Brighter than the Stars
So I heard about this writing contest held by Skatelian and Picklesauce69 and thought why the hell not?
For those who want to see the first part of the story (the contest piece) here's the link:
https://www.sofurry.com/view/869246
For the contest rules/guidelines:
https://www.sofurry.com/view/864447
I really enjoyed the story these two set up, I am really gullible for this first time lovers/kindred spirits meeting one another and exploring not only each other but themselves theme, and so, felt that I had a good passion for writing this. Took me about 2 hours to fully develop and write my contribution, 1 hr of editing and about 4-5 hours of re-writes, editing, cutting and or changing etc. Pulling at least one all nighter because I just couldn't leave this unfinished/ where I had left it.
I have never done a contest like this before. Always wanted too, but never could find one, so I greatly appreciate these two talented writers (from what I have read of theirs anyway) giving this on-going writer a chance to shine, and hopefully as bright as the stars.
I don't even care if I win, in fact I highly doubt i will, as some of the other submissions i have read are not only dazzling and or cute as hell, but written by far more experienced writers than I. However, I'm not one to be discouraged by that. This was to test myself and I wanted too like many of you, to create a story where the sex and story were balanced, and keeping in mind Timmy being a first timer and all that, I didn't want to tucker out the poor lad with prolonged debauchery.
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"Make a wish huh...oh...oh g-god!" Thought Tim, only now noticing the starry eyed look he was getting from his sleeping bag companion.
His ice-blue eyes were locked on her unusual amber yellow, primarily focussed on starring back at the beautiful Dalmatian girl peering at him just as intensely.
Unable to overcome his shyness the young snow leopard stifled the wish he wanted to say to her, the one that was drowning deep in his heart. A wish so powerful (and alluring) that he was scared to even admit to himself what he was thinking.
He was not the kind of guy who got a girl like this let alone deserved a girl like this. The tomboyish qualities, passionate and often adventurous attitude she demonstrated, was turning into both a turn on and source of joy for him. How could he tell her that without dying of embarrassment not to mention...what if the feelings weren't mutual?
Lying across from the subdued snow leopard Jackie's mind was also racing with questions while her heart was beating faster than the shooting star the two of them had recently witnessed. While she waited for his wish, she was thinking of one of her own, a deep wish that had been brewing in her mind...and heart over the last few hours.
She was not the type of girl who got a guy like this. She even wondered whether or not she deserved a guy like this. She wasn't a complete slut but she was no virgin either, having had a few lovers in her past. They had never been anything to serious or lasted too long, but Jackie was painstaking nervous that even that may be enough to taint any relationship with the small cute fur before her. Would he consider her used goods if she told him of her past flings?
Timothy mentally kicked himself at the fact he had been just staring muted and wide eyed at Jackie for at least five minutes.
_"Say something idiot!",_yelled his mind even as his mouth tried to splutter out something coherent and meaningful, failing miserably and thus only able to utter a weak squeak.
Jackie decided to take pity on the young fur and laid a comforting paw on his shoulder, gripping it in what she hoped was a comforting gesture.
"Are you okay Tim?" she asked, giving a few snaps of her fingers in front of his eyes.
"Hmm...Yeah...j-just kind of hesitant in telling you my wish."
"I'll say, for a moment there I thought you had a brain aneurysm or something. "
Jackie decided now was the best time to get a bit closer and pushed even farther toward the snow leopard boy. She managed to pretty much join them from hip to toe, making sure to entwine her legs with his.
As she enveloped her body with his, his heart leaped into his throat. He loved the feel of her slim bare foot-paws roaming over his own. Closing his eyes for a moment to catch his breath, he decided to wait and see if Jackie would go any farther.
However, Jackie had decided she had pushed enough on the small boy for now, deciding some talking would be good for both of them. She didn't want to have another relationship based primarily around not talking and just sex. She had had too many repeated process of such heart ache and no substance in her life already.
"So...why don't you want to tell me your wish?"
"W-well b-because then it won't come true, everyone knows that."
Not convinced Jackie brought one of her hands up and began stroking the young leopard boys' cute and puffy ear tips. Loving the vibrations and sound of purring Timothy began letting out as her paws scratched behind his ears.
"You sure there stud, because I could find some ways to persuade you?"
He lifted up one of his own paws to grip hers, stopping her from stroking at least one of his ears. He was now looking at her with a deep conviction, feeling emboldened by her stroking, but also since no one else was awake to hear him.
The teacher had stopped talking ages ago and now the only sound around them was the chirping of crickets, the snoring of students, and the soft howl of the bare wind.
"Well to be truthful Jackie...you-you kinda scare me." He said with a quiet voice.
The look on her face in response made him freeze as if his blood had turned to ice. It was a look embodying the mix of confusion and hurt, and it struck him with both joy and a little uncertainty that she would feel that, or that he would feel so bad for making her wear such an expression, after being around each other only for a few hours.
"I-I don't mean in a bad way" he hastily added, his eyes winking at her even as he gave her a large grin.
