much hesitation. With a snap, he had Speedy around his arms and smooching away like there's no tomorrow. As of now, nothing could have stopped them both from breaking apart. No amount of hardship could tear down their basic foundation of love and passion. Instead, they have vowed to help each other out in time of need.

Right about now, Smith may have to prove that point.

The tiger lie next to Speedy and spoke not a word to him. Instead, nuzzles and licks were carried forth and not one of them wanted to move further than that. "Hey, how are you tonight?"

Speedy purred happily and smiled. "Does this answer your question?"

"More than just an answer," Smith pulled his lips and locked in without another word. Moans and lust reverberated through the room, signaling their lust for each other. Speedy gave way and moved his wonderful paw lower to grope at his stripped butt but before he could do anything further, Smith slapped it off.

"You don't get to touch it for now."

"But why!" Speedy protested.

"Because I said so. You need to break lil' ol' me."

"That's not much of a challenge, is it, hrm?" The larger tiger chuckled and quickly reeled himself straight.

Smith turned. "Then do it." He cajoled.

Speedy stifled a guffaw and immediately got his paws around the tiger's neck to grip him down on bed. "There, I've done it. Now do I get my reward?"

"Maybe. Perhaps. Or not." Smith grinned and brushed the back of his paw on his forehead.

"Stay with me, forever."

"I will," Smith smiled brightly. "But you'll have to deal with my bad habits in bed first."

"Well, why not we try it. Perhaps I might like these 'bad habits'." And Speedy left from there on. Lips locked with each other and it was the pinnacle of their relationship. With a simple kiss, both males have sealed the deal of becoming mates forever. Speedy purred aloud and both of his paws were wandering around the male's body, inspecting every crevice and muscle that he ever had. He was hungry for more than just a kiss but the needs of his mate were far more important than his own.

Smith had his ears dropped low and quickly submitted without a fight. With mouth opened wide, he accepted the kiss that made him feel safe and secure. This time, he allowed for the tiger to move about. Heck, he even forced his paws on his crotch, growling when he couldn't feel the touch that made him purr. Their kiss deepened and this quickly made a horrible tent on both males. Smith had to adjust for a moment before getting comfortable but he knew that that wasn't necessarily. As expected, Speedy broke the kiss to feel about on his crotch, licking away any remnant of saliva clinging on.

"I want this night to be special."

"Sweety... You're already special to me. Don't ever change that." His fingers trailed along the tiger's barreled chest. "I am yours. Whatever you want, I will try my best to deliver."

Speedy smiled and gave a soft peck on his cheek. "May I mate you for the night? To make this all real."

Smith pushed him off. "I will be offended if you didn't." His dexterous fingers were swift and by the second, Speedy was left with nothing more than just a hard cock standing at attention. "God... this thing is big."

And he dived in.

Tongue wrapped along the head and he could practically taste the scent that made up of the tiger. His pheromones pushed him off the edge and he wanted more of it. Each lap of his tongue made the tiger purr but he was more than just happy. As soon as Smith engulfed the cock full, Speedy hissed harshly with claws digging upon the bed sheets, piercing through the fabric. Despite his howls of pleasure, Smith never once let that cock go. He wanted it all to himself and the more he lick and lather, the harder it was to maintain his composure. This was practically the biggest malehood that he had ever encountered and he was more than happy to worship it.

With a final lick at the tip, he squeezed upon the base and forced a drop of pre to seep through its slit, watched in amazement at such lewd act. Smith quickly lapped it all up but never letting the cock head go. Going downwards, the tiger moaned through his purrs, both eyes closed and inch after inch entered into his mouth. Even through his gag reflexes, Smith was relentless. He wanted it all. He wanted whatever the tiger had to offer and take it all up. He just has to have him! The final push came and the whole length was buried in his muzzle.

"Holy shit! S-Stop!" Speedy convulsed in his seat, both paws holding down on Smith's head. "You're gonna make me cum if you don't take it out soon!"

Smith chuckled with mouthful of cock but he obeyed his mate's plea. Soon, the shaft left his mouth and it slapped on his stomach, pulsing and dripping with pre and saliva. "So soon? I thought you had better stamina than this."

"H-Hah... Y-Y-Yeah... I do but you're more than I could handle," he panted while watching over the tiger. "Turn around and present that ass up."

