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#1 of Rose
Phew, that was nice. It's done ^^
This is both my first English story and my first story which contains sexual activity ^^
I'm sure I've made (grammar) mistakes, but hell, English is not my native language.
I do like comments about it, though. Then I can become better :)
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Once upon a time there was a girl who was looking in the mirror. But what she saw she didn´t liked, and what she liked she didn´t saw.
Her dark blonde hair was dry and fizzy. Her skin was covered with acne. Not only her on her face, but also on her shoulders and back. Her breast were small, her belly fat. She was not very long, and her limps were chubby. Her butt was big, but not very round. All with all, nothing nice to look at. The poor girl stood there barely naked and crying, because she hated what she was. "Why do I look like this?' she sight. She let herself fall into her pillow. Sad, she pulled on her nightgown. And even though the night was young, the teenager went to sleep. Over and over she wished that she was someone else.
The next morning the girl woke up. She felt strange, like something changed. She yawned and she stretched. And again, she felt like there was something happened. Something in the corner of her eye got her attention. "O my god!" she screamed, "Those are not my breast!" With big eyes she looked, at her new big breasts. She ran to the mirror, and screamed again. Her eyed had spot her dark, fluffy tail. Slowly she touched it, pinched it. She got to the conclusion it was indeed her tail.
Then she finally looked in the mirror. The teenager was stunned. The girl in the mirror who looked back to her, didn't look like her at all. She had a beautiful face, with big gray eyes. Her lip was split a bit, and she had sharp teeth. Her ears had grown. They had become big, pointy, gray and fluffy. Curious the girl touched her body. Her skin felt very smooth, and had a soft color. It felt like a very soft fur, but so thin, you could barely see it. Her shape was nicely curved: her breast where round, big but not too big for here frame and height. Her belly was flat and her hips and behind were nicely round. Her tail moved slowly, and a slight purr came from the girls throat. Her new form aroused the just became cat girl. Slowly she took of her night gown. She gasped. "So... beautiful." she whispered. "But this can't be true." Still, she touched her right nipple, which had a cute pink color. The girl shivered. ‘Maybe it is true.' She thought.
With a light pace she walked back to her bed where she sat down. With her tail she touched her shoulder, which made her shiver again. She let her hands ran over her upper body while she was lying down. The girl started to purr again, louder this time. She stroke her breast, her belly, her upper legs... and finally her wet pussy. The dripping wet cunt was hot and smelled sweet. The girl moaned quietly. One finger slipped into her cunt. Her hips started to rock harder. Another finger found its way to the wet cave. With the other hand the cat girl pinched her now hard nipples. Waves of lust went through her body. While the two fingers were working inside her, her thumb was stroking her sensitive clit. The kitty girl was moaning and shaking. With her eyes closed, she felt how the rush was starting to build to the highest level, higher than she ever was. Her tail brushed over her left breast, her right breast was hold thigh. With a loud moan the cat girl orgasmed, with her whole body shaking and her toes curled. She never had an orgasm like that.
It took her a few minutes to recover her breath. The whole air smelled like her sweat and cum. Then she noticed she wasn't alone in the room. Quickly she took the bed sheet to cover herself.
"Who... who are you?" she asked to the creature standing, no, flying halfway the room. The creature came closer. Now the girl could see that it was a female, with a light blue skin and silver wings. Her greenish hair waved on non-existing wind. She had a small frame. Her breast were small, but nicely shaped. She also didn´t have a lot of hip, but enough to give her a great shape, accuented by a thin dress.Â
"My name is Eliza" said the fairy grinning. "I see you enjoy your new body?"
The teenager blushed. "Wh...what did you see?"
Eliza laughed. "Not much, honey. I closed my eyes. But I can say, you moan quite loud. But that's not the point. I wanted to welcome you to this world, Rose." Big, asking eyes looked at the fairy.
"This world?" Rose stuttered. "How do you mean this world? Is this for real?"
With a smile Eliza answered: "Yes Rose, this is for real. You life in another world now. A world full non-humans, in all kind of forms. Most are about half human, half animal. Some, like me, are magical creatures. I've got some magical talents, i can change things. When I saw you in your room, crying, I just couldn't help helping you. Your old life is gone now, you can make a new start as a kitty." Eliza giggled. "Just like you wanted it"
Now the girl looked in the mirror again. And what she saw, she liked.      Â
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