"It's just that I have never met anyone as beautiful or as goofy as you. I usually just spend my time at a computer or on my phone...no real time for talking to girls or having conversations with others. Your passion excites and terrifies me...it, it makes me feel like I could never live up to you."
His dejected look wiped hers away, the Dalmatian girl blushing as she realized he liked her too. He was just too full of doubt to take the initiative.
"Oh Timmy, you don't have to live up to me...I mean I like the fact you're a complete nerd, I like that you're not a vain petty rich boy, or some meat headed jock. Don't think I didn't notice your interest when Miss Elly was lecturing us on the stars."
He blushed at her praise and stroked her paw lightly, content with this level of affection...for now.
"I know...I love the stars though we barely see them from our high rise apartment in the city," he began, turning over to lie fully on his back gazing upwards to the blissful black and blue heavens. Jackie folded with him, reaching a paw to cup a feel of the young boys' chest, cheering to herself as he seemed to accept it and didn't shake her off.
Her paw on his chest was alluring and comforting, encouraging him to continue.
"You heard Miss Elly right, that many of these stars are dead and yet still shine as beautiful and bright as any light?" feeling her head nod into his chest. Giving a smirk he shifted his paws from her paws to her shoulders, hugging her close to his body and sharing their warmth in the single sleeping bag.
"The fact these stars are dead and yet can still shine is inspiring to me in an away, a refusal to surrender, to stop shining even after they've burned up all their fuel...sometimes, I wish I had that fortitude."
Jackie frowned as she wondered what he meant by that.
"How so?" she pressed questionably.
"Well...take now for example. I have nothing to lose and everything to gain and yet still can't tell you my wish...I'm...a coward."
He then gave a short yelp as he felt Jackie pinch his nipple hard in a devastating titty twister with one paw, while her other clamped over his muzzle to stifle the cry from waking their fellow students or worse...their teacher.
"You are not a coward Timothy. You're talented and sweet... a-a- and to be honest, one hot porn writer," replied Jackie, taking a small triumph in the surprise and wonder in her companions eyes.
"That's right sweetheart" she continued, her paw still around his muzzle while her other paw began to sooth the skin where she had pinched.
"I saw what you were writing and it was some of the best written and steamy smut I have read in a long while, and such subject matter is not the work of cowards."
Nuzzling into his neck she whispered into his perked ears, "it's almost as if you were writing from personal experience."
He blushed but shook his head, his own paws covering hers on his body, slowly removing the one holding his mouth shut.
"S-s-sorry but no, I just have a vivid imagination...and a computer, so yeah," he chuckled.
Jackie stared into his eyes and cupped his cheek, prepared to at least introduce him to a few new experiences, not granted by computer--or from what she gathered--from a paw either.
"Would you like to get some hands-on experience then?" she asked delicately in a soft and soothing voice.
Tim's eyes widened and she could feel his heart beat against her own chest, her breasts pressed into his chest and rib-cage.
"H-here?" he croaked.
"No, just over there by that tree line away from everyone else and any prying eyes eh," she reassured him, stroking his cheek fur slowly and with compassion.
"Okay"
"Great"
The two of them slipped quietly out of the sleeping bag, making sure to tip toe past their sleeping class mates and softly padding on bare feet to the line of trees just below the hill.
When they arrived they awkwardly gazed into each other's eyes once more, Tim relying on Jackie to take the first step, which she did when she began unfastening the belt around his jeans.
"We'll take this slow okay...nothing too big for your first time", Jackie reassured the nervous cat boy, her paws having unfastened his belt and slowly pulling down his jeans.
Timmy blushed when he realized he was already at half mast, having been unable to relive himself earlier in the day and now facing his high school crush on her knees with only a thin line of cotton underwear between her and his erect cock.
That thin lair of cotton was removed seconds later by Jackie's able paws, revealing the boys erect barbed shaft poking straight out of his sheath and the white furred balls dangling underneath.
Jackie had to gulp and lick her lips with her tongue at the sight before her. Tim kept himself nice and clean...a pleasant surprise compared to some of her previous flings. The only scent coming off of him was his excitement and natural musk. Impressed by his size the Dalmatian girl began to tackle the controversial task of either swallowing him whole, or giving him the death of a thousand licks.
She eventually decided to go with option one and with a somewhat practiced maneuver took him from head to base in her mouth. Sucking the bulbous tip in her canine muzzle, Jackie lost herself in the pleasure of having her mouth full of a throbbing piece of hot meat...belonging to someone she cared for and making them give moans of pure pleasure, while their paws stroked her ears and the spotted fur on her neck.
As she devoured his pole, sucking and bobbing up and down with exuberant duty, Jackie felt the tips of his feline barbs teasing the back of her esophagus. Deciding this was new, but not shaken by the feeling, she brought her paws up and around Tim's hips. This allowed her to hold him steady and keep the barbed tip form forcing itself too far down.
Timothy was in a heaven he had only read about out at least and guessed at while writing at best. Tilting his head back he lovingly petted the Dalmatians ears and neck, loving the way her mouth stroked him like a hot vice, flashes of heat and pleasure cascading from her mouth. His hips were thrusting as much as her strong paws would allow, his thick tail lifting high as the feelings were beginning to overpower his virgin instincts.