And so he did. Smith slowly turned and got on all fours. However, his tail hole has yet to be presented. Instead, the tiger wiggled about to try and seduce his mate. Tail swished and back arched to a perfect ten, displaying years of back muscle that he trained since the beginning. A paw quickly covers up against his hole and gently rubbed along his butt cheeks, purring and moaning lustfully. Speedy cursed aloud and sat right up to slap against two beautifully spread ass, it jingled and bounced when flesh hits flesh.

However, Speedy wasn't here to play a simple game of catch. Rather, what he yearned for was covered by a stripped tail and he wouldn't want that in the way. As he tugged and lifts that tail off, Smith yelped and growled in annoyance. He wasn't happy with how his tail was treated and gave a swat to his face, warning about the importance of his stripped friend. Speedy laughed but pushed that aside. He was horny and with the presence of such a sexy ass and stud like Smith, the feral side of him was beginning to submerge but he knew that that would be inappropriate.

Instead, he apologized and greedily lapped along his pink pucker. It clenched and unclenched with each lap and it fascinated the tiger even more when he licked over them. The scent was overwhelming! So much so that Speedy had to swallow severally mouthful of saliva. In his defense, this was nothing he had taken before. Albeit, he had taken this tiger before countless times and actually gave him a rimming of his life but this time, it felt different. The scent, the familiar smell seemed to have accentuated tenfold. His tiger's musk made his manhood jump and with each pulse, several more droplets of pre drizzled down the bed and if he didn't know any better, underneath him was a pool of mess.

Smith could smell him too and he smiled devilishly. It seemed that he has accomplished something without much trouble. In the end, the male voluntarily lift his tail to the highest and pushed his chest downwards to lie on it completely, his ass raised promptly. The male had finally presented himself as the submissive male in their relationship and he was more than happy to be placed as such. As long as he has him by his side and seeing his face every other morning, Smith's heart has been filled. His hole sucked in and out seductively to prove how tight he was since the last inactivity. Speedy was here to amend that wrong.

The tiger slaps upon his butt cheeks again and spread it wide upon, giving a final lick for good measures. "Wait right here."

Smith quickly turned and sat on his exposed ass. "What's wrong?"

"Wouldn't want this to hurt, right?" Speedy grab hold of a bottle of lube and lathered up his paws with the substance, rubbing all over his length to slick it all up.

Smith gulped as he tried to stop himself from drooling over. My god he's sexy! That cock, that body, that smile... this must be a dream come true! He grinned from ear to ear.

"Ready to make some good lovin' tonight?" The tiger leaned forward and their noses touched.

"Y-Yes..." Smith melted immediately under his words. "Mate me as you would." Ass rose with his back on the bed, spreading his tail hole as much as possible to accommodate a length that was neared ten inches.

Evidently, the slick cock head prods against his hole and he winced a little. He felt the pain of penetration and even though he endured months of it, the fact that he has not been laid for a while made him into a tight virgin. The head slipped in and Smith cried out in pain and pleasure. Claws had sunk down into the bed sheets and both eyes were closed to bear the final stage of incursion. However, his ass thought differently as it tried to push the pulsing intruder away. Mind over matter; Smith managed to bear another few more inches.

"You alright?"

"Y-Yeah... just give me a moment to get use to your size. You're not small but big, way big. Ungh..."

"You're complaining?" Speedy leaned forward and wrapped his arms around his neck. "C'mon, you're a big tiger. You can take all of me."

Smith hissed and clutched on to his shoulders tightly. "You fucking bet I am. Don't you dare pull out!"

Speedy laughed and nuzzled on his neck softly. "Wouldn't dream of it."

The tiger pushed another inch but the tight confines of his mate made it even harder. Try as he might to relax the large stripped feline, Smith couldn't endure the pain that came along with pleasure. Speedy panted deeply and gazed into his crimson eyes, looking for the comfort that dwelled in his mind. He just couldn't find what was wrong with him but the determination was there. If he wanted to be mated as much as he said he would, there wouldn't be any obstacle along the way but the tightness was something he had never encountered before.

His lips lowered and the only thing he could think of was to give a peck of assurance, for his safety and acknowledge, the love that comes along with pride. He wanted to show him how much he loved the male and in whatever circumstances that may come along, he would be there to protect and be by his side; for better or for worse. When he wakes up in the morning, he wants to assure the man that he will be there for him and never leaving his side, even for a second. If he had to, he would miss him terribly; that was what he wanted to give and endure for the rest of his life, for him.

