My Fragile Mind: Chapter 1

Story by Dovin Galaxy on SoFurry

, , , , , , , , ,

#1 of My Fragile Mind

This book is about a wolf named Devon. It's a story of his life. His mind is both a child's and an adults at the same time, which makes for some interesting encounters and weird thoughts that he wishes didn't pop into his head.

This is the first novel type thing I have written, and I've learned how to write mostly from this website and just as a general interest. I'm not copying anyones style or anything, just the format that I think looks the best. I'm going to try to keep this relatively PG but there will come a time when I have to make a chapter adult. So if can't view those, don't worry, I will make a PG version of the chapter as well. I really hope that anyone that reads this finds it entertaining.

Lastly, I hope you have a wonderful day.


Chapter 1; Meeting Him

Hi, my name is Devon. I'm a full on Timber Wolf. At least that's what my mum and dad say. You see, I'm completely black with a neon aqua colour from my feet to my knees, my paws to my elbow, and the tips of my ears and tail. So I call myself a Shadow Wolf. I get a lot of looks from people, and I assume it's because of my special colouring, since they are all looks of wonder. I apparently also look a lot younger then I actually am, which is 19 by the way. I always get asked out by 16 year old girls. Even if I was straight I wouldn't say yes to any of them since they are so much younger then I am. A lot of them tended to sit by me on the bus, but by now most of them know my age and preference of gender. Why can't someone my age and gay sit next to me?

"Hi." said a voice behind me.

I turned to look at who the voice belonged to and saw the most gorgeous man. He was a light brown Indian Wolf. He looked to be about 6 foot 3 inches. 8 inches taller than me.

"Hi." I said shyly.

"Do you mind if I sit here?" He asked.

"No, go right ahead." I answered.

This was my chance to get a lover! God I hope I don't blow this.

"So, whats your name?" I asked casually.

"I'm Axton. Whats your name?" He asked.

"Devon." I said. I'm nailing this.

"Arn't you the guy that al the 16 year olds are swooning over?" He asked with a smile.

"Ya, I wish they were boys though." Said the kid.

Damnit, there goes the kid again! Oh, I should probably mention I have a kid in my brain that speaks whenever he pleases. It gets really annoying sometimes, but people find it cute and it normally works in my favour. God, I hope that this works in my favour.

"Ha. I forgot that you had a kid in your brain." He said casually.

"How do you know about that?" I asked.

This guy seemed kinda creepy now. I know that I have never met him before, and he just spoke like he is an old friend. What if is a stalker? Is he here to kidnap us? No, he can't be, your taking things out of proportion. Maybe his parents know ours.

"Your parents have been secretly trying to pair us up." He said.

"Oh, good. I thought you were gonna kidnap me!" Said the kid.

God damnit kid! You are gonna ruin this! No I'm not! Listen!

"Haha. Your folks weren't kidding when they said that was cute." He said. It made me feel warm.

"So, since we are being set up, should we go on a date?" I asked hopefully.

"Sure." He said, smiling.

I can't believe I got a date with such a handsome guy.

"Um, when and where should we go?" I asked.

"Do you like Peach Wave?" He asked.

"The frozen yogurt place?" I said.

"Ya."

"Ok."

"How does 6 on saturday sound?" He asked.

"Perfect. I'm assuming you already have my address, or do I need to give that to you?" I asked him.

"All I need is you number." He said while pulling out his phone.

We exchanged numbers, and the bus pulled over.

"This is my stop. See ya on saturday!" He said as he got up.

He winked at me as he left. I can't wait for saturday. I hope I don't fuck this up.

I spent the next few days taking extra good care of myself. No way was I gonna go on date with Axton looking or smelling bad. I cleaned my fur thoroughly every time I had a shower and I set aside my nicest pair of clothes to wear. This is my chance to find love and I'm not gonna blow it.

It's saturday, and its 5:50. Axton will be any minute.

"Honey, you look amazing." My mum said, sensing my nervousness.

"Your going to be fine!" She said, reassuring me.

"But, what if it doesn't go fine! What if this is my one chance at love, and I blow it!" I said. I'm so scared that I'm gonna screw myself over. He just makes me so nervous and happy. I really want it to go well.

"You won't blow it." She said.

*DING DONG*

"There he is. Wish me luck." I said, mostly to myself.

"Good luck." She said.

I opened the door and my heart skipped a beat. Axton looked amazing. He was in casual clothes that showed of his small yet muscular build. I was speechless.

"Ready to go hot stuff?" He said. I nodded, and walked out the door.