Jackie could feel the tension and build up in Tim's legs as he neared the precipice of pleasure and so she began preparing herself to swallow Timmy's load and accept part of him into herself.
With a strained cry held down by biting into his paw, Tim came for the first time and he came like a fire hose. Splash went the torrents of warm and white seed down the gullet of his Dalmatian lover. As his hips and legs shook with each spurt, Jackie's paws caressed and stroked his tail. Guiding him through his first orgasm, Jackie helped to support Tim's body as he sagged on top of her, drained of both his semen and energy.
Pulling them both in to a sitting position, the Dalmatian stroked the snow leopards back. Cupping his cheeks in both paws she leaned forward and kissed him passionately. Her tongue digging into his mouth, seeking out his own and entangling them both in a love knot, as her breath became his breath, her affection his, their eyes starring wide and unsure into the others.
Breaking off form their mutual passion both young furs looked at the other and smiled, Timmy giving one of his cute blush tainted grins while Jackie smiled in a proper toothy canine smile.
"Wow" they both said in union, chucking softly at their synchronization.
A few moments passed before Timmy let out a sigh of contentment and reached over to pet and caress Jackie's face and ears.
"Would you like me to...return the favor," he asked shyly, unable to meet her eyes, which widened at his offer.
"Think you're up to it handsome," she asked, keeping the excitement and longing in her voice to a minimum.
"Got to shine like the stars right?" he retorted before reaching to pull Jackie's close to him.
"Just guide me through it okay?"
"Okay" she replied.
Tim began by helping her pull her shirt over her head revealing the fact, that Jackie had forgotten too or decided not to wear a bra today. Her rather large breasts poked out at his virgin eyes, showing off a young canine blossoming into adult hood, her pink nipples contrasting with her white and black spotted fur. Leaning forward he began to lick gently at her nipples, loving the meep and low moans parting from Jackie's muzzle, her tongue hanging out as he gently sipped and nipped at her breasts.
Holding his head to her chest Jackie felt the feelings of pleasure and heat soaring through her, melting down into her loins, getting hot and bothered and dripping wet, marinating her lover's midnight meal.
"Hey Tim?" she tempted
"What?"
"Tell me you want me...or better yet take me" she grinned at him.
Tim was excited as he realized she had just quoted his own smut, loving the way she rolled her hips inviting him to come forward.
Pulling from her breasts, both Tim and Jackie worked to drag down her pants and panties revealing a dripping and wet slit, sparely covered with golden curls matching her eyes, split open with a bit of red and pink, making Jackie wonder if she wasn't just on the edge of entering heat.
"I've wanted you for so damn long...be gentle with me" he winked at her, reprising some of his own work to play along with her.
For Tim it felt like flying among the stars as he gently helped lay Jackie down on her back, pushing her thighs a part. Feeling like he was shining brighter than the sun he started with tentative licks to her neck and face. Sitting on his bare haunches he lorded over the naked goddess before him. With a horny murr of approval he pulled his shirt off and threw it away.
Jackie admired his small but toned body, while not a beef cake like the football jocks or a thin mint like many of their peers, Tim's body was well defined. He had some muscle but for the most part he was slender and handsome, cute even with his white speckled fur and cub like face.
Licking down her stomach Tim played a bit with her navel, tickling her a bit before finally resting between her legs and sipping at her cooch.
Jackie moaned as she felt that rough tongue begin licking around her vuvla, tentative at first before slowly becoming scooping licks. Timmy taking to muff diving like a pro, his whiskers drenched in her juices as his tongue typed his passion across her slit.
Her legs began kicking and straining as he continued on, going from licking to full on tongue penetration, his ears swiveling and blushing red as Jackie could barely contain her moans and growls of pure pleasure.
Biting into her paw like Tim had, Jackie prepared to cross the precipice and squirt all over his face, only for Tim to leave her thighs and press his mouth to hers. His soft fingers replacing his mouth, pinching and rolling her clit. This set Jackie off who ended up dumping her screams of passion and joy into the mouth of her fellow lover, their paws gripping one another lovingly and tight as Jackie squirted and watered Tim's thighs and the grass below.
Content and drained, both furs collapsed together, lying coiled around one another.
They spent a lot of time talking as Tim stroked her footpaws, loving the way her toes curled. From this, he learned that Jackie was a fellow Candy Crush enthusiast, and was not so much the virgin he was. As he listened to her explain her previous matches, he felt a bit daunted, but picked up on the hint of shame carried in her voice. Holding her close he told her that it didn't matter who'd she been with, she was with him now and that was all he cared about.
Jackie had hugged him tight at that and later discovered that Tim was just one year younger than her, seventeen years to her eighteen. She was glad since statutory rape was no laughing matter, at least to her.
Both furs held each other starring up into the night's sky, and while they both slept contentedly, in each other's loving embrace, they seemed to shine, together brighter then the stars.
The end...for now
*Total words: 3000 (I think) *