Evidently, Smith passionately kissed upon those sweet lips with head tilted to the side, gaining better accessibility to his mouth. Both purred at the same time and at that exact moment, Speedy felt him open up. The opportunity rose and slammed right back in. A few more inches... two.... Just one more... The pants and whine of pain surged through Smith's body but his cries were muffled by a pair of hot lips; both arms wrapped around each other and never wanting to let go. For all he's worth, Smith never wanted to let him go. Even with the final inch and thrust, the tiger allowed an opening and finally, he was in.

Every inch of his beloved mate was deeply embedded inside of him and there is nothing better than to share this with him. The kiss broke off and Smith winced for a moment. A paw brushed against his cheek and he blushed hotly. The act of being submissive never was part of what he wanted but any means of retaliation rendered useless under Speedy's power. You can push, struggle, shove and pry away; the tiger would still have him right under his arms, and he never wanted to let this go.

In the end, Smith felt comfortable and managed to accommodate that sizeable cock. Giving a nod of approval, the green light was given and Speedy started pulling out but halfway through, plunge back in. Each slow thrust kept him on the edge and after a few more slips; he finally got through his pleasurable spot. Smith threw his head back and squirmed like he meant it. Another slam and there it was again, hitting the very right spot that made his cock jump. Sure enough, pre spurted off from the tip and landed messily on his abs. With both legs hoisted up together, Speedy could have done anything that he liked with the tiger's ass.

Just as he gave another plunge of pleasure surge, Speedy felt the clench of his hole and he knew, that, somehow or rather, he was able to hit his sweet spot. Looking down over, he purred and was utterly amazed at the amount of pre that Smith had produced. It was practically enough for lube up a whole cock and ready for penetration. However, he was more intrigued with how tolerant the tiger was. At first, he had difficulty entering but now, he held nothing back. All Smith did was lay on bed and enjoy the course of action that brought him the love of his life.

Another slam, followed by another... and another... and another, pounding through that hole. Prior to this, Speedy kept at a steady and minimal pace but that was about to be thrown out the window. The urge had finally crept up to him and he, soon, was going to spread the salve of love that marked the tiger as one with him. He needed nothing more than the sound of him, moaning and allowing entry for another hard pounding but the tiger wasn't about to finish just yet. Grinning maliciously, he grasped along the length of his tiger and looked no further than to stroke him off. With a cock deeply embedded inside while it massaged against his prostrate muscle and spread him wide open, added with the sensational love that emanated from his dominant partner, Smith wasn't going to last long enough, even if it was for a few more minutes.

Mouth agape, the only word that came out of it was shameful mutters and cries of plea, pleading for a reason since a helping paw had been offered out. "Spread your love inside of me... please..."

"Mm..." He kissed on his lips, paw never leaving his erection. "I will, my sweet love but not right now."

"W-When...?" Smith exclaimed with both ears splayed backwards.

"When I'm done finishing with your ass," Speedy hissed, hips slapping and hammering like there was no tomorrow.

Smith was barely able to contain his voice and he roared with deep pleasure and glee. The other dominant tiger began hammering faster and quicker, the edge about to be reached and he was going to let him all in, to keep the mush of cum love that made him one with him. Speedy rocked faster and rapidly, his own cock throbbing deep in its confines and the friction that rubbed along the length didn't help but pushed him off the edge.

One more...

Just... a little more...

"Ah... Ahh!! Shit! You're squeezing so hard!" The long and subtle thrust turned sporadic, giving small and short instead and it worked tremendously. His voice croaked, body tensed with orange and white matted down to his muscles, sweat ran through his cheeks... and then it came. Hot and succulent sperm invaded Smith's tight tail hole and the ritual has been made, sealing the deal that made both tigers into one; as one and be one. Smith felt it all and he loved how quickly he was filled to the brim.

He sure cums a lot!

And that Speedy did. This time, the passion and love making was different, very much different than he used to before he proposed. This time, it was real. This time, it was going to be forever. This time... he finally felt how true and wonderful it is to have a significant other. Speedy gave a few more thrust and he finally stopped, trickling down any remaining droplets from its tip.

"F-fuck... Ah.... Hah.... Hah... You're a good fuck. That ass could sure take some rough pounding."

Smith laughed heartedly. "For a man like you, I need to have one good looking and fuckable ass. Or else you'll look at others."

