Shooting Down Stars

Story by Dean Blitz on SoFurry

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Just something I wrote back in September that I decided to do something with. Nothing special or creative really. It's better to write about writing than writing absolutely nothing at all, I guess.

Eden Chronicles is in the process of getting a face-lift. It's just all over the place. I'm currently trying to reign things in. The ideas are there, but structure is a fatal weakness of mine.


I try to hold back the anxieties

Of tight-rope dancing over a thin

Edge of words.

I stumble and pray

That the net of good intentions below

Will catch me as I plummet through an

Atmosphere of mental discourse and flash photography.

There is an imagined shock and awe as I crash and burn,

Leaving a streak across the page.

Instead of the star I aspire to be,

I get pulled back down to earth

Where I smolder in the stratosphere.

A meteorite posing as a shooting star,

But still,

Somewhere,

You hope that the burning graphite

That aspired to be a statement

Is caught in the eye of

A stranger

And becomes a wish instead.

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