After
Just a little story I did when I got the idea. Tell me how yall like it please! I'm trying to improve my writing skills so criticism is welcome.
"Angel? Angel," Angel heard a familiar voice calling her name. Angel looked up into the eyes of her little brother, Jamey. But that's not right, Jamey's dead she thought. "Jamey?" she asked confused. "Oh good you're awake," Jamey said helping her sit up. "What the hell?" Angel asked looking around. She was laying on a bed in a small room. The room was lime green, her favorite color, with posters hanging up on the walls of actors that were like old. "No not hell. Just the after life," Jamey told her matter of factly. Angel looked at him for a good minute. He looked exactly as he had before the accident. His fur was blue, like an ice blue. His black hair still flipped over one of his eyes making him look older than 16. He was still considered young so he only had 4 tails. He was a fox just like her. He might be her brother but they didn't look anything alike. "Wait, what?" she said hearing him for the first time moving his hair from his eyes just like she used to. "Yeah, Angel..we're dead," he told her gently, taking her hand from his face. "No we're not," she said stupidly, she knew that Jamey had been dead for a year now, but how was she dead. Then her memory came to her. She had been coming from school, she was a senior then, when she saw her bestfriend on the other side of the street. Raven had been going through a rough patch with her parents and was sobbing on a bench. Angel had started to run across the street to comfort her when a little sports car had hit her, sending her into the air over the hood. That was the last thing she remembered until waking up to Jamey calling her name. "Oh god," Angel whispered before the tears started to flow. "Angel," Jamey called her name, his black eyes tearing up before taking her into his arms, comforting her.
Angel woke up alone the next morning. She had cried herself to sleep in Jamey's arms. She got up to look into a mirror above a dresser. Jeez she looked like hell. Her normally bright violet eyes were dim and puffy. Her purple hair was sticking up at all angles and her white fur was matted. She was 19 so she had all 6 of her tails, but they drooped low at the moment. Angel jumped at the sound of her door opening. Jamey walked in with a towel and a change of clothes. "Hey, how're you feeling?" he asked her softly, watching her intently. "I'm ok," she sighed," Those for me?" "Yeah," Jamey sais still looking at her worriedly,"The bathroom's just across the hall." "Thanks Jamey," Angel said, taking the things and going to bathroom unknowingly leaving the door open some. She turned on the shower climbing in.
When Angel got out she felt much better. The pain was just a dull ache in her chest. She toweled her body off and looked at herself in the full view mirror. She looked much better. Her hair looked light and fluffy and her fur soft. She then looked at herself in a more intimate way. It was then that Jamey looked in. He knew this was wrong but he'd been watching his sister in the shower since before he had died even jerked off to her masturbating. She was more beautiful than he remembered. Her body was in full view for him. He saw her breasts, perfect C cups and his eyes slipped down further. He saw her cunt dripping from the shower and had to bite back a groan as he felt his cock grow hard. Angel was ignorant to his eyes looking at her and thought she should try to make herself feel better the only way she know how. She lifted one of her legs up onto the sink, exposing her pussy lips. Just thinking about what she was going to do made her hot. She felt her cunt moisten and let out a little moan as she slid one paw down to play with her clit.
Jamey panted his arousal pressed firmly up againsthis pants. God how he wanted her. Then an idea formed in his head and he quickly stripped. His erection bounced free. Jamey's cock was a good 11 inches with a large knot towards the base. He was lean and muscular, very nice to look at. Jamey took a deep breathe and opened the bathroom door, closing it behind him. Angel looked up startled by her brother walking in. "Jamey? What are you doing?" she asked him, moving to cover her body with the towel. But he stopped her. "I want to make you feel better Angel," Jamey told her. His eyes looked down at her with love and passion raging through them. Her eyes showed it when she realized what he was saying. "Well...I don't know Jamey. It's not right is it?" she asked him gazing into his eyes. "There are no rules here," he told her gently, his paw reaching up to brush her hair. It wasn't until then that she remembered that both of them were naked. Her face grew bright red. "Can we go to the bedroom?" she questioned him quietly. "Of course," Jamey told her taking her hand and leading her into the bedroom.
Then he kissed her, softly at first, but then harder, his passion taking over. Angel felt a fire growing low in her belly. Her lips parted and she sucked in a little breath. Jamey took advantage of the opening in her lips to delve into the deep rececess of her mouth. Angel's arms came up to twine around his neck as his hands went to her hair, threading into the purple locks. He backed her up against the wall one of his hands lowering to stroke her breasts. "God you are so beautiful Angel," he told her between kisses. His hand went lower to pet right above her mound. He could feel the heat rising from her cunt and felt pre leak from the tip of his cock. Jamey groaned. He moved his paw down further to play with Angel's clit. He smirked when he heard her squeak then start to tremble. He sent two fingers into her folds, loving the loud squelch and feeling her muscles clamp onto him.
Angel shuddered and moaned at her brother's fingers inside of her. She moved her paws down his chest to play with the little bit of hair right above his cock. She smiled in satisfaction when she heard him suck in air. His cock twitched, eager to be held. She slowly moved her paw down to stroke his cock. He groaned and pre leaked out. She started to stroke harder but stopped when she felt his knot grow. "I want you inside me," she told him, the desire completely controling her. Jamey lifted her up against the wall. She straddled his hips and they both groaned when he sank her down over his cock slowly. Jamey's arms shook when he felt the slick tunnel on his cock. He realized that he wouldn't be able to hold her up and he took her to the bed. He laid her down underneath her, his cock staying deep inside her. He started to move slowly, trying to stay in control. Angel arched her back so he could go even deeper. She moaned and he lost it, thrusting into her with utter abandon. Angel lost herself to the feeling of him. She reveled in their mingled scents. She loved the huge cock inside of her. Jamey felt himself start to reach his climax. He thrust harder into her, his knot slamming into her lips. "Knot me please!" she cried into his shoulder. He thrust one more time,hard, and his knot popped into her. Her cunt clamped down his cock as she reached her orgasm. They groaned in unison as they came together over the edge and into the stars. Jamey knew he would be tied to her for a while. "Can we sleep like this," Angel asked him queitly. "Yeah we can," he told her with a sleepy smile and they fell asleep curled into each other.