"Aaw... come now, I won't do that." A quick nuzzle was ensured to emphasize his point.

Both tigers held on as they embraced the love that came from one another and nothing could have separated their passion. Chest heaved and breathed heavily, feeling upon their beating hearts, knowing full well that they will live till the day one of their hearts stopped pumping. Speedy purred lovingly but the sudden throb of manhood made him blink in surprise. His mate has yet to enjoy the joy of a male orgasm! How could he be so selfish!

Smith felt the tiger move away but before he could grab hold of him, Speedy pulled off with ease, watching the flow of cum trailing down the man's hole. The sight was more than arousing and Speedy had to hold back the urge to give him another round of pounding. He watched intensely as the hole clenched and unclenched voluntarily, trying to expel the liquid that was pounded right into him. Smiling over, Speedy leaned forward and wrapped his calloused paws upon Smith's cock, giving off small and long strokes.

"You forgot to cum."

Smith dug his claws into the bed sheets once again but this time, deeper than before. The intensity that wrapped upon his shaft surged through his body and started trashing around before having to compose. "I'll cum soon.... Real soon..."

He whined, cried and pleaded; all for the sake of release. Even after that pounding, his hole felt sore but slightly empty. The thought of having his prostrate hit on made him convulse in place and Speedy had to firmly apply a touch of gentle kiss upon lips to keep things under control. Lips touched and he moaned deeply with a rumble of purr. Soon, a battle of tongue broke out and without a doubt, Speedy won, hands down. Smith barely put on a fight since he was more concern about his impending orgasm. That paw had yet to leave his pulsing erection and he highly doubt that that's going to happen.

His sensitive head was played with a few times, spreading pre all over and coating every inch of the cock head. The paw lowered all the way down till the base and it was the starting point of breakthrough. Up and down it went, placing the tiger higher into a plateau of lust. Moans, followed by utterly shameless whines, indicated how much he gave himself to the tiger. If this wasn't his prove of love for the better future of their sex life, there isn't any more he could give.

Eventually, the feeling returned. Speedy nuzzled heavily on his neck and breathe down on it, giving occasional licks. "C'mon, cum. I know you want it. I know you can."

Smith's moans and whines had gotten louder and harder as the paw turned into frenzy, pleasuring him to the edge and his dirty talk gave the final hit of orgasm. Before he could yell out a warning, thick and heavy ropes of hot semen splattered across his body, hitting far enough to have a few landing on his face. Shots after shots flew high and most matted across his chest and neck, some even landed on Speedy's arm but the tiger was far than angry with the mess. In fact, he was elated at how much his mate was packing. Each round of cum contributed to the mess that made the tiger... him. That was the musk that turned him on... That was the feeling that he received when he claimed him as his mate... That was what he wanted.

With the final trickle, Smith collapsed and stopped moving any ground of muscle that he had. All he wanted now was to stay down and steady, with a loving paw wrapped around him and drifted off to sleep. The night may still be young but for him, it has been a long and tiring day. Despite all that, it was probably the happiest night and day of his life. Purring over, Speedy milked off any remains of seed that the tiger may still have within him but there was none. All it did was made Smith trash and turned around.

"Shhh... it's going to be alright." Speedy purred and licked on his ears.

"Sweety... I hope you made the right decision... I may not be much but I will try." Smith reasoned.

"Shush, my love. That's nonsense. I will love you, now and forever."

He sighed deeply but smiled. "And I love you too."

"Get some rest, both of us needs it."

"Yeah..." Smith went silent and closed his eyes to settle in rest, feeling the warmth of his mate, curling around his body.

This was probably the end of the chapter but soon, from the next morning, it would be the start of a new beginning. Everything has fallen into their respective places and with that said, the circle of life continues. Gods from above watched as the two tiger lovers embraced one another and continued being as one but from the distance of the horizon, one cannot say the same about another.

The night may be young and early for some but for a man, it was far too late for any changes.

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Darkness loomed and surrounded the place and the air smelt heavily of incense, smoke wafted along the air as the burning resulted from a ritual pot. With the only source of light coming from a few candles, simmering on their own, vision was extremely poor in the room. However, that did not stop two men to be self-involved and absorbed in their agenda. Two wolves sat facing with each other but a barrier concealed between their faces; one way or the other, none of them could identify who it was.

That did not matter though.

They sat in silence, not speaking to each other and the only ringing sound was the howling wind of the night. Eerily enough, that did not deter their attention. With no words spoken for a very long time, one canine decided to break the ice.

"What business do you have, here, in the church of solitude?" His voice was easily heard by the other but there was not a tinge of malice in his words. Rather, it was comforting and soft spoken, bringing a sense of calm and serenity.

With all due respect to the man, the other wasn't concern with how things are being dealt with. "I... have come for a simple confession."

"A confession, you say?" Through the darkness and poor light, the priestly wolf nodded sagely but kept a smile.

"Forgive me father... for I have sin..." The wolf from the other side spoke.

"Do you know your act of contrition?"

"No father..."

"How long it has been since your last confession?"

"Father... it's my first time..." He said and kept himself composed.

"Come child; tell God what you have done."

And it went on, one confessed while the other listened, honing his skills as the messenger of God and bringing the word from the heavens to the mortal flesh. Each sins was said and the sorrowful wolf confessed, spilling every evil deeds that tainted his very flesh and bone and in due time, they were done.

A final sigh ended for the silence and once again, neither said anything. Rather, the cleansed wolf got up and retreated back from the booth to his seat. "Thank you, father." And off he went to rest at the altar of God; his eyes never leaving the statue, the figurine of the coming messiah when everything would come to judgement day.

Chuckling to himself, the wolf shook his head and played the scene that happened a few moments ago. He wanted to be alone, to look back at his past sins and make for amendments but the father did no such thing.

"Basil." A paw gripped on his shoulder to reach for emphasis.

"You have done your duty. Your cheque has been banked in. Now go. You do not need to act any longer."

"Basil, I am not here for your money."

The wolf smirked and chuckled even more. "Come now. Don't need to be so bashful around me. I am money. If that's not enough, name your price, I will give you more."

"Basil, you cannot buy religion." The so-called 'priest' removed his cloak and sat next to him. "I serve you, as a helper and bodyguard but I do not encourage religion to be such way. God knows what you do but why confess to someone with no religious power?"

"Because it helps me know that I may be the cause of the following financial crisis." Basil continued staring at the statue.

The other wolf kept himself quiet as the need to retort would fall into vain.

"Heed my word," Basil leaned forward and tried to reach out for the grasp of God. "Dignity of something that you can live without if you cannot afford it. I ain't ashamed with anything that I've done but there are things I've seen... Things that I've allowed, it leaves me cold and still at night. But they say you can't around a little without a few decay... some rot in the brain, ya' know?"

He looked back at the confused wolf but back to the face of God before giving off a small chuckle, which soon turned into a derisive laugh. His voice echoed through the very old and battered church. "Faith in the lord? Faith in Justice? Hah! It all kinda turns into mulch in this place!" Soon, he was getting louder and louder, quickly rising to his feet. "There ain't no such thing as love, or salvation, not for people like us. Not in here! Only lust, greed, corruption and it builds and builds and it never stops! Money is everything!"

Echoing laughter reverberated through the dark and empty halls and his voice pretty much travelled along the four walls. Basil spoke to no one but only to the high being. Everything he said was for the Gods of the heaven as they watched down on him. All his deeds, the corruption, lust and greed for more; the man practically possessed the seven cardinal sins and yet, he does not regret any of it.

"Can't you already hear it... see it... feel it...? The glass has already begun to crack."

END

A/N: Dear fellow readers of this series:

That was the final chapter of the series. It has really taken a long time to write it down and with everything going in the way, IE: exams and work, I'm glad that this series was written down as soon as possible. What started off as a thought in class last year August turned out to be a series that went as far as 14 chapters. It's a long one if you ask me.

Thanks a bunch to everyone that commented, viewed, fave, read and just really... really just read. I know this isn't much of a story and not a recommended read but I'm at least glad that I've finished a story series project. It was something that I wanted to do here on SF ever since joining up on Yiffstar and even after changing from the old site to the newer one, I've not written something this long and thought out before.

Again, thank you for reading this little story. May not be much but really, just thank you for reading. Finally, do comment and give constructive critisicm; I highly appreciate it :)

Copyright: The ending of this story, every word that was said and written here are COPYRIGHTED to a certain song by Foxamoore, which I absolutely adore and like. It's from 'Heathen City': http://www.furaffinity.net/view/6606520/ Listen to it as this was where my inspiration, mostly, came from.